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UPDATE: JULY 25, 2012
I CHANGE MY PEN NAME. PREVIOUSLY LetRobstenLuv4ever NOW LuvRPatz4ever. Thank you.
I am 42 yr old mother of 6 and I love all things Twilight. I love to read BDSM stories and all stories with a possesive Edward.
My second favorite stories to read is Mobward.
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
OMG I knew Carlisle was going to do that. I was so hopefull and I just had a feeling he was doing it to make his sons grow up and be a man. I loved it!!!!!!!!
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
That is so messed up what the family did to him. I dont think I would be talking to them in 2 weeks either. That would take me forever to be able to even look at them. He has more forgiveness in him I guess.
Bella Swan, Senior Intelligence Analyst with the CIA has uncovered a plot to blow up the capitol, but there's a traitor in CIA HQ and they have their eyes on her. In order to protect the country she loves, she has to risk losing everything.
AH/Some OOC behaviour. Heartfail Warning. Character Death.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131170 Read Count: 36690
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5. 14th June 2010 – Springfield Virginia.
Well at least we know it wasn't Edward and his men that got killed.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - 17th - 18th June 2010 - Port Angeles. WA.
Jesus that was a hard chapter. You had me in tears. And just saying now He BETTER NOT BE DEAD.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - 21st June 2010 - Volterra Italy.
Wow Bella is taking quite a beating and still hasn't told them anything. I am quite upset that they did not look for Edward further. I mean I cant believe that would do that in the real world, just say "Oh there is his gun and there is blood so he must be dead" yeah I dont think so. I would hope they would not stop until his body was found.
Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17466
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Last chapter
Well I absolutely loved the lemons. I was hoping for more dialog from Edward during the lemon. I mean it was his first time inside her so I thought he would have been talking a lot about how good she felt. Also if this IS the last chapter, then I am extremely dissapointed. I do not read short stories because I feel like I always want more and with a short story I feel like I didn't get enough. I love you as a writer and I hope you know that but I was really dissapointed that this is the last chapter. Well hopefully you will have more time to give us more updates on TSTWO.
Author's Response:
Yes, I will have more time to work on Slave and I will continue to send you the drafts. i'm sorry this story seemed too short for you but for me it was like a warm up writing, if you will. See you soon on my other story.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Third chapter
OMG I cant believe she lied about her orgasams. Poor Edward. And I definitely dont think she should be treated like trash.
Author's Response:
My allusion to Bella being treated like a piece of trash was just a joke because I've heard of a story called Fold your Wings that is a hit, got loads of reviews on FF and it's about a Bella being treated like shit by Edward, so apparently people on FF (and maybe here too) like to read that kind of story. I would rather say that kind of shit (although it's welll written), but it's just me and I respect the readers who like to see Bella repeatedly mistreated and abused. I just won't lose my time reading it myself. But here's the catch: Bella wiil be a little mistreated in the next chapter, so watch out...
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Fourth chapter
Oh that was just gross. I cant believe Edward did that. to let Mike take his place and let Bella do that to Mike. YUKKKK.
Author's Response:
Yes, I know, that was gross indeed. I don't know if there is still hope for Edward after what he did. I can't believe Bella doesn't want to kill him. She must be completely under his spell, because, jeez, what a trick he played on her. He deserves to never have a (good) fuck for the rest of his life.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Second chapter
Wow I have counted 5 so far. Damn I think Edward really knows what he is doing. LOL. This is a really good smuty story. Geeshhh I wish it was longer. I am surprised he hasn't kissed her mouth.
Author's Response:
I think he would not kiss Bella unless she gives him permission, and right now she doesn't know him well enough to be intimate in that way, even if they were doing things together way more intimate (but then again to me a kiss is a very intimate act)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First chapter
so far I am really loving this story. I cant wait to see how many orgasams Bella gets. LOL. I only wish this was not only 7 chapters as I dont usually read short stories but since its you, I wanted to see what you did.
Author's Response:
This story was my first attempt at smut. It was supposed to be a one shot, but I wasn't able to make the plot fit in only one chapter, plus the readers wanted at least a few chapters when they had a taste of the first, lol.
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth chapter
That was a great chapter. I really loved it.
Author's Response:
I'm typing chapter 32 of Slave right now and should be able to send it to you tonight :0)
Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman. A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH
First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning.
image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138748
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am sorry to say I must stop your story. I love reading Dom/Sub stories but ONLY with Edward as the Dom. It was great until I seen that you were switching them.
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124860
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
HOT damn that was a good chapter. You go Edward.
On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,
where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.
No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:
Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.
AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E
Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187879
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: The Hunt is On!
Well that chase didn't last long. At least they got Rosalie back before anthing could happen to her. I love how strong Edward is. I was shocked that Emmett didn't do anything though. I guess he was in shock. But still I would think he would be the one ripping the door off. I just wish Rose and Emmett would do their binding so she can fall in love with him.
Author's Response:
Emmett was in shock. Edward is a lot stronger now because he absorbed some of Bella's Faerie powers and that is how they afftected him, they increased his strength. Thanks again!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Rosalie, What are You Doing?
It seems like in each binding ceremony someone is trying to take someone else. lol. I love the pictures. But I was hoping for a picture of Addy too. Hopefully now Rosalie will realize that she had it really good with them. I hope nothing happens to her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it is the only time they have been available for outsider intervention. So it just happened to be their binding ceremonies...lol. Glad you enjoyed the pictures. Go to the address listed in my chapters for my blogspot. Addy's picture is on Chapter 31(TWCS). Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'
I went on your blog but you only have the pictures and not the story on there. I seen the picture of the twins and I was so excited because I thought it was Bella but guess not. :(
Author's Response:
Yes, I only post the pictures that go with the chapters. Look on the right side and click the corresponding chapter that you are currently reading. It will be the chapter #(TWCS). I will put a picture or two in the chapters themselves. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting
Well they are finally building their city and Bella will get a friend in Angela. I think it will be good.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are growing. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
Well I am glad that Charlie will be a lot happier on planet Twilight than on Earth. Seems like they will have a powerful power. I was really cute the way Charlie fell in love with Addy.
Author's Response:
Yes, Charlie will fit right in with the folks on Planet Twilight. It would be difficult not to fall in love with her. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
Well Charlie sure took that well. I can only imagain when he sees Addy how he is going to act. But I am thinking she will have wrapped around her little finger soon.
Author's Response:
Well, Charlie had some choices to make and he chose to give Twilight a chance, he will gain alot by his choice. Yes, he will like being an instant granddaddy. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid
Edward seems really emotional about Bella. Well I would be too. I love that he is so possesive of her and her scent. I think that is amazing that he can smell her and I like that he scents her with him.
Author's Response:
That scenting process is supposed to keep the other males away. But humans don't have the enhanced senses that the Twilighters or most of the other male humanoid species that she will come in contact with on the planet. In other male would know she was taken and back off. He is in love with her and her enzymes are in his body now. He has the need to keep her safe and protected. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
It seems like planet twilight needs more human females. I love Carlisle's car that is beautiful. I want one.
Author's Response:
They will get some females in later chapters. Carlisle's car was found in my search for futuristic cars. I think it is supposed to be a limousine though. But I thought it would make a cool Carlisle car. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Jasper Explains and Smores
Jasper to the rescue. How cute. I love it. That they protect each other so much. I love all the love making too.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are protective of family. Lovemaking is what you're supposed to do when you are first married or bound in their case...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
oh my I wonder who that is? I am glad she got help from Esme and Emily. I wish I had help like that when I was pregnant.
Author's Response:
Luckily there are plenty of females to help out, if there wasn't he would hire someone. I wish I had help too. My first time I was pregnant, I tried to push mow my lawn. I ended up almost fainting in the yard and I barely made it back in the house. Needless to say we had a very grassy yard that year. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
I really love that Bella took over for the role of mother for Addy. i think Edward really loves it too. lol. I really like the pictures of the homes they are so beautiful.
Author's Response:
That is how I feel that Bella would have acted in response to Addy. It isn't the child's fault how she arrived to this world. Yes, Edward loves seeing Bella being motherly to Addy. Glad you are enjoying the pics. I did a lot of research to find just the right ones. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
Addy is so cute. I am glad she is happy abou the baby and not jealous. But then maybe that will come later.
Author's Response:
I don't plan to make her jealous, she will want to help out. She will still get plenty of attention. Thanks!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
Oh how cute, he can smell the baby. He seems like he is going to be very overprotective.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, he will be, but he was already about as overprotective as you can get. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Morning Lovin'
WOW another wonderful chapter. I love how gentle he is with her but its amazingly good too.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
I am really interested in this story. But they seem almost robotic. Like everything is on a schedule. Not very warm.
Author's Response:
I am not good with expressing emotions and hopefully the story will improve for you. It is my first attempt at writing, so I am always in need of improvement. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tattoos and Gowns
Wow so what you saying is that any male can rape a female and not leave his scent behind so that no one knows who did it? Thats messed up. Now as for them being robit, I think its Carlise that is more cold than the rest. It just he is so formal, (i.e. do this then do that.)
Author's Response:
Carlisle is more formal, that is his personality. As for not expelling expulsion fluid, it was more for promiscuity than crime use. As heightened as their senses are on Twilight, a rape crime would rarely go unsolved. There isn't a problem of having no one to have sex with, the problem lies with finding someone to procreate with.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
Wow so Rosalie at least knows that it would have been her that was raped and killed. It looks like the girls might be able to help Rosalie after all. I really appreciate that you respond to my reviews. So many authors just ignore them.
Author's Response:
It takes a while, but Rosalie finally gets with the program...lol. Thank you so much for revewing and if you take the time to review, I am going to take the time to respond. Because I really do appreciate them.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
The only thing I dont like so far is that the chapters are so short. lol. I love that Edward growls. It seems Bella really likes him too because she was getting so wet just from kissing.
Author's Response:
The reason they are so short was because I was updating every day. I guess I could have combined some chapters, but all I have just been trying to do is get it uploaded and redo my blog site at the same time. Between Fanfiction being on the fritz and livejournal suspending my account, for who knows what....I have been a busy beaver....lol. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
It seems like Tanya was drugging him to get some of his seed. Well I cant wait for the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, you might be right. Thanks for the review and I am glad you are still interested!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Rape
I am going to take a guess here and say Tanya got pregnant. What a bitch. I cant believe she would go so low as to do that to him.
Author's Response:
Tanya is a desperate crazy person, but she doesn't get what she really wants and that is Edward.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
So he has a daughter that can fly? lol. I love it. I hope the little girl really does love Bella. I cant wait for the binding.
Author's Response:
No, she doesn't have the ability to fly. That is the batillions, Jane and Alec. Sorry about any confusion. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour
It seems like Addy really likes Bella. But I have never seen a 2 year old that could talk that much. My grandson is almost 2 and he doesn't say anything yet.
Author's Response:
My daughter was speaking in sentences at 1 with an almost perfect pronunciation of words and my son didn't start talking till he was 4 and then it sounded like how Addy speaks. All kids are different.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
Gosh Tanya tried to ruin everything. Poor little Addy doesn't know whats going on.
Author's Response:
Tanya tried to do some damage and Addy has been kept in the dark about who her birth mother is, it was part of the agreement and Tanya wouldn't go to jail.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Binding Ceremony
That was really strange that she could see his past. But she at least knows now that he is bound to her even before the ceremony. He was attracted to her that is why he had the pull to go to Forks in the first place.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are true soul mates and the pull was there. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: First Taste
I thought sure that he knew that it was Bella when he picked her at the center. Oh well I guess fate brought them back together. I loved the binding. I was just shocked that they didn't actually make love.
Author's Response:
They are still at the community center, that will be later when they get home.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Reception Part One
Gosh I knew something was going to happen as soon as Edward walked away from her. I love the Animal side to them. I like that they dont care if it is their brother they will defend no matter what.
Author's Response:
Emmett was being Emmett, he doesn't always think before he acts. He is still a big kid...lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Reception Part Two
Well at least Edward seems to trust Seth completely and Jacob since he is letting them protect her for now. But I think that someone is going to get Addy. We will see I guess.
Author's Response:
Yes, he trusts Seth and Jacob. Only Bella is the target. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Reception Part Three
I liked this chapter much more. I guess it was more of a story and not so robotic. I realized that Carlisle sounds more like a secretary dictating the schedule for the day. LOL. I am not laughing at you dont misunderstand me, I am laughing at him. He needs to lighten up. But maybe he will once he trust the girls more.
Author's Response:
Carlisle warms up as the story moves along. He has to put the fear in them at the beginning, so they won't consider running away. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
Wow that was a wonderful love making bonding. I really liked it. He was really gentle with her. I thought that to be really weird that his dad came in the room though.
Author's Response:
Well, that was not normal to be heard from one house over and Carlisle wanted to make sure that Bella was not injured. You will find out in the upcoming chapters that Carlisle has a fatherly bond with Bella and does not want to see her injured. He was in doctor and father mode at the moment, nothing perverted was meant by it.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Carlisle does seem to have a fatherly bond with her. I dont think I like the idea of her being tall though. I just cant picture that at all. lol.
Author's Response:
Edward is still a foot taller than her in this story, so there is still a big height difference. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
Well they finally broke the bed. lol That was funny. I would be worried that he was going to hurt her when she releases her light because he doesn't seem to be able to control himself wihen that happens.
Author's Response:
He is trying his best to keep her safe, even in his blissed out state of mind. He knows she is fragile and he definately doesn't want to hurt her.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party
I love the secret place of Edwards very pretty.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I like that picture too. Waterfalls are always romantic. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
Well now he has claimed her in all places. lol. I wonder what her power will be. I hope Rose comes around soon. She seems like she is a little bit better.
Author's Response:
Yep, I have run out of options...lol. You can take one big guess on her power. I have tried to make everything resemble Twilight that I could and still be on a different Planet. Rosalie will eventually come around.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon
Well I wonder how much Charlie is going to freak out. Ok so I am guessing that Bella is a shield like in Twilight. I am glad he got his anal sex. He seemed to enjoy that. There wasn't much communication during that though. I guess I expected him to talk her through it more.
Author's Response:
I know, I am not a big talker during sex scenes. I am the quiet type and it is hard for me to imagine a lot of talk during sex. Maybe I can have all my quirks worked out by the time I write my next story....lol. Yes, she is a shield. It shows up when she needs it to. Charlie acclimates pretty well, learning Bella is alive is a big incentive to cooperate.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
Ok I am wiped out for today. So I think I am all caught up. lol. I love how protective the guys are for their mates and I love that you made the wolfs their protectors too instead of their enemies.
Author's Response:
That is all I am going to upload today, I will start back tomorrow. I like when the wolves are the Cullen's friends, I like their characters too. I can come up with enemies from somewhere else. Thank you so much for all the reviews! I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch
Its about time Rosalie got bonded. I hope everything goes well with the binding.
Author's Response:
Rosalie has learned her lesson, she just had to go about it the hard way...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Family Time and Emmett's POV
Well I am thinking that Lauren and Jessica are going to be trouble for Bella. I am glad that Rosalie will settle down now. I feel like the chapters are going really fast.
Author's Response:
You are right on Jessica and Lauren, but Bella can handle them. Thanks for the revew!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'
Wow they had some powerful sex after Jessica and Lauren awakened her power. I am so glad that she can do that. I love the electrical charge during sex that made him go wild.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review!
-thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-
There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?
Lemon? Yes please!
-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Plumpkin
I love this story and I love this cocky Edward too.
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Wow that was exciting.
"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic.
Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard
Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.
Beta'd by aeglow
Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673048
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz
Poor Edward well that is what he gets for always being away. I mean I dont think she is doing anything but he is feeling guilty so he thinks she is doing something.
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off
Edward is so funny. Reminds me of my husband in the delivery room. We had such a surprise because we were told we were having a girl and surprise, surprise ITS A BOY. So yeah they could hear my husbands screams in the waiting room. LOL. As for Aro, well I can understand him, she left him so he is just being stubborn and not wanting to chase her but I can understand Lauren too. She wants to make sure he loves her. I feel for Edward about the no sex thing, I did go through that and it last til long after the baby was born. It caused a lot of trouble within my marriage but it wasn't something I could control.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella
OMG I cant beleive I have never read this story. I LOVED it. This was really awesome. What a great lemon. I love that he ordered her not to cum until he was ready.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward
Wow another great chapter. I was shocked with what Alice had planned but then again, when you have nothing you will do just about anything. So I cant judge anyone for that. But still Bella ia not a whore. Oh about your comment, you cant make everyone happy so dont worry about offeneding too many.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Bella
Ohhh I dont think Bella is going to be too happy when she finds out that Edward paid for her stuff. She is going to feel like a whore.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One
Hmmm well we still dont know what he wants her to do. I dont like the idea of her working for him. And how can Carlisle be such a pig? On his wedding day at that? YUK.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Game
Wow I knew he was trying to scare her into taking the gun and I am glad that she ended up not going by herself. I think Edward is falling fast and he doesn't even realize it.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Round One
For Nanny? then they will get divorced? What the hell? No way I cant believe he said that. uuugghhhh men.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Light my Fire
I truly love this story. You know there are many stories out there that are good and some that are great, but there are few that are excellent and I find this one of the excellent one. I have read hundreads of stories both here on TWCS and also on FF.net and you really are a great writer. Maybe I am just partial to the mob stories but I dont think thats it at all. I love that she slaps the shit out of him to put him in his place. I know its not right for physical violence but hey he says some pretty mean stuff to her when he is mad. I also love that he gets crazy and wont let her lock him out of the room. lol That was just hilarious. NOW as for ESME, uuggghhh she is going to get her into trouble. She needs to listen to Edward and realize just because she likes Esme doesn't mean she can let her walk on her beliefs. Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
This Edward and Bella love hard, fight harder, but they try their hardest to make up in the best way. They're a passionate pair. Thanks so much for that compiment - I'll take that as a compliment (lol)
And thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
_SLC
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots
Wow I wish I knew all those terminologies before I read the chapter or even if they were in parenthasis along side the frases because I was really thinking that some bug was biting her and she called Aro to help her. LMAO. Now I feel stupid because I didn't know what you were talking about.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy
I knew something was going to happen. I am just glad that Bella was able to handle it. She should listen to her instints and stop listening to that stupid Esme.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa
I was worried that Marcus was going to do something to Edward but I am glad that he didn't. I agree with Edward, it seemed too easy. I was not offended at all about what took place in the basement.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto
hhhmmm I wonder if she really is pregnant. They need to talk. He needs to tell her that he wants a baby.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: A Bitch Named Karma
WOW I knew she was pregnant. And Yes I think it was all the fighting with her mom and Charlie that made her miscarry the baby again. Edward sure needs to put his foot own.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Hmmm I wonder who killed Charlie? I bet it was Marcus's deal.
Author's Response:
Did you figure out who killed Charlie? LOL.
SLC
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In
Well we knew it was Alec and Jane. I was surprised she put a hit out on Bella though. I am glad that Edward found out.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Poker Face
Wow how sad that Aro is now on the table to see if he is next. I understand that he wanted Alec dead, but like Edward said an order is an order. Poor Aro. I am glad that Emmett took that money. It will help them out.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Olde E
You are right, I do want to be hard on Edward. Yes he didn't do anything but still he wanted to. So yeah this chapter saddened me a lot. I lost some respect for him too. I am glad he didn't kill Aro.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day
Wow that was scary shit for the FBI to come and search their home. Everyone thinks it was Carlisle and I am wondering if it was Esme? I am so glad they B and E are finally pregnant. I hope it will turn out ok this time.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you go on to enjoy the sequel! I so appreciate you taking the time to review!!!
Thanks again,
SLC
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day
Wow I was surprised that they took that guy to the salon to end him. :( That was her place of business he should have found another way. And Aro should not have told her anything. I know I would have just like her, I would have wanted to know too, but she has a high risk pregnancy and she needs to be stress free. Great chapter.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: This is it
Wow so now Marcus wants Edward and Carlisle dead. He probably is scared of Edward because he knows if he kills Carlisle then Edward would kill him so he has to kill them both. Wow that lifestyle really is lived in total fear and you really cant trust anyone even your own family.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course
I love Barry. lol He sure has saved her ass twice now. And yes those crazy ass dreams I have had myself. I have 6 kids so I guess I was crazy already.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances
Wow that was so exciting and scary. Great chapter.
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues
Wow poor Esme, I know a lot of women go through that and I am lucky that I didn't. I am so glad that Bella was able to help her a little bit. I thought it was funny that Edward knew that Bella was hiding outside of his door. I like that though that he knows when someone is sneaking up on him. Oh and the on the knees is very pleasurable too. LMAO.
Author's Response:
Post partum depression affects many people. I personally don't have children, but I wanted to showcase an extreme case of it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day
I dont get it why do they want you off of FF.net? If they dont want to read then dont read. Damn that makes me mad. Its rated M for a reason, damn idiots. Anyway wheewww I was worried for Jacob, but Edward got a taste of his own medicine and he didn't like it at all. LMAO. I am so glad they got so much make up sex though. That was awesome.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure
Yeah banners are not working everywhere. Now as for Carlisle, ugghhhh he pisses me off. I dont like him always flirting with her, it scares me. As for sonny well I am so happy that Edward was there for her and Sonny is healthy. It was a great chapter.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue
That was a damn good story. I cant wait to read the sequel and I hope that Edward is able to keep Sonny in check. i dont like him disrespecting them.
Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.
After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible?
(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I absolutely LOVED this chater. Even though I would have love a lemon, the chapter was amazing and I love the rapid progress Edward is making. I could not be happier that Rosalie and Emmett are ok with him and that Emmett is making him feel usful by letting him learn new things that he can help with. Seriously best chapter.
Author's Response:
There can't be lemons every chapter!
Thank you for all your support by reviewing.
Here is your teaser
A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.
“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”
“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”
“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”
Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”
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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
OMg I am really loving this story. I notice almost all of your stories are o/s or very short. I truly hope that this story will be VERY long. I see great potential here. Amazing chapter.
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
How amazing that Edward's stomach can not handle cooked meat but it can handle raw meat. He is like Tarzan. lol I love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Here is your teaser
Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ahhh how sad she left him. :( Poor Edward.
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Ah how sad. They love her.
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ah poor Edward got caught. I hope all will turn out ok.
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I wondered how long it would talk her to give him a shave. lol. I am so happy that he is with her again. It seems he will have to learn everything.
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
omg I wonder if Edward is related to Alice. That would be awesome.
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I am so glad that bella was able to help him with his problem. lol
Author's Response:
Yes, she is very helpful. LOL
thanks for reading
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Another Great chapter. I hope she can find his family.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews.I appreciate you taking time to review each chapter,
I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.
Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together. He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone. And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?
Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique. She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled. Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt. Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful. He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.
“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.
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Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I love that they are at least giving each other release. They are getting closer and closer everyday. Bella has a lot of curage to be able to show him what to do. I was lol when the part about the tree came. That was too funny.
Author's Response:
Yes I know that Edward's release is very important to my readers. LOL
Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.
Here is your teaser
The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.
They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research. Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips. Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.
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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
That is so sad. His mother and father are dead. Hopefully he will have some siblings. I cant believe Alice. She is acting like a bitch.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.
Here is your teaser
Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.
They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods. Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.
That hope was fading fast.
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Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Wow that was unexpected but good. I cant wait til Edward has more of a vocabulary. I like that she named the wolves and it was really funny about the mattress. lol.
Author's Response:
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
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Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Ahhh how sweet, Jake cleaned her owie.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Omg I feel so sorry for Edward. He remembers what happened to his parents. That had to be scarry. I can't wait for him to get more vocal especially during sex.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Here is your teaser
Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I love that Edward is finally putting sentences together and I know this thing with Rosalie will really help them. I have never read a story like this or with Rosalie and Emmett as OLD people. So this is interesting. I cant wait for me. I love the lemon too and cant wait for them to get more vocal with them.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review.
Here is your teaser
When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I love that he is talking more now. I am also so happy that they are moving. I see so much potential for this story. I think they will be very happy on the ranch.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate you reviewing.
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Oh God what can I say that I haven't already? I LOVE THIS STORY. I am so happy for them, that they have a more suitable place that will make Edward happy, but I definitely seen the chiken thing coming a mile away. LOL. Now as for these teasers I keep reading about, I always review your chapters and I have never received a teaser from you. Well maybe someday I will. Great chapter, another 10 from me.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
Here is your teaser
Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I love the chapter. Again still no teasers are coming to me. I am glad that Rosalie is not upset about Edward in the buff. Lol Loved the lemon. I love the take charge Edward. As for the ending well it seems that he wanted to bring her breakfast. I don't think that is going to go over to well.
Author's Response:
I don't know how else to tell you to find them. I sent you a message. I hope you get this one.
I really appreciate your review!
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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”
Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.
And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.
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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thank you so much. I actually got it now that you told me how to fix the author review buttom.
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm so glad.