Reviews by culleniwish
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533724
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

I did appriciate the little moments of brotherly love that we got to see between Edward and Carlisle. It's nice to know that know matter what they've got each others backs. I'm glad Aro hasn't died yet, but if he's just going to get better and then kill Edward some day I'd rather he died now. ha ha Interesting developement with the Fed working at Jazz's club. Wonder what will come of that. Love this story I always look forward to Wednesdays. Infact I was getting ready to go to bed then I saw this update and of course I just had to stay up and read it. Great job! 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

I read your a/n I can't believe people are reporting you. My question is, why? I don't understand why they'd do something like that. I love this story and I'm always so happy to get these updates. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

Ya know I kind of wondered if Esme was behind Carlisle and Candace getting shot. Now I'm kind of wondering it again. I'm so sad about Aro. I hope he gets better so Edward isn't forced to get rid of him. I do not envy Edward being in the possition he's in at all. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

Wow that was quite the nightmare that Edward had. I loved the little moment that Edward and Carlisle had. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

Wow that was intense! I had kind of wondered where there crazy fights had gone from the first story and now I see they're still there. ha ha I'm glad Edward didn't really kill Aro but it makes me sad to see Aro that way. I feel like Bella and Edward, I miss the way he was. They need his levelheadedness. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

Wow what a way for the fued to end. I did not see that coming. I really liked Bella and Edward pretending to meet as strangers. It made me smile. I'm so happy Bella's back with her babies my heart was hurting for her having to be away from them for so long. I love how Anthony seems to fit right in with them all. Ok I have to say I'm still thinking that Esme had Carlisle's girlfriend killed and maybe even tried to kill Carlisle too. I wasn't bothered by the whole Viagra in the coffee. Bella found a way to get him over his troubles. I just want to say I really am enjoying your story for what it is... A story. Would I agree with some of their actions if they were real people? no. I mean Edwards a murderer I wouldn't like him at all in real life. I probably actually be pretty afraid of him, but in this I actually love their characters and maybe if I read that Bella was sad about the situation she's in it would bother me more but, she's actually happy so I can be happy with her. Good job

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

oooh this is going to be good. Wonder what he'll do if/when he finds that wig. More than that I wonder what Carlisle would want done about it. Looking forward to the next update. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Weather the Storm

Yay they're all back together again. Did I miss something? Carlisle knows Esme was behind the shoothing right? I thought it'd be a bigger deal than it seems to be. Looks like dear Edward is going to be paying for what he did for quite some time. Can't even imagine how he felt to know Bella was afraid of him. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie

Aha that filled in so many gaps. I can't believe Esme was trying to get Aro to take out Edward. She's a lot crazier than I even thought. I'm surprised Edward is taking that so lightly if it was anyone else she'd be dead already. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

had fun reading Aro and Edwards bonding time. It was nice to see them "have fun" (even if it was to shoot someone ha ha). I'm glad Bella was finally able to get Edward to talk to her. Still loving the story. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

I was kind of wondering if Sonny acted like that with all girls or if it is just Aro's daughter. ha ha I could see him having all the girls following him around with stars in  their eyes. I can't believe Aro didn't call and let them know he was bringing the kids back. I feel bad that his date didn't go so well (cause I want him to find someone that makes him happy) but I guess the night wasn't a total bust. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

Bella is a wonderful mother, all the kids in her life whether they are hers or not are lucky to have her. They'd all be lost without her. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

I'm proud of Bella for not talking trash about Edward at lunch with the ladies especially since she knows she can't really trust any of them. Not sure how I feel about the whole bathroom encounter with Esme though. I don't blaim her but I think she could have handled it better. I don't know  why but when Bella threatens people like she did with her gun she comes acrros as a bit crazy instead of just tough. Maybe it's the way I'm reading it. Love the story and still love Bella. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

I liked it. Edward was a bit insane. I like seeing him in charge and dangerous like that. Not too into him going all psyco like that though, but at least he didn't hurt Bella. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

It's always great to spend some time with these guys. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

Wow what a bomb to be dropped. I wonder who her father really is if she even knows. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

Boy your Carlisle is definately one you either love or you hate. ha ha This chapter I'm loving him again. He seems to really have it bad for Alex. I'm kind of hoping he gets the girl. Edward just makes me melt. I love love love him. He and Bella are perfect together.  Looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream

Poor Aro! It's not fair that killing Esme fell on his shoulders. Carlisle should have been made to do it. Wasn't that part of the oath they take? "the family" comes before family. I felt a little better knowing Edward is going with him except for what are Edwards real reasons for leaving? He said that knot in his stomach was gone he's not still feeling like he wants to be away from Bella now right? They fight over the silliest things but I'm glad they made up.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only

Wow so Esme's dead and poor Nanny. Sad that things are so strained between Em and Bella. I hope they are able to fix that. They meant so much to each other once upon a time. He does need to let go of his bad thoughts of Edward though (after all this time). 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One

I loved this! It made me cry a little when Edward had the talks with the boys. It's times like those that I can see that he's a really good daddy. I hope they get to go to the beach and have a great time together, it seems like they all need it.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Fight Club Part Two

An early update, what a great Valentines gift :0) Love your Edward he may not be "perfect" but beneath it all he's got a good heart and you can tell he loves his family. Looking forward to their trip. I hope they get to have a good time. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 48: End of the Day

Wow, I can't believe that it was Bella's new brother that shot Aro. Wonder what he'll do? 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

I feel bad for Bella and think she does need some friends or at least that one best friend to share some things with but I do agree with Edward they do fight over other peoples issues a whole lot. She's gotta start not letting everything get to her you'd think she'd be used to her lifestyle by now and what all that intails. :0) As for the next chapter I'd like to hear from Edward I don't mind seeing him/them let loose and have fun once in a while. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do

ha ha I love Sonny! I know he'd hate hearing this but he really is a "cutie"  I wasn't quite sure I wanted to read a chapter from Sonny but I'm glad I gave it a chance it was a lot of fun to hear from him. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

Awww I loved that mushy stuff at the end. They brought tears to my eyes. Edward did a wonderful job controling his temper, in the past he would have pounded Carlisle for saying what he was saying about Edward being jealous. Edward does have quite a short fuse and it used to not take much to set him off. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

YIKES! They're at it again. Wondering how they can work this one out and make things better. They don't seem to ever learn they're always having the same fights. Wonder how he'd handle it if something happened to Bella, yeah, he can't stand to look at her or be around her now I bet that'd change. On a different note.. I knew her new step brother had to be involved. Feeling kind of stressed after this one, I don't know if I can wait a whole week to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

I'm witout words. I'm glad Bella didn't actually kill him. I know it doesn't make much difference since he still died, but it made me happy when Bella said that wasn't who she was. I think it's good that Bella is leaving. Edward really needs to cool down. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Phew finally a chapter I feel like I can breath after. ha ha I'm so happy to see that things may be getting back on track with Edward and Bella. They truly are better as a team. I'm actually feeling bad for Carlisle. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Just when I start feeling bad for Carlise he goes and becomes the jerk again. ha ha Run Alex Run! So sad to see this story ending I'm going to miss your Edward and Bella and the kids so so much

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

 my heart just melts every time he says "More than there are stars in the sky" 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

The phone calls with Bella and then with Alex were funny. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

Nope.... it never gets old reading about them. I love your Edward and Bella and will miss them so much when this story ends.

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806749
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Wow! I'm so glad that Edward and Bella know what happened to Dame. I really want to see Lauren get what's coming to her, but if Bella shoots her now there wouldn't be a way to hide it would there? She made it known that she was there and angry. I hope Sonny and Maggie find Dame before he does anything crazy. Wonder if Amelia is really pregnant. I hope she's able to mend things with Dame. Bella handled that all wrong. ha ha 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Are you tired of hearing how much I love these guys? Seriously! On one hand Edward's cold, ruthless able to kill Heidi without a second thought and then when he's home and seeing Bella describing her as his happy place, he makes my heart melt. By the end of the chapter it kind of sounds like he's ready for change. Will he hand things over to Sonny? Is Sonny ready for that? Love getting these updates. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

Poor Sonny. He was so excited to be a dad. I guess one good thing is that he won't be tied to Katie in any way now. The kid would have kept them in each others lives and now he can let her go completely. on a different note.... Dame, Dame, Dame... what can I say. I wish he'd get his head on straight. I want to be able to like him again. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

Awww looks like I'm back to poor Dame. Hope Amelia isn't pregnant. I usually love when a baby comes along but the poor guy really needs a break. Sadly I'm not liking Ameila again, she needs to back off. Seriously if she's so knowlegeable she should realize he needs time he's not going to be instantly better. My heart is feeling heavy for Dame. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

I loved this! Edward and Bella were so cute in this. She got him to apologize to their daughter. I also loved that he and Dame had a moment. I do hope Dame is able to find peace with himself whether that's being a doctor or being in "the thing" I have to say the thought of Sonny or Dame taking out Edward just breaks my heart the same as if Edward ever had to kill one of his sons. I don't beg often but please please dont let this story go there. ha ha 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

i was hoping that the baby was sonny's. wow, what an emotional blow up that was. i hope they are able to work it out. their fighting reminded me so much of edward a.d bella.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Change of Pace

what could go wrong? hopefuly nothing. so far i'm liking amelia. poor Dame had me wrried there for a bit. it seemed he was lising his mind. i hope he finds the love/happiness he's looking for. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, can you tell? 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

wow that was hot! dame has definately grown up. iloved how he handled the whole joe situation and amelia just seems perfect for him. i really like them together. hey it's possible to fall in love in  one night. i loved this chapter! 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Old Habits, New Days

still love'n it. i just cant get enough of these guys. sonny and katie have me worried or maybe its katie,how happy will sonny be uf he cant be himself. i think its wise for them not to get married. whats with kylie? She just seems so sad. Bella and Edward are really going to miss her when she's gone i've had to read and review the last few chapters on my phone. i apologize if my reviews haven't made sence.it's not always easy typing on here plus it was late and my eyes were going.crazy but i just had to keep reading to get caught up on the story. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

Soooo glad Kylie isn't pregnant I was wondering why she was so emotional in the last chapter and that had crossed my mind but I'm so relieved she's not. It was so fun reading about her and Dame ha ha they made me laugh when they were freaking Vito out. I guess I should feel bad for Julie but I don't. If Damion never really was in love with her it's really for the best they end things. Maybe now she won't keep calling him. Is he going to have another stocker? he's already got one in Maggie. Fun chapter!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

poor sonny. when we found out the baby was his i was happy he might get katie back. now i'm not so happy, she just makes him miserable. if thats how its going to be then i'm glad they're splitting. Hope he finds happiness somewhere though maybe layla? i'm just reminded of how edward hired bella in the first story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

Dame makes me worry when things go crazy like that. Why would Amelia play with his emotions that way? They've revealed that they love each other so that's good. Thought that was pretty sweet when Dame went to his mama at the end. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Reality

Sadly I must admit that Kylie is a spoiled brat. ha ha  I think Bella has the right idea, maybe in this circustance she shouldn't have just ripped everything away. I think it'll all work out though. It's a good idea for Kylie to learn to take care of herself. They should expect her to work, help out around the house. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

I'm surprised Bella is playing along. I mean, she loves Amelia if Dame is distracted by who Maggie is with then that'll hurt Amelia and mess with their relationship. Hope Dame just doesn't care about Maggie wouldn't that be funny to have it blow up in their faces? ha ha either way looking forward to reading it. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

Wow, Maggie and Sonny on the roof actually through this whole chapter.... there are no words.... At first I didn't really like Maggie, I thought she was some phyco stalker, but since she has become friends with Kylie I'm starting to like her. I like her honesty. I'm hoping that when Bella told Sonny to "go for it" she meant it because whatever they might have together they'll have a better chance with Bella's support. All this relationship drama is making me nervous. One thing I've always loved about the family you created is that they all love each other no matter what. Guess I'm afraid something's going to mess with that.Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :0) 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

I feel for Edward, I was scared too. I don't blame Bella for wanting to strangle Lauren though. Wonder what Lauren will do next? Does she really think having a restraining order will save her? So glad Bella got out of jail and loved their time together back home. When Edward mentioned her always being his mooshmonster it brought tears to my eyes. I've been re-reading A Quiet Storm and it was sweet to see him remember those times. :0) 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

Great chapter! It was so good to see the boys getting along again. Yay Lauren is gone! Katie won't come crawling back to Sonny now that she doesn't have her mom whispering lies in her ear now will she? Tough luck if she does, he's married now. I really do hope they all stay on this path to healing their relationships. They've had me stressed out for a while poor Dame sure was a mess. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

Well it started out with Kylie being a little bratty with her opinion of Bella but by the end I think or hope seeing Bella stay calm and how she handles this situation might make her respect her mom a little more. 

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95391
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I liked this. I'm glad we got to see a little more of them getting to know each other and for us to see why she's falling for Edward. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What a releif! That had the potential to be a very bad situation but I think it went very well. I'm glad Jake did the right thing. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I couldn't ever imagine going to my friend and telling her about a job like this. ha ha But then I've never been in their situation. I can see where Bella would be desperate enought to do just about anything though. Have a feeling she's really going to love this job. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was pretty hot. When she thought to herself " I remember it lasting longer" it made me laugh. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok Liam is going to have Edward wrapped around his little fingers. He's already won my heart and we're only 3 chapters in. ha ha I can see Edward buying Bella a bed since it looks like he may just be stopping by any time to mess up the sheets. A twin size bed or air mattress just won't do. Thanks so much for the daily updates.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonder how this will work out. He really oversteped his boundaries here. I think I know why he doesn't want her to work, but he went about it all wrong by getting her fired. All that stuff aside he's so sweet with Liam. That makes me smile. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

No emotions, yeah right. ha ha 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow that's quite the family. I like big faimiles my husband is one of 8 so it's always fun when we can all get together. I'm feeling nervous for Bella. I'm afraid that Nessies's new guy friend is going to be Jake. Hold on tight Edward I think your in for quite a ride. :0) Still love love love Liam 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow thanks so much for the second update. Yep I had a feeling the boyfriend would be Jake. At least he seems to still be a jerk so there shouldn't be any attempts by him to get back with Bella. I'm so happy that Edward wants to try to be together with Bella I know people in real life that have a bigger age gap than your Edward and Bella and they are happily married even after 20 something years. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hmmm wonder what Edwards story is... why didn't Esme just let Jesica keep talking? ha ha I guess I'll just have to wait for him to tell Bella himself. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay 2 in a day (again) your spoiling us. I'm totally ok with a "feel good" story sometimes it's refreshing to not have to fear the heartfail :0) 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Edward. Glad he's found Bella and Liam 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

loved the sweetness

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

yay another update :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Best friends since she was ten and he was twelve.  She had a hard home life, his family love and accepted her as their own.  She accepted him and his family for who they were, mafia royalty.  As they grow up, she becomes a dancer, and he gets groomed to take over for his father.  Follow Edward and Bella as they fall in love and take on the world together.  Violence and Lemony goodness.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177484 Read Count: 221218
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow pretty exciting first chapter. Looking forward to reading more. I love that they've been best friends for so long and that he looked out for her even then. Gong to read the next chapter now. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awww he loves her. I love to see tough guys being tender and loving to those they love. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a great family they seem to be. I'm enjoying these glimpses of how they came to care for each other. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love love love he kissed her. I'm so glad she's not pushing him away with all that usual  "I'm not worthy of you"  nonsense It's nice to see them recognize what they have. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They make me smile 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I had wondered how Carlisle and Esme would find out. ha ha  Really enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks for the updates! Hope you feel better soon. Good bye James, I knew it wasn't going to be pretty. It made me giggle a little when Edward asked James if he knew who his father was and then called for Carlisle to come out and introduce himself. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm loving your Edward and Bella. sure they're hot together but I love the way they talk to each other. So glad to see that they are still best friends plus a little more.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it! Oh to have a boyfriend like Edward. :0) I don't want to be critical and I almost didnt say anything but in this chapter and several of the last chapters the word seen is used in the wrong tense. At first I thought maybe it was just an oversight but your beta hasn't caught it either. Normally I wouldn't say anything but I really like this story and sometimes stuff like that causes readers to stop reading. (Not me I usually just correct it in my head and keep reading). In case you don't know what I'm talking about an example in this chapter is....."I seen her blush and hide her head."  It should say "I saw her blush and hide her head."  Again I don't want to seem critical. I think you are doing a wonderful job. I just didn't want you to maybe find out later and wonder why no one told you. I will definately keep reading, in fact I'm going to read the next chapter now. I let a few chapters pile up, I love being able to just click next so I can keep reading. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ha ha so we know when Esme speaks in Italian she means business. That made me chuckle. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

ooooh what's going to happen in the office *wags eyebrows* ha ha What a nice surprise for Edward.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

fun times in the office

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

awww I was crying right along with Esme. What a beautiful tribute 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yes I did shed a few tears. So sweet. I'm a sucker for father / daughter moments and that sure was a good one. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good morning indeed!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Are his feelings for Bella making him soft? Nah it really shouldn't, he's loved her for a while, now he just know she loves him back.... enjoying this story

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Tlhe whole upgraded prom dress thing was a neat idea 

You Will Be Mine by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mine

 

Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

The Volturi doesn't give second chances. They also don't take no for an answer. OOC, AU. All normal disclaimers apply.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55858 Read Count: 55663
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just came across your story. Very interesting, I don't think I've ever read one like this. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Alice knew this was going to happen? Looking forward to seeing what happens next

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wake up call... things are waaay different than they were with the Cullens.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113997
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

Saw this story rec'd on Fic Sisters. Started reading and just couldn't stop, till now of course because I ran out of chapters. Loving the story! My heart was breaking for poor little Charlie, made me wish I could nurse him. How can Tanya be so heartless. She clearly doesn't want to be a mom. Edward seems like such a good daddy. I love seeing how much he loves his son. Looking forward to reading more. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you started reading it. Sorry you're out of chapters. I will put one out today!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

What craziness! Glad Alice played it cool. I'm really looking forward to Edward meeting Bella's little girl.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

So happy when I see these updates

SoCal by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SoCal

Being with them wasn't the problem, but losing me was. A life filled with sandy beaches and sunshine, I felt safe here. Nothing bad ever happens in SoCal, except maybe bad Mexican food. Or so I thought. This isn't your everyday love story. Based on the movie Savages.

 

For Annie, an Edward, Bella, Jasper- polyfic    

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218114 Read Count: 43827
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2015 Updated: 11 Feb 2022
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

And  a great day was had by everyone. Now we get to see Edward and Bean try to get to know each other while J is away. He's a little rough around the edges, but I like how she pushes back. I think he does too.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yep still just as good the second time through. I did catch something that I'm not sure I noticed the first time. When J mentions E talking about B and the smell of her perfume.  How I'd love to hear the conversations between those two because that's a side of E we really haven't gotten to see much of yet. Love this story you're doing an awesome job! 



Author's Response:

+No Holds Barred+

I've been sitting in this parking lot for nearly an hour. It's about half of a mile away from Bean's apartment. My teeth grind. I need to stop calling her that. She played it off as a nickname, but to Jasper it means something. He's serious about her. That's the only reason I agreed to stick around and babysit her while he's off doing his shit in Berkeley.

I tried to convince him she would be a complication. We've tried this before. It never worked. There's too many cooks, and some of these Laguna bitches were out of their damn mind. That's why when he told me about his Bean, I wanted to distance myself from it. If he wanted the girl, good luck to him, but I wasn't going to have anything to do with it. He'll only find himself bored, fucked over by her when she bolts, or in jail.

Isabella is Charlie Swan's little girl. He's not a guy you wanted to mess with. I know he's changed a bit since he's dealt with me in Juvie and far more docile, but a father is a father, no matter how stoned or lost he may be. Jasper's poking around and fucking with the Chief's seventeen year old daughter. I'm not a man of many morals, but there's lines you don't cross.

"Just hang out with her while I'm gone," Jasper had said. He made it sound like a duty to keep her safe. He'd mentioned her hanging out with Alice Branden and running in her circles. I fucking hated this town because of that family. "And keep her out of trouble."

I didn't know it at the time, but he was setting me up. He knew. The girl's different. She's underage, but has already grown into a woman. She's taller than most girls here, and had long, elegant legs. Jasper told me she used to be a ballerina, but now she surfed. I could see it by her muscle tone. That's what attracted me to her that night at the party. I didn't even know who she was when I'd stumbled across her passed out in the Whitlock library. Some fucking douche was putting his hands all over her. What kind of piece of shit does that to a girl who's unconscious? He's fucking lucky I didn't kill him. My knife was out and I would've slit his damn throat from ear to ear, but she'd hummed in her sleep. I resorted to busting him in his jaw and throwing his ass out of the room.

I couldn't leave her alone after that. She needed to be protected. I felt responsible for her then.

When I found out she was Jasper's Bean, I couldn't believe how I'd missed it. She's exactly how he described her: beautiful, quirky, and sincere. That's what I noticed most when looking into her eyes. No judgment. Especially with my scars. Which was fucking nice. I'd spent most of my life failing to meet people's expectations, but what's worse than their disappointment was their pity.

Yeah, I've seen some shit, and still wake up in a cold sweat, not knowing where I am, but terrified. The paranoia is what gets me. I can't look at people and not think they want to kill me. Then there's that urge to act out on the aggression, or it festers and festers, until you want to fucking blow your own brains out. Anything to stop the racing thoughts.

It's a life you can't escape.

War takes everything you are and destroys it. You're nothing more than fragments of shrapnel.

Jasper's Bean numbs that. I don't have to pretend I'm not fucked up or even happy. When I kissed her that night, I lost control, but it was like she was that bullet. Everything went away. The pain and anger and hate...God, the hate I feel...all of it vanished, like being killed. A peaceful silence. The only thing I did feel was her soft, unbelievably soft, lips and sweet taste of her tongue.

It was a bliss only Jasper had given me, but even he didn't know how to pull me back.

I think we both knew that night.

Bean was a risk I didn't think we could take. There were complications with her father being retired DEA, and a frequent customer, but she was young. I didn't believe she understood what she would be getting herself into. Jasper tried to tell me that night after the beach how mature she was or how she got it.

What girl in their right mind would want to be shared?

"Just hang out with her while I'm gone."

I did.

Taking my phone out of my pocket, I stare at the screen. "Jesus," I mutter, and dial up Jasper. It rings and rings. "What the fuck am I doing?"

"Hey, bro," Jasper answers and yawns. "How's Bean?"

Daily conversations are done in this order. He pries, and then asks how she looks. My answer: Okay. But she's stunning. Luckily, I've been able to keep my distance for weeks now because it's felt more like a mission or a job. It kept me from crossing lines by kissing her. My mind has been racing every day since that night. No peace or silence. Constant nightmares. If I could just fuck the war out of me.

Maybe if I was allowed to be that intimate with Bean, no holds barred...

"She's good, man," I say, and he's about to ask how she looks, but I interrupt him before he has the chance. "Do you know that perfume she wears?"

"I don't know what brand it is or anything," he replies, and I hear his confusion, because we've had this discussion for the past week.

"Yeah, well, it's in my car a lot. I can't get it out. It's imbedded its way down into my damn upholstery," I say, and I breathe in deep, getting a fresh wave of it. She's everywhere, and escaping this girl is impossible. "I like that perfume. Not heavy or anything. It's floral or..." I rub my forehead and force my brain to produce the right word, "...or, shit. No, it's not shit. I don't know what the fuck I'm saying."

"Edward," Jasper says slowly.

"Yeah?"

"She got to you, didn't she?"

"She won't go for it, man."

"I told you what she said," Jasper says.

The night Jasper left, we dropped Bean off at her house and he walked her to the door. He wanted more with her, but knew the risk involved. We'd agreed to cut ties with her that night. That was the plan. It was a good plan. He didn't stick with it. When he came back to the truck, he looked like someone fucking hit him. I knew it wasn't good. Either he punked out, or she decked him. Bean's a feisty girl, Charlie through and through, and wouldn't put it past her.

Then he fucking sidelined me. "She wants to be with us."

After that, there was no discussing it with him. She was part of the plan. I just needed to get on board. And I fought hard against that shit. I wasn't going to get caught up in with a female. Not while Jasper and I were doing our business.

We've tried this bullshit in the past and failed.

But I agreed to babysit her, and that's how I saw it, until today. When I saw the scar on her chest, I knew she was broken in a way that made her perfect. She was strong. There's a part of myself in her eyes. The sincere browns. I'm an asshole to her, but she looked past that wall and saw the Edward that only Jasper knew.

Then there was that fucking perfume. When she hugged me goodbye in the rain, it amplified her scent and I couldn't keep fighting.

"If she's willing," I shake my head, fucking floored that I'm actually considering this shit, "then I'm willing to give it a try."

"I'll talk to her."

"When?"

"Christmas," he says with an exhale. "I got exams coming up and..."

"Yeah, fine, man, let's do Christmas then."

I'm irritated with him. The motherfucker's getting high and delaying shit. After all his nagging about getting to know the girl. I'll be lucky to survive the next week without trying to kiss her again. And if that happens, I can't promise him first dibs.

You snooze, you lose, bro.

"This will be a good thing, I know it," Jasper says as parting words. "She's the one, man."

I don't even answer him before hanging up, because I fucking hate it when he's right.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think some good progress was made with Edward during their weeks together.  I'm with Rose, I don't know how Bean was able to hold herself back from kissing him in the truck.  Ha ha  The scene at the end with J at her window and what follows is one I wish I could watch in a movie.  I would definitely replay it over and over. I love it!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I flew through this without reviewing every chapter the first time I read it. I LOVE these 3 and I'm hooked on this story so now I'm re-reading and going to try to leave reviews like I should have done the first time.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Stoner Charlie lol I don't think I paid a whole lot of attention to him the first time through. Him telling Bella not to tell her mother what he was doing made me chuckle. Usually in the  fics I've read it's Renee being the flighty one.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

and I still love how they meet...

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like stoner Charlie better when he's more carefree. ha ha Guess it is nice to see that he does care for her though. Not gonna lie her klepto tendency does worry me a bit, but that's just me. I always worry when I think someone might get in trouble.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh how I'd like to have Jasper teach me how to surf. I'd totaly be distracted by him too.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

and here I sing Kiss the girl (from the little mermaid) ha ha I'm with bean I really wanted it to happen, but it just didn't.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay she's met Edward. Wonder what Jasper has said about her. He must have told Edward something for him to know that she's his Bean.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ooh I want to play spin the bottle too

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aww When you think E might not care too much he does little things that mean so much like having Bean put on the coffee cup. I love his little sweet moments. I would have found it hard to leave the boys to walk into that school too. Yay road trip!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

aww man, things were just about to get real interesting at that rest stop. ha ha I liked where Edward caught B loading up to steal that stuff and then gave her the stolen gummy's, again I say it's about the little things with E because it's not a side of his personality that he shows real often. It shows me he's got genuine feelings for her he's not just going along because J wants to.