Membership status: Member
Bio:
I love to read fan fic.
I have no talent as a writer , in fact it has taken me years to be able to form correct sentences and spell adequately.
I take enjoyment from reading interesting, well written stories and I thank you all that you are so willing to share your talent.
Cheers
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
when you said everything bad...you meant it. You have me facinated to see what happens next
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
Loved the Felix insite. I hope he helps to rescue her one day or he begs her for forgiveness
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Aro is truely on sick fucker. Hope he gets his in the end with a bullet thru his dick from Charlie
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
Loved CPOV and that he met Felix
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Everytime I see that there is another chapter I quake in my shoes at what the hell you are going to write next. Another great chapter!!!
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
Great as always
I have learnt more new words reading fan fic than I knew before for B, P, C, and B. I really do not think I could add anything to your list.
However I have found other authors start to come up with names relating to each characters profession.
Edwards a laywer ????
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Great as always
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Wow..Jacob undecover and watched Edward.
Love the twists and turns in this story!!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh My goodness.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG he got the girls. Cant wait for you to unravel the rest of the story
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: The Training School Saga
Great update...Please write more soon
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
Yeah, Death is too good for James.
Enjoyed your writing
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Well done, a most amazing story.
I love that they are all healing.
Congrats
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
This story is so sickining and yet I just keep on reading . I want these bastards to get what is coming to them.
Author's Response:
If you would rather skip the beginning send me a pm and I'll summarize. Just start at chapter 11. I promise the story doesn't stay this way for long
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
and I thought it couldnt get any worse!!!
But why am I still reading? I want these bastards to burn
Author's Response:
Soon, very soon
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
At least Bella has support from the girls
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
So finally there is a sane Cullen man!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
Glad things are looking up for Bella and that there is a ra¥ of hope for Edward
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Yeah, things are getting better
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39
That was a beautiful ending to the chapter
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
Love the joy in this chapter and I feel really sick at the thought of what could possibly be coming.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
Carlisle is just sick. I really dont know how much more I can take of this story!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
So glad you wrote this like this. I was at breaking point
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife
so pleased Edward changed the locks and that Bella is confiding in Esme
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Ding Dong, the bastards are dead....yeah!!!!
Loved the last paragraph...wow this will be hard for Edward
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Thought it was going to be Edward. I liked how you wrote this chpt
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Enjoying the story. Looking forward to more.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Enjoying the story
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Yeah....she escaped....keep running Bella
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Aggghhh. A cliffie. Update soon :)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Glad Bella escaped. i hope James is dead but I fear that he is not. looking forward to the next update
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
LOve Alices line.. "Oh, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t do, and in case you don’t know that gives you a ton of leeway!”."
Enjoyed the chpt
Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet. Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet. Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out. :) All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it. I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention. I'll leave the money making to the experts. I'm only here to play.
AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47777
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue
Great story. Loved all the ups and downs.
Thanks for sharing your talent
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315702
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
That was amazing
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations
wow...and the a/n's are are great too!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
The library and the ghost train...oh my goodness
Author's Response:
*snigger*
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits
Fantastic chapter
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Love that the masks are starting to fall off
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I found APOV interesting and it is great to see all the masks falling off. Dying to hear what happens to E & B next. This story caused a few late nights (or should I say mornings) for me to get to this chpt. I just could not stop reading.lol
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo
Cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing your talent
A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Interesting concept in your story. You have me hooked despite the fact this is the first non Bella Edward story I have read. You Carlisle creeps me out, just as you planned :)
Looking forward to watching the rest of the story unfold
Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77002
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Minim
Really enjoyiing the story so far
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you continued on from Chapter 4? Lub BBxx
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Brace
Great story, cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I'll try to update soon, luv BBxx
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Stave
Enjoying the story. Who wrote the letters? Riley, Edward? Cant wait to find out
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Alla Breve
Enjoying the story, Looking forward to more :)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Vivace
I really liked your story in the begining and up to the middle, but now every chapter seems to be the same theme. It's driving me nuts.
Author's Response:
the same, but with baby steps forward? It's only been 4 weeks in their lives (less time that it took me to get this chapter to you from the last)! I hope you cut them some slack...but, I understand if you give up :)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Underscore
Anothr great chapter, you know I cant get enough.
And thanks from my brother in advance for your fundraising efforts...he lost his home when the township of Emerald was flooded
Author's Response:
OMG, I feel for your brother! My rello's in Queensland were so very fortunate not to have any damage. I can't seem to comprehend how devastating it is...
Thanks for continuing to read, and review. It means a lot...
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Rhapsody
Yeah, finally.....but I still wanted to slap Bella every now and then :)
Author's Response:
So do I... lol
Maybe your view of her may change from next chapter. Sorry for the delay, but RL and all... posting very soon xxx
Luv BBxx
Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.
Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Meeting
Creepy Edward...and I just cant stop reading
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Pursuing
Yes, I was surprised by jake. I thought it was the Volutri ...so you fooled me too. Congrats. Looking forward to the sequel
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752845
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum
Well I have been sucked into the vortex of this story and its really really late, like 130am late and I cant stop reading and I have to be at work at 7am...aggghhh. I am enjoying your story very much
Author's Response:
Ouch...sorry for the vortex sucking and your lack of sleep...but I"m glad you like it :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Great story. I wish I was around when you were writing this chpt by chpt as it took me ages to read in one sitting but well worth it. I am going to let some of my friends know about this story , if they dont already. Thanks for sharing your talent
Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
LOvely story so far. I am ohhhing and ahhhhing
Author's Response:
glad you're enjoying!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Enjoyed your story. Jacob was so vengeful...havent read a fan fic with him like that before. Thanks for sharing your talent
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?
This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.
AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons
Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins
Hate the whole breeding programme...agggh. But your story has got me intrigued.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. It's All About The Girls (Part 2)
I expected an even stronger reaction form the guys. Looking forward to the rest of the story
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18. The Day of Reckoning
this is one crazy story. i hate Carlisle so much....yet I am begining to like the Cullen boys
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
what a cliffie....agghhh
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
Interesting twist.
Enjoying the story
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Great chapter
Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 10912
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Enjoying the story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?
Banner by, rpattz1990
Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161860
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Im am guessing she was raped by a vampire?
Author's Response:
They are all human in this one
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Newton ...death is too easy for him. I hope he suffers
Author's Response:
Yes, it is:)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I understand your reason for the repeat but I gained little information from it. You could have sumed up Bellas feeling in a few small paragraphs and contiued on with the story. But this is your story and you are free to write the way you see fit.
Author's Response:
I know. thank you:)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
? Charlie moving in...that should be interesting. Glad Newton is going down
Author's Response:
Yep:)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Forming the queue to kill Lauren now...:)
Author's Response:
lol, I'm in!
The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.
Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!
Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Enjoying your story so far. love the CPOV and the EPOV.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Love it that Carlisle has asked Bella if she wants to be turned now!
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
what a wonderful chpt and story so far
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises
That was so nice of Edward
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
Thanks for sharing your talent
Sequel to Without You. What happens when Jake imprints? And Kyle comes to Forks for a new toy? Can the Cullens protect Bella from it all? Will Bella find that she still loves Edward? Or is she destined to spend her life alone?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52498 Read Count: 2064
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Confessions of a Broken Heart
That was just heartbreaking
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Reuions
Enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing your talent
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin
Enjoyed the latest chapter, Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son
Great chapter, thanks
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town
Great chapter, enjoying the story
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Enjoying the story.
Really I am
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Fantastic story so far...looking forward to the rest
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Really enjoying your story...glad that you put a great twist in the D/S relationship. Looking forward to the rest of the story
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Enjoying the story.
Of course a jasper Alice outtake would be good
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review - out take will be soon!
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Between his overeacting and her being stubbon and not listening...are they ever going to make it.
Aggghhhh.
Write quicker, loved the chapter
Author's Response:
Dear HR,
No more coffee for you!! One nervous wreck in this writing process is enough! I'm busy with it (the next chapter)
thanks for the review
xoxo
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Enjoying your story
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Enjoying the story as always.
I really dont like it when he calls her "Little girl" I find it creepy. But besides that, a great story
Author's Response:
Hi there HR,
He doesn't mean it in a creepy way, it started when she called him Sparky in Italy and he retaliated by calling her Little Girl. It's like Baby, but he really doesn't mean anything 'sleazy' by it.
thanks for the review!!
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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29
“P-pardon?” Bella felt faint. This is bad! This is really, really bad!
Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’
Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.
Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you. It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.
Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.
She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents. Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.
My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life?
Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.
What had she done?
Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.
“y-yes?” she whispered.
“Bella?”
“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
enjoying the story
Author's Response:
thank you hr xoxo
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Enjoying the story. Thanks so much for another long chapter.
Can you remind me what chpt Rose and Bella spoke on the boat...I want to re read it?
Author's Response:
CHAPTER 15!! Thanks for the review
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I still dont understand the whole dom sub dynamic. I think Bella was fine to be upset. I feel like Edward set her up to fail. Getting another girl to kneel at his feet...it was like waving a red flag in front of Bella
Author's Response:
I agree with you but like I told someone else who reviewed, this lifestyle is not about fairness. It's about submitting, giving, mastering, selflessness.
I don't think that it was so much the act that made me rewrite this chapter over and over, it was the feelings that it evoked in me!
thanks for the review, and see you next week
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
fantastic chapter.
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
I always look forward to your next chapter . Thank you for another great long chapter. I really do appreciate you sharing your talent
Author's Response:
thank you so much - I don't mean them to be so long, but it's just happening that way!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Go Bella
Lovin this story
Author's Response:
thanks so much :)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Enjoying your story.
I would ignore all the haters if i was you.
I am not into BDSM but I read the stories and I take them as that...stories. I think any relationship within this world of BDSM must be difficult to write as there are so many small details that would not come across well in the written word.
If I hate a story , I stop reading....simple as that....
so I am still reading.
My brother lost his house as Emerald flooded. I hope your family is safe.
Thanks to everyone in fan fic who donates to the cause.
HR
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review and your support.
new chapter up in 2 weeks
michele
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I cant believe you produced this chapter with every thing that happened for you in Real Life.
I enjoyed reading it and I am angry at Charlie about the whole "Playing with Seth" story.
Thanks for the read
Author's Response:
Hey Sweetie, Thank you for your review. Lots of us are angry with Charlie, but just like Bella, she has to get rid of that anger without making Charlie feel even more guilty. Hey knows what he did, and he hates himself for hurting her like that. Do you remember when he was at Cullen Crest for Christmas and he mentioned that he had abused Bella? This is part of what he was talking about. He is even more aware than Bella of what he did to her.
Neglect is sometimes more damaging than other abuse. Don't worry HR, she is healing nicely. and so is he.
xoxo
Banner by: Anonymous
In an alternate all human universe, where society reached modern times with the equivalent to an Ancient Roman appearance and level of technology, sexual pleasure is paramount; the Cullens are a breed apart: sexual vegetarians, if you will.
Bella is an "Innocent" and so off limits for deeper sexual gratification, a role she gladly embraces, taking pleasure only in giving to those around her.
That is until she meets Edward. Suddenly her Father's insistence on her remaining an Innocent and Aro's desires to keep her for himself have become an unwelcome burden to her life. How will Bella and Edward survive their desire to be together when it is forbidden?
This story is a thinly disguised excuse for steamy lemons in the vein of a Roman orgy, yet there is also a deeper story about selfless giving and how love might just be worth waiting for...and fighting for.
Banner by: hologramGal
*WARNING* This story starts out with intense woman/woman imagery, and will depict graphic multi-partner pairings in future chapters. DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY GRAPHIC SEXUAL CONTENT OR IF YOU ARE NOT OF LEGAL AGE TO DO SO!!!
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42320 Read Count: 12030
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Introduction to Desire
Interesting story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you are enjoying!
Welcome to the Villa!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: When Worlds Collide, part I
Interesting Roman Twilight :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Welcome to the Villa!
Third part of Without You series. Please read Without You and Hurt Like This first. Aro decides he wants Bella. When the Cullens try to save her, they are faced with a decision that could tear them and Bella apart forever. What will they decide?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37792 Read Count: 1142
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath
Shocking, but good story. The Volutri are sick bastards. I feel so sorry for E & B that they have never made love yet. Everyone else has had Bella except Edward. Sick world eh.
Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The end or the beginning
Enjoing the story. I didnt think I would enjoy a Jasper + Bella one but this one has me intrigued. Thanks for sharing your talent
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The trials and tribulations of a newborn vampire
Interessting gift, but so draining for Bella. Hope she manages to learn to use it without effecting so much.
Author's Response:
She'll have practice coming up. It'll be worth it. Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Aftermath
Thanks for sharing your talent