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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
OMG this is an amazing story i really hope that ur update often :)
Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C
Banner By: Rachel MS
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28910
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
i really like ur story it has a great plot going but i noticed that u have alot of mispelled words and grammer errors. also the way u word some of ur sentences doesnt alway make sence. as far as the lemon it was ok. for me peronally it could have been more descriptve but like i said thats me. im really excited to read the rest of ur story and i think ur doing a great job. :)
Author's Response:
HI Heather,
I did try to write this story the best that I could, but I have a heard time with comma's and spelling. But my Beta, that I did get eventually, is a comma nazi! So the writing does get much better once she gets involved!
I hope that you continue to read, and enjoy THaTH!
Hugs~Izzy