Reviews by Maria11
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420974
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The blue box blues

trouble is brewing!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mac N Cheese

edward told you so..this is not going to be good. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Revelations

well i think it is going to come down to something bad.... jacob isn't going away that easily.  love the story so far.  like your bella and of course edward is sexy as ever.  love his protectivness

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moody's mood for love

the sleep i love you never fails to show up.. love love ed and bel.  you are writing a great story... i like it!!!  your lemon was yummy!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The empty bottle saloon

hum they are all going to be after bella:  james jacob edward.  go with the e name bella that is the one you stick too!!!!  love love sexy edward.  hey edward ask her to move in with you.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The green eyed monster

get a grip ed......

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Thanksgiving

she is pregers.... already know......

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Crawl inside you

ok i hope we are in the clear.... but youwriters  you always throw in a twist,,, i am waiting for it!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: As time goes by

hum... this doesn't sound good.... you brought jacob back

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ode to Joy

how romantic!!!  love love edward.... but now that you got them pretty wrapped up something bad is going to happen!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Unemployment

hum.... bad bad bad...

like the story but i have to think that bella should have pressed charges and maybe this wouldn't have happened.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: What really happened

sick sick person.... she was teaming with jake so she could have edward and jacob could have bella.... interesting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Maria

hum we were worried about jacob..... she is not to be played with i have a feeling

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Take a bullet for you

see i knew she wasn't one to play with......

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Aftermath

it wouldn't be bel and ed if there weren't hospital sex in a fanfiction... it's okay!!!  we all live for it.  and it amazes me how no matter how tore up the paitient is they have orgasmic sex in the hospital.. no one gets caught and no one gets thrown out of the hospital.... amazing!!  i LOVE fanfiction

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: I'm too sexy

she is pregnant!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The reception

knew it!! pregers it is!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: The proclaimers

ok this is tmi but you just can't stick it in he has to do more then just rub her clit... he is not very subtle.....you gotta be really really turned on for it to work please give him some help!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Mom Jeans

bella you are HOT!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

thanks for the story!!  i am from NYS so i love the references. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34252
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: She Works Hard for the Money

and so it begins.....it is going to be intersting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Interview

well i like ya ed!!  so victoria is going to be the bad guy... have a feeling that is not the last time we are going to hear from her! you need to spill what happened to bells!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Another Place to Fall

cool a quick date ed is really sweet... i gues we aren't going to find out bella's secret until ed does...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breathless

sweet i love ed..... i will take you ed!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for leaving me these reviews.  They make me so very happy.  Yes, I just want to take him home in my pocket and keep him forever.  lol

Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Beautiful Disaster

oh ed you really step into it bad!!!  i hope you get it off ya quick!  bella isn't as strong as you think!



Author's Response:

He just has no clue, does he?   Keep reading.  He has a lot of missteps along the way.  Thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Be Gentle to Me

well cat is out of the bad for bella... what is she keeping secret... hum.. will it come out soon.  no she didnt' forgive him too fast maybe



Author's Response:

Yep.  It's all down hill from here.  ha ha.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: What an Honor

oh no i knew vicki would be around....



Author's Response:

Yes, she's not going anywhere just yet.  lol   Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Heal Over

wow poor bells... vicki is CRAZY and i am sure she will be back in action soon... esme at the door or was it em?



Author's Response:

Yep, she is certifiable.  By now, you know who's at the door.  lol

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes

sweet  i love ff ed is always the perfect lover... hum and bella is a lucky bitch!!



Author's Response:

Yes she is isn't she.  lol.  Glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Tit for Tat

of course the preverbially monkey wrench!  haha!  i can't believe you apologized for having a baby!  that is terrible... if people complained to you for not updating they are a bunch of jerkoffs!!  congrats late and i have to say better you than me!!! haha sorry i had my two!!  love the story by the way!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I appreciate it.  Thanks for the well wishes.  My baby is over a year old now.  Sad to say.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: And so it goes...

and so the angst begins....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Lonestar

trouble in paradise!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Time after Time

i am sure someone took their picture.... figures

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Save Me

wow poor ed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Stop This Train

oh vicki have  been waiting for you to show...jacob you are an ass!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Burn it Down

wtf is wrong with garrett can't he see that she is off her f-ing rocker!?!?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hold On

shitty week doesn't even cover it what a bastard jacob is why would he do that damn when it rains it pours!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: At Last

thanks for the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for each and every review.  I really appreciated them all.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'

didn't like that ending glad you didnt' go with it!  thanks for the story i enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Coming Home - Futuretake 15 yrs later

thanks for the look into the future!! i loved it



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  It was fun to revisit these two crazy kids.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh boy doesn't sound good... how did they get there?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow that is scary!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

not good your "good" luck is going to run out!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh boy at least she got that time with him because i have a really bad feeling about what is going to happen.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

is she going to take it?  hummm!?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i sure hope that doesn't happen poor everyone! james is a sick bastard

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor ed...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

that just sucks ass!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh boy i am not going to give into the hope just yet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh boy here we go are they going to get away?



Author's Response:

sorry I haven't responded to any of your reviews, but I have been on vacation.  I hope you are enjoying the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251334
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

not good have a feeling not goint to like this ed!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

what a cad!  ed get your head out of your butt!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

come on ed extract that head from your lower orifice!  you are such a fool!  bella i am glad you are strong!  even though i know you are going to be crying your eyes out in the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ed you have to reach deeper to get your head out of that orifice i was talking about apparently it is deeper in than i thought i must reach all the way to your small intestine!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

okay your head is slowly lowering?  i don't want to get my hopes up too much

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh boy.... what is ed going to do?  by the way this is really good!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

why do i have a bad feeling about this!  i am sure ed's head is still his orifice!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh ed you are making my girlie parts rejoice just a little .....your head is almost out!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

what a prick his grandfather is!! wow!! yes the girlie parts are now so happy it isn't funny ed finally got his head out of his lower orifice... i am starting to like  you ed!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

wow what a butthole his grandfather is... but what about ed and his money?  hum....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV

well at least carlisle didn't follow his father's example... and was a man about it... haha they still got over on you charles!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh no i hope she doesn't get fired...ed my opinion is changing by the chapter you are one good man right now don't let me or bella down!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

go carlisle go carlisle you are the man!! oh bella i think you should have told your dad before this!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ed you are a really sweet guy!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ed you disappoint me and bella but she is going to be dumb and take you back....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

oh crap not good not good you are giving me a heart attack!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i wonder what is up.... no more fighting.. i doubt it.. i know how terrible it is to loose a baby.. BAD terribel i wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

omg i would have thrown up too but i would have aimed it at her... is he telling the truth?  i am doubting you and my girlie parts are sooo mad at you edward!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

at this point i wish she would have left him and gone to jake!!! he really is a butt head!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

wow his grandfathers dickheadness know no bounds!!  and gee edward you sure know how to pick them!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

hum guilt finally getting to you, you wreched old man!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Charles POV

well he has a long way to go though and he is a jerk off!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: The Birth

interesting... i am so happy for ed and bell!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

open up and take a huge swallow charles!  poor bells...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

ok ed.... i think we are finally there.. a good guy right?!?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb

oh what a sweet daddy!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

wow i was waiting for him to ask her to go into business with him and take ed's place or beg her to talk ed out of what he wanted.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

it was kate that made that girl do that... witch to think she could get him back.  thanks for the story i loved it!!  as you can see i read it one night!



Author's Response:

Ive loved all your reviews :) Its fun seeing how a reader learns to love the characters! Thanks so much for the devotion and for reading everything in one night!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

ok i haven't left a review yet sorry.... but wow!!  the emotion is going to be beyond whatever... i think i need to get the kleenix box now before i  read the reunion chapter... please don't let victoria take him away from bells i will just die!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

i understand the strong feelings of jealousy that she had him and that she shared his life but the hatred is just terrible tha comes off of ed  wow  like she kept the boy from him when it was his stupid wife that got rid of him in the first place.  wow i just want to go up to him and smack him in the face!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

this is not good not good at all i knew once they found out about jack that they would come running to try and take him away from bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

something BAD is going to happen i can feel it in my bones!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

yeah! they are falling for each other i am glad he got over the hate he was feeling because i just couldn't handle that crap... i am worried about victoria though....somethng bad is going to happen!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

here it comes... james and vicki something wicked this way comes.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

why do i have a feeling that jack is going to disappear at the game.. come on something bad is going to happen and shame on you edward cullen for not believing bella's feeling about james you are going to regret it!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

thought for sure that you had vicki and james get him!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

ok he is going to get ed to sign something that he shouldn't and all hell is going to break loosel.... i know it!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

knew it knew it knew it!~~~~~

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

thanks for the great story i loved it all!!!! it was wonderful thanks :0)



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

girl we have to get away from this self loving and get some edward lovin' cause it is just not fair!!!!



Author's Response:

Giggle snort!!!!! you have no idea how many times I got yelled at for cockblocking B & E hehehehehe, you will get other yum yums but sorry B & E won't be going ALL the way until after the wedding hehehehe, I know I sux but it's what Edward wants so I can't force him hehehehe but it wil still get steamy....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

cool bells is one of the boys i like her like this it is way cool can't wait to see how james is going to go out!!  renee i don't care about you suffer... at least you know you should have stayed with charlie... but really i don't care about your situation.



Author's Response:

YAY I'm soooo happy you like my Bella, hummmm I wonder what you will say when you get to the James chapt hehehehee

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

cool she is kick ass and i am not worried about her... AWESOME  i hate that word but had to use it.  i never really say this very often because she always gets on my nerves and she always hurts ed's feelings but i am going to say it hopefully god won't strike me down I LOVE BELLA!!  HAHAHAHAH!!! i am going to hell for saying it!!!



Author's Response:

hahahahaha, yeah I know what you mean but sometimes it's the only word that works.... NOOOOO you won't go to hell for saying you love Bella, she is fuck hot and trust me when I say if you love her now OMG I can't wait until you catch up she is gonna rock your world hehehehe

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

edward is here!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

oh jake you are sooo sweet... i wish you would stay that way...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

poor bella too much trauma i hope she is the one that killed phil.. i abhore child molesters they should all rot in hell...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

ok that's jacob....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

well i am starting i can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

poor bell something bad.. she got raped by phil i wonder for how long?  i wonder how she got away?  i am glad she is with charlie.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

see is knew it was jake he can be so lovable but other times not i hope he stays lovable!!  but some how i know that is not going to happen!