Reviews by notthemoats
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995728
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

You've got to stop making me cry! :(

Um, good story, but I don't know how much more heartache I can take. *tiny smile*

Author's Response:

sorry sweetie - I promise I will personally talk to both of them about this crap - they are driving me crazy too. please don't cry.

xoxo

Set in Stone by Psyche001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward saved the life of a girl he was not supposed to save. Bound by secrecy and by the terms of his sentence, he has no choice but to stay away from her. What happens when she accidentally finds him three years after her rescue? What she finds out will turn her life upside down. His time is running out. Will their fate keep them together or tear them apart?

Nominated for an Indie Award!

Romance/Angst/Adventure/No Vampires

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191619 Read Count: 13318
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jun 2010
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - The Lion and the Lamb

This story is fascinating! Bella made me chuckle when she was yelling while flying.



Author's Response:

you just rocked my socks. Thanks :)

Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - The Hour Glass

A HEA please?  I'm already having a hard enough time dealing with the sadness in these chapters.  Enjoyed the flying games in this chapter.

We're Married by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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1st Place Winner!! Til Death Do Us Part O/S Contest Entry:A drunken night lands four friends in Vegas with the purpose of getting married. Best friends getting to share their day with each other, but their spur of the moment nuptials don’t turn out as planned.AU/AH/OOC/ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7101 Read Count: 2055
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

Very good!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

Summary:

One shot - Edward and Bella have been best friends their whole lives. But what happens when Bella is tired of being Edward's fall back and wants more?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3528 Read Count: 458
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2010 Updated: 23 May 2010
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that's bittersweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  :-)

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great story! Have eagerly been checking for updates.

Reviewer: notthemoats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I've never thought I would say this but I'm glad to hear a good smacking is coming. I know it goes along with cannon and everything but for the last few chapters I just can't help but think about how STUPID Edward is being, even long after I finished reading the chapter. The other part I can't stop thinking about is why isn't anyone noticing anything odd about Edward's behavior?

Author's Response:

Edward fakes it pretty well for the sake of the others.

Reviewer: notthemoats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

That was a lovely little chapter. You've been posting so much it's been hard for me to process things enough to review them all, but I've been glad for the frequent updates. I will say "Poor Laurent!" though.... and now that you wrote the chapters you have, Edward's behavior makes perfect sense. I'm glad this was a light one. I liked Bella's parting comment in this chapter.

It's You by Lost Twi Sisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

Bella and Edward meet on a cruise. Both are attracted to each to other.  We'll see what happens after some fun- loving on a cruise, when they encounter each other again.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88437 Read Count: 41339
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I'm really enjoying your story, overall - lots of drama keeping me interested, not too much angst, etc. but I'm finding it jarring that Bella calls Edward "McScruff" ALL the time, and rarely calls him Edward. Over the course of several updates, I've found myself jolted out of the story from it, though I think it's been the most jarring with the lovemaking scenes. (I think it jolts me because I have to remember who McScruff is, since she rarely calls him by name when speaking to him.) I try not to write nit-picky reviews, and I hope this doesn't seem like one, but I thought if I was a writer, I would want to know that it was happening.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028764
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

Meeps!Wasn't expecting the picture - glad nobody was in the room with me! *blushes* Good chapter! :D

Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Hot that he took them, eww that he smelled them.

Author's Response:

lol... i want a pair of my girl's panties so i can smell them... and ur lucky i didn't have him lick them ... giggle

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222335
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: notthemoats Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3

The way Edward is behaving right now I hope it's Jasper's baby.