Reviews by imc67
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Love the use of the photos!!! I think a sequel is most certainly needed. How will I go on if you don't write it :( Love this story and look forward to the updates. Thanks for all your hart work.



Author's Response:

thank you Darlin' - outtake up this week xoxo

Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Loved Breaking Dawn so much I've already seen it 4 times. Love your story too. Keep it coming. Thanks.

 Carol from Tacoma

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Finally! So glad you are continuing this story. Waiting with much anticipation to find out what is next. Thanks and keep writing. Carol

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

So love this story. I hate to see it come to an end.

Keep writing, Carol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254888
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I love this story. I can't say I'm not anxious to find out what is going to happen, but isn't that what a story is suppose to do? Also, to much smut? NO. That is why I read fanfiction!!!! Keep up the great work. Thanks, Carol



Author's Response:

That was why i started reading FF too... I wanted to see the charaters that I love, love each other....and besides this is a D/s story of course there is going to be smut...and lots of it....but the story needs to take proirity with the smut placed where it should be....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

It just seems as if Edward is trying to change who Bella is. Yes Master, No Master. A robot. It feels like he is taking away her individuality. And what happens when he is wrong, cause I will tell you no man, Dom or not is always in the right. How would he like to be humiliated by someone in public and then have to go over and thank them for it. I'm sure he would just love that (written sarcastically)! And how would you feel if someone had done the things James did to her. You wouldn't want anyone telling you what to do ever again. I'm trying to wrap my head around the whole being free thing to be who she is but to dictate her behavior with others is wrong. It is as if she has no free will. As you wrote several times Bella thinks, "what kind of choice is that?" I know her choice is to say "red" but then she looses Edward. What kind of choice is that? She isn't a child but just like all of us sometimes our behaviors are childish. I don't go around telling my friends/loved ones they are childish and humiliate then in or out of public. I will still read your story because it is just that, YOURS, and some things get me a little hot and bothered. I just wish I saw Edward as being a little more conflicted about humiliating her. I have more remorse about disciplining an actual child than he seems to have about disciplining a grown woman. Thanks for letting me vent a little.

Carol (Tacoma Wa)

Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

He's a rat bastard. Hard on him my ass. Ahhhh I feel better. Trust me if I could cum by someone else's err, hands.... I damn well would. Thanks for writing. I am no where near as creative  as you.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Dont stop, don't stop!!!! Sorry,, I got a little out of control there.



Author's Response:

wow... I am so honored and humbled by all the love this story is getting.. I´m really blown away.. I´m glad you like it and I hope I can keep the momentum going...lol... Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... it means alot...

Laterzz

Krazi

xoxo


Reviewer: imc67 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

What the hell do you mean quit. Over my dead body you'll quit!!! Oh sorry, please don't quit. Waiting on pins and needles.