Reviews by knork
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625408
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Hmm, don't know if this is good or bad that he remembered...not sure if he should be telling this to Carlisle.

Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Oh, I think I chewed off all of my nails while reading this chapter. Someone please just kill Carlisle. I've never hated him more in a story. Of course just because these two have found some happiness someone out there has decided to screw with it.

Please don't let her go with the monsters!! Hope our kids make it through this.

Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

Ugh,  please tell me that Carlisle gets what is coming to him and sometime soon.

I feel awful for Bella that she is back to where she was. She and Edward were making such good progress and it was all taken away by carlisle and his cohorts.

And Esme, it's a wonder that woman is who she is with all she went through.



Author's Response:

don't worry Carlisle's justice is coming very soon.

Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh, is it freaking Carlisle there? Bet he's pissed the Demetri came to take her. Hopefully Edward, Jasper and Emmett will be able to find her before it's too late.

Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

What?? It will destroy Edward to let Bella go!! She can't leave him.

Glad Carlisle and Demetri both kicked the bucket. Carlisle really was bonkers there at the end.

Can't wait to read the Esme outtake :)

Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Damn, he had to wait 2 years for Bella?? He must really love her. I was a little nervous at first that she'd totally moved on from Edward but thank goodness she didn't. I believe that Edward truly grew to love Bella. Can't wait for the epilogue :)

Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Don't know how I missed the epi. Just came across it today. So glad they all got their happy ending :)



Author's Response:

be sure to check out my other stories as well

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251334
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: knork Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Whew, not as bad as I expected. Guess she got the message...