Reviews by Stormy
Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Stormy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Enjoy the well written original plot line. A lot of good new plot ideas out there but most are terribly written and the end losing control and throwing in too many plot lines. Keep up the good work and stay focused.

Author's Response:

WOW!!! Thanks, this is my first attempt at writing so I get all warm and fuzzy when I get great reviews like your... Thanks so much... I am glad you are enjoying... I will do my very best to stay on plot.... If you see me swaying send me a swift kick to get me back on track.... hehehehe.... It's the only way I will know.... Thanks so much for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Still captivated

Author's Response:

YAY!!!! so glad.... Thanks for pushing that button

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

A review for the holidays. enjoying the tale. Was wondering when Bella would tell a about being sold. Some questions does Carlile have her inheritance
Where are the other cullens surely they all know what is going on and all are not part of the conspiracy
Have a great holiday

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart

This is one of the first storys that ihave enjoyed in avwhile. Well written and thought out. Better than other Bella Carlisle stories. You have taken great care with all of the other characters.
Hope that you do not use pregnancy as a plot device. It derails other writers including SM.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the wonderful review.  As much as I want to get to the 'good stuff' I just didn't feel right skipping over the emotions that come from losing people who are so important.

And as for the baby question...I have no plans to screw up a good story with a hybrid baby.  I agree that SM went a little off the reservation with that particular idea (but I have to concede that it did give a nice balance in the end to give Jacob his mate and explain his unhealthy bond to Bella).  That's my opinion anyway. ;)

Till next time

Nickey