Reviews by Deanne Marie Cullen
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752929
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

I have been reading your story, and I love it.  I only have one concern about this chapter....what about the picture frame that Bella got Edward for Christmas? and what picture did she put in it?  Just wondering..... ???

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: A Happy New Year

Wow, this was a great chapter!  So, far I have laughed my ass off, cried like a baby, and have been reading pretty much non stop since last night.  Your an awesome writer!  Though we all have visions of what these people look like due to the movies, you have taken them and made them your own.  Again, WOW!

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

ok, I totally love this chapter....but, one thing comes to mind...and I thought about it as well from another chapter.  Unless the bedroom door was open, I thought his room was sound proof?? how did they hear the door bell?  just wondering.  Thanks for the great images in the shower!

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On

OMG, Heart Wrenching for sure!  This chapter touched so close to home for me!  I cried the whole way through and went through a whole bunch of tissues. 

My Mother died when I was nine and I swear it was like you were talking about me in this chapter.  Very freaky but very touching.  LOVED IT!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I could do it justice.  I've been lucky and never lost a parent, but I closely modeled that chapter after my grandfather's funeral, the daze I was in, the snow on the ground, then tried to imagine how much more shell shocked I would be if I were burying my parents.  I am pleased that I did the grief enough justice to strike a chord with you.  I'm so glad you have enjoyed the story so far and I have loved reading your reviews.  I'm sorry for your loss, and thank you for your many kind words.

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Rock On

You picked the most amazing songs.  The research that you must have done for all of these songs to fit with the bands is awesome! WOW

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: On The Hot Seat

This chapter was great.  The only issue I have when writing a court scene is to remember that physical movements are not recognized in the court of law, you must state your answers.  So when Bella would nod, she would have been required to say her answer for the court reporter.  Other then that, great job!

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There

That was the most romantic .....OMG is all I can think of.  I listened to ever song and cried like a baby!  Reading this with the music that goes with it is even more emotional then I thought it would be.  THANK YOU for sharing your AMAZING talent with me! 

Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Holy Crow! lol.  THANK YOU for sharing with me.  I feel honored and humbled by talen as a writer.  At first I was worried about your "slow burn" as you call it.  But, boy it was worth the wait.  I have never laughed so hard and cried so much reading a story.  Though giving props to the original creator of these characters and the people who play them in the movies doesn't hurt as a visual.  You brought a whole new concept outside of the "vampire world" that we normally see them in.  Thank you again for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141815
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Love this story...thanks for sharing.  I am just glad I got to read the rest since I started on the FanFiction site.  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

I love this story.  I wish there was a way to get notifications that a new chapter is being posted? if there is can you inform me how?  Also, I added you to my favorites but it didn't take :-(

Calving by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Volturi Dairy by fetish-fanfic fan piece. What happens the first time Bella gives birth.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2285 Read Count: 4667
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 24 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Deanne Marie Cullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the hucow story and I am glad you wrote one about the calving process.  I would love to read more stories like this.  Do you know of any others?  Would you consider writing more?



Author's Response:

I have written a couple of other pregnancy and birth related stories. 'Six Weeks', 'Two' and 'Dreams Do Come True' are all stories i have written that centre around childbirth. none have the hu-cow aspect though. they can all be found under my TWCS profile so please feel free to check them out.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked my story.