Reviews by va monkey girl
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow!  What a roller coaster this has been.  Fabulous chapter!  Thank you for not leaving us at the shooting b/c I don't know that I could have functioned until the next update. 

The pictures really added to the chapter.

Thank you and I can't wait for the next chapter.....



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review and update will be next week as usual

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Why do I feel like it wasn't just a tree limb making the shadow?????  I may be totally off base, and they do deserve some peace, but my gut tells me otherwise.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

As far as Edward knows it was the tree...as far as peace is concerned lets just say, the weekend is coming ...and then they go away together for a few days before heading to Forks and something tells me they are going to need their strength for that ....I'll give you a tease about that weekend ((three days with Leah, Meeting Charlie, all the people from La Push then don't forget  James is there and his family)) Oh yeah - they are going to need their strength and then the beach trip afterwards to re-stengthen.

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Louise ~ you never cease to amaze me and touch my heart.  I love to glimse inside of E's mind and see how much he truly loves B; her well being is his first and most pressing concern.  I am looking forward to the next chapter to see the discussion and just what Bella is thinking.

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes to kitchen sex.  It was good, but WOW  that was HOT!

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think this chapter was well thought out and written.  The punishment would not be effective if it did not give thought to change.  Bella is looking to change her eating habits because she is not happy with the consequences of her poor habits.  Makes good sense to me.

I loved the back story on Mason and his life.  Very touching and insightful.

I just want to add that my favorite line in the chapter was the last.  That "horrid black ink" is still there in her thoughts.  If I were Bella, I think I'd spend a few hours each day soaking in the bath.  Permanent marker and no release - I'd be going crazy!



Author's Response:

...she would be in the tub, except that her tattoo is keeping her out of the water...lives a bitch some times ..thanks for reading ..lml

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Great chapter!  I think Bella dressing Edward was hot.  Dressing someone can be just as sensual and undressing.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you... I'm glad you liked it ...lml

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Such a good man ~ holding his tongue when he so desperately wanted to unleash his frustrations.

What the hell is up with Leah?  Her pregnancy hormones must be screwing up her thoughts.  She's turning into a whack job.  Can't wait to see where that's going.  I don't think I would take on Edward - Leah may be family, but Edward is her everything.



Author's Response:

Leah has some issues ...

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

As much as I liked the chapter, I loved your final advice.  Is 10 am too early to open the first bottle?  Whatever it takes to survive the day....

Happy Thanksgiving!



Author's Response:

whatever it takes ....

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Sooo unexpected!  I didn't see this coming.  I realized Jessica was up to no good, but Bella leaving was not on my radar.  Good chapter

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389603
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

I anticipate these updates more than any other fic.  I actually think my anticipation rivals that of Sir and Pet.  You absolutely did this one perfectly.  Wow, I' m going to be late for work, but I couldn't walk away without reading this before I left. 

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.......

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

So awesome!  I am just giddy.  I can't wait to see where this takes us, but I sure love where they've been so far.  I hope Edward's anger at Alice is short-lived ~ she really just gave them a little shove in the right direction.

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Happy birthday!  Somehow I feel as though I received the gift with this update.  Can't wait for the playin to get underway.....

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

If I had someone that looked like Edward at my gym, I would definately be spending more time at the Y.

 

So glad that I jumped on this train and can't wait for the ride to continue.  So Hot!



Author's Response:

We would also! Edward+Gym= lots of drooling and panting and being very hot LOL

We are also glad you jumped on the S.M.W train. I'll update chapter 2 tonight! Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate it so, so, so much. Hope to see ya next chapter... Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah ~ Bella got her "O"!!!!  I love Edward's interaction (or lack of it) with Ang ~ what a bitch.  I hope the skank catches some disease.

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hahaha...Oh bella and her O. Yeah unfortunately Ang will be around for a bit longer...Thanks xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

Totally unexpected!  I didn't see Laurent coming.  Update soon ~ I just can't get enough of this couple.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review...It means a lot...And yeah, we HAD to put laurent in there...hope u like what next :) xox DLIR and ARI

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

Ladies, you never cease to amaze me!  Awesome reconnect!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review....always makes our day to see them...xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

Elevator = hot sexin! (crazy hair & ripped clothing)

I so want these two to find some happiness.



Author's Response:

We want to see that too. *pouts and looks at DLIR* I wanna be Bella! I wanna have hot elevator sexy times!

Thank you for your review! We really, really, really appreciate it!

xoxoxoxxo Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

What a wicked web!  I actually feel badly for each of them.  Everyone so very unhappy - maybe Eric and Ang would be best together??????



Author's Response:

Oh what a tangled web we weave, When first we practice to deceive...Oh my God I've always wanted to write that in a review! LOL Thank you. I love that saying :) We think Eric and Ang would be awesome together. It's just making them see that for themselves is the problem. Thank you for your awesome review! We appreciate it, from the bottom of our hearts!

xoxoxox Ari & DLIR

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Just checking in and re-reading because I love this so.  Always hopeful that these two get the ending they deserve.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: va monkey girl Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm so glad the proposal came before the baby.  I'm also happy that she stood up for herself- not just to the assholes, but also to Edward.  It's important for her to say her piece to Charlie, and hopefully get some answers and closure.  Another great chapter- looking forward to the next....

 



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”