Reviews by HoosierNina
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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting night.  I like this Edward.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow he is smitten!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255205
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Intense back story!  I like that Bella knows Quilete.  I like that Leah is a fuller character than I ususally see.

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Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So many run ins.  What is Edwards deal?

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Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am glad your husband supports your twilight addiction.  I am reading instead of yard work today!  I thought maybe Carlisle would be the doctor for the center.  I wonder if Edward will get involved.

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Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Aro is the matchmaker!  Good guy I hope.  I like Jake.

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Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  I wonder what Jacob will think of Edward as the night progresses.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

And I thought the mail order bride would be Rose.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Emmett is cute trying to curb his tongue!

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Makes me wonder if Jasper will make a play for Bella. 

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Bella was so sweet to hear his confession with such understanding.  

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I was glad that Bella was accepting of Rose.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love Alice!  I liked how she handled Emmett and gave advice to Bella.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So sweet!

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So here is Alice!  I am very curious how she will take to Emmett.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am very curious how Bella will meet Edward.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love a period fic!  This is really an interesting start.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I wonder how the ride will go.  I wonder if Alice sees that Emmett is distracted.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love that Bella can ride a horse.  Edward is certainly stepping in it!

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loving the image of a tiny Alice.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wonder if Bella and Alice will find out about Rose.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

 I wonder what he will say to Jasper.  

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am enjoying the Spanish lesson.  I am glad Bella is making him grovel.  I like Alice.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love Carmen!  Interesting that you made Alice an orphan here raised by nuns.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I like Jasper.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I like Carmen and Elezar.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I wonder how long Bella will harbor hurt feelings.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That is an awesome entrance for Alice!

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What happened to Alice?  I can't wait to find out.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh this is good!  

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was one crazy scene.  I am glad EEmmett believed Bella.

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I am very curious how Emmett will combat these thieves and cattle killers.

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

What a hilarious way to end it!  Bella was sooo bad!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Interesting Bella. Edward makes me wonder what he is thinking.



Author's Response: After chapter 15...feel free to read Edward's pov in Love Rescue Me. You won't want to start it before then, because there are spoilers. Thanks!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

I am very intrigued about Bella's fears.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

I like Emmett's playfulness.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

Now I have a little bit of an idea of the source of Bella's insecurities.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

I like when Bella gets assertive.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

I wonder what Edward's story is about dating.  

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Mercer Island & Minibars

Well, that was a more complex reason than I expected!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Charliewas fun!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

I loved Emmet's proposal

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

I like the little clumsy things Bella does.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

That was brutal!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

I wonder if they will go through any bumps in the road with this separation.

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

What an idiot!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Pedophiles & Daddy's Little Girl

I am really curious why he didn't anticipate this happening,

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bourbon & Epitaphs

Nice twist!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Tasers & Interrogations

I like that Edward went to Bella.  What will the press say now?



Author's Response: THanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm late responding to reviews...but I'll get there eventually!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: First Dates & Riff Raff

I wonder if the papparazzi will leave her alone?

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

Cute tactic Emmett!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Aspen & Cold Showers

I wonder what Alice is alluding to.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Handcuffs & Power Suits

Wow, that Ranger is scary!  I wonder if this is what Edward will break up with Bella about.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

I hope Bella's lawyers do all they plan to The ranger.  I am glad Bella is ready to fight.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake: The He-Man Incident

Funny!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chipmunks & Oscars

Why will it be bad with those photos?

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

Oh Mimi is a good visual!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Vandalism & The Apocalypse

You keep the twists coming!  Edward left Bella in a crappy way.  Why is Tanya being so selfish?

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

I agree that Bella should have ripped him a new one too.  I am glad your Bella did.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Waxward & Sexward

I am glad the public is being supportive.  I like how Bella is reassuring Edward.



Author's Response: Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

I how Bella handled the skank brigade!



Author's Response: She's a spitfire when she needs to be. Thanks very much!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Captain Jack & Drunkella

I have never heard of Pootie Tang.  I must be too old.



Author's Response: I'm old...but I love goofy things that make me laugh. Pootie Tang is hilarious. Thanks!

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward

I know I should be kind enough to review each chapter, but I am so anxious to see what is next.  I loved his suggestion to use two hands!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 29: Bella

These are going to drive eachother crazy!  I am glad Christopher is in a safer place.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 30: Edward

I dated a guy in the Marines, so I know all about those sexy pics.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 31: Bella

I liked how Edward consoled Bella.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward

I wonder what else he is sending besides a tshirt.  I am really curious what that debriefing was about.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33: Bella

That is a really bad embarassing moment!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 34: Edward

You are creative with these 20 questions.  I wonder what Charlie will say.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 35: Bella

Charlie seemed to take that well. Bella is really upping the sexual innuendo here!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36: Edward

Interesting that he switches to Isabella here.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 37: Bella

I like a bold Bella!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 38: Edward

Good think Edward didn't make too much noise with his dream!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 39: Bella

I wonder who will say it first?

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 41: Bella

This Mike is awesomely douchey!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42: Edward

I love Emmett!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 44: Edward

That would be scary.  

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45: Bella

I would freak out if my friend was in my house in the middle of the night!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward

That would be terrifying for both of them.  I loved that she demanded to see it for herself.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 47: Bella

I am curious about Bella's questions too.  Will he just move to Washington?

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 48: Edward

He is so damn sweet!  Spoil me!!

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 49: Bella

It is funny to think Bella the sweet teacher saying hyper as fuck.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 51: Bella

How will he answer that?

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 52: Edward

He had someone measure him??

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 56: Edward

Love your author note at the end.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 57: Bella

It is sad to think of her sobbing at the end.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

Well that was a great surprise!!

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 70: Edward

That is really sweet care package. That box must have been huge LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324474
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: HoosierNina Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Interesting meeting.  I love a confident Bella.