Reviews by culleniwish
Summary:

Best friends Jasper and Bella are having a bad day. Bad day leads to drinking. Drinking leads to dancing. Dancing leads to a kiss on the neck. A kiss on the neck leads to...lemony fun! AH


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2446 Read Count: 928
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the story. Wish I had a Jasper to kiss me on the neck. :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514673
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Poor Carlisle... I do hope they are able to re-open the school once they deal with James.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

I knew it! I knew he'd find them. I hope Bella fights and doesn't do the whole self sacrifice thing.... guess we'll just have to wait and see. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

NOOOOO! that's all I can say. lol

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

What happened? What happened? What happened? :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Great chapter! I loved seeing Bella take charge and not be the victim this time. I'm also glad Edward and everyone else showed up to help out. I think Jake should let Carlisle send James to Aro. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I have to admit that I really enjoyed hearing James saying he just wanted to die. It's scary how much I like the idea of him being their pet.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Loved it! I'm so glad that they started a new school. I was sad when they had to close the other one. I really enjoyed seeing how everyone seems to be healing. I thought the end was perfect with Edward saying "So,Isabella, you wish to play?" It would have been one of the many fan fic moments I wish I really could have seen. Great job. I really enjoyed the story and always looked forward to the updates.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624968
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

When is Carlisle going to go down!?! I'm almost in tears I'm so afraid for Bella.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I'm so glad he didn't hit her. I had a knot in my stomach and now I can relax a bit and breathe. Hope they are able to fool Carlisle.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

At least Marcus and Demitri are gone now. That's a little less stress on Edward. I hope he isn't really falling into his old ways. I don't really think he is or if he is I know Bella will reach 'her' Edward again. Looking forward to what ever is going to happen next. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Please let it be Edware. Please let it be Edward. Please let it be Edward... Bella deserves to get a break. :0) Glad to see that Edward hasn't really gone back to his old ways. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

awww he let her go and they all got the help they needed. Can't wait to see how the epilogue goes. I hope Edward and Bella had a great date :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Beautiful ending! I love that Edward had the gate knocked down. Can't believe it's over. It's so good to see them all happy. :0)

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmm wonder who the boss is and what he wants with Bella? Going to read the second chapter now. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What's the deal with Edward? Why did he choose Bella and why did he feel he had to kidnap her???? Moving on to the next chapter. :0)

You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Missing

Really enjoyed this first chapter. I'm so glad it's a completed fic so I can just keep reading.... :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Watching

Please not Jasper, Please not Jasper. lol I think it would crush Bella if anything happened to him. I think it would crush me too. lol

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Waiting

Yay, Jasper's ok! This is so exciting..... :0) Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Meeting

Something about him being dangerous made that kissing so hawt! Is he going to take care of Mike? No I'm not caring for Mike too much. lol

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

Jasper's dream was pretty interesting. Is he going to meet Alice. How did she make him dream of her? Really liking this story so far. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Knowing

Pretty cool seeing an evil Alice. I've never read a fic where they were all human killing vamps. Loving this story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Believing

Love the night visit. Wonder what's going to happen soon that Edward won't have to worry about hurting her anymore. Are they going to change her??? :0) Love the story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pacing

I love Bella and Jasper as best friends. I'm curious to see what Bella learns about Edward at the library. Great story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Discovering

Love the story. Can't wait to see what Edward and Alice have planned for Bella and Jasper and how will they all act the next time they see each other.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Discovering

Love the story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Luring

"I finally know why people are disappearing, if I could only have seen the look on Karen Mallory’s face when I told her…."    I think it's funny that this was her last thought. lol

Bella, Bella, Bella not a good idea to go into the woods that night. I'm guessing it's James.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Introducing

Love Jasper! I'm glad the other vamps showed up so James couldn't hurt Bella and Jasper. I think he really would have.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Confronting

Love the story. Looks like what ever they want with Bella and Jasper will be happening soon. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Arguing

Oh I know what their reaction will be. They'll think they're crazy. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Convincing

How exciting... they ended up having to show up at the party after all and now they can't leave. Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Preparing

Mike's a vamp killer. lol At least James is gone and we don't have to worry about him any more. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Beginning

I have a feeling Edward's in the house with Mikey. To bad Bella's not a vamp so she could be there and say "how do you like this Babe" lol reading on....

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing

I'm not sure I have words for this. lol I kind of want to say poor Mike but, I can't because I was hoping that Edward would kill him. Edward really enjoyed that didn't he? lol Wonder what will happen when they catch up to Bella and Jasper.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Parting

Poor Ben but, the idea him witht he spray can and lighter buring everything that makes a noise makes me chuckle a bit. :0)  I'm thinking Edward and Alice have caught up to them...

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Explaining

Well that worked out quite perfectly didn't it? The fire will burn all the evidence of what happened at the party. Edwards going to give Bella some answers? I'm so glad I can just keep reading.... :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Accepting

Is she turnning Jasper??? :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Enlightening

Well that was very interesting. :0) Love the story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Comprehending

I enjoyed seeing all the explanations. So Jasper is a vamp now. :0) I think it's so cool that Bella gets to go through all this with her best friend and plus she gets to spend eternity with Edward. Are we going to get to read about Edward changing Bella? I guess I'll just keep reading and find out. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Belonging

Really enjoyed the chapter. I can't wait to see what the powers are going to be. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Starting

It was kind of funny being inside Jessica's mind. lol What are they planning on doing to her? I thought Bella was going to kill her now I'm just not sure. Going to keep reading to find out.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Pursuing

I totally did not expect that. :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a Bella/Emmett story. It's all human and a little OOC. Its AU/AH. Rated M for a reason. Bella and Alice work at a fancy hotel in down town Seattle. Alice is dating Jasper and living with Bella. Emmett is a pro football player and they meet at a party at the hotel. They have fun but will a long distance romance ensue or will there be other challenges along the road.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115126 Read Count: 12393
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 'Tis The Season

funny that Jake showed up at Christmas dinner. haha Sounds like they had a wonderful Christmas. I'm looking forward to Bella going to Chicago. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Men in Tight Pants

I usually read Bella / Edward or Bella / Jasper fics this will be my first Bella / Emmett. I really like the idea and I enjoyed this first chapter. Looking forward to seeing where things go from here. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: And All That Jazz

They really seem to be hitting it off. Jasper playing the protective big brother was cute. Can't wait to find out how the rest of the night goes for Em and Bella. Sad that he has to leave the next day. How will they keep in touch??? reading on........

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: When Life Hands You Lemons

I'm loving this story. To bad she had to rush off early in the morning like that. I'm glad she left him a note though. Didn't she give him her number at the party the first night? I wonder if he still has it. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 43,200 Minutes and Counting

It made me a little nervous when she went out with Jake. I'm glad she isn't going to go out with him again. :0) Bet he's wishing he wouldn't have spent that money on those tickets now. ha ha I'm so glad Emmett made the reservations so now she has an actual date to look forward to. I'm sure he's missing her just as much as she misses him. Wonder why he hasn't looked her up and called her??? I really like this story. You guys have done a great job writing it. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 720+ Hours and Counting

Ok the last couple lines just made me want to squeal! Seriously I'm all giddy about them calling each other boyfriend and girlfriend. :0) Loving the story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Emmettland is Candyland

I'm loving these two as a couple. I guess I can add them to the relationships I like to read about. They picked out some cool movies. Looking forward to seeing how they're day goes. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Two Can Play That Game

Great chapter! loved the cake war and all the other fun they had. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Life is Beautiful

Loved this chapter. I didn't want him to leave. I was crying right along with Bella and Alice. Great job on this story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Inner Monologue

Love, Love, Love it! So Em is thinking of giving up football. I think it would be good for him to have other business ideas anyway even if he wasn't going to quit. Football players aren't able to play forever. It's good to have a back up. I'm glad he got to tell Esme about Bella. (that was so cute) I'm also with Em in hoping that Bella learns to except gifts from him without the fuss. :0) I really enjoy reading this story. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Two Months Too Long

Wow, James is being super creepy. I hope Bella tells Emmett everything that's been going on. I'm really looking forward to their trip except it's always sad when they have to say goodbye. Great job! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 8 Letters and 3 Syllables

I love that they said the words. :0) It was fun reading where they made the snowman. I like how she put his number on it. Still loving this story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: This Year's Love

I loved their vacation. I'm sad that it's over and they have to go their seperate ways for a bit. I'm loving this story, great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Heirloom

Love that he gave her the necklace. I'm not sure why Em won't just tell him dad and Edward Bella's name. I mean it's not like they are going to go running to the press. Love the story (I know I've said that before) :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752820
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

I had this story favorited over on ff waiting for it to be complete and just hadn't gotten around to reading it yet. Glad I found it here. Really liked this first chapter. Now I'm moving on to the next one. :0)



Author's Response:

I really hope you enjoy it.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts

Awww they like each other. I wonder what it will take for them both to realize it. :0) I really enjoyed this chapter. I love that I can just keep on reading and not have to wait for an update. :0)



Author's Response:

I"m glad I was able to get it all up.  Thanks again for the review!  Hope you keep enjoying.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

Yay! They kissed! I had a funny feeling Andy was going to wake up or that someone was going to walk in. ha ha Great chapter. I really like the story so far. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Well I don't hate Edward. Yes I wish he had made better choices, but he did try to do the right thing. It was just the wrong girl. Hopefully once Bella has calmed down a bit she'll give him a chance to talk. Guess I'll find out as I read on... Love the story. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

This chapter made me want to look up some video's from Pink and listen to them. :0) Bella seems like a great doctor, taking all that time to put together that packet for Mrs.L. I really like Mama D. :0) Looking forward to the Femmes night out.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're still enjoying it.  I hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J

So now Jasper gets involved. :0) I had wondered if he and Alice were going to get together and now it looks like they will. How long is Edward going to hide from Bella? What's she supposed to think when he doesn't even want to be in the same room with her?? :0) Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

Love the story! I hope when Bella wakes up she and Edward can really talk. I'm glad he got a chance to say what he did and I'm glad that she doesn't seem to be so mad at him at the moment. Going to go read more. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

Loved this chapter. It was fun seeing all the different sides of Edward and how the guys took care of "Mr.Clean". ha ha Edward finally realized and admitted he loves Bella. Now he just needs to let her know. I love how they ended up cuddled on the couch to sleep. Hope they are able to work things out. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Can't wait to see what the guys do to keep Trevor away. Now that Edward has said he loves Bella. The thought of her going out with Trevor makes me feel ill. ha ha I'm going to keep on reading and see how this works out. :0) Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Not sure how I'm feeling about dear Bella's reaction here. He finally tells her and she freaks. How can she think he's lying does she really think Edward would just come out and say that if he didn't mean it??? I mean look at how long she's been waiting for him to do it and understanding about why. I know it's all to add drama but I really just can't wait for the misunderstandings to be over. haha Someone should lock them in a room together and not let them out until they've talked about everything and made sure there were no misunderstandings. :0) I'm off to read the next chapter. I'm loving the story. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

Looks like maybe things are going to start being worked out between Edward and Bella? Hopefully? Yeah I'm a wimp when it comes to angsty relationship stuff. ha ha So Alice is moving in, that'll be nice for Bella. The rock band tournament sounds like it could be fun. :0) Really enjoying the story it's so hard to stop reading and do stuff that needs done like making dinner for the family. lol Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

Great chapter. I was dissapointed that their date got cancled but it all worked out. It was so sweet that he was there waiting for her. That was maybe even better than an actual date. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Wow, what a perfect date. I'm so glad everything went so well and they both had a great time. Looking forward to seeing them grow closer :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

Guard duty :0) I like seeing the guys protective like that. Wow that Trevor really did end up being a real jerk didn't he??? :0) Reading on.....



Author's Response:

LOl..yes he did.  I'm so glad you're enjoying and thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

I don't mind the "kissy kissy face". lol You are right that is what a new relationship is like especially on as HOT as theirs. Just great! Bella's got bad guys working in the hospital with her. Love the story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames

Just a quick review so I can just keep reading. Love this story! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

Rose is still planning on going out? Are the girls going to get themselves in trouble? :0) curious to see how the seperation goes. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

When Edward asked to meet Tanya the next day I knew the whole Bella thing was going to happen. I'm curious to see how all this works out.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

Oh what a relief! I'm so glad that didn't last long and they made up. :0) Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

I liked the song game. :0) Wonder if the whole Bella decoy thing will work? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Great chapter! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

The visit with Elizabeth went really well. Glad Edward got some aswers and is feeling better about things. Still loving the story..... :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment

It's so nice of them to help Tanya out. Wonder how the living situations will work out? Sounds like Balla would really like to live with Edward. I'm sure Alice and Jasper would have ended up living together soon too. I liked seeing Bella be so good at shooting. It was funny how Edward and Emmett changed the subject when it was mentioned she join the force. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

Yes, I agree this was much better than in a cheap motel. Edward is a dream :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Loved the costumes and the fact that the girls rocked! Emmett's reaction cracked me up :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

Way to go Esme! It would have bothered me too to see Elizabeth step in and try to take credit for the man Edward turned out to be. It was so sweet when Edward hugged Esme and called her mom. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

I had wondered what had happened that made Bella not follow singing to go pro. What a terrible thing to have happen. Surely she can see she wasn't the reason. She's a doctor and a pretty smart one at that. Oh wow! that was quite the twist with Trager. Now maybe we'll get to see "Bella's boy" in action. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Wow that was exciting! I really liked this chapter. I liked seeing the guys in action a bit working to get Bella and the other hostages out of there. I also liked how Bella kept her cool and took care of everyone even standing up to Trager a few times. And then at the end how she took James out. Now I'm hoping that Edward is ok and I hope Bella will be ok too. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

Ugh! Bella has got to quit blaiming herself for this situation. I sure hope that doesn't last long.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love of Esme

Ya gotta love Esme! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In the Darkness

Yay! Edwards awake. That's so nice that Bella gets to stay with him all the time. Wonder if she'll pass the phyce evaluation. I sure hope so. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into the Darkness

Poor Bella, I hope she accepts the help and works toward getting better. I don't want her to have to repeat her intern year she's worked so hard to get where she is now. I guess it could be a good sign that she opened up and actually told them what was wrong. I'm staying hopeful. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

Glad to see Bella working through this and not giving up. She's so lucky to have so many suportive people around her to help her. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Equivalency

I'm so glad she gets to finish her intern year. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Crankward

Great Story! I'm wondering what Edwards deal was????

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Sympathetic Solitude

glad there wasn't something really wrong with Edward and it was just that he was being grumpy. Also glad they made up. I like Carmen and I like seeing Bella like the job. Hope she does really well there. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Home

Good to see Edward up and walking and back at home. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte

Hope Charlotte is ok. Glad doc Peters wasn't a huge jerk  when it came to running those tests. Maybe he's coming around? Still loving the story. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

What a wonderful Christmas! They're engaged :0) I really enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 40: The Name Game

Hope she takes his name :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 41: A Happy New Year

Really enjoyed this chapter. :0) I hope we get to see another Rock Band night.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

I wondered if it would take an emergency to get Bella to be able to enter the ER again. I'm glad she was able to over come her fear and was able to help Ethan. I also think Bella's plan for the wedding sounds perfect. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Surfacing From the Deep

Noooo They can't take Edward of SWAT! That's not right. I could see finding a replacement till Edward was well, but not losing his spot permantely. What a bummer. Wonder what he'll choose to do?



Author's Response:

Thanks to your reviews, FDKK has made the top 10 most reviewed!  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 45: A Raft In The Flood

I have to say I'm glad that Bella took the news so well. I'm also glad to see that Edward isn't too down about losing his position and is finding something else he would like to do. :0)