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tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay Jasper rescued Bella. I thought / hoped that he would. I really like this chapter. I like seeing how close they are becoming to each other.



Author's Response:

gald that you liked it. Something tells me that J & B are going be inseperable!

T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter! I saw that your a/n said you had fun writing this chapter... well I had fun reading it. :0) I can't wait to see what the deal with the werewolves is. I hope Jasper sticks to his decision and doesn't give in to Maria. How will they ever defeat that vamp that can kill them just by looking at them? Maybe Bella can do it? Jasper's going to be so upset when he learns about Bella being attacked. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked reading it! Thanks so much.

No worries, there's no way Jasper will give into Maria.

Thanks again!

 

t

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter! Of course I always love when Jasper and Bella get to spend some alone time. :0) looking forward to seeing how they get through this battle that may be taking place. Bella's talents are already really cool I can't imagine how she'll be as a vamp.



Author's Response:

Gald that you like the fluff hun.

Thanks for reading.

 

T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Meeting that older couple on the tour was cute. I think they are going to enjoy there little time away from the family :0)



Author's Response:

Yeah, lemons on the way, so I'm sure they'll have some fun!

Thanks for reading.

 

T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yep they had a great time just as I thought they would. ha ha The way the chapter ended with the whole "life was perfect line"  makes me think something's going to happen to put that to the test. 



Author's Response:

We shall see what life has in store for these two in the next chappy. lol

 

Thanks for reading. More sexy times ahead.


T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Them writing their "I Love You's" in that notebook was so sweet! Yes I would definitely play naked scrable with Jasper. :0) Can't wait for the next chapter. What's up with the Volturi???



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think a line is forming to play naked Scrabble with Jazz-man! lol

And you know the Volturi, always showing up at the wrong time.  Stay tuned for more.

 

 

T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

yeah I would have forgiven him too. :0)



Author's Response:

Forgivness is divine after all! lol

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I have to say I love how they are as a family. I was wondering when and how he would finally change her. That was quite a suprise I wasn't expecting it. :0) I think it's good it happened like that. This way she didn't have to be nervous about when or how. Can't wait to read more. Great job!



Author's Response:

Yeah, if I was going to be changed into a vamp, this is so how I would want it to be done!

Thanks for reading.

 

T

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm glad you skipped the whole "burning" part.  I usually end up just skimming it when I see it in fics. It was fun seeing poor Jasper try to learn how to handle the new Bella. I feel bad for Bella too though because I can totally understand her wanting to be perfect. Looking forward to seeing what's up with Jake. :0)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun!

Stay tuned for more about wolf boy!

 

 

t

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wonder what it will be like having Jake living there with them? :0)



Author's Response:

Wolf hair all over the furniture and him howling at the moon at all times of the night! lol

Thanks for reading hun!

 

t

 

 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

"Pass the popcorn, y'all!" ha ha That's pretty cool that there is another pack of wolves in another tribe. I was waiting for Jake to imprint but then I remembered that he's got Jane in this story. :0)



Author's Response:

Yep, Jake's got Jane and I'll let you in on a little secret : Jane does NOT like the girl wolves!

Thanks for reading hun.

 

t

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow you weren't kidding, there was a lot of stuff going on in this one. I think it was funny when Rachel was talking about her boyfriend not being happy about her imprint. ha ha I don't blame Jasper and Bella for wanting to get away for a little while. :0)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun. I've had a wicked case of writers block, but hopefully its gone now. I finished the next chapter and it should be up in the next couple of days!

t

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I really liked this chapter even though the major got mad at Bella for know reason but she handled it. ha ha Alice seems pretty sure that she's going to defeat the Cullen's cant wait to see when she figures out she was wrong. (at least I'm hoping she's wrong. ha ha)



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm glad you liked it.

No worries, Alice is gonna get the surprise of her long life! LOL

 

Thanks for reading.

 

t

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So glad you were able to get past the block and finish this story. That has to feel good to know you don't have to worry about it anymore. I've really enjoyed reading it. I'm a sucker for a Happy Ending. :0) Thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sticking with me on this! I'm glad that you have enjoyed it.

 

t

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow I was just hoping to see them get to dance together at the ball and maybe steal a few kisses. Definitely didn't expect the lemon. (not complaining) That was hot.  I like that he called her "my Bella" at the end. Would Bella call that courting or just talking??? ha ha Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

You said it.... bad Edward bad. I understand that the story hurts but he should have told Bella the whole truth of what happened.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Daddy's giving their little girls away at weddings always brings a tear to my eyes. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Really enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to meet the Cullen's. I feel bad for Alice and Jasper. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Maria saying what she said to Alistar during their fight and then saving Bella changed my feeling for her a bit. I laughed at the whole is he dead can we burry him in the back yard bit. ha ha

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Definitely not a waste of time and energy. It makes me sad that people leave such reviews. I really admire all the writers who are brave enough to put their stuff out there and let us read it. I'm thankful for all the time they spend writing them.

Great chapter. I hope the mothers are able to keep Maria silent. I know Edward and Bella are already engaged but I'm wondering if he won't go ahead and give her a real proposal. I'm really enjoying your story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

OH NO! I'm afraid what Maria is going to do with the info she just aquired.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I love seeing Bella stand up to her cousin :0) Wonder what Edwards family will think of Bella.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Poor Edward. I'm very interested in reading this story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Well now maybe meeting Bella will help keep Edwards mind off of Rose and Emmett. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Bella seems like quite the character. I like how she is with her mom. ha ha

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

and now we have Uley's ball and the visit of Maria and Alistar to look forward to. :0) I like how Edward came up with reasons to talk with M.Swan just so he could see Bella. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wonder how long it'll take till Bella's begging to wear Edwards ring??? :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

loving the story and not bothered by the pace at which things are happening so don't worry. :0) I love how Bella stood up to her cousin and the ex. I also liked how she when she was feeling hurt Edward was there to hold her. I even liked the little moment at the end with Charlie. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Al is a sicko ha ha I want to see Edward or charlie or even Peter beat him with in  a inch of his life. :0) The way Edward and Bella were talking it doesn't sound like it'll be long before they are engaged. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Well that went a lot better than I thought it would. Poor Bella, she just found out she's going to me a mommy and now she'll also have a 5 year old to take care of. Hope Edward feels really bad for keeping this from her. :0) Loving the story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I feel bad that Bella keeps calling her baby "Edward demon spawn". Poor baby. ha ha  I loved the part you put in about Bella sneaking in to sleep with Edward when he was sleeping in the guest room. That was really sweet. But I also loved the part where she dumped hot tea in his lap and said the maid could clean it. very funny! English society isn't going to know what hit them. :0) Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

hmm that was very interesting. Alice really was quite rude. I love that Bella doesn't let what people say or think effect her. I had a crazy thought... what if Jasper cheated on Alice before she even discovered she couldn't have kids. What if he cheated on her with Tanya making Kate his child. ooh that would cause so much drama. But I don't think Jasper would really do that to Alice or Edward. It's your story though so I could be wrong. :0)



Author's Response:

Many people keep guessing that Jasper is the father but Alice and Jasper's pregnancy problems didn't happen until after Tanya was pregnant. Thus while Tanya's affair was going on, Alice and Jasper where happily married to each other. Whether Jasper has been faithful or not has nothing to do with Kate. Jasper is not the father. Neither is Emmett or Carlisle before anyone asks. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I really enjoyed meeting Kate. It'll be fun to see how she starts to fit into the family. Bella seems to be really good with her.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Kate seems very cute. I hope it doesn't make her a "brat" :0) It was fun seeing how she's become a part of the family already.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Great chapter! I'm so happy baby Philip is here and Bella is ok. Poor Edward I can just picture how nervous he was. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Wow I can't believe it's over. Time just seems to fly sometimes. This was a great story and I really enjoyed reading it. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I think I always suspected James only because he usually is the bad guy. ha ha Well now that mystery is solved. :0) I love hearing that Bella is such a hands on mother. I knew she would be. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

You said it. "creepy!" Poor Kate. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. How can they make James dissapear? :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Way to leave us hanging. ha ha  Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Please tell me that James is dead. I do wonder if Carlisle had men searching for Kate I would have thought they'd check for James first off and keep watch there since they know he was involved. Oh well, I'm just glad they found her and they'll be on their way back to France eventually. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Enjoy your time with your sister! I'll be patiently waiting to see what happens next in this story.  I have to say I'm so glad Jasper showed up when he did. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Great chapter! Once again I'm left wishing I could just keep reading.

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

If this was the way women were treated in the time that this story takes place Bella shouldn't have been so surprised by Edwards reaction. :0) This wasn't too bad, I'm sure they'll work it out. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved it!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

The moment with Bella and James brought tears to my eyes and of course I loved the wedding :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

4 more days ... I knew they'd end up having a double wedding :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella's going to kick herself for majorly over reacting. She should have stuck around and talked to Edward.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wonder which of the happy couples will get married first.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

awwww  James and Angela. I'm really glad James is ok.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yay! Happy reunion

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm so glad they got to Bella before anything bad happened to her. Now I'm hoping that James will be ok.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Gotta keep reading..... :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I was hoping that James would meet someone. Hope he get to talk to Angela again some time. I'm worried for Bella. I've got to keep reading so I can find out what happens.... :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I knew Mike wouldn't just go away. Looking forward to the pic nic. Rose and Em seem so cute and of course I always love to see Edward and Bella falling in love. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was fun :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I knew they'd work it out :0) I'm guessing Bella asked Carlisle about missing her period and now she know's she's probably pregnant. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like stories that take place out West. I came across your story and am really looking forward to reading it. :0) I really like the idea of James being Bella's brother, now we don't have to worry about him being "the bad guy" :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

James seems like a great big brother. Really looking forward to seeing what kind of an adeventure they find. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Looking forward to seeing what happens now that they're all at the ranch. :0) The story of Bella riding the horse was funny. haha



Author's Response:

Im glad you are enjoying..thanks for the review

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I have a feeling Miss Bella is going to affect Edward a lot more than he thinks. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella's going to be a big help to Jane. Edward didn't like Mike talking to Bella. :0)  Really enjoying this story so far.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I was laughing right along with Alice. :0) Looking forward to reading more of this story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"Maybe things are starting to look up..."  Well that can go either way now can't ? It  could mean that things are really going to start looking up or poor Edward is going to do something to upset Miss Bella again. :0) Enjoying the story and love the setting.



Author's Response:

Thank you..it looks like its gonna be a roller coaster ride  check out the teaser

Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.

I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.

 

 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

How can Edward think he's let the family down? He takes care of them and it sounds like they have a really nice sized ranch. I mean other than drinking his blues away at night and in this case the day what has he done wrong? I just hate seeing him so down on himself. Looking forward to the time when he realizes he's good enough. :0)



Author's Response:

You will see why in the next chapter...Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved it! Yay Alice going in and giving Edward  a good talking to. :0) Bella saving the kitten was fun and of course I love seeing thing between her and Edward starting to go so well. Thanks for all the updates. I'm really enjoying reading this story. Great job!



Author's Response:

thanks..a lot went on this chapter and there is soo much more in the next one ;)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What's Mike doing??? Isn't Edward his boss? He must not care about keeping his job. :0) It's so nice seeing this more hopeful side of Edward. I guess Emmett has to talk to Rose now....



Author's Response:

Apparently he doesnt care who is boss is...he is an idiot   Cant wait for Rose and EM

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it! I was right, Mike's not too bright. I loved that Edward was Bella's first "real" kiss and that he asked to court her. Gotta love big brother James. It was nice hearing from him again. I'm glad he aproves of Edward. Have a feeling Mike's going to cause some trouble though...

Jasper finally asking to court Alice made me smile. Great job!



Author's Response:

Love all the courting...I am sure Newton wont be to far but you never know.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So nice to meet Esme. I almost wanted to cry when Bella mentioned missing her mama so she could ask her about all these new feelings she's having for Edward. I'm so glad she has Alice and Esme now. :0) Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Author's Response:

:) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm so glad that they got that all straightened out. Now they just have to have the wedding. :0)



Author's Response:

Yes wedding and honeymoon!!!!! Happy New Year

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well I'm happy that Edward and Bella got past that little misunderstaning and are now happily engaged and now it looks like Jasper and Alice may be headed that way as well.  :0)  It was good to see this update. I'm glad you got over the writer's block. :0)



Author's Response:

Thank you...it was rough finding the words, never had that happen but glad its over..working on next chapter.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Everyone will be so suprised they are getting married so soon. I think E/B will be happy for Alice and Jasper. :0)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review..I am sure e/b will be happy too.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I had wondered if they'd do a double wedding :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was so sweet! It brought tears to my eyes when Edward started talking to the baby inside Bella's stomach. I agree with Bella he's going to be a great Daddy



Author's Response:

I love tummy talking daddyward...thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh poor Bella, she's gotta be heart broken. I'm glad Edward woke up and I hope he gets his memory back. I wonder what it'll take for him to remember? 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thank you so so much for not dragging out the memory loss. I was worried Edward would miss out on the pregnancy you know feeling first kicks and all that. Plus Bella just needs him. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I have really enjoyed reading this story. Looking forward to the Epi 

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389633
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

I have stayed up way too late reading but I have to see what happens next :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Great chapter! I wondered how all that was going to go down. Now they know :0) I sure they talk about all this. He needs to know she isn't married.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

They are going to be so suprised when they find out who the other person really is. Especially since Edward already had his moment of wondering if it could be Bella. Great chapter!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Another great chapter. Looking forward to Sir and Pet finally meeting. The thought of sub Emmett still makes me chuckle. That's so fun. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

This was fun. Love their phone calls and texts. Yay Edward is coming home early! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

I love Bella and Seth. To bad Jacob had to show up and ruin their time together. Leah may not be happy now but at least now she knows what type a guy she's envolved with.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Ok I understand why Edward did that with Tanya. But I have a feeling it's going to come back to bite him in the you know what. He was better off ending it and not giving her this false hope that he's just thinking about things. I'll say it again ... she's crazy! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Their talk about "mowing the lawn"  really made me laugh especially when Jasper caught on to what they were talking about. ha ha I'm glad Alice came clean and told Bella about the lifestlyle she and Jasper share. It'll help for Bella to have someone she can talk to. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

I'm afraid to see what problems Tanya is going to cause. She's a bit crazy. I have to say I'm loving Emmett and Rose! ha ha I know they weren't in this chapter a lot but the thought of Rose using that unkown toy on him made me giggle. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I love that they caught Jacob on tape and now she's free to move to Seattle with Alice (where Edward is) :0) Plus she's 10 mil richer. I don't think I would have gone through with the wedding. Just because of the press they'll get. I hope Bella comes out and just talks to Alice about her dreams. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Tanya getting punished kind of made me chuckle. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Wondering what Bella and Alice will blan to get back at Jacob? :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

This is going to be so much fun :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71762
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter! I loved the moment of passion against the wall that was HOT! and I also loved Bella putting Alice in her place. That was so cool! Great job

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Bella showing her gift to Jake made me laugh a bit. That'll teach him to doubt her lol

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I wondered if and when she'd show up. ha ha

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting. Looking forward to seeing what happens at the meeting the next night and finding out what has happened to poor Bella in the years since the Cullen's left.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

still looking forward to hearing Bella tell them her story and seeing whats going on between Peter and Bella.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Peter's got a pretty cool power.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonder what they'd do if they ever hear that Jasper was one of the vamps that left.