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Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
AAAWWWWWWWWWW OMGGGGGG they're the perfect couple LIKE the way you wrote them is amazing and perfect and balkdafajkfn OMG <3
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you :) They do seem to complement one another perfectly!
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long
This theory makes me really happy :D
Author's Response:
I"m glad it does :) Thank you so much!
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields
HHAAHHAHAHA hilariious
Author's Response:
Thank you :) Had a blast with it, as always!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout
something's wrong with edward.. i can feel it :O
Author's Response:
Haha sure is, it's called WOUNDED PRIDE :) You know men! Bella will set him straight ;)
Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor. But in this story, things are not always what they seem. Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot. Canon and non-canon couples. Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc. Various POVs.
(Banner above by the amazing Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com)
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Categories: King Arthur/Merlin, Twilight, Crossover, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC, King Arthur/Guinevere, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance, Love and Faith, Supernatural
Series: Finished, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155108 Read Count: 21896
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
omgggg okay good, things are not always what they seem. so basically edward isn't dead. THANKS LOOOOL UPDATE NOW!!
Author's Response:
Oh no, Edward's dead...kind of. You'll find out. Here is your preview:
I sighed and felt Riley smooth my hair. Okay, so maybe I was a hypocrite. The final night that Edward was alive, we made love. And it was the best night of my life. He was so sweet and gentle, so caring. I felt like we really were sharing something sacred together, just the two of us. It strengthened our bond and solidified that we were soulmates. I believed that nothing on Earth would separate us.
I was wrong.
But still, nothing will ever top being with Edward that night. Even after the mourning is done, even after I’ve moved on and married someone else, I will always remember. Edward was my first love.
My ONLY love.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
SORRY BUT JASPERS A CREEEEP! Douche, switching swords. Tehe, but loving this!
Author's Response:
Actually, he didn't. We find out it was Mordred. Anyways, thanks for reading and here is your preview:
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Jasper stroked my hair. “I love this,” he breathed. “I love being with you. I love being like this. I wish it didn’t have to end.”
“Who says it has to?”
I felt his hands on my torso and he pulled me away gently. He looked into my eyes. “Everything ends, Rose. At some point, so will this. I have no plans to leave you alone, but sometimes death has other plans.”
Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast? AH/AU OOC
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Face Off
I really enjoy reading this story. Lol, it makes me laugh ;D I love Edroar! He clearly likes Bella in some way.. Can't wait till they unite together! Tehe, in numerous ways... :')
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
OMG ADORABLEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMGGGG
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Pardon my french but... I LOVE THIS FUCCCCKINGGG THEORYYYYY <3 HOLY SHIT. I AM IN LOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Author's Response:
LMAO!
Thank you =)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
This story is beautiful in everyway possible. Whenever my friends ask me about what theories I've been reading lately, or what's my favourite. My immediate response is LIVING AMONGST VAMPIRES- IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE. They ask me every week to see if I'll change my mind, I never do. Why? Because this theory is amazing, amazing writing, amazing plot, and tehe..WAAAAAAY BETTER THEN STEPHENIE MEYER ;D I hope that you come out with an actual book one day that will be published. I'll buy it right away and read it ;D Amazing, truly amazing. xox
ps. Edward's character in this theory is by far the best throughout Writer's Coffee Shop. Fuckingg love him :'D
Author's Response:
Wow! You just totally made my day! Thank you so much =)
I'm happy that you like this story. I truly didn't believe anyone would even be interested in reading this when I first started writing it. I do it for fun during my free time when I'm not pulling out my hair studying for my classes. lol Thank you. I would love to write a book one day. I do have an idea in mind that revolves around this theory.
Thanks for taking the time to review. And for the awesome compliments. =) I'm still speechless. lol
I do have a tiny snippet from the party scene. I'm working on the chapter now, just editing so I should be able to post the crazy long chapter tonight or tomorrow morning. Anyways, I hope you'll like. I apologize for any mistakes. It hasn't been beta-ed.
xo
~Jells
Bella's POV ch 12 Ben's party scene
He nodded, shifting his gaze to Edward who was staring at me in astonishment. Edward broke his gaze and cleared his throat, ordering his drink, “I’ll have a BloodShot with Tequila and type O positive blood.” Edward turned his attention back to me, smirking. “Alcohol, Bella?”
I shrugged. “What? There’s a first time for everything, right?”
He chuckled, leaning down and whispering in my ear, “I’ve never seen a drunken Bella before.”
“You might get lucky tonight,” I giggled, taking a sip from the light green liquid. I moaned, savoring the sweet and sour flavor. The alcohol stung a little as it went down my esophagus, but I welcomed the feel.
“I’m sure that could be fun,” Edward purred, licking my cheek. “And interesting.”
Edward grabbed his BloodShot, tilting his head back and downed the thick red liquid in one swig. He set the shot glass down on the bar with an audible clank, watching me swish around a little chunk of a green apple in my martini glass.
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
First of all, thank you for the long chapter! :D This truly made my day! Even though I am truly worried for Bella, LOL NOJK, I know that you won't let anything happen to her :) Right? Yes! Hahaha, amazing chapter as usual. Really can't wait for the next one, :D
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much!=) Your comment made my day!
No worries, Bella will be...alright. lol Edward felt her pain and fear, he's on his way. I don't think Mike will get too far. But Bella's lost quite a bit of blood, and that won't be good because there's another donation coming up soon. I don't know if the vamp gov't will be merciful and let Bella skip it even though she's on the medication that increases her red blood cell count. So we'll see. lol
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate it =)
~Jells
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
wtttfff OMGGGGGG WHATS WRONG WITH EDWARD!!!!!!!! OMGGG PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IM GONNA BURST INTO TEARS SERIOUSLY OMG
Author's Response:
Hiiiiiiiiiiii!!! *waves*
No worries, as soon as I get back the chapter this week, I'll post it the same day. =)
XxOo
Jells
Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I don't care if Edward and Bella get together at the end during this story because the characters are different in each story. For this story, I'm glad they didn't! Edward has some serious problems, and if Bella would be able to forgive him she would also have some serious problems. LOL, I love your writing and I think you're amazing at it. I stuck with you till the beginning and I will stick with you till the end! Please, don't let stupid people ruin such an amazing story! xo
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.
Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.
L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie
Tkegl...Thank you!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull
I love Living Amongst Vampires, AND I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH. This darker version is hawwwwt. YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND, I'm obsessed with these theories. Like, I literally read them over and over. I re-read this one about 10 times.. and Living Amongst Vampires around.. 20 times? Aahhahah soo fuuuckin good, pardon my french C: UPDATE SOON! xo
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much your comments make my day! Srsly! Thank you so much! I'm happy that you like this story as well.
I'll post more soon. =)
Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it!
xo
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit
LAWWWL, LOVE IT!
Omg, this is really dark. I thought Edward was still going to be like... sensitive deep down with a conscious. I was wrong. LOL! Love it! Update soon! :D
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much =)
Yeah, Edward is one dark mofo. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
When Bella and Edward hook up at a party their lives quickly become complicated, causing a rift in their close knit circle of friends. Despite the fallout, they can’t stay away from each other. Neither of them are able to admit the depths of their feelings for the other and when Edward has to leave for Italy and Bella realizes she’s attracted to her friend Claire, their already shaky relationship is in danger of falling apart.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297314 Read Count: 33531
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Song For A Winter's Night
Truly endearing, can't get enough of this story.
Author's Response:
Oh thank you so much! I am really glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate the review.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Flames
I listened to the song as I read it, and it just made the chapter that more amazing. When I listened to the lyrics and read what you wrote, I could almost feel how much deeply in love they are. :') Beautiful. Most touching, intense chapter i've ever read.
Author's Response:
Oh thank you so much. I am really glad you listened to the song and that it affected you the way I hoped. It means so much to hear that, thank you for the review!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - I Don't Have Anything
Awwwwww, this has to be the most geniune and sweetest chapter I have ever read. I could feel their love for each other through the words you typed up. Omg, amazing. I wish I could write just as intensely as you. You capture the characters perfectly. :O Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, you're so sweet! I am really glad you enjoyed it so much. I always appreciate the reviews!
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - I Never Thought I'd Break
I loved their talk! (Charlie & Bella) It was adorable and so amazing for Bella to take comfort in her father, for her to realize that she has amazing family/friends that do love her and believe in her! Teheheheh. And, I think that she's starting to realize all the mistakes she's made with Edward. I'm not sure if she's READY, cause I feel she still has a lot more to think about and mature- I have no idea how else to say it LOL-... But it's coming close :D AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR REUNION! OMGG I'm actually shivering thinking about it.. XOXO
Author's Response:
I really loved writing Charlie and Bella's talk. It was definitely what finally got her to the point where she needs to be. I don't mean that she isn't going to make any mistakes regarding Edward, or how to communicate, but she's ready to finally open up to him about what she's struggling with. And that's the huge step she had to take.
I am so glad you're excited about their reunion. I think you'll really enjoy it! Thanks for the review!
Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.
Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.
A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89167
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
oh lalaaaLALALALALALALaa ;) i just got a chance to read this chapter and the next one now! Didn't read 49, but I'm excited!!! :) I love this Edward+Bella, they're so sweet and genuine! And obvs, got to love dem sexual stufff rawrawrawr woof (no, nvm no woof. that reminds me of jacob. no. ew.) TEEHEHEHHEHEHE LOVE IT BOUT TO READDDDD 49 KK READY WOOT
Author's Response:
Hi DARK!
I'm soooooooooo far behind in replies!!!!!!! But it's summer! YIPEE!!!!!!!!!! Okay...so thanks for a ll the reviews. This reply is for chapter 48...glad you like the sweet and sexy and I did try to mamke them and their experiences logical and natural and believable. No woofing, please...we don't want to be thinking of Jake, now, do we?
Thanks for the review....More updates soon.
-bannerday
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World
OOOHHHHHHHHH OHHHH SHIZZZLEEEE OHHHHH DAMNNNNN OMGGG UPDATEEEEE OKAYYYYY LOVING THIS SO SWEEET I WANT AN EDWARD LIKE THAT OMGG!! KK LOOOVE IT! <3 TEHE
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
So you liked Dateward, didja? I want that first date! I don't even really remember my first date. Sad...must not have measured up to this first date for the two of them.
Thanks for the LLLOOOOVVVEEEEE! :)
-bannerday
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Rocking His World
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEKKKKK AMAMAMAMZIZIGIGNNGNGNGIGN
Btw! I did get it :D THANKS!! TEHE
I'm gonna try and do the story and hopefully stick to it. I've been trying for a long time, it's hard for me to keep my inspiration and motivation. And..to actually come up with a unique idea :P BUT THANKS SO MUCH!! xoxoxo love this chapter as alwayyyys
Author's Response:
Hi DDDDDAAARRRRKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Glad you liked chapter 32--I'm behind on my review replies, which seems to happen often.
Good luck with your story. It's a fun escape. Sometimes things flow and sometimes you're at a standstill, but I've really enjoyed trying to write.
Thanks for all your reviews---they are one of the things that help you through your standstills. :)
-bannerday
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: The Transfer
omggggg HIIIII IM SO SORRRY I DIDNT REVIEW THE LAST COUPLE CHAPTERS, I just read all of them now! I was on a trip and had no internet! Horrrible, I KNOW! Anyways, OMGGGGGGOMGGGOMGGGGG LOVE IT. LOOOVEE. They're the cutest couple ever! gadfasfadf I love this Edward, freaking adorable. And by the way, my story is coming along slowly. LOL, it's hard to get inspired when you see all these other amazing theories and i'm thinking to myself.. 'How am I suppose to live up to that?' Example, your theory. AMAZING!!!!
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Good Times Then and Now
yellow-coldplay??
OMGGGG SORRY I HAVENT REVIEWED IN SOOOOO LONGGGGG LIKE IM ACTUALLY SOORRRRRYYYYYY *TEAR TEAR*
i've honestly been too lazy, LOOOL THAT SOUNSD SO MEANS BUT IM SORRY LIKE IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND IF YOU WANT ILL REVIEW EACH CHAPTER I DIDNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Darrrrrrrrrrrkkkkk!
I've missed youuuuuuuuuuuu. Nope, not Yellow...but thank you for playing our Name That Tune game. I'll send you a consolation prize...maybe a man-child in a kilt. Just don't peek underneath...Alice gets really pissed/
How dare you withhold your reviews from me! *stands with hands on hips* Maybe I'll withhold my updates, little missy and we'll see how that goes! Ohhhhhh how quickly the tables turn. :)
Let me know what you think when you have the time/desire/energy. :) I'll be here!
Thanks for the review. And thanks for the Storylove!
-bannerday
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Inquiring Minds Want to Know
hahahah.hahahahHAHAHAHAH. Tehehe! Omg love it!
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk LOOOOVE LOOOOVE AS ALWAYS
Not sure if you got my last review cause you switched the chapters, sorry i didnt review lately! My story is...coming. LOL, I love this! This inspires me to write and make something that one day I'll hopefully be proud of..
tehehehhe amazing!
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
Thaaaaaannnnnks for the LOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!!!!!!
I did get your last review. I even read it. And then when I had the big chapter fauxpas and deleted and reposted I lost the reviews that had gone with that chapter. :(
Glad to hear you're making progress with your fic. Glad I'm inspiring you. That's pretty cool.
Thanks for the review and the love!
bannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnerday
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Your Place Or Mine?
omg amazing <3
Author's Response:
Hi DarkwardLover!
I'm so glad you like. Thank you for the review and the Storylove. Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stepping Off the High Dive
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Author's Response:
Oh Darkward...you're such a pile of goo after reading chapter 17. :)
Your review made me laugh. Thank you.
-bannerday
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End
Omg, i'm anticipating their kiss. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKK
Author's Response:
Hi DarkwardLover!
I love your succinct reviews with their shouty capitals expressing your emotions. :) You're anticipating their first kiss, Edward is anticipating their first kiss, Bella doesn't want to admit it but she is anticipating their first kiss. It has to happen soon, right? But first we've got to move Bella out of the past and into her future. :)
Thanks for the review. Yours always make me giggle.
-bannerday
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
OOOMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! TEEHEEHHEHEHEHEHEHE SO CUTE
Author's Response:
HHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIII DarkwardLover!
As usual LLLLLLLOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEDDDDD your review! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! :D
-bannerday
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Movie Fades to Black
Screw Jake. NO OFFENSE. BUT OMGGGGGG THE PLAYFUL FIGHT WITH EDWARD AND BELLA!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE. Yet again, screw Jake! :)
Author's Response:
Oh DarkwardLover....Quit beating around the bush and tell me how you REEEEEAAALLLLYYYY feel about Jerkob. I mean Jerk. Oops...I mean Jake. ;) Personally, I'd rather screw Edward than Jake...oh...I see what you're saying. Sorry...it was that food fight in Bedward's room that had me confused. I just love the thought of breathless giggling Edward trying to restrain me in his bed filled with Skittles and M & Ms. There's just so much YUM right there.
Thanks for the REVIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, DL!
-bannerday
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: A Black Day For All
AW POOOR BELLAAAA! ): Well, at least Jerkoff...oops, Jake ;) is dealt with :) OHHHHH IM SO EXCITED FOR THE NON-DAAATEEEE! OMGGG TEHHEHEHEHE!! I love you for creating this beautiful masterpiece :D
Author's Response:
Hi Darkward!
So yes, the Jerkob/Jerkoff dilemma is solved. And now look how excited you are for the non-date!!! Thank you for the compliment. It's been fun creating this "masterpiece" or "messterpiece" depending upon whether you are Edward or Jerk...I mean Jake.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
OOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THAAAAT WASSSS PERFEEECCCTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Author's Response:
Hi DAAAAAARKWAAAAAAARDLOVER!
Glad that shower scene kiss was acceptable. And maybe the pepper spray scene too? How very Bella, you know? And for some reason Edward finds it all very "stimulating" LOL
Until next time...when they go public.....LOL
Thanks for the ssssssssmmmmmmiiiiiiiille.
-bannerday
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers
OMG HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA THE BREAKFAST SCENEEEE MADE MY DAY HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAAAAAA LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. eddie and bellz are finally togetherrrrr <3
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS E & B ARE A TWOSOME!!! COMPLETE WITH ONLOOKERS! Glad you liked the Breakfast Club. Poor Edward.....at least he isn't alone on his team anymore!
Thanks for the REVIEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!
-bannerday
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Points of View
teeheheheheheh! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :) i love it when eddie growls! rawrrrr
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
Glad you enjoyed it. Nothing sexier than a growling Edward! Well, maybe a Jasper in a kilt. Oooohhhh...both of them at once...in the swanky fort under the twinkle lights. Yummmmmmmmmmmmmm.
thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Comparing Notes
AAAWWW Omg. I envy their relationship SOOOOO BADLYYYYYY
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
I feel your pain. We ALL want an Edward. GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
-bannerday
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Weekend Plans
LOLLLLOL TEHEH. So cuuuuutee! This story is delicious :) But not as much as Edward.... <3
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
Glad you got your giggle on. They are cyte. And how frustrating to have that little gang of observers there to make life interesting/irritating??? Nothing is as delicious as Edward. Everything is more delicious than Mediterranean Brownies. ;)
I'm wondering if you've made any discoveries scouting the site for your stuff?? Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Mood Lighting and Ambiance
LOOOLLLOL
what a tool.
loooveed it :D
Author's Response:
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Dark!
Glad you liked my chapter...or are you just laughing at me and my little song...you're not calling ME a tool, are you??????? Okay, I can admit it...I've been known to be rather toolish on occasion. ;)
Thanks for the review. Thanks for the Chapterlove! Next chapter up tonight or tomorrow.
-bannerday
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Leave Them Wanting More
LOVE as alwayssss ;D
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
Glad for the looooooove as always. thanks for reading and reviewing. Chapter 31 is up and ready for perusal. It's a busy chapter!
Did you ever get my other email regarding writing?
-bannerday
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You
OMG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH WHEN EDWARD WAS LIKE 'SO, SEE ANYTHING YOU LIKE?' EVEN I BLUSHEDDD FOR BELLA, OMGG I WAS DYING (NOT LITERALLY..CAUSE I WOULDN'T BE REVIEWING) BUT OMG HAHAHAHAHAHAH k. I'm done :D LOL. ...HAHAAH. ok, HAHA. Sorry, had to do that :P LOLTEHHEHEHE. K, AMAZINGGGGG. Soooooooooooooo CUUUUTEEEE!!!!! Update everydayyyy? ;) AND NO DON'T WITHHOLD CHAPTERS FROM ME IM SORRRRY ):!! End of the year for school, lots of work. LOVELOVEEEEEELOVEEEEEEEEEEE XOXO
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH Glad I got you blushing at my fictional boy giving his fictional girl a hard time for checking out his fictional fine-ness. Can you imagine...? OMG, poor B...she must have been blushing crimson...at least it was still dark. ;)
Hope you are done now with school and enjoying your summer.
Thanks for the review. More soon.
-bannerday
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?
WOW, If only my ex-boyfriend did that...maybe we would still be together? LOOOL jks, BUT OMG Eddie!!! tehehehehhehehehehehhhe LOOVEEEEE AS USUAL. andd___+++++++ Jake ._. Ugh, LOL. Edward suffices :)
Author's Response:
Hi again, DARK!
I just posted chapter 52 but I'm still catching up on old reviews.
When I gave birth to my first child my husband went out and bought me pads...I think it was his way of celebrating and thanking me for having given him a son. LOOOOOOL
Poor Edward...toting the tampons...and we thought he drew the line at feminine hygiene products...oh well, there's a first time for everything.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Surprise, Surprise, Surprise
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
*fans herself then faints*
Author's Response:
Hi DARK>>>>
OK so chapter 51 got you all hot and sweaty...now go read chapter 52 and let me know how you feel at the end of that one. :)
-bannerday
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions
OOOOOHMYYYYYYYYYYYY!!
I hate JEMSEAMEMAJAMESJMAEJSMEAEA. Fail. JAMESS**
Disgusting, creepy basterd. GUAHFDUAFHNDAKFAFNAK ugh. ew.
FDIAKFMDAFA poor bella ): omg! That's soooooooooo CREEPY, I would be very paranoid if that happened to me. And now because of this, it can put a lot of tension in the relationship between edddie n bellyy!! OMGGGG But obviously AMAAAZINGGGG! Yeah, I'm about to enjoy summer actually! One day left, a few exams ANDDDDDDD DONEEE! WOOOOT! :D can't wait for the next chapter :D OGIDASMFDAKNFDA THEHEHEHEHEH
Author's Response:
Hi DARK!
Let's celebrate summer!!!!!!!!! Exams are over!!!!!!!!!!!The school year has ended!!!!!!!!!
Yep, JAMEWSJAMWSJAMESJAMEASMSJEAS is a real creepy dude. He's a super creep, super creep, he's super CREEPY! Bella should be paranoid. She needs a big, handsome, easily-riled, volatilely-protective boyfriend to be her guardian angel. Oh. Never mind. But you are right about the tension something like this can put on a relationship...especially a new relationship. Right?
Thanks for the review and for the LDKLEIFHWNSKJSJLGFIEHWL:D!!! Your reviews always make me giggle. ;) Love them...and you, sweetie!
-bannerday
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: Stealthy Maneuvers
omgggggg I FUCKINGGGGGGGGG HATE JAMESS
Disgusting BASTAAARD.
TEHEHEHHE, Edward. His comment made me blush :$ ehehthehhtehtehte
CANT WAIIIIT FOR SATURDAY!
And, just to let you know.. i'm thinking of putting my story up. It's honestly not much of a story yet because of exams and all this work, but it could be a prologue? And once exams are over, I could work on it more. It's hard for me to get inspiration to truly write and keep going since I doubt myself a lot.. but hopefully this will work. What do you think? Should i?!?!?!?! Eeek.
Want a peek and you can tell me waht you think? :D
KKK!!! THEHEHEHHEHEHEHEUREHAWFJADKFJHADOFH TEHEHHEHE. Ok, here. :D:D:DD::DD:
Preview:
"Hey Bella.” A smooth, velvet voice whispered in my ear, causing butterflies to erupt in the pit of my stomach. And also scaring the shit out of me.
“EEUUHHHH!” I yelped loudly, chills spreading across my body violently. I turned and glared over at the offender, feeling my cheeks burn up as I noticed the whole class turn quiet.
Smirking deviously he coyly asked, “You okay there, Bella?”
Licking my lips, I answered him with a blunt “Fuck off Edward.” Adding a sweet smile, I fished out my soft lips tube and skillfully glided it on. His eyes locked on my lips and bounced back and forth between them and my eyes, all the while I was simply looking up at him through my long mascara-coated lashes.
(tehe, is that awks? mascara-coated.. I just feel like Bella never wears make-up, not that she needs it. But IDK!!! I felt like I should add it in? kk continue-darkky)
“That hurts. Fine, sit there and ignore my agony over your cruel words." He huffed, pretending to actually give a rat’s ass.
“Edward, you know I love you!” I replied warmly, giving him a huge grin. His recently pouty lips broke out into a wide smile, his eyes twinkling.
no???yes??????? GKDAFMAFA horrible? ):
Author's Response:
Hi DARK!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't we ALL hate James??? Yes, yes we do! He is a disgusting bastard. Edward, on the other hand...who can't wait for Saturday...*wink*...is sex in a cup!
I'm so proud of you that you're going to post your story. It always worth a shot. I've gotten so much enjoyment out of writing that I'm now starting a third story. YIKES!! I haven't posted it yet...but maybe soon. I think it's going to be hilarious!
I think the bit you let me read sounds good: a snarky Bella, a sexy Edward, they must be in high school, no? And obviously they are friends. She's interested in him and maybe he is too? Or else they are just friends but will become more? And your Bella is certainly allowed to wear a little mascara with her lip gloss. :)
I think you should keep going, most definitely. Do you have an overall summary of the story? I'd like to read that to know where we're headed.
Good luck to you, bb! I'm glad you're giving it a shot. It's fun!
-bannerday
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Out of Left Field
Amazinggggg!!!!!!! Omgggg, Bella! ): ofjdakfjafad speechless, I honestly don't know how to respond. LOL. Thanks for the encouragment sooo much! The thing is, my data got deleted cause of my computer.. :/ But it's ok, I was thinking of mixing up the story a bit more.. Not sure yet, ughhhhh stupid unreliable technology. ): BUT YOUR STORYYYY! EEEEK, And omg..another one? I'm for sure gonna read it :D
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
glad you enjoyed chapter 54. Things with James are picking up...and getting creepy, right?
Sorry to hear about your story being deleted. What a pain!
My other story is quite the different one! LOL If you read...hope you like it. It's pretty crazy. :)
-bannerday
This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26605
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Big Me
I GET SO EXCITED TO READ THIS STORY CAUSE I KNOW ILL ALWAYS PISS MYSELF LAUGHINGG AHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Jax and his Motorcycle Momma
LOVEEEEE AS USUAL LOOOOOOLOL
I pee everytime I read new chapters, in a good way. :D
New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
LOOOOOL.
Love the idea! Can't wait for the next chapter.
C'mon, are you even asking? OBVIOUSLY THERE'S POTENTIAL.
I am very inclined to read on, NOW GET TO IT! XOX
Author's Response:
Hi Dark!
Glad you liked that first chapter of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. There's more posted now. Plus I got a new banner for it. Yippee!
xo
-bannerday
Edward drags Bella to a haunted house on Halloween night along with Jasper and Alice. What started out as good fun, takes a dark and bloody turn for the worst. Who will make it out alive?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8334 Read Count: 622
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
THIS IS FUCKING SICK! But I loved it! LOL. OMG, I'M NOT GONNA BE ABLE TO SLEEP. I cried for Emmett ): MY TEDDY BEAR!!!!!