Reviews by pricana81
Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84834
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I loved this story I can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Summary:

 

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Bella is not supposed to date a cop like her father, but when she meets Deputy Cullen, that all goes out the window. They try to keep their relationship a secret while they can't keep their hands off each other.

My o/s entry in the FML contest from FF.net that made it into the top 20. Originally posted on FF.net 1/31/10.

Awesome banner by Robrator for thetwilightawards.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4554 Read Count: 1355
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2010 Updated: 23 May 2010
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg! I'd die! LOL! Loved it I wish there was more :)

 

Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends

Loved it!!!! I would love it more if you did a sequel :)

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

That is the FUNNIEST thing I have ever read!!! I LOVE DRUNK Edward and Chris!



Author's Response:

me too!  lol  Thanks!

Summary:

Best selling author Edward Cullen gets roped into being on The Bachelor. He feels a connection with a reluctant bachelorette on the first night, but what are the odds it will sustain itself until the final rose ceremony? (Pick a Pic Entry) M, AH. Fabulous banner that was the inspiration by Belindella.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16818 Read Count: 1419
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2011
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: What Are the Odds?

I've only seen a couple of episodes of the bachelor but if it was Bella and Edward on there I'd watch for sure LOL. Loved this one shot, I would love it if you continued with it or maybe some future takes :).

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOL poor guys 😂

Summary:

Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 82064
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

aww I can't blame Bella I'd be scared as hell too! Alex and Anthony are too funny :)

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

A cliffie!!!! I can't wait to see what happens. Poor Edward is going to go to worry overdrive. I hope everything is okay.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532873
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

You don't have to hold out until next week. We promise not to think any less of you if you decide to post it this week;-)

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

I love this Bella and Edward! I hate knowing that this story is finishing up but I can't wait to see how Edward is going to be when Kylie is older :)

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I love it BUT Edward and Sonny need to find out about Joe and "take care" of him:)

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Wow! He reminds me so much of a young Edward. He also sounds like he is living up to his name:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Revelations

I knew Rose didn't like her but NEVER would I have thought it went this far! I love being surprised like this :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Liar, Liar, Sex on Fire

I get so excited when I see an update!!! I love this fic!

I LOVE Angela and Rose together, they crack me up! I would love to have Esme as my mother-in-law :).

 

I'm so glad you posted Stay... I was thinking about this fic the other day and I couldn't remember the name. It was one of my favorite fics.

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Silent Lucidity

Loved it!!! can't wait until the next chapter:)

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Status

Thank you for posting I'm sure you did it because it is my birthday ;)... or atleast that is what I keep telling myself :)

LOVED IT! I loved that they are doing their best to 

I love his answer to her statement at the end... it makes it so real because every relationship is going to have problems and Edward makes her understand that they will go through and deal with them together.

I can't wait for him to meet Charlie!!

 

Are you part of the Cutestkidsmom FB group? 

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Executioner's Song

I love Charlie! He's such a good dad :)

I can't wait to see how they will make it work once she goes back to school. 

Love it!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Do You Love Me?

Yay! they finally said ILY! 

I can't wait to read about the Cullens coming!

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123073
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

loved jack's pov:) I would love to see a sequel :)



Author's Response: Thanks very much! The sequel will be titled 'Into My Arms', but I won't be posting it for a while...I've got to work on my other stories for a while.

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVE your stories so I have no problem waiting:)



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Summary:

Edward needs a fake fiancée for the weekend.  Bella loses a bet.  Perfect.  An entry for Part II Craigslist Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3372 Read Count: 1235
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the story! I hope you continue with it. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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No one ever said parenting was easy. But, when you have a spoiled brat of a teenage daughter,  a little boy who thrives for attention, and immature parents, you could say that there family is a little more chaotic than some families, and in need of some help. It doesn't help that the town likes to gossip about them, and Mrs. Weber  is out to get Bella and little Masen.

Banner made by TwistedinMasen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64080 Read Count: 11750
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jan 2013
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!


Here is your teaser!!!

Edward still had the game on, and Masen had his Legos put away. I handed Masen his ice cream and Tanya soon joined us, taking hers. I sat on the couch cuddled up with Edward while eating my dessert. I wasn’t into sports and I really didn’t know much about football. I only knew what they wore and what the ball looked like.

Masen was trying to get Tanya to talk to him as he sat next to her. He really wanted his sister to like him. I don’t know how she could be so cruel to him. He was such a cute little boy that it was really hard to get mad at him. He was always happy when she wasn’t picking on him.

I finished my bowl; Edward placed in on the coffee table next to him. He kissed my temple and pulled me closer to his chest.

“Stop pushing me,” Masen grumbled at Tanya.

Tanya ignored and pushed him every time he tried to get back on the couch. “Tannie, stop it!”

She snickered and pushed him again. “Tanya, knock it off,” I snapped.

She gave me a bitch brow and a smirk before she pushed him with a lot of force, making him fall hard on the wooden floor. He immediately started crying and I got up to see if he was okay.

“Tanya, why the hell did you do that to your brother? Is it really that fucking bad that he wants to sit next to you?” Edward yelled.

“Who cares? I’m going up to my room. You people suck.” Tanya scampered off up the stairs.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

 

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see how they handle Tanya. They should ship her off to boot camp;) I feel sorry for Masen :(. can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:


Thank you!

Here is your teaser!!!


I sat at the counter with Masen finishing up the puzzle he brought out. Tanya was still upstairs sleeping. I expected Edward any minute. As if he knew I was thinking about him, the door opened and he walked inside with a big smile.

I smiled back at him and took a sip of my coffee. “It’s pussy!” Masen chuckled.

I choked on the warm liquid and looked at Masen, “What did you just say?”

He looked at me with a frightened stare. “I heard you scream that word and I went to ask Tannie what it was last night because your door was locked. She said that dad was a pussy.”

“Is that right?” Edward asked.

I couldn’t believe we were so loud that Masen heard us. We definitely had to quiet down our little escapades from now on. “Masen, that is a bad word. I don’t want to hear you say that again.”

“But Tannie says it when she talks to Demetri.”

“She what?” Edward yelled.

“Yeah, I walked in her room the other day and she whispered things on the phone to him and said that word.”

“Masen, the bottom line is you are not to say it.”

“Okay,” he pouted.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Edward, it's never easy finding out your daughter is having sex.



Author's Response:

 

Haha I know.

Here is your teaser!!!

Mrs. Weber motioned for me to sit down at the long brown table. “Mrs. Cullen, there seemed to be an issue today with Masen. He refused to work with Paul when I asked him. He was also late getting to class after lunch.”

I stopped her. “He was with me at the office. I came and grabbed Paul and Sam from your classroom.”

“Yes, I know. It would have been nice if he had told me what was wrong.” She raised her perfectly arched eyebrow.

“Hold on, you are upset with my son? He was trying to help his friend and in turn Paul and Alec hung him on the bathroom stall. Are you are blaming my son?”

“Mrs. Cullen, please don’t raise your voice,” she said in a condescending tone.

“This is absolutely ridiculous. They did this to my son and you are blaming him. Do you have some personal vendetta against him? Why don’t you look at the big picture here? I don’t see you out there watching all the kids and I can tell you my son isn’t one of the trouble makers. It is always Paul and Alec. I have heard other parents complain about Paul, so I know I am not crazy.”

“Mrs. Cullen, I know there are no boundaries in your home, but can you please teach Masen appropriate school behavior?”

“I’m done,” I said in a calm voice.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It's a good thing this is fiction because if it were real I would be taking names and kicking some as*es! Poor Masen:(



Author's Response:

 Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Here is your teaser!!!
Jacob and Edward went off to play with the boys while my sister and I sat in the water. She had a hot body, but she always wore an ugly one-piece bathing suit. “What’s with the suit, Nessa?” I asked.
She rolled her eyes at me, “Oh come on, Bella. I am not as brave as you to wear a tiny bikini. I have stretch marks— I don’t think I can find even one on your stomach. Plus, I am older than you. I am almost forty, and I shouldn’t be showing off my wrinkly body.”
“Wrinkly?” I laughed. “There is not one wrinkle on your skin. You have a fabulous body, especially after having three boys. Show it off.” I nudge her.
“Let’s change the subject. What’s up with Tannie?” she asked. Her eyebrows were raised and her lips were raised up in a smirk.
“Okay? I’m sorry for mentioning that you should be in less clothing.” I laughed and put my hands up.
“Bella?” Her tone told me that she wanted to know what was really going on.
“She’s just a teenager. That’s all I can say.”
She snickered. “I seem to remember a certain girl who use to act the same way. She was always on the phone, even on the computer. Her name was Bella.”
“I was not that bad,” I interrupted her.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hope Mrs. Weber get fired! 

Great chapter can't wait until the next one:)



Author's Response:

 Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Here is your teaser!!!
Jacob and Edward went off to play with the boys while my sister and I sat in the water. She had a hot body, but she always wore an ugly one-piece bathing suit. “What’s with the suit, Nessa?” I asked.
She rolled her eyes at me, “Oh come on, Bella. I am not as brave as you to wear a tiny bikini. I have stretch marks— I don’t think I can find even one on your stomach. Plus, I am older than you. I am almost forty, and I shouldn’t be showing off my wrinkly body.”
“Wrinkly?” I laughed. “There is not one wrinkle on your skin. You have a fabulous body, especially after having three boys. Show it off.” I nudge her.
“Let’s change the subject. What’s up with Tannie?” she asked. Her eyebrows were raised and her lips were raised up in a smirk.
“Okay? I’m sorry for mentioning that you should be in less clothing.” I laughed and put my hands up.
“Bella?” Her tone told me that she wanted to know what was really going on.
“She’s just a teenager. That’s all I can say.”
She snickered. “I seem to remember a certain girl who use to act the same way. She was always on the phone, even on the computer. Her name was Bella.”
“I was not that bad,” I interrupted her.
Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com
I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.
See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's so sweet how much they still love each other:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here is your teaser!!!

Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope they finally get to talking, it is starting to sound like the calm before the storm. Can't wait to see how this plays out :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here is your teaser!!!

Jake came around the corner of the truck and finally noticed me with a smirk. “Cullen, you have a visitor!” he called to Edward.

Edward, covered in black grease, rolled from underneath the car. He had his back to me. “Who is it?” he asked Jake.

“Why don’t you turn around?” I asked.

His head whirled around and a crooked smile appeared on his face. He stood up and walked over to me, bending down to give me a quick kiss.

“Edward, you can take the earlier lunch break. I can handle this by myself. Have fun.” Jake winked and disappeared in the garage again.

Check the blog on Wednesday for an additional teaser and picture tease: ADADancerfanfic (dot) blogspot (dot) com

I'm on Twitter and Facebook also @ADADancerfanfic for updates.

See you Sunday!

Plan B by Missus T Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Lying to your mother is never a good idea. Lying about being engaged is crazy, so is the plan they came up with so she wouldn't find out. Edward (& Garrett) BROMANCE - Not slash. This o/s is a prequel to Accidentally in Love and was originally posted in the TwiFanG compilation. (Banner by Gossiplips1)


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3272 Read Count: 550
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 01 Nov 2012
Reviewer: pricana81 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Plan B

Love it! I love Accidentally in Love. I love seeing how it all started :)