Reviews by shlly
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366907
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

Well what an awesome chapter, I pretty much had tears in my the whole chapter. I get that Edward lied and I get that he broke her trust and I understand everything. But this whole thing with Emmett still ticks me off. How could he claim to be her friend and then say the things he said in the last chapter only to turn around in this chapter and say the things he said to Edward. He's a hipocrite, And Things could get really nasty for him if Bella actually ever comes clean and tells the real reason why she left Edward and tells ppl what Emmett said to her. Which at this point I really, really, really hope she does and someone slaps the shit outta Emmett and Edward and Bella move past this issue.

Looking forward to the next update.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Wow...awesome chapter

Looking forward to the next update



Author's Response:

Hopefully I will be updating this time next week. thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

WOW.. great chapter. And he doesm't even know she's pregnant yet.

DUN, DUN, DUN...looking forward to the next upate

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255043
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Awesome chapter. I like that Bella is starting to talk to him more on her own rather than him trying to drag it out her. Their relationship is growing and so is she.

I'm also getting the feeling that James is going to making an apperance here in near future..

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

She is going to have to talk to him a lot more ...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Good chapter..Good to see Edward's POV on the whole thing.

looking forward to the next update



Author's Response:

I had to do Edward's POV, the whole time I was writing Bella's he was screaming at me to tell his side..thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

 

Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

lol...awesome chapter. Hum. not sure how she is going to resond to that, but i don't she will issues.

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awesome chapter. Good to know Rose's story. Seems she would really be able to help Bella.

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

I believe they can help each other...thanks for reading I have a teaser for you...lml

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: shlly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

OOO loved the chapter. Looking forward to LRM. Charlie has a girlfriend? WOW.
Edward beating up Victor..AWESOME! LOL.
Looking forward to the next update

Author's Response:

thanks! I'm so behind responding to these reviews.

Isabella Swan by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12304
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2010 Updated: 08 Jul 2011
Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good!

I hope your going to take this further



Author's Response:

Thank you! =) 

If your worried I won't finish, don't be. I intend to be here until the end. =)

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Great story so far. Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying it!!  thank you for reading and reviewing!

I hope you like what I have planned for these two!!

xo
Jaime

Summary:

A small group of people struggle with the drama that comes before two of the friends' wedding. Secrets and lies become known at the worst of times and everyone's lives are affected. There is cheating, lies, blackmail, and all different POVs



Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16328 Read Count: 626
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: shlly Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Do, I Don't

OMG...The freaking drama. Dang! Who needs soap operas with a story like this. Great story. Loved it!

 



Author's Response:

Lol! I'm so glad you like it.

Thank you! =)

Summary:

You already know how it started. What's next for this struggling musician and the girl who claimed his heart? Continued from my oneshot, be sure to read that first. E/B, All Human. Rated NC-17 for adult themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13023 Read Count: 1183
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2015
Reviewer: shlly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: To Wish Impossible Things

I just found this and I read the o/s and then read this...I love it... I hope that you decide to write in E's POV there aren't enough authors out that do...but I love stories when it's told in his pov for that reason. Looking forward to the next update.