Reviews by Queendel
Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Misguided reality

Interesting fic but I think that  both Carlisle and Bella are betraying Edward and despite what happened between them, I think it is wrong.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

I think that Edward, after what Tayna did to him needed to thank Bella for her care and leave that life for a while to think and heal. He should not be with another domme after what that bitch Tayna did.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

Carlisle is a coward. He should stand up to Tayna. His reasons are not good enough for allowing her to do what she did to Edward.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi

Nice, update.  Both comforting and erotic.

I feel for Edward and hope that he don't let what Tayna did to him hurt him too badly emotionally. I hope he realized that he did not really love her and should not have allowed her to brutalised him like that in order to get her favour.  I also don't think that he should enter into another submissive relationship in the near future, notwithstanding, how much he might want to do so and Bella should not push him in that direction with her actions.  He needs a friend, even one with benefits and he needs to understand that safewording is not a weakness or a failure on his part.  Update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Volturri have departed and life goes on for the Cullens and the pack. Renesme is growing up and Jacob is growing deeper and deeper in love. Their love is magical, but how with the magical world respond to it. What happens when Nahuel returns to fight for his percieved destiny? And can the Volturi survive a betrayal and a parting that will ally some with the Cullens and make others forever their enemies?

 I have the best Beta- daring2believe...You rock girl!

Thank you Moonlit-Dreams for the amazing banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50993 Read Count: 2294
[Report This] Published: 26 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Epilog - Chapter 27

Very nice.  It is good for people, even different species and normally mortal enemies,  to come to respect, care and love each other and for a fic to show that.



Author's Response:

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

Very nice. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will!

Summary:

afitr

 

Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Forever part one

A really nice update.  Love the gift the kids got for Charlie. It was sweet and generous of them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99 Restored

Great update.  I love it that Edward's arm has healed nicely and that Bella is good to.  Until tomorrow.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123 Simple Question

Nice update. Funny in part as Masen seems to be more logical than Dadward in his thoughts.



Author's Response:

Dadward just has his possessive vampire hormones in overdrive right now!  lol

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96 Breastfed

Great udpate.  I think that Masen is a beautiful and awesome child.  And, yes, I think that Carlisle's treatment would work wonders to heal, repair, and strengthen Edward's arm.

Update soon.

 

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Spa

A Really nice update.  Tipsy Bella was a riot. Hope that Emmett finds out that Edward makes Bella faint.  Looking forward to their makng the twin.
update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm so sure that Rose is in for it with Emmett trying to prove he can do it to!  lol

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

Nice update. I think that since Edward and Masen understand each other.  He should explain it to his son and let him help in the decision making.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88 Complications

Nice update. Like this Jacob and how how he is supporting Edward.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the update!

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100 Morning

Great to see Edward good again. Sam was wrong. However, if he repents and admit he was wrong, he should get a second chance to try to make good on his life with Emily.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102 Consequences

Nice to see Sam finally accepting that the Cullens are different and that he should give them a chance and stop with the hatred.  I think that he is suffering and will continue to suffer for all a long time for what he did to Emily, and that may be punishment enough.

Hope Emily gets well.



Author's Response:

Good thought, I;m not sure I trust him to remain sorry without further punishment, other than Emily though . . .

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103 Reunions

Nice update.  Looking forward to Edward and Bella having a little baby girl.  A twin would be nice.

 



Author's Response:

A little girl would be nice, wouldn't it!  (NOT named Renesmee!)

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105 Spying?

 Sweet update.  It is nice to read a fic where Edward and Jacob are friends, and he is a nice person.



Author's Response:

Well, Jacob was always a nice person, he just had some harsh influences from his tribe and his own teenage  hormones!  lol

Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113 Council

Nice update. Paul is an idiot and really needed that punishment.  Jacob judgement was just and fair given that Edward, who he wounded, pardoned Sam for his action.



Author's Response:

Glad you agree!  Coming up with a fair punishment was tough, I wanted to end Sam!  lol  That, hosever, would not have been fair to Emily!

Summary:

What if Edward didn't come back?  Bella has cancer and she's looking back on her life. Alternate ending to New Moon.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 Read Count: 2249
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2011 Updated: 30 May 2011
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Poignant! Update soon.

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

Banner by the wonderful Mehek18. Check her other amazing banners on Mehek18.tumblr.com

OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Pickles and peanut butter

Nice update.  I like this Aro. I understand Edward's obsession with Bella, but he should let her go.



Author's Response:

Yay, you like Aro! He is a constant in E's life...one he needs. 

Yes, I say E needs to let Bella go too...but not before he clears things up with her. Don't worry, that'll be soon.

Thanks. ;)

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

A really nice fic.  Differernt and engaging.

The Archer by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Centauro

 

No, this is not a vampire story, but supernatural all the same. It is the tale of a princess in peril and the mythical creature who saves her. They will love each other passionately but, as it is the case with other cross species mating, it will not be easy. The time? Oh, some 2700 years ago. BTW, Kallisté and Alexios have the same meaning of Bella and Edward, in ancient Greek.

 

o65;λθε, Κp59;πρι,
Χπρυσp55;ασιν o52;ν κυλp55;κεσσιν o40;βραισ
συμμεμιγμp51;νον θαλp55;αισι νp51;κταρ
οo84;νοχp57;εισα. 

Come hither foam-born Cyprian goddess, come,
And in golden goblets pour richest nectar
All mixed in most ethereal perfection,
Thus to delight us. (Sappho)

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9744 Read Count: 1208
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

I like centaurs. Nice story.  Update soon.



Author's Response:

Much will be revealed about centaurs. Not all of them were nice, however. But this one is particularly lovable. You'll see.

Thank you very much for the review.

Summary:

Warning: Character Death

Alternate ending to New Moon. Alice and Bella couldn't save Edward, and the Volturi killed him. Bella goes to the meadow one day. Bad summary; please R&R.

Disclaimer: Stephenine Meyer owns Twilight.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1373 Read Count: 206
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 02 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Guardian Angel

Interesting.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

Good so far.  I know that times where different back then, but King Edward could have shown a bit more sympathy for his wife in her time of need, even as he told her what had to happen.

 

If Bella is a true lady in waiting, can King Edward marry her?

 

Update soon.



Author's Response:

Edward is frustrated by his lack of heir and being male he obviously feels something is wrong with Tanya if his issue can not hold in her womb. This is the seventh miscarriage Tanya has had and the plans have been in place for some time if Tanya did not produce a male heir, as she has not. Yes he could still have been kinder to her, but he's an ass.

Bella is from a noble family that is high up on the social ladder. She is unmarried and, as ladies-in-waiting during Tudor times, was a companion of the queen. Bella herself was confidant to the queen as Queen Tanya thought quite highly of her. Due to her social standing and marital status, yes King Edward can marry Bella.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, the next chapter will be up next week.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Queendel Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Good beginning.  Interesting plot. update soon.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review, i hope you're enjoying the developments!