Reviews by bevey99
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 143999
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Danger in our Midst

Shit  I knew soemthing was going to happen.  The police in the city are plan stupid, James and Victoria should have ben caught long ago.  There should be standin arrest for the rape and attempted murder.  

You must have been trying to get this out fast.  You countradicted yourself twice.

First it was a week to Christmas then two. Then, he but the ring box back in the safe, but handed the box to Bella.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well I'm glad you are using the same author name, otherwise I'd be SOL.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Five Months Ago, Still

Great story. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Two Months Ago

xoxoxoxxx back

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Three Months Ago

alf the time I try to leave you a review, it either times out and gives an error message. And, then I can't resend it.  OR it takes several minutes. So just know I'm trying to review - if you see this.

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Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Healing

Call the f'n police.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises

"Bittersweet Symphony" makes me think of Ryan Phillipe in "Cruel Intentions". One of my fav movies and songs.

Love the update. Been waiting to party for awhile, so at least it's getting started.

Thanks for writing.

 

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: When the Shit Hits the Fan Fiction

Still lovin Edwards POV.  What's his Penname?  Can't wait to read HIS review, and see wahat happens at the picnic/cookout.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt

Yep Kismet.  Hope Ed does't wet himself.

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan

Great chapter!!  No really, great chapter.  But whereas Bella didn't infringe on his musical compositions he doesn't give a shit (or doesn't see it as) about reading her semi-private works.  Love it.  What an asshat.

Now of the "13" I was only able to identify 5, but some of the authors' pennames I almost figured out.  I propably haven't read all her favorites, but like Bella " Never Sleep" was my first and "Master of Her Universe" was the best.

Have almost caught up to everyone.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces

Okay, now really LMAO.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks

Chuckling at his internal monologue to Brenda/Alice.  Loved it.  Made me smile the whole time I was reading. BTW - female here. ;-)

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces

Nice rhyme.

Stupid North Texas storms keep knocking our internet  and dish down.  Taking me forever to read anything.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning

Seems like a "Goldilocks" moment.

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Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Perceptiions and Misperceptions

The nightstand.  Got to be all manor of condoms. Flavored, ribbed for his pleasure, for her pleasure; ect.  ;-)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff

I remember that song. Yep sorta dating myself.  Looks like I have a long way to go to catch up, but I read fast when I have the chance.  Loving the story.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life

"Really, once you got sucked into the computer it sometimes took super-human strength to pull yourself away from it."   

I'm suppose to be getting ready for work, but  NO I'm reading.  Happens 'every' day.  I've had this story in my queue for awhile and just started it.  Enjoying it so far.

Thanks for writing.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events

Too Funny... Can't wait to get to the actual bar-b-que party.  That's going to awkward and possibly epic. ;-)    Thanks for update.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

Cheese and rice - I'm laughing sooo hard I'm crying.  I'm all bruised up and don't need to be laughing at all.  I'm in pain, this is the funniest fucking chapter yet.  Emmett, love love love this Emmie.

Hope the next update comes a little sorry.  Maybe I'll be healed enough to read.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Pieces of Me, Pieces of You

Okay, we/thye made progress.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

55 chapters in and they might have sex soon.  Wow loooong foreplay much. Thanks for the update.

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place

Hahaha Eric.

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: The Second part of a First Kiss

Awe sweet, but short for you.  Still a good chappie.  Kinda meltie.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

And..... you end it there. Not fair.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

Speaking of telling or confessing, that probably won't go over very well w/Bella. EVERYONE knows her secret, that's not fair.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact

Oops, good cliffie. Thanks for the update.

Summary:

My piece for Fandom for Tsunami releif. When Bella goes with Edward to meet his long time friend, Jasper Whitlock, she finds what she least expected.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10554 Read Count: 7483
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 May 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent!!!!! Thanks for writing

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yep, it was good.  have my legs crossed & squirmming - good.

To Be Branded by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

 

Edward is a century old vampire.  He has trouble balancing his submissive and fetish tendencies with his Victorian morals.  The Cullen’s rescue him from 10 years of abuse.  Can Isabella and her ranch be the balm to ease his wounded soul?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8310 Read Count: 2107
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 14 Jul 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Tonight's the night

Really odd, but still a good read.  I guess there is all kinds of kink out there.

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36393
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

Naughty times are a cuming. I can tell.  Hot little tail. (yes I misspell on purpose.)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Yummy Mummy.

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

Pantry lovin' sweet.  Boys in the air, Momma's peeved.

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Hot hot hot.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Amazing.  And, the pics on you blog. No words. Thanks for writing.

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Naughty boy he likes giving and receiving surprises.  Now WTF, Alice knows? How? and when will we see another update?   Horrible place to leave us hanging. :-(

Playtime. by Roon1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Mistress and her slave enjoy some playtime.  

Winner of the Edward and Bella one shot award The Emerging Swan Awards

 

Thank you to the lovely AiculAiram for my wonderful banner. Check out her other banners on  http : // aiculairam . blogspot . com/ 2011/ 05 /lost – in-ocean . html

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2356 Read Count: 2775
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 21 Jul 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HOT



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Summary:

This is my erotic one shot submitted to Squeeze My Lemon writing exercise. Alice is outgoing and adventurous in her life, but her lover is not. So in order to spice things up Alice's girlfriend ventures into unknown territory to explore personal limits.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12106 Read Count: 463
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Jul 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, My Love

No reviews??  Maybe it's been hidden, but this was good.  I don't read much fem slash more slash and polyamorus than just fem.  This kind of combined the fem & poly.  Again I liked it.

Thanks for writing.

The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36651
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Seth was out back drinking, he's only 7.

Somebody loves the Hill Country.  Good thing is take place around the holidays because Enchanted Rock is really fucking hot most of the year.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you for making Bella have some balls. So glad she's not melting from just looking at him.  

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, he is a major asshat.  Good story.

Thanks for writing.

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Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Great story. Their banter kept the whole thing so real.  People really talk like that.

Glad you let them have a HEA, just wish you would have posted the Epi

 

Thank for writing.  Great job.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

This is some seriously great writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

She has to talk to him.  He need to get a job and grow up. Spoiled brat.  She was right on that count.

 

Too weird you talking about lunch at CM, I've worked for them for 4.5 years in a North Texas store.

Cougar Town by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 451]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.

Banner by vbvf1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2011 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
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Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 The Letter

Well, Esme is a little hypocrite isn't she, sneaking around w/ a younger man.

Poor Edward, thankfully Carlisle has stepped up to be the father he needs.

Thanks for the update.  And as always, thank you for writing. Wonderful story.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams

Hadn't considered he was in school undercover. Hummm....  Narc huh. When, Emmett finds out it 'ain't' gonna be pretty.  Edwards going to have think fast and use Rose has his defense.

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Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 Options

Sorry about RL/your so.  Appreciate the update even if it is a horrrific cliffie. And, you just had to try to make me cry.

Take care of yourself & family, we/I'll be waiting when you can get back.

 

BTW but I'm Team Peeta.  Have been since the first book. Just got back from movie, damn hand-held cameras make me nauseous.

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Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 The Port Motel

All I can say is "Who the fuck is this Ita chick and what the hell is she doing?"

Un-fucking-believable!!!  So sorry.

Chapter - Hummm, Emmett?? Me thinks the shit-tith will be hitting the fan. Great update.  And as a true fan, I truly appreciate you writing in this type forum for the masses.  Your writing is steller. xo Bev

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Statuses

Good update.  I just can't see this with Happy Ending.  He's gonna be hurt, and she'll probably be devestated.  Loving the story.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Half Truths

Poor baby.  Got is face kicked in and his torn torn up.  Physcially, mentally, and emotionally fucked up.

Great chapter, thanks for the update.

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Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 Letting Go

Giving me the sniffles.  In the realm of fiction there can be a HEA, but in real life she would be very lucky to not be in jail.  But the heart wants what the heart wants.  I think that's the phrase, if not, it's still true.  Thanks for updating.  Take care of You and your family. Xo

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can you say pre-mature ejaculation.  17 is a little young.

Said I was starting this tomorrow. Guess I lied.



Author's Response:

17 is a little young, but please hang with the story. It is going to be a total guilty pleasure!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Unwanted Suggestions

First - O-town sounds reallllllly fun.  I try to go there as ofter as possible.

Then Eddie is being all kinds of naughty to try to get Bells to have a reaction, IMO.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Adult Time

SHIT!

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Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Tuesday

Holy fucking hell this shit is sooo good.  And, now I've caught up to everyone.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Friday

YOU DID NOT JUST STOP THERE!!!!! shit

Went  to a Twi marathon yesterday, and BD1 was brillant.  I read one interview w/ Rob that said if they left  some parts in it would have an NC-17 rating.  Now I WANT the Directors Cut of THAT part.  Summit will never allow it. Bastards

See BD1 again today.

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Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 First Time

"Fucking" fantastic.  Always love EPOV.  So glad he remember there was another person in the room.  It blows when there are no mutual "o's". 2 weeks is an iternity, but def worth the wait.

Hate to seen the Peen go, funniest story out there.

Thanks for writing.

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Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out

Had to come out. Thx for the update 

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Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings

Excited to see the update. And, you didn't disappoint. But, Grrrr, a damn cliffie at the worst moment.  You're killing me.

Love the story, love your writing.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Date Night

Thanks for the update.  Loving this story 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances

Way to fight dirty Edward - you go sweetie!

Good chapter, thanks for the update.

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Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting

I believe there about to be lots of hot sex ahead.  I still think Ed's only sixteen in all excellerated classes and jumped a grade.

LOVE this story.  Love your writing.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving

I say this every review - I LOVE THIS STORY.  Great update.  Alcohol just made her tongue looser, it was something she already knew.  Don't think he'll be freaked by it, pretty sure he's head over heels for too.

Thanks for writing. xo

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Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 False Explanations

So he's 17, in some states that is an adult.  Not in mine, but in some.  For freaking sake it's just a story. FICTION people, FICTION.

Smmiskimen, so sorry.  This really pisses me off.  You're are an amazing writer with some great stories.  I'll read anything you write.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

Wonderful chapter.  Hate to see it end, but all good things must.  Which I think who ever coined that phrased must have been very sad.  

Thanks for updating.

 

How sad for little Cayden to be miserable for so long. Much love out here to you and your family. Take care.

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Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 Rekindling Love

LOVED IT FROM BEGINNING TO END!!  Thank you so much for writing, you do have a gift.  I would love to write and have tried but nothing I do pleases me - so why would it appeal to anyone else.

Good luck w/ our originals and other plot bunnies.  Following the Prez, religiously.

I continue to pray for you and yours. Glad the baby is doing better.

Thanks and xo Bev

Sex Machine by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

In the year 2029, bio-mechanical engineer, Bella Swan, has created the perfect machine for Whitlock Robotics. Masen can be anyone or anything you desire... but who does Bella want her Masen to be?

 

This is a O/S

 

B/E M for Lemons/Language

 

Banner made by the fabulous Time_Lights

 

Special Thanks to Carsen Choi!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9105 Read Count: 4482
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Machine

I loved this!  It was sooooo good.   As in really really good.  You should take this out for another ride.

Thanks for writing.

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

Banner done by Christine: 

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www.christagbanners.blogspot.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I've just decided YOUR the one that's 'selfish', leaving the story right here. Damn

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I wondered how you could be soo prolific, now I know.  But you say alot with so few words I'm still reading because I'm very intrigued.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Get drunk and fuck something.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well holy shit on a stick.  Great twist.  And, jeez Alice what a skank.

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

You sound like you've been sleeping with MY husband, and only sleeping - on his part.

Love the story.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

She's feeling this bad, when she almost attacked Jasper at the playground.  Some sort of double standard.  Don't care if he is her best friend.  She almost slipped into BF w/ bennies.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Loved BD1,saw it twice opening weekend. hate the soundtrack.

This"drabble" still rocks with just the right amount of info.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Again w/ the stopping mid everything.  Grrrrrr

Happy T-day to all.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Jump Bella Jump!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Huh..... was this her seduction?

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Guess he lost interest.  Looks like she made a full circle.  Find someone else if just to wake him the fuck up. Maybe cum a little in the meantime.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yes, obviously.  So Jasper and Peter - Item - yes/no???????

Summary:

Nerdy, studious Bella has a boyfriend... but nobody believes her.  They  all think she made him up, and give her hell for it.  Then, Edward is made aware of the situation...

Inspired by the song "Landing in London" by 3 Doors Down


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8222 Read Count: 3406
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of my top 5 3DD songs, and that saying something - huge fan.

Sweet!

Summary:

This is a sort of follow up/sequel to Confessions of an Overworked, Underpaid Peen. This will be little one shots of snippets of his life, little happenings, and such. EPPov AH, OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11811 Read Count: 9265
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Engaged Peen

Mwah, such a good peen.  Love me some Rod, and would love to love me some Rodward.

Most excellant, as ever.

Summary:

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To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35421
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Enough is Enough...

Good story,  Thanks for writing.. Always like reading about different kink.

Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 8286
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Renee is more of a coniving, manipulative C..t, than bitch.  JMTC

Great update.  Happy he asked before they left his apartment.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Renee is defiately everything you said. Hard to believe a mother could do that to her daughter.  Yeah he knew he had to ask before they confronted Renee.

Chapter 5 will post on Friday. Until then here is a teaser to get ya through the wait.   Thanks so much for reading. EA

 

It had completely baffled and amazed me how fast Alice, Esme, Rose and I had been able to pull together all the details for my and Edward’s wedding. It had only taken us three weeks to pull it all together. 

Our first task had been to reserve the View Point Inn and the second had been to find my dress. Alice had said that once those two things were accomplished the rest would fall into place. Of course she had been right and after scouring several online sites, looking through every page of every Bride’s magazine Alice could get her hands on and spending a weekend in Seattle combing every bridal shop there was, we had done it. I had my dress and had known it was the one the instant I’d seen it.

There had been a few bittersweet moments along the way though. We had all gone to Seattle on the excursion to find my gown and the bridesmaid dresses. While Alice, Rose, Esme and me had gone shopping for the gowns, the men had gotten fitted for their tuxes and had gone to the college football game at U-Dub.  But when Alice and Esme talked about some of the experiences they’d had while shopping for Alice’s wedding gown, I couldn’t help wishing things were different between my mother and me. I couldn’t help thinking that she should be there with me, helping me choose my dress and taking part in all of the planning of my wedding.  And I couldn’t help but wish that I could at least know that she was happy for Edward and me.

For the most part I had not let what she’d done interfere at all in my life. I was so very, very happy with Edward and I loved him so much.

However there were just times like now, when I was contemplating on whether or not I should send her an invitation that I couldn’t deny how much it hurt. She was my mother and was supposed to be happy for me.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really, what the hell is going on w/ Renee now???

I see the polyvor has some Raybans.  ;-)



Author's Response:

Hi,

 

LOL yes polyvore has some raybans. :) So glad you liked the chapter. I promise all your questions as to what Renee is up to will be answered soon. As a special Christmas treat, here is a teaser for chapter 4.

 

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Before I’d even had a chance to turn off my truck, Bella was jumping out as soon as it had come to a stop in the driveway. There was a big moving truck with a ramp leading from the back of it to the porch for easy loading.

 

Bella in her anger marched right up to the two guys who were loading a big piece of furniture onto the truck. “You can stop right where you are with that and don’t you remove another thing from that house until I say so.”

 

The man replied, “Ma’am, I’m sorry but I was hired by the owner of the home to empty this place out.”

 

“Well, Chad,” Bella said as she poked the name patch sewn onto the front of his shirt. “That’s impossible because I am the owner.” 

 

I wanted to laugh at the look of pure confusion that spread across the guy’s face. He looked like he was about to shit his pants.  And Bella…well…she was furious. She reminded me of the kitten Alice had had when we were kids. Every time it got spooked or irritated its back would arch and its tail fur would poof out and look like it had been electrocuted.

 

However Chad being much taller than Bella must have thought he could manhandle her and grabbed her arm as if he were going to pull her out of his way.

No one touches my girl but me. I was instantly at Bella’s side and had Chad’s other arm in my hand and twisted up behind his back.

 

“Take your hand off the lady now. That is unless you want this arm broken,” I ordered him while giving his arm another small twist.

 

“Hey, John, you need to call the cops. We got a situation out here,” Chad called.

 

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Thanks for reading. See you on Thursday with chapter 4.

EA

 

Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 225243
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Thanks for the update.  You should be enjoying your holiday, not writing more for all of us 'greedy' reading sluts.

But, thanks for writing, and happy holidays.  Have to go cook now.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yummmm.....

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I know this is a drabble, but even at that it's short.

And, I love most of your writing.



Author's Response:

It seems short, but a true drabble, which I am writing, is 100 word chapters. There are a lot of stories being posted calling themselves drabbles, but they are not. If the story has 1,000+ word chapters, it's not a drabble but a full length story that the author is just trying to call a drabble.

Here is the definition of a drabble.

A drabble is an extremely short work of fiction of exactly one hundred words in length, although the term is often erroneously used to indicate a short story of fewer than 1000 words.The purpose of the drabble is brevity, testing the author's ability to express interesting and meaningful ideas in an extremely confined space.

 

There will be 1-2 updates a day if that makes it easier, but if you think it's too short to read as it's going on I understand. Drabbles are not for everyone.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awe, I hope so.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, how you do that???

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oooo, I hope so.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Being a good pet.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Getting hotter and hotter.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Her collar.

Glad to see tender aftercare.  He's a little brutal, but she must love it & him to stay.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Bravo, nice finishing touch.

Love your work, and thanks for writing.

Eternally Gifted by Alley Cat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

He gently pulled me down the bed, bringing my legs over his shoulders. He kneeled, and a moment later, I felt those wonderful fingers of his spread me for him in slow passes. It was a play on my fantasy, and I didn't hold in the cry of pleasure when I felt his mouth-slightly chilly-touch my most sensitive spot. I felt myself arch, and my hands grabbed his head, holding on to the silk strands of his hair as he began licking and lapping and driving me completely beyond reasonable thought.

A little plot, a lot of lemon.

Eternally Gifted


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8601 Read Count: 3564
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 14 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 12 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Eternally Gifted

Very tasteful, scensual erotica.  Slow burn very good.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 12 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Eternally Gifted

Very tasteful, scensual erotica.  Slow burn very good.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Eternally Gifted

Very tasteful, scensual erotica.  Slow burn very good.

Sinful by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

As the end times approach the battle for souls on earth begins, so many people have yet to choose sides.

 Heaven and Hell have opened the gates and let loose the best they have to offer, the gates closed and

nothing may re-enter until the battle is won, unless, that is, you perish.

Amazing banner by; My husband

Fantastic beta's js18 and RAH07890- who also Americanises this story

This story will contain lemons...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25453 Read Count: 12625
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

"WTF?"

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Close Encounters

Wow, she really has a temper.  I thought I was the f-bomb queen, but I can turn them off around my mother  and IMO she's on the same level of respect as the president.  Seriously does she want to go to jail?

Of course there had to be a kiss, but whether he thought it was consenual or not this is sexual harassment.

Loving the story.  Pinned it to my Fanfic board over on Pinterest, so there might be a couple new readers following this soon.

Thanks for the update.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Home Again

Damn, damn, damn.  You sure you're not carrying over some of 'Master My I', with this slow torture.

Storage room sexing - hot hot hot. Damn Prez licking your fingers-naughty.

Love the update.  I 've been rec'ing this on Pinterest, along w/ 'Hear Me'. I think I have at least 3 other people reading.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements

And, the mystery gets bigger. LOVE IT.  I'm really good at mysteries, but I'll say right now I'm clueless.   Don't give away to much. Keep us all guessing.

Thanks for the update. Waiting on the next. xo