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I'm a stay at home mom. I have a very sweet husband and 2 wonderful kids. I used to love scrapbooking till I discovered fanfic now I spend all my time reading and have a room full of scrapbook stuff just sitting there waiting to be used. :0)
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752884
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On
That was sad. Bella and Emmett were so lucky to have each other. How sweet that Emmett is going to be a daddy to a little girl. :0) I'm really enjoying this story.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Great chapter! It was fun hearing about Bella and Emmett growing up. I wanted Edward to stay on the SWAT team, but this training center seems like it could be a good thing and now Emmett is going to go work there too. Rose will be so happy. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Surprise, SURPRISE
I enjoyed hearing from Emmett. It was really sweet when he felt the baby kick and they picked a name. Cute name! I also really enjoyed Bella and Edwards time alone. I'm so glad they seem to talk so openly about stuff. It helps cut down on the misunderstandings that seem to happen in other stories and it stresses me out. So this is really enjoyable to read. :0) Great job! Oh and congrats on making it to the top 10 most reviewed. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I'm glad they got Dr. Scumbag, but that was a pretty careless move on Bella's part. I get that he needed to be delayed, but after the cops pulled up she should have played it like she didn't know what was happening. If he's a gangster he's got people working for him that all about getting even. Wouldn't he send people after her knowing that she was the one who set him up. Since you said we are getting to the end I'm guessing that doesn't happen and I'm glad. :0) Fun chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 50: The Human Incubators
I like the name of their band. lol I can just imagine the looks they got from the crowd when they steped up on stage. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Really looking forward to the battle of the bands. I think it'll be a fun one to read. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Rock On
Very fun! I laughed when Jessica's band did the Avril song. lol Then of coure I loved when the knights and the Femmes were on stage. I even looked up the songs and listened to them. Great job!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Pressure
Well now I'm curious why would it matter if Bella knew how to use a gun. She wasn't the crazy person that took a ER waiting room hostage. :0) Poor Bella I hope she does well on her test.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off
What a great surprise... Edward showing up like that. Yep it would scare a person at first. lol Looking forward to the trial. Hopefully they really do have good lawyers and won't let the other side paint a bad picture of Bella. What's the trial about exactly? I the hospital was being sued for not having enough security what would making Bella look bad acheive? Guess I'll just keep reading and find out. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 55: On The Hot Seat
I really wanted Demitri to let Varner have it. Hopefully everything will turn out well for the hospital. I had wondered if Rose was going to have the baby since Emmett wasn't in the court room. I'm off to read the next chapter.....
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 56: The Eye of the Storm
Love Daddy Emmett! :0) Edward did such a great job on the stand. I'm glad that the hospital won. :0)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
Yay we're getting to the wedding :0)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There
I had wondered how Elizabeth felt about Edward changing his name. Now I know. The wedding was beautiful! :0)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Everything
Great chapter! Loved all the traditional stuff the dances, the cake, the speeches. What a great honeymoon surprise. :0)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
With tears in my eyes I finished reading this story. What a wonderful love they share. I love these guys. I really enjoyed reading this story. Beautiful ending I love the familes they all have. Great job!
Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed?
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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger
hmm I'm really interested in seeing what this story is about and what happens next. Why'd he hit her??? :0)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Trapped
Why'd he take her and where did he take her? I want to hear him talk so I can get some answers. :0) Reading on to see what I can find out in the next chapter. haha
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum
He's pretty serious about her staying there isn't he? Wonder why???? :0)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster
I wonder what he's going to do to prove he's a monster? :0)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings
So Carlisle is evil too. Still would like to know what Edward wants with Bella. I have a bad feeling he's going to kill the people tied to the other chairs. At least we know it's not her parents. :0) I like your writing.
Author's Response:
thank you very much :) xx
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless
That was a cruel trick, but I knew he couldn't let one live after taking the bags off their heads. Does he want Bella to hate him because he's doing a very good job if that's the case. :0)
Author's Response:
he just sorta wants her to learn her place. and tht was the only way :) xx
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster
You said it.... His mind is chaotic! :0) So, Jasper has Alice to "play" with. Is she human or a vamp? I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :0)
Author's Response:
you shall have to wait and see :)
the next chapter wont take me long :) xxx
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball
No wonder Bella can't keep up with his mood changes. I know I can't. Why did he storm in and take her from Alice's room???? He's so confusing and so is Bella. lol At least now I know that Alice is human. :0) looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
hehe i cant sometimes :) and you shall find out very sooon :)
they are both very confusing, but they shall start to unravel soon, i promise :) xx
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
I like that they talked. Now it seems like they may actually be getting somewhere. :0)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy
Some very interesting event took place. Wonder what Alice's reaction to touching Bella's hand was all about. Pretty interesting that Jake and his pack are all 'bad guys' too. :0)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness
I really liked this chapter except for Rose making Bella feel worthless. Loved the kiss! I like seeing them grow closer together. :0)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control
mmm I like shirtless Edward a lot! :0) I'm worried about what Jacob is up to. Why does it hurt Alice when she touches Bella? Is it just the vision she had?
Author's Response:
well yeah sort of, she just gets a really bad feeling, like the bad pains she talks about, thts why jasper and edward are so tense :)
i hope that helped
and i love shirtless edward too :) xx
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions
I'm sad that she pushed Edward away, but I'm glad that Alice snapped her out of it and she's not going to do it anymore. :0) I wish she would have stood up to Carlisle though. :0) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart
Carlisle's story is so sad. I understand his feelings toward humans but, he also should realize that not all humans are so judgemental... Esme wasn't and Bella and Alice don't seem to be either. Maybe being around them he'll remember a little? or not :0) Really enjoying this story.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom
Looks like danger is still out there. Bella may end up a vampire yet. Has Rose found Emmett? :0)
Author's Response:
Yup danger never seems to leave her alone :( and she might :) and yes that is Emmett :) xx
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations
If Alice is going to be a vamp someday I'm just wondering why haven't they changed her already? Jasper's ability to change Bella's feelings about him so completely does make you question if Alice's feeling for him are her own. I want to believe they are but, he is able to make her feel that way. I'm so happy that Edward said "not today" meaning that they will someday. I just hope it's before Jake gets a hold of her. Every time she's left alone for a moment I keep waiting for him to make his move. :0)
Author's Response:
Its all to do with her own feelings, it will become apparent soon :) And yes jasper is very good at manipulating, but do you really think he would do that to Alice? Yeah your right he probably would hehe bt you shall have to wait and see :)
And yes it will happen someday, and jake will pop up eventually bt not now :) xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt
hmm wonder if Rose really is helping Jake???
Author's Response:
You shall know soon my dont worry :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles
Why is Bella letting what Carlisle said get to her now? He said stuff before and she brushed it off. I don't like her feeling sorry for herself. Edwards over 100 years old it's quite possible there would have been someone else in that time. I hope she gets over this quick. :0) I just don't think it's a good reason to push him away.
Author's Response:
well your completely right, but bella has extremly low self worth and carlisle preyed on that. he hit her weak spot. it wont last for long, she is just being silly, Edward will get her out of it, i promise :) xx
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster
I think you did a great job! At first I was a little dissapointed that the "Monster" was so rough with her but by the end it really just seemed to fit. Even the monster loves her.... that's pretty sweet even if he has different ways of showing it. :0) What's the deal with Jacob??? :0)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Doomed
Really liked this chapter. Poor Edward having to fight the monster within himself. It was good to see why Carlisle hates Bella. I had wondered if it was for that reason. Perhaps he doesn't hate her as much as he thinks because he cared enough to talk with her and explain his feelings to her. If he truly hated her I don't think he'd care either way. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes
Great chapter. I'm still worried about Jacob. I hope something happens that ruins his plans. :0) Is Edward the only vamp with a split personality like that? Just wondering because obviously Jasper has a dark side too. So why does Alice dislike Edward so much? Really enjoying reading this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :0)
Author's Response:
well you shall have to wait and see about jacob. And yes, edward is the only one with the split persona, because well, the other ones dont fight the dark side as much as edward, so they are at peace with the inner demon, whereas edward tries his hardest to subdue the beast :) And Alice just doesn't trust Edward, because she loves Bella, and she has seen the marks on her wrists and neck, and is worried. im glad your enjoying the story :) and the next chapter shouldn't take me too long. it is EPOV xx
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Trust
Is it ok to be angry with Bella? because I am.... How can she trust Jacob over Edward? Edward even though he's a monster has been nothing but straight forward with her heck she even loves the monster. She really is being really stupid at the moment. I'm so upset with her I kind of don't care if Jacob does get her. Then she'd see...... :0)
Author's Response:
It is perfectly alright to be angry with Bella, thats exactly what i wanted, she is being very silly, and i wanted this reaction lol bt im not doing it for fun hehe its all for a reason, n she will come to her senses, i mean do you really think alice would let her trust jacob. you remebber her face when edward found the note? she aint gonna comfort bella, she gonna knock some sense into her :) xx
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic
Love the moments with Bella and her Edward. Wonder what Alice saw and what's going to happen next. :0)
Author's Response:
you will see what alice felt very soon :) and thanks i love the edward bella moments too :) xx
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
I hope Edward, Jasper and Carlisle are ok. How in the world are Alice and Bella going to get out of this? Looking forward to the next chapter. :0)
Author's Response:
dont worry they will survive i promise :) but it aint gonna be a smoothe ride im afraid, but edward and the monster are now one :D so its gonna be a thrilling ride :) xxx and i cant wait to let you all see the next chapter, its not nice though :/ xx
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts
How in the world did they knock out the vamps? You sure did leave us with a cliffy.... I'm hanging on waiting for the nex chapter. :0)
Author's Response: Hehe well because you have been waiting so patiently, it was jane and alec using their powers together to subdue the men. i am still writing, but i have lost internet connection (im on my phone) but i should be up and running by the weekend :) it was a huge cliffy lol i am very sorry i hope your not too mad. thank you for reading x
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Wow that was pretty twisted! Ya gotta love Bella for taking all the pain on herself so that Alice would be ok. Can't believe she didn't pass out from all the pain though. She's a tough cookie. I want to see the guys get free and what they do to Jacob. :0)
Author's Response:
hehe I am a twisted little missy :)and yes she is my tough little cookie, but she has to be :) and Jacob will get what he deserves, don't you worry about that :)
thank you for your review and support xx
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I'm so confused.... what's Aro doing there??? I also don't understand what Tanya hoped to do by telling Alice and Bella about the guys pasts. They already know what kind of monters they can be. Edward even demonstrated it for Bella in the beginning of this story Jasper too. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter so I'll maybe learn what's going on. :0)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home
Poor Bella . I hope they get her away from Jake soon.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri
Yep still trying to figure out what's going on. :0)
Author's Response:
I know everything is still very confusing, however if you have any questions please just visit my blog and ask away, cos I'm sure that other people would love to know aswell :) http://misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/?zx=257e18d47d890ea0
Thank you for the review and your support xx
AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer. Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Perfect Background
They're wedding plans sound perfect. After they shot down his parents house where they had confessed their love I wondered about the meadow. At least with Alice planning her own BIG wedding she shoudn't be too obsessive over Bella's.... Yeah right! haha
Great job!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Infinity
Ya gotta love a romantic proposal like that. :0) Once again I say he's perfect. I won't be trying the stir fry though. My hubby can't even stand the thought of mayo. I tell him it's all in his head, but he still won't eat anything with it. When we go to subway he won't have them cut his subs in half because the knife might have touched mayo. yeah he's crazy. lol
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
curious to see how this story goes. How's Edward going to win her over? She doesn't seem to care for him to much at the moment. Maybe she'll be nicer when she's not in such a bad mood. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
Okay I'm trying to find something to like about Bella. Why is Edward intersted? She's been pretty rude to him. Although she has moments where it seems like she could be nice. :0)
Author's Response:
Yeah...These were the chapters written by the original author. It was a little difficult at first to transition. I never did really find a good way to explain why she was how she was in the beginning and then the big change in her attitude in the next chapter. I sort of did down the road, but I think that if I were him I would have given up at this point too. LOL. Things smooth out a bit once I take over.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Blurry (by Nikteche)
Yay! he called and they're on a date. I hope it all goes well. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Backlighting (Collaboration)
Now I'm wondering... when was the first time he saw her? It kind of sounds like it may have been a while ago. I'm glad that they seem to be having a nice time except for good ol Tanya. haha Reading on.....
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Focal Point
How sweet! I remember those days staying up talking all night. I really like this side of Bella a lot more. I can tell where you picked up writing this. More than just liking Bella more the chapter's seem more complete (if that makes any sense) I know the last couple chapters were a collaberation, but they were already sooo much better than the first few chapters. You'r a great writer. :0)
Author's Response:
*blushes* Thanks :) Glad you are enjoying it and I hope you like the rest!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Composition
It's good to see that she's going to give him a chance. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Overexposure
This vas so good! haha Really I loved their day in the park. Wonder how many pics he ended up taking of Bella? I know when I get my camera out to take pics I tend to take 100's without meaning to. I just snap away. Luckily with digital I'm able to only print the ones I want, but I usually save all the others on a disk. I love taking pics. :0) Poor Edward can't seem to get away from his exes. I'm glad he talked to Bella about it and she's not going to write him off. I'm really rooting for these guys. Great job!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Definitive Beauty
He is wonderful isn't he? :0) There is no way she's going to be able to keep it at an amoeba's pace when he's being so sweet and romantic like that. Way to keep up the fight Edward. :0) Love it!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Observational Distortion
It was funny how she was kicking herself for the "friends" comment. lol I also really like the part where he had her look at the picture more closely and explained everything he saw that she didn't notice. He thinks she's beautiful. Hope she start believing it. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Illumination
This was cool, I don't remember reading about Alice and Jasper having problems too often. I liked this more mellow side of Alice. :0) I'm glad that she seems to be a good voice of reason for Bella at this point. Maybe she'll help keep Bella from ruining a good thing before it even happens. :0) Great job, I'm really enjoying the story.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Shadows
I really love hearing from Edward. :0) So it seems he's been aware of Bella of quite some time now. I hope she doesn't freak out. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Latent Image
Ok maybe it's just me, but I don't think what Edward told Bella was bad. I think I'd be flattered if a guy I was so clearly interested in admitted to seeing me walk out of a book store years ago and had tried to find me. I don't think that is stalkerish. Now had he followed her around taking her picture for all those years that would have been stalkerish. I think she's over reacting.... where's Alice?... Bella needs a good talking to. lol Read the a/n at the end. I'm glad it won't be emo for too long. Great job!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: More Latent Images
Yay Alice! I knew she wouldn't let me down. lol
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Shutter Lag
Poor Edward! Bella actually shows up and he's too drunk to believe it or enjoy it. :0) I'm so glad she showed up though.....
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Complimentary Colors
Loved this chapter! It's so good to see things turn out so well. I'm glad the sadness didn't drag on and on. :0)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Flash Fill
Again I say "I loved it" because I did. :0) That had to be one of the best first kisses I've read. Ya know I even loved how before they just held hands. Are we going to get to see what their night babysitting is going to be like? Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Great job!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Additive Color
That was quite the adventure. I'm glad the girls eventually warmed up to Bella or that would have been a miserable night. :0) Love the girls nick names. very cute!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Vignetting
I just keep loving this more and more. :0)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Candid
This was fun. I like that Jake and Quil were a couple. So I know there won't be any couple drama because of Jake. haha
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Fogging
I like the relaxed feel this chapter had. I felt the joy they had of just being able to spend the day together. Plus they both confessed that they loved each other that deserves a big Awwww! :0) great job!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sharpness
still loving the story! :0)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Fixation
LOVED this chapter! You write the most perfect Edwards! :0)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Close Up
The girls showing up barging in on them in the morning cracked me up especially the talk about wondering if they were making a baby. lol Everything just seems so perfect for them and I love it!!! :0)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Dominant Object
And the pixie trio strikes again. lol They seem so cute. :0) I'm so excited Edward has a ring now just to wait for the right time to pop the question. They are perfect together. Love it!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Negative
This was really cute. I didn't want them to have to say goodbye either. I love that they both were on their way to see each other. Great job!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Diffuser
Renee was great! lol The whole sex talk had me lauging. I can just imagine how embarassing that situation would have been. :0) Hope things go well with Charlie.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Ambient Light
Charlie ran a background check! lol That was great! I'm glad he and Edward got along. Wonder what they were talking about that night??? When Charlie asked Sue to marry him it brought tears to my eyes. Loved it!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Contrast
Ok, I'm feeling really emotional... this made me cry. I'm so glad she's letting him use the pictures. :0) Great job!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Conflicting Shadows
I had wondered how Edward would feel about someone owning that picture. Luckily it was easily taken care of. It's funny that the two bidders were Bella and Carlisle. :0)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Subordinate Object
I love that Edward suprised her. :0) Hope her movie turns out good, it sounds like it's been a real pain to make. haha
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Aerial Perspective
Wonder if Edward can even remember all the women he's been with? :0) Bella may not want that list... glad Bella didn't stay mad at him. :0)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Los Angeles Edward Style
California dream'n.... :0)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Montage
If I were Bella I wouldn't sell that studio the rites to the next book. If she does I'd make them really pay for it. :0) Glad that whole mess got staightened out. :0)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Angelic Phantom
Beautiful wedding. I cried when Charlie talked about giving away his little girl. Girls with their daddy's choke me up. :0) Wish it was a real wedding so I could see the pics. haha
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I've enjoyed every single chapter. (especially the ones where you took over). This had me it tears, but that's good because I was so happy for your characters and touched by the love they still had for one another and their families and friends. Great job! I'm going to going to be sure to read all your stories because I really like your writing. :0)
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373222
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess
Well I've put it off long enough... I can't wait to read this any longer. :0) I some of your other stories and really enjoyed them and have been waiting to read this one till it had more chapters. I keep getting updates for it and finally I can wait no more. lol I really like this first chapter. Poor Isabella, I'd be scared to if I had to marry someone I couldn't even meet till the wedding. Hope he's not at terrible as she's imagining him to be. Reading on.......
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
I really like Esme and Alice. I liked the suggestion of just being themselves without the titles. :0) I'm guessing that Tony is Prince Edward. :0) Really like the story so far. Great job!
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince
I loved this chapter. It was nice seeing Edwards side and I have to say I love Jacob being her brother. :0) I can't wait for them to meet. I'm really loving this story so far. Great job!
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Oh, I'm cryi'n with you Isabella. Still loving her big brother Jacob. :0)
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation
Wow Isabella's father is a real jerk isn't he? I hope they are able to suprise Bella and take Angela with them. Still can't wait to see these guys meet. Great story you've done a great job. I really love the story. :0)
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities
I really enjoyed this look into the day before the wedding with the gals and the guys. Another great chapter. I'm off to read the next one now.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
I loved it! I was so nervous for her at the beginning even though I knew who was in front of the church waiting for her. haha I loved the point where they realized who each other were. Then I loved the kiss the carriage ride and explaining the whole story of how they met to King Charles. Carlisle standing up and protecting Bella was great but sad that Charlies really cares so little about her that he's not at all happy that she's happy in her marriage. I really loved the whole thing. Great job! REALLY!
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss
That would have been so awkward to have to do that with those guys in the room. Although I know that how it was done. These words / thoughts of Edward's - It was more than physical, he knew, but when he looked down into her warm, trusting eyes, it became so very much more than he even realized. The tiny girl below him, taking him with her body and soul was his entire world. She was the sun and the moon and everything in between. In the whole rest of his life, he would never be complete without her by his side. Were just beautiful it put a tear in my eye and then I laughed when he told the old guys he'd shot his royal seed into her. lol This was great. Your Edward seems perfect but then I kind of expected that because you write great Edwards. and Bella's and Alice and Jasper and Jake I could go on and on ..... yeah I could but I really just want to go read the next chapter. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans
So sorry their honeymoon got cut short but, it was fun seeing Bella help the guys come up with a plan even if only Jacob and Edward knew she did it. :0) What will Jake do without her? I'm so happy that Angela and now Emmett get to go to England with her. Great job!
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage
We are so lucky to have so many ways of keeping in touch today than they did back then. It was so sad thinking that Bella may not see her mom and brother for years. It was nice to hear the happy news of Alice and Jasper's hopefully Edward and Bella are able to conceive also since I know that's very important for a royal to have and heir. Going to go read some more.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore
Wonder how big the thing with the french is going to get??? Edward and Bella still get to have their honeymoon. I'm so happy for them. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment
Gotta love a picnic :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen
That went pretty well. I'm nervous about what kind of trouble the jealous ladies will cause. Going to read the next chapter now. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty
Hate to see the 3 guys have to leave but proud of how well Bella handled it. Realizing it's his duty and thinking of all the lives he could save if they could settle the conflict without war. She's shown herself to be wise this time around. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante
I'm so glad Carlisle made her that offer. I was thinking she was going to grow bored and unhappy with life the way it was ther in England. Back in Spain she was secretly envolved in things helping her brother out. I think Edward will be happy to have her with him. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful
Looks like Tanya may stir things up a bit. Going on to the next chapter now. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
Gotta love Alice! :0) I do believe I really like Rose too. Can't wait for Edward to find out whats been going on. He's going to feel terrible because in this case it was his behavior in the past that has caused this to be as bad as it is.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished
Yay Tanya is gone but have we really heard the last of her? She seemed a bit obsessed sometimes people like that just don't stop. Can't wait to see the King and Queens joy at Edward and Bella's announcement. I would have like to have seen what it was like when Bella told Edward. did I miss it somehow??? going to go look.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
Well I don't know how this happened but it looks like I missed a couple chapters. This is great! I was sad that I had ran out of chapters to read but now I find I have a little more. I'm so happy to see Bella sitting in with the council and being of assistance.