Reviews by LAURENCEPL
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995765
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

THANK YOU !  I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY VERY VERY MUCH ! THEY ARE SO CUTE !!  



Author's Response:

thank you Lauren!

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Michele I love love love your story !!

can t wwait for more, thanks

LAURENE



Author's Response: thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

amazing chapter !  thanks for updated



Author's Response:

thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

I really love your story very much ! Your Bella is amazing I love her so strong !

can t wait for more, thanks to you for updated  

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255163
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY VERY VERY MUCH !! I like this Bella so broken but so strong, and hope Edward will be good for her !



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

YES I LOVE THIS CHAPTER VERY MUCH AND CAN T WAIT FOR MORE !

THANK YOU



Author's Response:

Thank you...for reading and leaving a comment...Thursday is coming...lml

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

THANKS FOR UPDATED, I LOVE YR STORY VERY MUCH



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..  lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter, I hate Caius he's an asshole, she's not Edward's sub 7/7, no ?



Author's Response:

No ...she is not 24/7, she wears his collar all the tiime, and that alone creates a mine-set... you will understand a little better after reading the next chapter...Thanks for reading ...lml

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

thanks for updated, love this chapter !



Author's Response:

Great...I'm glad I enjoyed writing it...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

right now I'm not very found of Edward ! He hurt her emotionally and she is already so breakable !! I'm not sure he's right !



Author's Response:

Don't be too mad at him, Edward really is a good guy...lml

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

this punishment is so much worse than a spanking ! it s  disrespectful and he make her feel worthless



Author's Response:

I'm going to ask Bella that in the OT, if that is alright with you...can I ask what you think would have been a good punishment? ....thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Is she going to get a realise this year ? or next one perhaps !



Author's Response:

soon, I'm sure sometime over the weekend,,,remember he set up the playroom so he is hoping that when they get back they can have some ....ususal..Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: photos

THANKS FOR THE PHOTOS

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions

Thanks to Edward and Bella for this little tchat !!



Author's Response:

Your welcome, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment...lml

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I love your story and can t wait for E/B time !

thanks



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Thanks for updated I love this story so much !



Author's Response:

Your welcome. You guys make me wanna write. I´m finding that I can´t wait for these two to hookup myself. Could they just get on with it already! Lol Thanks for the review!!


Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!!

Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Woo ! it was hot, very hot. I can t wait for the meeting !

thank you for updated 



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS CHAPTER !!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATED 

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Hey ! Thanks for updated I love this story very much so ! But why is Edward so  harsh with little B in this chapt. ?  he likes her, no !!!

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

No, please don't stop ! this story is amazing and I love love love it so much !!

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

AMAZING CHAPTER :: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATED, AND FOR THE RECORD I ENJOY SOME PICTURES IN THE CHAPTERS !! CAN T WAIT TO GET BELLA"S FEELING 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com