Reviews by cofey
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Volturi Order

glad u've updated and really into this fic .. but prob with twcs site .. all weekend couldnt access it and now have received 11 notifications of this fic update

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

really I didn't have any problems how weird.. I'll look into it :( xxx

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625084
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

OMG carlisle is such a bastard!!! can he stop the wedding???  bella is still underage and now under carlisle and esmee's control legally ... how will edward react .. shit .. i really need u to update soon coz i need to know what's going to happen

surely edward and the rest of the family wont let carlisle send her away!!!

i have really become addicted to your fic .. it was recommended by southernlady23 and as usual she was spot on!!!!

thanks and looking forward to updates

xoxo ety

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

as controlling n stalkerish that his behaviour and actions are, somewhere in there i feel are the best of intentions .. he seems to have really fallen for bella and in an attempt to keep her safe has crossed the line.  difficult to know how he couldve done it better and still kept her safe.  perhaps he shldve introduced himself so that she couldve gotten to know him a bit.  his actions seem a bit extreme but he seems to have developed this trait for a reason.

hugs

ety

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

gees i'm surprised that she forgave seth so easily after saying that trust is the most important thing and he broke that .. he could've killed them all ... cant wait to see edward and bella together ...

hugs ety



Author's Response:

She forgave him b/c friends do that even when friends act stupid. They have been best friends since diapers, Bella is so soft hearted that she couldn't not forgive him. if that makes sense lol. But forgivng someone doesn't mean trust is in tact. That will take time. I believe that will be something that Edward may have issue with...perhaps ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG talk about cave man .. so edward somehow convinces himself that he can see anyone and do anything he likes .. i can just imagine if the sit'n was reversed and bella feared she was pregnant by someone else after having drunken unprotected sex .... bet edward wld freak ... so he is afraid he'll lose her if he lets her go but cant see her right to b upset or angry enuf to leave ... as she said he freaks every time she even talks to her male friends

talk about dbl standards .. he stalked her on facebook when he realised she was emmetts sister yet now he's upset coz she's been stalking him ....

so what will bella do ... does she love him enuf to stick with him .. i think she does and as she said, he didnt technically cheat on her coz he didnt know who she was or how to contact her ... hopefully tanya isnt pregnant .. long way to come just to take a pregnancy test .. perhaps she is angling for a relationship???

looking 4wd to ur updates

hugs ety

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

if tanya is pregnant edward and bella need her to do a paternity test .. sounds like tanya sleeps around and who knows who the father is and how many guys she is scamming ...prob is dont u have to wait till child is born to do paternity test .. if so the waiting can b very wearing on bella and edward .. tho technically they werent together yet so edward wasnt cheating its still a big elephant in the room so to spk .. can they recover from this?????????

eager 4 ur update

hugs ety



Author's Response:

I think, no matter what happens in a relationship if two ppl care about each other enough, anything is workable. On that note, All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

now that's definitely a cliffy .. hope u dont hold out on us for too long ...

ety

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WTF did tanya think wld happpen when they found out she wasnt pregnant ... gutsy or more likely plain stupid to let it go this far .. talk about busted ...

sooner than even thought about but at least bella has edward .. he has been committed to them as a couple since the beginning for forever .. not going to be easy telling parents .. emmett's reaction is sure to be priceless

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

hi

hope everything is ok ... seems like ages since u last updated this fic

xoxo ety

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

tho not unexpected I was pleasantly relieved that bella, edward and the baby were ok .. cant wait to see their reactions to the birth esp edwards .. it'll prob b close to his reaction when he sees bella in her wedding dress

renee is def a handful and prob best in small doses .. so opposite to bellas calm non attention seeking way.

love all the characters and glad no angsty scenes b/w jake, bella and edward

thanks for sharing so far and looking 4wd to the rest of ur fic

xoxo ety

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161902
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

such insight into bella's pain .. and its so true that most ppl dont know how to deal with not only their own pain, but the pain of others .. inc teachers .. if only part of their education was to learn how to deal with abuse and to know when to refer students on to specialists ...

thanks for sharing

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

I agree. More teachers need to be trained on how to deal with abuse.

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

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Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Slip of the Tongue

the site is not loading the new chapter updates for any of the fics .. do u know whats going on???

ety



Author's Response:

site glitch...I'm working on re-uploading them now!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123450
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

OMG!!!!!!!! i loved ur fic .. the storyline; the characters; ur style -- i felt like i was there with them and part of their lives ... u made them real .... and i'm still crying over the senseless death of bella and how broken edward was ... thank u for having edward and bella together again even tho in another dimension/afterlife

i'm also not a major fan of esme so i was interested to see her alienated by her own behaviour ... serves her right ... what sort of mother was she that she could sacrifice her son's happiness in an attempt to hide her past -- yes she had a breakdown but her lies led to so much suffering ... i'm not sure if her breakdown was due to her guilt, her lies, her fear of exposure or her inability to control the situation; or a combination of everything - either way glad she had minimal influence on edward/bella and edward/bella/kids

also glad that alice, the control freak everything has to go her way pixie didnt manage to interfere in edward/bella's relationship

upset that this fic is complete but lookng 4wd to reading more of ur work

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

Bella goes out for a girl's night out and ends up having a one night stand.

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Thank you to mkystich for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2526 Read Count: 1136
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aw come on .. u dont really mean to leave it there do u??? pls continue ... gr8er story in the making ... u've set the scene but there are so many unanswered ?s like where was his wife, how will bella react to hearing that he's married, how will the wife react to hearing that he is about to become a father??? is the marriage already experiencing difficulties .. that why he was drinking by himself in the bar ... did she not want to move to forks???? will bella end up with edward??? they obviously have chemistry

 

PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS FIC

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

Now that's what u call EMBARRASSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

 I wish I could say that will be the only such moment....I hope you enjoy the story.

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

it seems that edward and the cullens have lived their time in a bubble seemingly unaware of different sexual preferences ... perhaps they shld read some fanfic ... lol



Author's Response:

I agree...fanfic is educational for us all! lol

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

does bella ever stop to consider how edward feels .. how she would feel if the situation was reversed .. how much she is hurting him emotionally and making him feel rejected?????



Author's Response:

C:  That damn Bella!  Maybe we will get some more insight in next chapter. 

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Epilogue

wow .. just finished reading ur fic .. absolutely brilliant ... loved the snarky humour, the storyline and how u made each character come to life .. the nudist colony and edward's 'thoughts' were hilarious not to take away from the relationship edward and emmett share

cant wait to read another of ur fics

thanx for sharing

xoxo ety

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254888
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

so is it james or felix who's 'watching' and i'm actually worried about what will happen when he makes a 'move' and prob tries to kidnap or harm bella

 

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

hmmm... I want to answer your question soooo bad, but...ugh!...sorry I can't give anyway any information, my beta would kill me if I told you what was going to happen and not her...lol...I will be nice and tell you this, there are several people who have been nasty towards Bella (and they all have their reasons for it it's a matter of what the what the reason is... ) ..ok that is all I can say....(and that was probally too much, if M gets mad at me, I'm blaming you for asking...lol) ...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wow ... ur fic is brilliant ... so well written and the storyline is so real ... my heart breaks for bella and not only for how much she has suffered but also for how is still and prob always will, affect her ... i love the edward/bella coupling and tho it took 22 chapters for edward to finally admit that he loves her, i'm glad that he did ... he constantly wonders what she's thinking and wants her to be completely honest with him yet he held back himself ....

i cant help but feel that james is about to make an appearance ... the dog's collar, someone watching bella's house, bella not always answering her phone  ...it feels imminent and it makes me nervous for them ...

i also dont understand how bella copes with the blindfold ... her fear of the dark and small dark places makes me wonder how she doesnt freak out when edward blindfolds her .. even tho she trusts and loves him, i thought it'd take much longer and need to be introduced in increments for her to be able to tolerate the blindfold .. is that why she had those nightmares that night he blindfolded her??? did it subconsciously trigger her memories??? and considering how expressive her eyes are, i expected edward to need to guage her mental state by being able to see her eyes??????????

anyway i'm hooked on ur fic and love the banter esp the bella/leah/jacob relationship ..

cant wait for more

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

I'm going to use your blindfold question for the OT, if you don't mind....thanks for reading ...lml

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Diamond in the Rough

i think i understand edwards reasoning ... omg .. so strong willed .. it must've been killing him to punish her and i dont know how he did it ... bella def seems 2 b remorseful so perhaps she will get her diet balanced and appropriate and also make sure she answers her phone from now on ... still broke my heart

xoxo ety

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

hi

tho i understand aro/jane's relationship i hope that bella and edward dont enter into an identical relationship ... i can see that bella needs edward to be strong and steadfast and that she finds security in his dominance but i also feel that i like them also on more of an equal footing .. ie part time d/s and part time just 2 ppl in love

considering bella's traumatic histroy and her exposure to real life d/s lifestyle, i do feel that edward was a bit harsh with all the punishments at once - i hope that she writes all of thses thoughts/feelings/insecurities she experiences in her journal so that edward can really see what bella is going through and also so that he wont punish her again but retreating from her .. he will know and understand her need to sleep with him - not only sexually but moreso emotionally supportive

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

No fear, E & B will ot be going TPE (total power exchange ) 24/7. Bella is keeping up with her journal, it just hasn't been posted yet...Thanks for reading and  leaving a comment...lml

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

thanks for that teaser - sort of - now i really cant wait ... wonder who it is and also, how long it'll take for bella to confess all to edward ... tho he is sort of guilt tripping her .. mind u she needs it to b able to let go of her past and make a real future with edward .. does she realise how much he loves her???? i wonder what it'll take for her to realise???

cant stop thinking about ur fic ... and i know that when u update i'll just b left hanging for another update ... so pls hurry .. lol

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

Your welcome, I'm glad you like the story ..update will be monday, OT should be up tomorrow morning...lml

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

and how is asking permission to use the bthrm not going to b offensive to alice n jasper .. its so demeaning; and if she cant call him master, sir or edward what is she sposed to do????? seems he almost wants her too slip so he can punish her more

great chapter .. cant wait to see how their weekend goes

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

You will see how she does it, but to answer your question, she won't call him anything....and he will explain about the bathroom thing ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

i hope that edward listens to what bella has to say, but also understands that her reluctance to tell him her whole story stems from her lack of confidence in herelf rather than her lack of confidence in him .. she just sees herself as unworthy of being loved because she blames herself for the abuse she has suffered ... hopefully edward will help her forgive herself for her what happened to her and help her direct the blame where it really belongs ... she wasnt a willing participant to james' sick and disgusting behaviour .. she was and still is a victim

i wonder if bella will tell edward about her confrontation with tanya????? or will tanya purposefully mention something that will upset edward coz bella didnt confide in him yet again???? and will tanya's words make it harder 4 bella to confess 2 edward coz it plays on her fears of being unworthy of edward and that once he knows she thinks/fears he'll leave her???

i thought it was one of her stalkers who punctured her tyre .. but how did they get into the garage .. her car was inside the garage ??? or was it in the driveway?? and why do that anyway .. what did her stalker expect 2 achieve by causing the flat tyre??

once again, i was so excited to read ur update that i now feel depressed thinking about how long i have to wait 4 ur next update :(

xoxo ety 



Author's Response:

You will see what happened with the tire... I could just tell you but where would the fun be in reading it then ...lol

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

loving ur fic .. the way u write and ur storyline have me totally enthralled and 'invested' in ur charactters

i'm glad edward didnt get his back up with her irrational behaviour in the morning .. even tho it was obvious that she was reacting to other pressures and that the issue wasnt edward it would've been easy to react and for them to fight ... impressive how edward handled her breakdown and interesting to see what happens next

leah's reactions seem a little strange

and is there any way to ensure that no one gets access to bella's med records ... if they get out and are posted on eg the internet/ gossip site/ club site it would destroy bella .. she has a hard enuf time dealing with it as is and i dont think she could cope if she knew others knew

looking 4wd to ur next update

xoxo ety 



Author's Response:

Leah has some issues and since Edward is my perfect man he saw  Bella's melt down for what it was...just remember he is still a man...lml

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

looks like edward needs to spk to aro ... by not being the dom that he really is, he is letting bella down .. she needs him to be the same with her esp after she confided in him .. by him treating her differently now it consolidates her feelings of inadequacy and lack of self worth .... surely edward can distinguish b/w the bdsm relationship  and the abuse she received at jame's hands ... aftercare has always been a major part of their 'usuals' and look at how james left bella .. physically and emotionally broken .. if edward isnt careful he will push bella over the edge and not only lose her but destroy her

cant wait for ur next update

xoxo

ety

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

they def made it thru their personal hurricane but still the issue of who is after bella ... relieved that they r bac on track but worried 4 their saftey.. really enjoying ur fic .. thanx 4 sharing

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

I think that it is hurricane season and somewhere out there another obne is brewing ....

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

nice to see some non angst ridden time in their lives

what's leah's prob .. shldnt she b happy that bella is happy???

if the sit'n had been reversed and bella hadnt put their upcoming dinner on the calender nor had she mentioned it till then wld edward have 'punished' her?????

also wondering why bella leaving changing the codes on her house till later is relevant ... does someone know her codes???

looking 4wd to their time away

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

They need some non-angst ... sometime to just...be .,..I think if she didn't put an item on the calendar he wouldn't have punished her but there would have been reprocussions...I know it's a double standard, but such is the life in a D/s relationship...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

hi

hoping ur well and everything is ok ... pls update soon

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

hi

dont wanna hassle u but letting u know that i and i'm sure many others are out here desp waiting for more

xo

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

surprised they'd go 2 a counsellor who takes notes ... aside from becoming legal docs which have been known to end up in court ... once in writing can become an embarrassment if end up in the wrong hands

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

hi

any chance of finishing this fic ... wd really appreciate it

xo

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

shame that em reacted so badly ... if he stops to think about it, he would realise that tho they'd all been raised together for the last 8 yrs or so, edward and bella are not blood related and there is no reason for them to b miserable and alone when they love each other so much ... as lovers rather than as siblings

em prob feels a bit betrayed coz left out of the loop and illogically thinks of edward as a real sibling rather than as a step bro .. i wonder if he'll b able to emotionally stand back and really try to understand edward and bella's love for each other ... like his love for rose???

looking 4wd with dread to telling the parents ... hope bella and edward remain strong and united against the naysayers

xoxo ety

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

loved this fic and was sad that they hadnt had more kids ... wldve also enjoyed reading more of their yrs together ... bella being the spitfire that she is was sure to have caused, whether intentionally or not, a variety of interesting episodes -- dont understand why edward still being held responsible for 'self defense' act of shooting james and isnt riley his heir and hence their home/estate in england is his to claim .. why wld victoria and riley have stayed with the cullens all this time ... and considering the number of witnesses that must've been available surely they'd want to clear edwards name .. just in case he felt the need to return to england eg as his parents age ....

looking 4wd to reading ur new fic

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i get that alice and jasper wanna get married asap but its really not fair to edward and bella to do it at their engagement party .. ed and bella wldnt complain but its just tacky .. how wld alice feel in reverse?????



Author's Response:

i promise it wont turn out tacky...you will have to wait and see :)

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141812
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

wow absolutely loved ur fic ... well proportioned amt of angst, anger, hot sex, humour, and storyline

thanks for sharing

xoxo ety

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

i take it he doesnt realise its bella ... wonder how long it'll take for them to realise who each other are and i expect it to be explosive ... in more ways than one ... cant wait

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it.. I promise to reveal a little piece of the mystery tomorrow...


Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

wow talk about playing w fire ... have a bad feeling that this will blow up in edward's face ... paying attention to ang is good to make bella jealous buttoo much will prob push bella away

cant wait 4 more .. thanks 4 sharing ur fic

xoxo ety



Author's Response:

Your so very welcome! Thank you for reviewing. Yeah I have kinda a bad feeling about this also. :)  DLIR is getting her chapter beta'ed now. Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3 Ari & DLIR

Summary: Past Featured Story

One day in gym class, Forks High learns that Bella Swan can kick. The football team needs a kicker.

The result of that: Bella makes the football team.

The problem: None of the guys want a girl on their team.

 

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74692 Read Count: 22155
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Not Giving Up

i'm still disappointed that edward actually walked away when bella got tied up and that he didnt hang around and come to untie her .. what a shit .. even tho he called em and jasper why didnt he go himself ... i hope that carlisle tells edward just how badly bella was hurt and also about the 'collar' .. what sort of a friend let alone friend with 'feelings' for her would allow that to happen???

coz i love them together, i hope that edward does something to redeem himself and that they do get together as more than boyfriend/girlfriend

xoxo

looking 4wd to more of ur fic

That Derby Fic by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward is dragged unwillingly to witness his first roller derby bout when his little sister Alice joins the league.  He's uncomfortable in the dense crowd until a star rollergirl takes notice of him and he's positive he just lost his heart. 1st person EPOV.

Lemony AH oneshot written originally for Hev99 for general awesomeness.  Title comes from some late-night IM razzing from college buddies ;-) 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12115 Read Count: 1456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg loved this fic ... impressed by strong bella who knows what she wants and knows how to get it ... and the way u wrote this fic .. could totally relate to each of the characters ...

thanx for sharing xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I love kick-ass Bella, she's so much fun to write.

Summary: Past Featured Story

love

Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?

 

Warning:  at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?

 

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

wow so what now .. she still loves him but is understandably really angry ... and why does he think she cldve or shdve contacted him about their ron esp coz he said it'd b like he never existed .. and why didnt anyone ever check on how bella was doing or even check in w ben re the house he built them???? where has he/the cullens been all this time??? and more importantly where did edward go and what was in the note he left mason .. if i was bella i wouldnt let the cullens in easily despite the benefits it wd b to mason .. how can she trust any ot them ever again .. esp edward who didnt come looking for her but was still avoiding her ....

and why did her calls and email go unanswered???? surely they wldve checked them at some stage esp their phones .. cant imagine that they'd all get new numbers and be totally unreachable

looking 4wd to more

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

personally i think edward needs to do some major grovelling and i agree w bella that i wldnt want t c the cullens either ... they claimed to love her as a daughter but abandoned her w/out a word .. edward is difff .. father of her baby and when she will have time to process what he said she'll realise thats part of him ie making decisions w/out consulting her; thinking he's doing best for all by self sacrfice ... and perhaps mason can look into edwards mind and show bellla how he suffered since he left her/them

i still cant understand how edward cld accuse her of not trying to contact any of them - what did he mean how cld she have made contact??? and why go all the way to forks rather than an internet cafe and cldnt he access his emails on his phone????



Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughts. the reunion of the bella and edward will be a family event that is for sure. as for the phone and email. He needed to be close to her. He knew she ahd lived there for a year. He also needed to get the entire family together in one place. It was just safer.

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 143999
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Five Months Ago

being a total edward/bella fan i'd love to c them get together and suport each other as they battle their demons.

bella is apparentlly angry at edward coz he reminds her of jake ... a manwhore .. but is bella any better ... she judges edward on his behaviour with angela but puts not accountability on angela ... bella is all over emmet and it seems to b friends w benefits ....

i hope bella opens up to edward at least a little when they have this talk

and the silent partner ... edwards parents?????

Sugar Cookies by Emmamama88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Opposites attract, and sometimes crash into each other, literally. Come along and experience a little 'Christmas magic' with our favorite couple. This story has been expanded from the original holiday One-shot. All-human, cause that's all I write.



Thanks to Coleen561 for the great banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50299 Read Count: 14692
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Christmas - Eight Years Later

thnx .. really enjoyed ur work and the love u see and express b/w edward and bella .. and their adorable kids - the whole family dynamic

Elf on Holiday by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Four months have passed since Elf met her Sir and they returned to England. That time has been spent training and preparing her for the next leg in her BDSM journey, which happens now, in the Chelsea Gardens in London. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5043 Read Count: 3296
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just reread ur elf and elf on holiday and loved them .. hoping u will finish this fic 

xo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

Banner for my story

AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Warm, Golden, Perfect

hi hoping u plan to continue 

xo



Author's Response:

I'm working on my stories this weekend.  Keep your fingers crossed!

 

Thanks for checking in.

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39594
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

wow .. absolutely loved ur fic .. a strong and opinionated bella/isabella .. fantastic and thankfully they got together despite edwards broodiness .. thank god he finally realised how he'd been manipulated and followed his heart and his brain ...

loved that u made alice, esmee and the rest of the cullens as u did ... i always resented how they obliged and left bella w/out a word ...

looking forward to more of ur work

xo



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words! It's readers like you that make authors like me motivated enough to continue doing what we're doing :-D

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well that was obvious ... why ddnt either edward or bella explain that jacob was threatening and bella shdve been dropped at school not take the bus considering the situation ... stupid

Summary:

 

What if not all vampires were supernaturally perfect?  If a human is supposed to bring many of their human traits into their vampire existences, then could the magic that creates a vampire cause that vampire to stay true to themselves. This is the story of Bella Swan Cullen - a newborn vampire that is imperfectly perfect. 

AU; canon characters. Edward and Bella. Rated T.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10692 Read Count: 487
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2013 Updated: 05 Aug 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - There's something about Bella

hi

how opportune .. i'm travelling to NYC in a couple of weeks and ur travel diary was very helpful .. if anyone responds to ur queries pls fwd the info .. it'd b a great help

xo and enjoy ur trip

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130198
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

no chapter 6???

xo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285576
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 virgin margarita

Enjoying ur fic and really want to know who it is that she's living with .. at first i thought she had a sibling that renee and phil had b4 they died but not sure now ... why would rose have to stay with the person ... disabled in some way?? looking forward to ur next updates

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours

wow .. well written and captivating storyline ... cant wait to see how edward handles tanya and also how he gets together with bella .. hope it doesnt take too long

xo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Detectives Edward, Emmett and Jasper are on the case of a serial killer roaming the U-Dub campus. With their sisters on campus, can they keep them safe and do their jobs effectively? What happens when feelings begin to change for Edward and Jasper? Will they be too late to save the girls they love? And who is that Killer in the Shadows? AH, canon couples.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26659 Read Count: 45594
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

wow .. that was some beginning .. caught me hook line and sinker but now i need more

xo



Author's Response:

I hope that it keeps you for the duration. Here is a little tidbit...

Liz

Chapter 1 Teaser

Jasper sat down and listened while his parents told him that he was gonna be a big brother in about five months. He had noticed that his mom had been getting sick a lot lately and that she seemed to have been getting a little chubbier, but he hadn’t thought anything of it. Now he understood why.

Next door, the Cullen twins were hearing similar news, only Esme wasn’t due for another six months.

“Mom! That’s gross!” Emmett yelled.

“Emmett Matthew Cullen! Don’t talk to your mother like that!” Carlisle roared.

“Mom?” Edward asked. “Are we going to have a sister or a brother?”

Edward had always been the more loving and gentle of the twins, while Emmett was the larger and more boisterous one.

Esme smiled gently at her son, “Its a little girl. We haven’t decided what to name her yet and we’re hoping that you two will help us with that.”

Dutch by nikkirocsurworld Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

A fluffy love story of two childhood friends. All EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13940 Read Count: 8229
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Age 27

seriously a beautiful heartwarming insightful fic ... love it even tho edward puts himself down a little too much ... they complete each other why cant he see that and accept that his quirks arent a prob

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Age 8

sooooooooooooooooooo sweet and sad ... cant wait for more ...

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Age 34

so i've just reread ur fic and love the whole thing ... ur characters, their lives and how they interact with one another .. hoping u plan to continue

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Age 37

i love the heartfelt emotions u manage to bring to this fic .. it feels so real and ideal

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Age 38 BPOV

been so long will prob have to reread but def glad ur back

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23448
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Isadora Meet Isabella

looks like u have a gr8 plot here .. cant wait to see what happens next ... how will bella manage in her new life and will she ever confess to edward?????

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

omg i love this fic ... so much potential ... cant wait to see how bella manages and how long b4 edward realises ...

Summary:

 

Bella slips from her husband in the middle of the night escaping the grasp of her abusive husband and father. Fearing she will never escape the long arms of the law, Isabella does everything in her power to get as far away as possible. With a little help along her way, Isabella finally finds the heaven and the life she always wanted.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5369 Read Count: 1375
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2013 Updated: 17 Sep 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Escaping Hell

so how did alice know bella's real name???

fic looks like its off to a good start .. cant wait for more xo

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

missed u .. gr8 chapter .. eager for more .. hopefully edward gets rid of tanya permanently ..

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

stay strong and dont let the bullies get to u ... write what u want how u want and if they dont like it they dont have to read it .. i for one like ur work and look forward to updates

xo

ABC Outtakes by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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These are outtakes from various points of Anything but Conventional and Don't Ever Forget.

*Previously posted on fanfiction.net and twilighted.net


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15700 Read Count: 1306
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 08 Oct 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Extra Scene from DEF Chapter 25 - Daddy Duty

hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank u

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set from Season 2 after Sookie watches Godric meet the sun she goes to Eric to comfort him. Bill doesn’t like this. At first Sookie and Eric will be friends but soon they will become so much more.

 

This is my first story. All mistakes are mine.

All characters belong to Charlaine Harris, Alan Ball, HBO, etc.

I own nothing.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75043 Read Count: 10503
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2013
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow .. thank u soooooo much .. i absolutely loved ur fic and ur little twists on the SVM series ... admittedly the true blood tv series turned me off and i havent been able to watch since season 1 .. shame coz i loved the books .. didnt even read the latest books coz disappointed with CH and what she allowed AB to do to the show .. i need the eric sookie combo; cant stand bill and glad he got what he deserved; same w sam .. not a fan and so glad sookie stood up to him and didnt let his bias/hatred for vamps affect her decisions; glad she decided to work at fangtasia when she did coz dead end literraly working for sam in his dive and most of all glad that sookie became a vamp and that eric and sookie have so much to look forward to.

nb u doubled up on one of ur chapters around ch 8 .. found u on ffn so wasnt a prob for me but perhaps u shld change it here

thanks for sharing and looking forward to more

xo

Late by Morgaine Swann Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary: Past Featured Story

late

 

Summary: Sookie has some surprising news for Eric. Spoilers for books 1-8. Story contains explicit Adult/Mature content - you have been warned. 

 

This story is being reposted after being deleted from FFn after 100+ chapters.   Its being cut/pasted from a back up file.  If you find any major boo boos, please email Morgaine's technical assistant, TheLadyKCT@gmail.com, with the chapter number and she'll go back to fix it when time allows.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 119 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1200172 Read Count: 472145
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

cldve been avoided and done when sookie scryed if only someone had warned her

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

why exactly didnt freja warn sookie that lady A would want to touch the amulet and that nobody shld .. it was a little too late to stop without being extremely rude ..

 

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

ch 107 and 108 r the same ... with the jump in story i think ch 107 is missing ... i love this fic and am so sad to be nearing ch 114 coz then i'll have to wait again ... hopefully not too long .. PLS ;)

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

glad felipe got zapped ... wonder why madden wasnt at the wedding

jason is being awfully quiet

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

never liked quinn n surprised took so long for eric to exact revenge

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

typical eric thinks that he really understands how sookie thinks ... only the tip of the iceberg ..

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

intense

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

eric putting sookie in the sit'n w sabrina was more mean than anything else .. he took exhibitionism to a diff level by demeaning her rather than sharing in the act.  he also cldve warned her that sabrina was an ex .. pretty nasty to have that in ur face


now for the 'fun'

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

incredible .. what a scene ... cldnt stop laughing at what sookie did to pam and pams reactions esp her laughing at eric creating a nympho in sookie ;))))))

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ludwig said not too extreme .. that was pretty out there ... wow

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

cld jason b any more stupid???!!!

love that eric and sookie 'need' each other all the time

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ur writing style has me right there in the middle of the eric/bill battle ....

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow they speed thru topics but thankfully sookie is amenable to reason and wont be putting up too much of a fight

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

love that sookie can shock eric ... cant stop laughing at his reactions

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

wow

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loved pams reaction to the news ... this is my absolute fav fic

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love eric in total command mode

sookie seems overwhelmed

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i love how u describe the sex they have but in context so its not only sex (which is amazing) but their relationship and lives as a whole

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love this fic so much that i'm looking forward to rereading it here ... are there any changes??? and will u b updating on ffn?

love ur work

xo

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

hate that bill is so know it all - and he shld let eric spk for himself ... if anything eric shd remember that sookie will need him in the early stages of the pregnancy and surely he can put off the bar visits till a more convenient time ..

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

:(((

i really need more ... please

wondering about garner's brother .. who we hadnt heard about till now ...

and whats next for the northmans ...

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

eric has been told the ambrosia is addictive and each time he gave it to sookie she wanted more .. why leave it so accessable??? seriously she has just woken up after more than 30 sleep - someone shldve made sure to reiterate the warning

it feels wrong that sookie had the upbringing she had - that was arranged for her - and now is expected to change completely with little explanation and lots of consequences

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

eric isnt taking into acc that sookie is frustrated that she only ever gets part of the story .. no explanations .. he himself gets frustrated and angry at the hints, innuendos and riddles of the gods/pythonesss etc ..

she hasnt been well and is overwhelmed - his own observations so why not cut her some slack and actually talk to her instead of just sex and half assed conversations

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

glad eric realises he's neglecting sookie as a person ... def need to talk more tho sex also really important ... hope he doesnt intend to punish her still

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

jason is a scream ... 

niall is a shit

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

FELIPE DOWN MADDEN TO GO ...

bill is being surprisingly helpful/accomodating and eric is being so open w bill .. so not like the eric we knew

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

i didnt get the impression that eric has promised full disclosure ... shldnt he b obligated to be as honest w sookie??

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Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

thats harsh even for eric .. no warning ... he set her up to fail .. he knew she'd have a panic tantrum esp on top of her health issue .. u'd think he'd at least have told her in pvt .. 

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

i get that he needed to teach her a lesson but shes heavily preggo and having problems .. not a very loving action even if he wanted to teach her a lesson ... i still contend that he set her up to fail .. plenty of time for punishments later ... leaving her not knowing for hrs was enuf punishment .. she realised her mistake and was sorry

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

just wondering if alex will eventually b able to have kids .. is he going to b able to mate and is this the beginning of a dynasty??? he is magical; part vamp; part fae and who knows what else

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

surprised .. in vegas eric was served in a silver goblet and here when sookie came downstairs to take alex into the pool for the first time ... bjorn and octavia were sitting at an iron table - isnt this a potential prob for alex and sookie??

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

this isnt sexual but they had a promise not to lie to each other esp where the 'family' was involved yet eric kept a major secret ... what wd eric have done if it was sookie keeping the secret from him .. even if only for 1 day???

Reviewer: cofey Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

eric tells sookie that she must be firm with alex but then undermines her authority constantly ... giving in to him when sookie has just said no or coming in and picking him up during a mtg which sookie was trying not to interupt ... giving him solids coz he demands them even tho he has been grabbing ..yes he's a baby,,, but a very aware baby

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

so if they needed sookie earlier why make her so stubborn .. why keep her abilities a secret for so long .. and she had plenty of sex w eric over the 3 yrs why not get prego earlier???????????