Well I knew James was shit. lol.  I think Edward is really making an effort.  But shit if I was him and all the guys were looking at my wife I would be crazy too.  Thank God I am not a guy. lol.  I am glad that Alistair doesn't seem like a jerk. 

OMG I cant believe you did it.  LOL  We got an update.  I am so excited.  It was quite a funny birthday for Bella. But I think I liked her enthusiasm with flying for the first time.  At least that's what it sounded like.  I love how he held her tightly not breaking eye contact.  It seems that he is entranced with her when he can stop working for a few seconds.  Ok Kelly please dont make us wait so long for the full chapter of Bella and Edroar.  I would love to see him do something for her birthday or at least for her to bet him something that he cant stop working for the evening to have fun.  That would be fun to read.

WEll now we are getting somewhere. At least they are talking.  I feel bad for whatever was in that water bottle. I hope someone wasn't purposely trying to hurt him but with him being so mean I dont put it past anyone.  I love that she stands up to him, I was really expecting a kiss though. I mean they were nose to nose and fighting and the tension was high so I thought it would at least cause a hard kiss.  But I can see that he likes her a lot or he would have fired her just like Emmett said.  I am so glad you finally updated.  I am a fanfiction whore too. LOL. so I understand.

I absolutely love this story. Please continue to write it.  I think someone needs to teach Edroar a little lesson.  lol.  This will be fun.

I LOVE this story. Gosh I get into reading and then it ends and I am like *gasps* theres no more in this chapter???? LOL.  Anyway, I think they are made for each other.  She loves taunting him and he loves taunting her just as much.  I cant wait for the meeting at bottleneck.  I am thinking that Edroar is going to call her late for a massage and she is already going to be drunk and tell him a piece of her mind or let her mind speak what she really feels. LMAO that would be nice.  Or she could just go give him a drunken massage and see how he likes it.  That would be fun too.  Sorry this is what came to my mind and thought I would share the idea with you.  I cant wait for another update.  I wish it would could be everyday.

Well I must say I was hoping for more of Edward. We really dont see much of him. And yes I would say Edward is at the sink naked. LMAO. But what was in the bottle.  It cant be alcohol she would have been able to smell it. I am guessing some kind of oil but she should have been able to feel the oil so I dont know. obviously it was nasty to taste. LMAO. But still we need more interaction with Edward.

I loved it. I loved that Bella told Carlisle off for the way he is.  I love that she doesn't back down to Edward and I love that he was trying to take care of her when she hurt her eye.  I dont know why he is so tense unles he is worried about being alone with Bella.  Hhhmmm maybe he wont be able to control his desires. lol.  Thank you for the shout out sweetie.  It really touch my heart that you remember me and you helped me so much with twitter.  I really appreciate it.  I cant wait for Bella to get her revenge on MIke, I sure hope you have plans for Edward to find out about that too. He needs to know that she is gretting Mike back for what happened to his eyes.  OH GOSH AND HAPPPYYYYYY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR TS, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.

I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED the kiss.  I knew she would be bruised.  Now about him not feeling worthy, well something bad must have happened to him for him to think that bad of himself.  Poor Lion.  As for the message, well I see the naughty picture on the blog that I am guessing was supposed to be Edward's imagination during the message but you didn't give us an EPOV so we dont really know how that fits in.  Now the poor Lion is sick and I so love that Bella stayed with him to take care of him.  I love how she bosses him around and I am glad that they are flirting with each other now.  Now we just have to get them mad more often so they can kiss more often. LOL 

Wow that is scary shit. She is freaky. lol.  But I like it. 

Ok I love BDSM storie but I dont like Bella being the Dom.  I dont know what it is but I dont like it.  I dont like they way she is treating him.  I am wondering if the whole story will be her being the dom or are the tables going to turn and he will be her dom?  I am hoping this is the case so I can enjoy this story to its fullest.

Thank you Thank you Thank you.  I am soooooooooooo Glad that you let Edward win.  I mean his is the Master in CONTROL  It made no sense for him to lose. lol  SOOOOO HAPPY.  GREAT CHAPTER.

He never did take care of her later like he said he needed 1 hr to recuperate but then the guest came and she got nothing. poor bella. lol

I dont know that cop still gives me the heebee jeebees. lol  I dont know how to spell that. 

Another great chapter.  I kind of figured that Edward would break at some point. 

I have been such a bad fan I have forgotten about this story again.  But.... here I am again and I hope you forgive me for not reading sooner. 

Now as for the car, I am thinking someone tampered with it, I guess we will find out soon enough.  As for Demitri, I cant figure him out.

Oh God Paul sure didn't help did he?  I feel sorry for Edward.  Leah seems like a real bitch to me.  I mean she did want Bella to have a life and now that she has one she is jealous of it.

That was a good chapter.  I wonder what she does on Fridays?  hhhmmm It seems that Bella has a great effect on Edward too.

Wow this was an intense chapter.  I loved the first scene in the playroom.  I love that he is so attentive to her needs and that he took care of her after her nightmare.  I am so sorry I haven't reviewed more.  I normally review every chapter BUT..... I must say I am so encaptured with this story I keep just going on to read the next chapter and forget to review.  I will really try harder. 

Well I have alot to comment on and I think I am a few chapters behind. For one I am so glad that Edward put Irina and Cauis in there place, they had no right to treat her like that but I think Jane is on to something with the reason of jealousy. As for what happened with Seth, I dont think Seth was in the front yard just like I dont think that utility van was for the neighbors.  I am not sure I like the idea of the huge tatoo. I would love it if it was some small design with Edwards name in it but what you described doesn't really symbolize anything and its huge.  But to each their own I guess. I am glad that he showed her what it feels like to make love too. 

I liked this chapter. It didn't have the reunion sex that we have been waiting for but.... it had funny stuff and some drama too. I love the girls teaching Alice how to deep throat. LMAO that was too funny but I just knew they were going to get caught I just didn't think it would be by all three of them. And as for Bella's melt down well that I think is good, it shows that she looks for him to calm her and it shows that she really trust him.  I am so excited for when you are going to have her RED. LOL  Most stories she never says Red and I wonder why? I mean just because she says Red doesn't mean they are going to break up, so it doesn't make since to me.  So yeah I am pretty excited.

I think the meeting with Jane went well and I think her comment in that it pleases him to take care of her was really good. Also I think Bella and I are thinking alike on this like I said, she would have preferred him to spank her and get it over with than to hurt her emotionally.  I think Emotionally you will always remember and doubt yourself if you really are worthy or he is just doing it cause he likes  it.  Dam this punishment is effecting me too. I cant wait til its over and she can have a really good time with her master and he can make up for the lost orgasams she didn't get. LOL.

Wow what a chapter.  I know Rose had to tell her story but I was still dissapointed about the foot.  Also I really dont like to read the same thing that already happened in another POV.  It was ok though. You didn't go word for word over everything so that was good.  I was shocked as shit about the sperm thing.  I didn't know that.  My husband made me feel like shit when I did that to him. He thought it was disgusting.  So of course I felt like shit after.  I sure cant wait for that ink to be gone on her foot.  I would like to see more of Samson.  It would be cool for him to be a hero of sorts.

Wow. Well at least he let her cum in the bedroom.  I think its wonderful that you are going to let her get pregnant.  She really needs a miracle.  As for the C-Clip well thats just evil. lol.  I cant imagine I could do that. I dont have good self control. lol.  But maybe with practice. LMAO.  I cant wait for the reward.

Oh yeah my panties are wet after that one. I didn't think Edward was going to do it. I thought he was only going to stretch her more.  I am glad that he did. I would have never thought of that position but it was amazing.  I hope Edward can deal with her nightmare and help her.

wow well its about time that she got that out of her. Even though its out it doesn't make the pain go away.  But it is a huge relief.  I am just glad he knows now.

Sub drop huh?  well it sounds like you let go of everything and dont have a care or worry in the world.  Sounds like it could be relaxing.  I wonder why Bella can not remember to not lift heavy things?  She sure doesn't want to hurt herself permanantly where she actually has the pain to remind her when she attempts to lift something.  That is no fun believe me.

I think Edward was being mean.  He knows she doesn't like Pate and yet he made her eat it. Gross.  And then the clit clip, shit he needs something clamped on him for hours and see how he likes it.  I can imagine its just torture.  Then you have to give us this big cliffy with the alarm being tripped.  UUUGGGHHHH . lol Well have a very Merry Christmas.

Ok I love Edward a lot more in this chapter.  I love the dog soooo much.  He is such a good boy.  I love how Bella made Edward a little bit jumpy LOL  that was funny.  It seems that Heather is the one that tried to break in huh?  I knew she was trouble.  She must be working with James.  I love that they girls made jokes about Edward being the Dancing Master. LOL.  That was good.  Now as for the story telling as to why each one worked at the center, shit you had me in tears.  I was just sitting here thinking I should go work at a place like that, but then both my arms strated tingling in fear at having to relive what I went through and I dont think I could do that, I dont know maybe.  Then I thought, is that why I like reading dom/sub stories because now I am a freak?  God I hope not.  I hope that me being raped as a child is not why I love these stories.  :(

Ok yes it was hard for me to understan why he reacted so hard to her simple kiss to hiis peen. I felt just like her. I would have felt rejected and that he simply didn't want the relationship anymore. It was heartbreaking for me. Like you said for him to has his free will and she has to ask to even touch him. Is it really like that in a Dom/sub relationship or just theirs? As for Irina I think she is full of shit.

Author's Response:

each relationship is differant but for the most part yes the Dom has free rein and the Sub needs to ask permission to touch, taste or  even talk to him...she will say 'Master may your girl ask a question?' if he says no - it's no...however most have a free area ((like the kitchen table or her room)) where they can feel free to talk openly...no permission,,no protocal ...it's a free zone ....

I am glad that Edward didn't keep it from her about James.  I really love how Edward knows exactly what she needs all the time.  Sorry I have been slacking on my reviews.  I have had some not so nice responses from my reviews and well I am very skittish of ever reviewing again.

Hmmm Long time no see huh Luise?  Sorry about that.  As for Jessica, I really dont think she is that dumb but who knows.  As for Karen well I am only guessing it the money settlement that she got from James that Karen wants, I dont know what she has for Bella unless she is talking about a gun. 

I love the playfulness that Edward and Bella share.  I loved that she was smacking his ass. LOL.  But I also loved that he got her back.  Ok next I cant believe he got jealous over his uncle.  BUt I agree with Aro she needs to do things with Edward.   Well at least they had some great sex after. lol.

Well I love Dougie, but I dont know what character he would be.  As for the corner, well I think it is a great punishment that does not involve beating her but it shows her how disrespectful her noises are. 

HOWEVER, I HATE the CUM SLUT.  To ME, it is so hurtful to be called names, I just can not even imagine that someone would enjoy that.  But to each their own.  It is however effecting my reading this story.  I will continue to read but it is taking away from my pleasure of reading it everytime I hear Edward call her a name like Cum Slut or any other name like that.

They seemed to have a wonderful time Zip cording.  And of course after dinner too. lol.  That was wonderful too.  I agree the neighbor was jealous. lol.  I think Seth needs a girlfriend.  That would be cool.  Then he could get laid all he wants.

I must apologize I slacked off of this story NOT because it is boring its just there are so many wonderful stories out there its so hard to keep up.  I am following I think over 170 on this site alone. lol.  I missed talking to you and I am so happy that I am sticking to this thing til I am caught up. As for Bella's maintenance well..... I think she needed it or she would have slipped into a deep depression. So I think he helped her to admit how she was feeling. 

If I were Edward I would worry about Jacob's relationship with Bella too.  They are too cozy. Its just weird. 

Louise, I missed you.  I am sorry I was without internet for about 3 months so I am trying to catch up on all the updates that I have and also trying to review.  As for Bella I think she was a VERY, VERY bad submissive.  I totally agree with Edward on this one.  I dont think she should have called Jane at all.  I am curious what her punishment will be.  I think she needs a really good spanking but it doesn't seem he will do that.

I think it was a great chapter.  We got to see what Edward was going through giving her that punishment.  It was really eating him alive as well.  I am so glad that she got it though.

lol  I did catch Edward calling her My Pet and I figured that Charlie would know what that meant. As for Heather/Karen I suspected her too.  I am guessing she wanted money from Bella since she got money from James didn't she?  I cant remember that far back. lol.  I still think that James is after her. 

Hello Louise,

As for Edward sending her to the corner, I think I am too hard headed for this punishment.  I can just see myself throwing a fit if he snapped his fingers at me. LOL.

When she talks about the differences between James and Edward, I could see my life so much.  I could say my now ex husband is a sadist in mental abuse,  I dont know if that exsist but that is what I see.

Wow Alice is such a bitch.  I would not have accepted that apology, I would have thrown her ass out of my house.  I guess I cant control my temper but damn she was way over the line and I am SHOCKED that Edward didn't lose his cool.

Well this was a great date. I was a little depressed that they didn't kiss but I guess I am axious. lol.

He needs to fire that nannie ass. Well at least he got a blow job. He deffinetly need it.

I just found this story yesterday and I am so impressed.  I must say this was an amazing first chapter.  Obviously Edward and Bella have a past and I love me a possesive Edward.

I knew Jake was going to be in deep shit cause I had a feeling Edward was going to walk in on that shit. Well he got what he deserved, shit Bella told him that she didn't feel that way about him but NO he had to be all stupid and kiss her anyway infront of Edward. What the hell was he thinking?  lol.

WOW that was fucking amazing. I love it.  I love that he made her cum so many times. and in different positions. THat was great truely.

Dam you write the best lemons. lol.  I love this possesive Edward soooooo much. But shit I would have loved for Bella to get a few punches into that bitch Victoria even if Edward had to break them up. That shit would not stand.  I mean he beat Jacob up why not let Bella have her revenge too? 

I think Jacob is more dangerous than they think.  AS for Bella well she is a sneaky little thing but then so is Edward.  I LOVE these lemons.

Poor Bella she really got hurt. I was half expecting the doctor to say that somehow she was pregnant and lost the baby.  I cant believe they are letting Jacob anywhere neer her especially when he wont respect her enough to leave her the hell alone.  But Rose didn't even mention that Bella spoke to Jacob just before the accident.

WEll that was a surprise..  I didnt think it was leah.  I really thought it was Jake.  I am surprise that Edward didn't kill her himself.