Reviews by lilraerae021591
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

i love this story so much. it is dark but i can handle it. i can't wait till the next update.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625393
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

can't edward just hurry up and try to explain to bella what is going on. i really love this story and i don't want everyone to hate edward for what he is about to do cuz that is exactly what will happen. Carlise is such an asshole that edward needs to take care of or at least stand up and fight him. But, I really do love this story and i would just hate to see edward start all the way back at square one so I really jusy hope he can explain some how to bella about what is about to happen. I can't wait until the next update hope it comes soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i hope emmett understands and i like possessive edward but i also like seth in stories too so i hope edward doesn't hurt him or anything but can't wait to read the seattle and the halloween dance chapters and i wanna know what edward tells to emmett

Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

this is my first review2 for this story but i absolutely loved it. my favorite part is when charlie tells renee she needs to shut up or get the fuck out. i love this story and i love how edward stands up for bella. if renee has a problem with edward dating bella does she have a problem with emmett dating rosalie. does she think emmett is a pedophile too. is bella just stressed or is something wrong with her. i hope your dad is fine and i understand if you can't update. family should always come first

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

i really do hope that bella doesn't cheat. i like her and edward being together even if they do fight sometimes.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

i'm excited i also wanna know why it takes so long for jack's family to find him



Author's Response:

Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.

On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well. 


Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!

~Shel~


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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.

"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."

Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face. 

"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"

"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."

The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.    

Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

god i love this story so much. i can't wait till your next update and i understand emmett's feelings but i hope edward won't try to take jack away. maybe bella can move if she wants to. i hope your next chapter is put up reeally fast because i really want to read what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

i love this story so much and i cant wait till next friday



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."