So first and foremost; thank you for writing and sharing your talent with us.  I have an opinion, since you asked, and I hope you don't take this as criticism but more as just free flowing thoughts.  I would love to see you continue with more for "Etched" however, I truly think Predator Hunted is one of the most unique story lines I have ever read and has a pacing and individuality about it that is just wonderful.  I also remember how when writing "Etched" you had a bad break-up and had to take a break from it for a while (which is fine, you do this for fun and we are lucky to get whatever we get from you writers).  I am just wondering, perhaps, if as an individual trying to write and improve writing skills, your efforts would be better placed trying to get through the writer's block and finishiing either Roomies or Predator Hunted (PH being my choice just because I adore it).  Almost any person can write a great first couple of chapters to gain a reader's interest but few know how to carry that to a complete ending.  I think the struggle of finishing would be worth the pride of finishing.

First off, we readers are lucky that writers like you choose to share your talents with us for free.  While I do appreciate good grammar; I understand that when someone is writing for "fun"; it's not always the first thing on their mind.  I have not found your story to be hurt by your grammar.  In some cases; it is difficult when a writer has spelling issues and grammar issuses, I have not found that to be the issue with  you.  I would prefer you to keep up with the fast and enjoyable updating schedule and not worry with a beta.  Just my two cents.