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Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

awww i wonder when they will be together so cute! i love it!!!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

more feelings are coming! i love it!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

awwwwwww i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

the house sounds wow! i wanna live like that! i love it!!!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! they are sooo cute!!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

i love it!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

oh boy!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

i love it!!!

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Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

they were close. i love it!!!!!!!

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Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

i love it as always ur stories alway amazing

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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

i love it!

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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

lol i love it!!!

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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

whoa.....lol i love it!

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Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

omg! i love it!!!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

i love it!!!

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Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

aw i love it!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

yay! i love it! 

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

i love it! bella is sooo freakin nice!

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

i love it!!! i wwonder who the guy is i think its james....

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Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

i love it!!! amazing! i hope edward gets better

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

i love it haha i didnt understand any of the section 29 33 thingy but i love the rest!!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

awe i love it!!! i hope everything will go smoothly now

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg i love it! if i was knocked up i would never get an abortion 

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

amazing!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i love it! he should go after her

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

awe i love it!!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i love it amazing they both like each other but r too stubborn to do anything

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ohhh i love it!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i love it i hope things work out!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

awe edward said he loves bella! his grandpa is mean grrr

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i love it! edward is goin ta be in there lives!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

aweeeee i love it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i love it edward's grandpa did a good thing i think

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV

i love it! it was nice to no wat carlisle was thinkin

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

omg! i love it!!!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh boy i love it!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i love it!!!!!!!!!! i wonder wat charlies gonna say he sounded mad

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

awe i love it! 

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

awe the baby is a boy!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

omg.....i wonder wat happen

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i love it amazing!!!!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

awe i love it wonder who the woman is

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

ok amazing! i love it!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

awe i love the the braclet sounds so beautiful!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

awe they are so cute together its really funny edward keeps sayin wrong names for jessica

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

i love it now she nos so she better not get in the way

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

omg!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!! there gonna get married

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

i wonder why its on the ground i wonder if Charles was there

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

i love it! i wonder wats charles was gonna say

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Charles POV

we now no why is a a grumpy person but its good noing he is happy for them

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

the baby's coming i love babies!!

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Birth

i love it caleb sounds sooooo cute!!!

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

ok people gotta stop lying! i cannot believe somone would use there baby too. i love it. happy that charles is gonna apologize.

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

i love it! everything is getting better

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb

the story edward told to caleb  was sad.....i love it!!!

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

i love it!! amazing. 

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

thats really amazing i love it as always!!!

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Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)

omg i love it!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

i wonder what james wants what emmett said to edward lol!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review, babes!  ;)

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Home

lol alice is so hyper! i love it!



Author's Response:

alice is very hyper... i think everyone needs a friend like her!  ;)

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor

i love it i would want all the clothes! i wonder what edward will say.



Author's Response:

i want all the clothes, too!  the cullen's are my dream family!  ;)

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Misunderstanding

i love it! aw bella loves edward wonder who it is



Author's Response:

thanks, sweets!  glad you liked it! ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Unstable

omg i love it!! i love the last line lol!



Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it!  the last line was fun to write! ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Premonitions

lol! omg i love it!



Author's Response:

thanks sweets!  ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Protector

omg thats funny! i think its james! alice is having a vison?



Author's Response:

alice is sensing something. you are correct!  ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Intruder

oh................i love it!



Author's Response:

YAY!  i'm glad you like it!  thanks for the review!! ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Victims

awwwww o love it!!! Aro was mad! I think the bodyguard is Jake...



Author's Response:

wow, thank you!  aro is a very dramatic kinda guy.  thanks for the review!! ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

i new it was jake i love it lol edward!



Author's Response:

edward cracks me up, too!!  thanks for the review!!  ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Triggers

oh edward! lol that must haven been a scene!



Author's Response:

it definitely was!  thanks for all of your wonderful reviews!!! ;)

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Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Help

amazing!!!! i love it!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you!  i'm glad you're enjoying it!  ;)

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Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Hiding

i love it amazing i wonder if jasper and alice will get together and if emmett will meet rose soon......



Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it!  i'm a cannon shipper so everyone will get together in the end!  thanks for the review!!! ;)

Summary:

When Bella, Edward, and their friends go on a guided tour of a supposedly haunted Mental Hospital, they all find that they have much more in common than they ever expected.

Inspired by the closed mental hospital used in this banner near where I live.  
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4473 Read Count: 1771
[Report This] Published: 16 Oct 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tripping the Veil

omg............whoa........

Summary:

You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!!  Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA

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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!

Ari

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love

omg i love it the ending is so sad im starting to cry

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
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Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

that was sooo sad!!!!!!! i love it hope bella will find someone!!!!!!! maybe edward???? love it though!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like this story. I do hate that I had to kill Garrett. I wanted to keep him in the story but it just wasn't going to work with Edward coming back into Bella's life. Thanks for your review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Love you tons - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter which will be up later today:

Sitting alone watching the sky change colors, I thought of Bella and our lives together growing up. I replayed every moment and let the love we felt back then wash over me. I knew I couldn't, but I wanted to feel that again.

I wanted to look into her eyes again and see the love I used to see when she looked at me. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and promise that I would never let her go again. Assure her that if she still wanted me, if she still loved me, we could be together forever. It was possible now and I could take her with me.

As the sky above me grew dark, I made my decision. I had to see her and if she was happy, I would leave quietly and never return. I would find Carlisle and Esme and live my life with them.

But if happiness had not found her in all these years, I would go to her in the night, take her someplace where I could explain everything and beg for her forgiveness. And if by some miracle she still loved me, I would take her back to Carlisle so he could change her and I could keep her with me for the rest of eternity.

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Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Love it as always!! Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. We're coming up on some good stuff, at least I think so, and I can't wait to hear what you think. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter, which will be up later today:

"Talk to me, Angel." He pressed his forehead to mine. "Tell me about the city." He let out a strained laugh. "In all my travels, the only time I've been there was the night I found you."

"Really?" I drew back to look him in the eye.

I could see the sadness he tried to hide and I knew he was doing it for me. Edward loved my father and his illness had to hurt him just as much as it did me, but he tried to be strong. For me, he would always be strong.

"What was it like?" he asked again.

"I was terrified," I admitted with a shaky laugh. "So many cars, so many people and I had nowhere to go."

The arm he had around my waist loosened as I put a bit of distance between us.

"Mrs. Jones gave me ten dollars when I left but it wasn't enough. After a few days I was living in the street. I slept in alleys and stole food when I needed to eat."

"Oh Bella."

Hearing what I went through, the distance between us disappeared as Edward brought me back into his arms. Resting my forehead against his chest, I continued.

"I don't know how I made it as long as I did. I was scared and alone until..." My words trailed off as I remembered the day I met Lizzy, Johnny and Jack.

"Until what?" Edward urged.

"Until they found me."

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love it very happy that bella could see charlie. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awe I love it as always!



Author's Response:

I’m so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love – D

Until next time...are you ready for something a little more playful? Here's a peek at Edward's next chapter, which will be up later today:

"Are you trying to give me a heart attack?" I growled low into her ear.

A low growl rumbled in her chest as she exhaled and leaned back into me. "We've been climbing trees since we were ten and you're worried now. Now that I can't be hurt."

"The trees we climbed when we were ten didn't have you hundreds of feet above ground."

"We, my love," she twisted to kiss me quickly, "are indestructible. I could jump from this tree and the only thing to get hurt would be the ground beneath my feet."

"I just worry about you," I admitted.

"Don't."

She turned to straddle the branch, lifting an arm around my neck and resting her other hand on my arm. Her smile was gone.

"I've lived through so much already; falling from a tree is nothing in comparison."

"But I could have kept you from all of that. If I'd been here, I could have saved you from so much pain." I touched her cheek. "I will make up for that. I'll make up for every bit of pain you suffered."

"By keeping me out of trees." Her smile returned. "You've lived a sheltered life haven't you?"

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Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

awww i love it as always!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it. There's still a long journey ahead and I hope to hear from you more along the way. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...let's take a peek at the next chapter which will be posted soon:

I gripped my head harder, heard a crack and screamed in pain. Fingers clamped around my wrists, pulling my hands away. Struggling against the hold, my eyes finally opened. The blond man was standing over me and the instant his face came into view, my vision clouded red.

Using his grip on me, I pulled an arm closer and bit his wrist. My teeth nearly met before he ripped his hand from me. He stumbled back and I lunged for him. My body crashed into his and knocked him through a tree.

We tumbled to the ground, rolling until I had the advantage. The thunderous cracking sounds meant nothing to me as I slammed my fists into his chest.

"Murderer!" I shrieked. "You killed them!"

His hand came up to block my assault but I couldn't stop. I wouldn't stop. He killed them and I wanted him dead. His howls of pain were like music to my ears and I swung faster and harder, hitting him with everything I had.

As my hand came down again, he caught my left wrist before I could hit him. Out of reflex, my right hand punched his arm to get myself free. I froze when his arm broke at the elbow and flew towards the trees.

"Oh God!" I screamed. "What are you?"

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Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

she was so close yet so far from edward!!!!! ahhh i love it!!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!! ahh i love this!!!



Author's Response:

They're close, just not quite close enough. It's coming though...I promise. A major jump in time in the next two chapters will bring them closer to finding each other again. Thanks for the review, darlin. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at the next chapter to be posted later today:

In the six years we'd been together, I'd never seen Carlisle so happy. Finally finding love had changed him completely and he was a whole new man. He actually reminded me of myself years ago when I was with Bella. She simply brought out the best in me and it was exactly what Esme did for Carlisle.

They could barely contain their love for each other so, after years of posing as husband and wife, they made the decision to make their relationship official. As they readied themselves to take this step together, Esme pulled me aside for a quick word.

"My dear Edward, for years you've played the role of brother to us and I have been proud to accept you in that role, but I want something more." She gripped my hand tightly as she spoke.

"Esme, you've brought so much happiness to Carlisle's life and I am grateful to you for making him the man he is today. So please, ask for anything you wish."

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love it as always and I am excited for the next one. I wonder how Charlie will react and how bella will take it....



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it and I truly hope I did Charlie and Bella's conversation justice because it really is important to all of them.  Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter:

"Shh, Daddy, it's okay." Bella's voice was soft and soothing. "It's okay."

Panicked, my focus instantly switched to Renee, her mind still foggy as her medically aided sleep held her under. Mrs. Jones stirred but her dreams still played strongly in her mind. I breathed a sigh of relief as my mind shifted back to Bella.

I couldn't see anything in the room but I could hear them - Charlie continually repeating her name and Bella apologizing for leaving. It hurt me to hear their broken sobs knowing I was the cause of all their pain, but it helped, if only a little, to know I could give them this moment before his illness took him away.

Just then, the room came into view as Charlie opened his eyes. I watched though his vision as he pulled Bella away from him and held her shoulder, not allowing her to move too far from him.

"My sweet girl, you're home."

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Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

awww thats so sad!!! i should've known edward would leave for some time....anyways i love it cannot wait for the next and amazing as always!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward had a really hard time when he had a perfect love thrown in his face. Don't worry though, he won't be alone for too long. Well, too long in the life of a vampire, that is. LOL. Thanks for the review, darlin. Love you tons - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter:

With a devilish smile on his face, he whispered, "Are you ready for more, my dark angel?"

Just as I was about to answer, his eyes widened and his hand flew to my mouth. My normal reaction would have been to struggle against his hand but the worried look on his face stilled me. He took a deep breath, tasting the air but when I tried to do the same, all I could smell was the scent of his skin.

His arms wrapped tightly around me. "Leave now." His whispered warning was just for me.

I tried to pull away but he gripped me tighter.

"Use the rooftops and run for the trees."

Sensing his sudden fear, I held onto him just as tight. "What is it?"

He loosed his grip and took one step back. One hand touched my cheek and his eyes bore intently into mine.

"Please, Bella, just go," he urged. "Now."

"But what about..."

He cut me off, knowing what I was about to ask. "I'll join you soon. I swear it. But you must go now." His eyes glanced over my shoulder toward the main street before meeting mine again. "You have only seconds, please go."

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Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! i love it!!! i wonder if he will be close to finding her but then found out she had already left the place........love it!!!



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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love it!!!! there kind of dancing around each other....im sooo mad a jasper right now....



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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i love it!!! i wonder who the vampire is!! so curious......i hope its edward though.......



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Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i love it!!!! they've found each other however i would've thought it would be more happy....but i still love it!!!! i hope bella will forgive him!



Author's Response:

Bella's been in too much pain for far too long to forgive Edward right now. Give him time though, he will do whatever it takes to reminder her how much they love each other. He'll get his girl back again. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter, which will be up later today:

A growl rumbled deep in my chest as Edward's scent pulled me from my thoughts. Turning my back to the shed, I scanned the darkness. I couldn't see him but I knew he was close.

"Don't take another step, Edward," I warned, knowing he could hear me.

I heard his footsteps come to a halt as silence hung in the air. A few minutes passed as I searched the area around me. He was nowhere to be seen but I could feel him out there.

"Please let me help, Bella." His voice sliced through the darkness.

"I don't need your help."

"Don't shut me out, Angel."

My eyes closed for a split second as the old name brought more memories of our lives together.

"I watched my father die, Bella," he continued. "I know how you feel."

"How long have you known, Edward?" I hissed, ignoring his last comment. "How long did you watch my father suffer before you came to find me?"

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ahhhhhh!!!!!!! They are together! I am sooooo happy right now, love it as always! I cannot wait for the next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Bella and Edward deserve some happiness after spending half of their lives being miserable. It'll take some time and there will be a lot of ups and downs on both sides, but they will work their way back to each other. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter, which will be up later today:

"Maggie?" Bella's quiet voice startled me.

"Mrs. Jones," I answered her. She lifted her confused eyes to meet mine. "You and I spent our entire childhood with that woman and had no idea she and your father were best friends."

I smiled when Bella's brow creased.

"How do you know this?"

My smile faded, knowing this would be where it started. I had promised her the absolute truth and that was what I would give her. It wasn't a difficult question but I knew my Bella would be upset by my answer. And I'd learned enough about the girl in my arms now to know that she wouldn't take the news lightly and I braced myself for a fight.

Hoping to keep her violent side at bay, I spoke in the calmest voice possible. "The first year I came home, I overheard a horrible argument between the three of them. Your father was so angry, more so than I'd ever heard in my life. He was yelling at your mother and when Mrs. Jones stepped in to defend her, he turned his anger on her."

"You're lying!" Her fist hit me hard and in a flash, she was across the room. "My father has never yelled at my mother and neither of my parents have ever said a cross word to Mrs. Jones. What could possibly cause them to argue?"

I didn't want to say it. I didn't want to hurt her again and it was inevitable that my words would do just that. I steeled myself for her wrath.

"They were arguing about you."

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Love it as always can't wait to see hat happens next.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Edward and Bella made some breakthroughs in this chapter. And I know it's been a long time coming but they're about to make a few more. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter which will be posted later today:

My fingers made a path across the map to the east coast of Maine, to the black dot covering the very spot Garrett and I walked into the ocean.

"A friend of Garrett's found us in the mountains and while they spoke, the man told him of his recent trip to Europe. Knowing Victoria was still hunting me, Garrett thought it would be the perfect time to take me away.

"We left from here," I said with a grin, remembering our fun on the beach. "I wanted to travel by ship, our own personal buffet, but Garrett wouldn't allow it. He knew I couldn't be confined that way so he brought me to this point and we swam the ocean to get there."

I turned to Edward and his eyes were wide with a look of surprise.

"Didn't you know we could swim like that?" I asked excitedly. "It was amazing, Edward. Someday I'll take you..."

"Darling. Are you awake?"

My father's voice rang through the air and my head snapped toward the sound. Edward's hands were on me immediately and I reached out for him, holding myself against him to keep from running for the door.

"Don't let me go," I whispered.

"Never," he whispered back.

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

ahhhhh i love it!!!!! i hope they work through this!!! cant wait for the next!



Author's Response:

 

I'm glad you liked it. And as crazy as it sounds, Edward's confession is what gets them on their road to reconciliation. It's a rocky one but at least they're on it. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter, which will be up later today:

"I could have done it, Angel, but I was afraid of what would happen when you began aging and I didn't. There was no way to explain it to you without telling you the truth and doing so would have ensured your death." A horrified expression crept across his face. "You mocked me before but I was afraid of the Italians, Bella. They're vicious men and I was terrified of what they would do to you if they found out you knew our secret."

"But you could have changed me, Edward. We would have been safe."

"I couldn't ask you to give up..."

I was in front of him in a flash with a hand covering his mouth. Our eyes locked and his face blurred as the venom filled my eyes.

With more emotion than I thought myself capable of, I whispered, "I gave my life to you when you were alive." My hand slid to his cheek. "What made you think I wouldn't have given you forever if you asked for it?"

Slowly, his hand covered mine.

"I wanted that," he whispered back. "I wanted you...so much that I couldn't stay away any longer. But when I came back you were gone."

 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: An Eternity to Love

Amazing chapter as always cannot wait for the next one... Hope they both find out the truth about what really happened 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532884
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

i love it as always.......i wonder if kylie will ever fingure out the buisness.......cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Summary:

Edward writes a message and puts it in a bottle. While on vacation with his family, he drops it in the ocean. Hoping to find his soulmate the way his grandfather did. Will it end in love or in nothing? Sometimes you just have to believe in fate.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27091 Read Count: 5149
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i love it!!! rose is just a crazy person....

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

they are soo cute!!! love it

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ahhhh amazing!!!!! i love it wonder if they will get in trouble!!! 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This chapter is amazing like always!!! love it!!! cant wait to see what will happen!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chantilly Lace

This chapter was amazing love it very funny and I wonder if they will find out

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 28: I Got You, Babe

Love it as always!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Liar, Liar, Sex on Fire

Lol this chapter was funny loved it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Plaid

Love it as always can't wait for the next. I'm really happy things are going great. Not liking the nurse right now blach 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: An Excellent Adventure

I love it totally forgot about the no underwear thing hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Love and Luck

Ahh this chapter was amazing love it as always and can't wait for the next