Reviews by lynsrob
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Heartbreaking chapter, scary that this could be happening somewhere in this country. I love the way the both of you write and always look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Horrible background story on Carlisle, very frightening. I'm concerned what has happened to Bella. I will be very anxious until the next update. Great story.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

This story is such a guilty pleasure. I feel wrong and upset reading it, but I just can't seem to stop. It's very scary thinking these things are probably going on right now in this country. The way you write though it's a non-stop ride.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

It does seem crazy, but also it seems like this is the road the story is taking, I just don't know yet where you will lead  us.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

I didn't think I could hate Aro more, but I do. I'm a little nervous about the next chapter, but can't wait.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Aro is super creepy. I don't want ot think what would happen to Bella if he finds out she is having memories.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I find him extremely creepy, just knowing that he has to have sex with the bride before she gets to be with her husband so he can be the one to repopulate ugh. Wouldn't that make like a lot of 1/2 brothers and sisters, now that is creepy. It would however be funny if he was shooting blanks, that I would find hysterical.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Thank goodness for Esme, at least someone in that crazy place is watching out for her and I know Carlisle will help.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

I was really hoping Felix would give Charlie some kind of clue.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Aro is getting creepier and creepier, can we do away with him now please.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

This is the worse thing that could have happened to Bella, seeing her Mom and trying to escape. I hope you have a way out for her.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Oh it would be wonderful if it was Felix or Charlie, that would be a very Happy New Year indeed.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Oh excruciating cliffie, is Edward at the door or did he get Charlie? Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This is definitely a good cliffie. I think Edward should just knock Aro over the head with something heavy, take his keys, get Bella out and Charlie should be there and rescue them all. Yay!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Poor Edward & Bella, Aro is a cruel, insane demon. I just hope you have Felix and Charlie busting in their soon. I truly hope you didn't have Aro rape her.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Poor Bella, I hope you have a better New Year for both Edward & Bella. Happy New Year and thanks for the incredible story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514821
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I love this saga and look forward to the updates.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Great chapter, very informative, lots of new info and Jacob confused as he always is. Let's get James & Laurent and kick their butts.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

OMG, James is out of control, sick, violent funk. I hope Heidi does something to help the girls before Victoria or Bella get hurt further.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

No body takes Bella from Edward and gets away with it. Go get her Edward!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Yay, Bella is safe, Edward is with her, and I hope James gets his just punishment. I'm hoping for an extremely happily ever after.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I have enjoyed this story so much and was glad when you found a home for it her and continued it after fanfic blew up and started taking down all my favorites. It has been quite an experience reaing The Training School Saga and I think it's brilliant. I'm sad it's coming to an end, but I'm sure Bella & Edward will have their happy ending.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

This has been an incredible journey, I just read this last chapter for the 2nd time. You did such a great job and I loved every single chapter (even the hard ones). Thanks for sharing.

Summary:

There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is?  A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.

 

Banner by mkystich72  .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Mar 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok, obviously trying to make this look like Emmett did it, but I don't think so. I haven't got a clue, however, who did this yet.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This kind of let Charlie off the hook, makes it seem like it's a male who had no previous attachment to Tanya, but someone Tanya obviously wanted, sounds like a member of the Cullen family because murderer said they messed with the wrong family. By the way love the deputy's name Ben Dover (bend over), very funny LOL. Still no guess.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Looks like Emmett is still in the clear and Henderson. It seems like Miss Bella hasn't been around a lot so far, could she possibly be the guilty party, I'm leaning more towards a male, by the way they grabbed Tanya's hair and yanked her head back. I really hope it's not my sweet Edward.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rose, Henderson, Carlisle can all be eliminated. Starting to look like Charlie could be involved.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This really clears Charlie as he was out in the hall when he heard the scream. I believe Carlisle is clear also, otherwise why would he bring Charlie into the Tanya problem.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625107
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

Wow, extremely powerful beginning chapter. So sad, but beautifully told at the end.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Let's hope Edward's training (even all of this is OOC for me) is not as bad as Charlie's. That is so sick that her father and brother would treat her this way. It's bad that anyone would but her own family ugh!



Author's Response:

Right now Edward is just the lesser of two evils.  Give him time, he has a lot to learn.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Even though the whole premise of training a woman (without her consent, and being underage) is so wrong, at least you've made Edward sympathetic and basically good.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

Beautiful chapter, if only it would last. I have a feeling Carlisle is going to ruin everything (when did he get so mean?) with this Demetri fool. I hope the angst isn't going to last too long, please.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

That was beautiful and everything I thought it would be.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I knew it was too good to be true. Let's get past the bad part fast please.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Pitchfork down for now, but I can't promise I won't pick it up again.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Your leaving me hanging like this, really. The only other person I can think of is Carlisle. Please update as soon as possible I don't want to be left alone with my imagination.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I hope you have a plan, because I was a little upset with that last sentence. She finally realizes who is really is and she wants him to let her go. I hope this is just a test to see what he will say.



Author's Response: Trust me. I always have a plan, even when I don't know what it is yet. ;)

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

So sad this story is almost over. It was rough in the beginning, but you made it so interesting I was totally hooked. I loved this chapter by the way (I think we all knew her date would be Edward), true love is meant to be. I would be very interested in a novel. Please keep me updated.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

What a beautiful ending to such a horrific beginning. I love that in all stories (99% anyway) Edward and Bella always find each other. Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm not sure if I like Bella wanting more from Jacob. Let's bring Edward back into the mix and get something exciting going.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315769
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

I thought this was a great chapter, showed B & E getting much closer, but I wasn't sure about all the indecision Bella was still feeling. Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

What the hell is the matter with Bella, why does she have to believe what Rose said when she knows its not true, she spends all her time with Edward, how is he cheating on her. Insecurities are bad news.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Rough chapter, I don't like how Bella hurt Edward, but I am glad she's trying to save hersel, but at what cost.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Loved the story, thanks for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752863
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

Great beginning, has my interest and can't wait to see where you're taking it.



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy it.  It's all here now save for the summer outtakes :)

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

I really like how you gave a quick kickstart to Edward & Bella's feelings towards each other. Very exciting and fast paced story so far.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Always as you said making the wrong choices first, never fails. Kinda love Slutward though, he's just an idiot where love is concerned.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.  We learn more and more about why as we go along.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

Fascinating, really good job. You made the whole chapter very exciting and brought the boys all home safely. I found all the SWAT stuff very exciting and of course Edward coming to his senses so early in the story made me happy. I have a feeling Trevor is going to be involved with the mob being he got called away just before the guys did.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Guess I was wrong about Trevor being linked with the Mafia, but sounds like he still might be an asshole. Hope Edward gets it together soon and that Bella is open enough to listen to him.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

I do think Bella was a bit over reactive, but she's loved Edward for so long and knows how he is that she just couldn't believe him even though she wanted to.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

I'm sure things won't be smooth, but I'm so happy that Edward & Bella are going to try. Can't wait (I hope) for their first date.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Great job! Everything Edward did was so thoughtful and so E & B. I loved how Edward didn't try to hide the bulge but was just honest about the way Bella affected him, very funny. Hopefully Edwards 2 weeks away for training won't be a problem between them (not that it should).

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

I can't wait to find out how Trevor fits into all this. He must be important, because Mr. Clean wouldn't need to make money setting up girls for guys to pick up if he's that close to the mob. Hmmmmmmm.........  What do you have up your sleeve, can't wait to find out.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  Thanks so much for the great reviews!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

Thank you for resolving that angst issue so quickly. Tanya is nothing but trouble (even if she doesn't mean to be). I don't understand how Edward's own mother didn't try and contact him, but I'm sure you'll resolve that also even though I don't know if I could forgive any excuses she comes up with.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Lots of information in this chapter about E & B's past. His Mom, her being Annie Oakley and lots of lemony expectations. You're correct very well rounded.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

I loved the result of the visit with Elizabeth, very creative and not at all what I was expecting. Hot oral sex to Kings of Leon great! Oh the lemons I can just imagine.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

That was the most romantic (& hottest) night ever. Great job with both. This Edward may be the Studward of all time.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

I'm so glad Esme said the things Edward couldn't, it brought the closure he needed so badly. I think the love story between these two characters transcend any situation and make them so easy to love. You have captured that so beautifully.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Wow, what an incredible person you have made Bella (and to think there actually are people who are as selfless as that). Very intense, angst filled chapter. You wouldn't dare let anything happen to Edward or the story would be over, but the wait is still exruciating.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

Right now your writing is amazing me. I really feel like I am so inside the characters, all of them and it's because of your wriing. I am truly amazed.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

I really love how you having Bella deal with everything that has traumatized her. She shows such strength, but how much she needs Edward also. Great job.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Equivalency

I also love both Psych and Bones (I think both shows are underappreciated). Very insiteful, moving chapter.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Sympathetic Solitude

Thank you for clearing that up so fast. I can't imagine how hard it must be for an active adult male to be so cooped up with no outlet and no way to speed things up. Great insite into both Edward and Bella, of course we know they always gravitate back to each other. Patience, love, understanding.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte

Excellent chapter. All the drama and pain for poor Charlotte. God forbid any of us has to go through that trauma, don't we all wish for a Dr. Swan.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

Beautiful sentiments for the hottest couple in fanfic. Could the engagement have been more perfect, I think not.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 41: A Happy New Year

So Edward and the future Mrs. Cullen are exhibitionists now. Is it wrong that I find that extremely hot? Except for Bella's work that was an extremely fun chapter.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On

It may have been heart wrenching, but it was also heart warming. Edward remembering everything about Bella from their first meeting at her parents funeral was beautifully told. I love the way you describe his feelings for her.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Rock On

Wow! I have tears running down my face from the vision of E & B singing Bring Me to Life to each other. What a fantastic chapter. You threw a little of everything in, the lemony goodness was awesome, the hot suggestions great but the love was just beautiful to think about. Thank you. Your idea for this Battle of the Rock Band was terrific and you did it up well.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I think it was my favorite chapter to write :)

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off

I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, really hot lemon, love all over the place.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There

Well done. Beautiful ceremony, words, music leading up to it and such love. This was everything a wedding should be and more. Tears still flowing (happy tears), just absolutely beautiful.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Everything

I can't say enough about the glorious day this wedding was. First the ceremony, then the reception and now they are off to Greece, (after joining the mile high club). Very, very cool.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

I'm so glad I found this fanfic, it has been a wonderful adverture. You have a great way of storytelling and I will be reading your other fanfics as well. Thanks for sharing all the heartache and joy with your readers.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for all of the awesome reviews.  This is actually in the top ten reviewed list now :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Backlighting (Collaboration)

First review for this story, I wanted to wait until one of the chapters you wrote/co-wrote. This has been my favorite chapter to date. The story draws you in, but I love the interaction between Bella/Edward and Bella/Alice. Looking forward to continuing the read. I found you and read Femme Docs & Kevlar Knights and just loved it so much, I have decided to soak up all your fabulousness.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Focal Point

Lots of info, a little intrigue, kept E just mysterious enough.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Overexposure

I really love the way you write and describe, it was all beautiful (except for Victoria of course, Bitch) lol.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Definitive Beauty

How Romantic was that? Absolutely wonderful, you are a genius, I have no other words.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you're enjoying it.  I really had fun writing this.  It forced me to expand my wings a little more description wise.  I had a lot of fun doing it.  I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Observational Distortion

Beautifully descriptive at the end. The beginning was most women's internal head games with themselves when there afraid to take chances, I like the way you did that.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: More Latent Images

I love where this is going and how you didn't leave us hanging for 10 chapters.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Complimentary Colors

How romantic can you get. Amidst the hangover pain and them not really knowing each other, they still meet and can feel what there is between them. It's absoltely beautiful and I've said it before, but I love the way you write.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Flash Fill

Halloween sounds like fun Cullen style. I thought Bella & Alice had plans with the outfits they found shopping that day. Bella better check in with Alice and let her know she's okay.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Vignetting

What an incredible date. You have a wonderful, creative imagination and I can't wait to see where it leads next.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sharpness

Where do I find this Edward, love pours out of him at every turn. Very romantic and they are so supportive of each other, I love it.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Fixation

Beautifully done. That was incredible sweet, hot, long lemony goodness.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Negative

Love, love, love, it's a beautiful thing.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Diffuser

This was one of those chapters that was just perfect, beginning to end. You have told such a beautiful story of how love can complete two people who are open to it.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Ambient Light

Again perfect.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Infinity

Romance and love is in the air incessantly and so beautifully worded. Just incredible.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Perfect Background

Such fun and of course it would be Edward's meadow, perfection again.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Contrast

OMG your killing me here, I don't know if I can get through the next few chapters. The way you describe their love is so amazing, it has tears streaming every chapter showing how much beauty their characters contain.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Conflicting Shadows

That was great. I loved your idea of Bella bidding (even though I had my suspicions), but I was wondering who the other bidder was. Very good.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Angelic Phantom

Fantastic wedding, beautiful gowns, flowers, love the horse and carriage. Perfection.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

Thank you for sharing one of the most beautiful love stories in fanfic. You did an incredible job and I'm sure I will revisit to reread one day. Can't wait to continue with your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for the reviews!

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55122
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research

I love the way this story started, fast right out of the gate. Bella & Edward flirting from the get go is very hot.



Author's Response:

Awe...I'm glad you liked it!  They do jump right into it~

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster

That was fast and very lemony. I loved the interaction with the Cullens, that was fun.



Author's Response:

That was my first ever lemon so I'm happy you liked it! 

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: An Officer and a Gentleman

Wow I like this pace, only 3 chapters and Edward knows he loves Bella already, yea! Looking forward to hearing more about both their backgrounds and for Bella to recognize her feelings.



Author's Response:

There past comes to light pretty quick too and with everything happens the pace keeps up.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Buried Under the Guilt

There is still a possibility if she had her eggs frozen, they still could have children or at least one natural child. Adoption is always possible and we know Edward loves her, so I hope he'll come around soon.



Author's Response:

There are still options, they just have to find a way to work past it.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Another Country Heard From

Please don't tell me Esme has breast cancer. I don't know how much more angst I can  handle right now.



Author's Response:

Well, I know you're well past that, but nothing that bad for Esme, what does happen is bad enough~

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

She will officially be known from here on out as Saint Bella.



Author's Response:

Awe...Bella is very selfless when it comes to the Cullen's and Edward, even early on.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Way Beyond Empty

Beautiful chapter, I loved every word.



Author's Response:

Thank you...the song was something I was so nervous to put out there, but it ended up being well received.  I really enjoyed this chapter~

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Some String and a Bag of Oats

That was fun, enjoyed the girls and the bachelorette party, nothing got to out of hand. It seemed like Edward definitely benefited from their outing.



Author's Response:

Oh yes...Edward had more fun than the groom that night~