Reviews by wild_child
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153110
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

love ur story! keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

oooo charlies gonna be a hard ass (i hope edward lays right into him if charlie wont accept him) :-D love the story! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

HOLY JESUS! this chapter was amazing! i just knew as soon as Edward started feeling suspicious that it was Alec! Oh i cant wait for the next chapter I need to know what happens!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

damn cliffy!!!! oh well its amazing! cant wait to see how emmett reacts to this!

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47177
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

love it! i am absolutley in love with historic fics-though they are kind of hard to find sometimes nonetheless this story is amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter! lol alistairs crooked nose made me giggle a little :-}

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

OH MY GOD! its a cliffy!!! i need more! damn this story is AMAZING! i cant believe Maria caught them! eek! good job! cant wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Ironic, don't you think?

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Lol I'd probably be one of the readers who can't understand the "old timey dialect" ur writing is awesome and this is not a waste of time!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

i think im starting to like Maria now, its about time they got rid of Alistair! i hope Bellas ok.  good work  and wow you must be working into overdrive with all the updates you've given us this week! ;-)

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Awwwwww! Kate is just so adorable!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Ohhhhhh I'm gonna cry too I can't believe it's over! Thank you so much for the amazing story and time and effort you used to write it, I absolutely loved reading it!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Edward should have bashed his head in a few more times I really don't like James he's so creepy! Loved the chapter though and wow that was a quick update.

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Woooooo!!!!! Go Jasper!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Holy balls...that was an awesome last chapter although it is sad that it is the last chapter I am looking forward to the epilogue. Wow and James raped Tanya, I would have never guessed that. Very good twist, another story from you would be amazing, looking forward to that as well.

Shake by LFC Hotstuff Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

 

Shake is Edward's story, a high school student who has to deal with the daily embarrassment and pain brought about a disorder. All-Human.

 

 



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8115 Read Count: 492
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2010 Updated: 20 Oct 2010
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

fucking love it!

Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you effin liked it! LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oooo! bellas gonna get it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awwwww I'm so happy it's all working out for Edward! I'll be so sad when this story's over!

Author's Response:

outtake will be emailed

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh no! Bella he was so close! D: good chapter it was emotional and I liked it. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Lol I was so sure that he would have killed a chicken! Sex fence? What were Emmett and Edward talking about!? Lol I really loved this chapter, the ending was so sweet can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my god!!!! This story is amazing! I would have never thought that there would be a story like this its just awesome
and my thoughts on Savagward?
LOVE HIM! I really enjoyed this story and I cant wait until the next chapter is out, this story is going on my favorites!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awwww poor Edward! I feel so bad for him and I wish Bella didn't have to leave him :(. Great chapter though I hope Bella goes back to find him again

Author's Response:

Well I couldn't have Bella stay cause that would bring out the search parties.

 

All your support is awesome. Thank you. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

Bella tugged her sweater up around her shoulders, hugging the fabric to her. She walked across the street to the small park that was not much more than a few trees and a patch of grass, but it called to her. She loved nature and it was just the escape she needed from the noisy bar.

Forgoing the bench, Bella decided to sit down on the grass. She tucked her knees up and hugged them to her chest. And like most of her alone moments lately, she found her thoughts drifting to Edward and his wolves.

Bella stared hard at the tree line, wondering, if she hoped hard enough, if he would walk through those three trees and smile at her. It was silly, but it was a daydream, and she could have her reality any way she liked it there.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Alice is kinda a bitch...but that's fine I never liked her lol. Poor Edward feeling homesick Bella has some tough decisions up ahead of her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL, yes she is a bitch.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

that ending was perfect! I've been waiting for that for a long time :) now I'm dying to know what happens in the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope they're ok. Cant wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Lol Emmett that old geezer :). He makes me laugh can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL, I'm having a lot of fun with those two.

 

I really appreciate you reviewing.

Here is your teaser

Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hmmmm I sense that Edward chasing the chickens will be an ongoing problem lol he seems to really want them :). I loved this chapter can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

Here is your teaser

Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Lol Edward 1 chickens 0 (or thats how i perceve it at least) Haha the ending actually made me laugh :).

Author's Response:

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh! I feel so bad for Edward! I cried when I read this chapter!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

(applause) that was an amazing story and one of the best ive read in a long time! Thank you for your hard work you're amazing!

Author's Response:

<3 thank you so much!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Futuretake- The Proposal

Yay! I am so happy you are continuing with the story! I don't know if you're taking requests or not, but one outtake that I would love to see is when Bella tells Edward she's pregnant and how he reacts, or something along those lines. Keep up the good work I love your writing!

Author's Response:

LOL, thanks. I don't think I will be doing outtakes so much as future takes, but I will consider it.

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22 - Part One

Ahhh! I'm so happy you posted again :) I've missed this story.  Good first part of the chapter, I can't wait for the rest of it! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, wild_child.  I'm working diligently on Part 2 right now :o)

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123073
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: wild_child Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I love this story it's amazing!  I wonder what jake thought of the scene going on in front of him in the end, keep up the good work and keep writing!



Author's Response: THanks very much! we'll hear a little from Jake ....I should be posting more today/tonight.