Reviews by farsideomoon
Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672713
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

I love Bella's spunk and when she turns green;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Olde E

Okay, so E's human, I gotta say I wasn't liking it. I like him being this magical only eyes for Bella & immune to any other girls charms. Yes, he was a good boy.

So, I'm not feeling so much love for Heidi any more & am remembering Lexi's comments about smiling too big & Bella's observation that it applied to H.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

Ha ha, adorable kink thrown in there at naughty B's request. That was clever, I think, the way you had Bella begging for naughty in a way that somehow made it cute & not dirty or deranged, not that I think BDSM is deranged in any ways shape well maybe some forms {not that you mentioned} are a little deranged but who am I to judge.

Enjoyed the chapter, Daddy C is such a disappointment but glad he could ruin it for E.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

Great chapter. Damn Carlisle, I'd like to punch his face once too. Can't Bella have a turn punching him one too? I know Aro's been dying to and I'll bet Bella would feel just as good from clocking him one. Nah, I somehow feel sorta sorry for C., I really was liking him after the double dates & H.Potter adventure, k still do.

So, that last part reminded me of something Kevin Bacon said in reference to marriage longevity, "Keep your fights clean and the sex dirty."  great axiom.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Diplomatic Immunity

I love that you tell the story & then show how Edward keeps a lot to himself & only shares with those that need to know and that Bella does a good job of the same thing.

What to do with Carlisle. I feel like he was kind of on a suicide by cop [capofamiglia] that night.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

Great read, so is Carlisle working for Marcus now? I'm not sure I followed that whoe business run down they did. 

I still feel some loss for Edward & Carlisle's breakup.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

;~oi

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

I liked the EPOV, and the topic of the chapter had me down right giddy with them over the pregers news. 

I hope it wasn't Esme that did the murder, but I got a feeling it might of been her, I can't imagine Carlisle doing it, but like E is always thinking people are capable of a lot.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Coming Home An Edward Outtake

I thought it was a forest chapter. Loved the Dad & Sonny & Damion reunions. Poor Sonny, I'm glad he was able to tell his dad his fears.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake

This was heartbreaking and so great to read more of mob ward & BeBella.

Thanks so much for another glimpse. It was like Carlilse said, you'd love to have a love like that.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Thanks for writing. I want them doing the nasty again, is that wrong? ha ha

Wow, what emotional upheaval they both seem to live with, it's like their so alike and I'm thinking Edward has figured it out a little bit, what with asking to be friends but Bella is pretty slow to understand what she's feeling or at least more resistant to acknowledging what she's feeling. She can be pretty mean herself, Edward gets the bad rap but that was pretty harsh on her part {IMO} to just curse at him and attack his motives for friend request. 

Thanks for the update, love reading this story

 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Eyes down, awe, poor Bella.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

whoa. not your typical E

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

quite

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

This is a great read, I have so much I should be doing, but this story is getting priority

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

oh, you and your cliffy

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Win win, right?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Awe, but I feel her leaving will just be another horrible loss for Edward, but what else can she do?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I'm so glad the next chapter is already written. I'm dying to know if she'll help him out or hide from him.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow, heavy stuff.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Very interesting change up. I'm loving this story & am bummed that I'm all caught up, I hope you update soon. I'm at a loss of where you will go from here. I really want them both to reconnect. I hate how Bella is in so much change & yeah it is like they've switched places & now Bella is the one in horrible pain.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Great chapter. i love this story. I so want them to be together again in a good happy way.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wow, great chapter. I keep wanting them to reconnect, it feels like if they could then maybe they could heal each other instead of using /abusing each other with their touch. I can't wait to read what happens next this is such a riveting story;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Loved the chapter and that you updated. Thanks so much, this story is a joy to read.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Yes, I liked it & enjoyed the music while reading;D)

I just can't believe they can't just reach out to each other & comfort each other, lord they are damaged.

I was really hoping it was going to be true confession time or something from Edward over coffee, but that in no way flows with his character & would of been a cheap sell out of a story that's been very deep & moving in it's telling. thanks for taking the high road. I'm dying to know what the story is with Josie, but would of been disappointed that he would just plop it out like that over coffee.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

The word 'chrysalis' comes to mind. It seems she's emerging from this deep depression or regressed state that she has kept herself tucked into to try & protect herself from the hurtful people {wouldja even call her family loved ones?} she has been surrounded by all her life. Scary stuff for her. I hope E proves trustworthy this time. Boy isn't she resiliant though, keeps calling her mom each week & letting herself get close to E again.

Great chapter, I love reading about your characters and am excited to read where this story goes.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Fold Your Wings

Oh god Edward is right. Aghh.  And he still didn't get to see her? Awe.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I have no idea.  I just want, so badly, for them grab each other and hold on tight.

thanks for updating;-)

Losing It by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After years of saving herself for that one special guy only to have him turn her down, Bella is on a mission to lose her virginity. Can the lucky guy she chooses hang on to her, or will he lose everything in her game?

High School Drama
E/B

Banner by MDealsWithIt and Blinkie by Angedelaube


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37171 Read Count: 39751
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 **Absence and Fondness*

No, this does call for violence, just go with it Edward & sock James in the mouth:-)

My Surrender by KareBear1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

ALERT: POLY & Bd/Sm  Carlisle/Bella/Jasper

18 year old Bella has always been at the top of her class even graduating early from high school and getting accepted to Dartmouth on a full scholarship. She enjoyed two years of great grades and loved college. For the first time during her junior year she starts to struggle not in one class but two. She makes a plan to go and confront the two professors who just happen to be cousin and share an office even though they are in separate departments. What she did not know was that they have been scheming to get what they want the innocent Miss Swan.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75116 Read Count: 57627
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, what a first chapter, complete with multiple O's and Christmas presents:~D))



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

 

hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Hawt times for the lovebirds;~))



Author's Response:

Kind of but things will all turn out.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I'm enjoying reading this pleasant, non-angst ff. I like the idea of these 3 staying steady + rock solid.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm not a big fan of angst ff either, so I tend to stay away from them.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

i'm glad B. isn't sharing her men with Alice, I think it would of demeaned what they have.



Author's Response:

Alice is just the doctor and friend nothing more.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love that, "treat you, as their little princess" attitude towards their daughter. Every little girl should be treated that way.  I feel lucky that all my boys and man treat me like a queen.



Author's Response:

I'm with you, I'm treated as a queen most days, but somedays hubby seems to forget, but then again I understand his health is going down hill and it frustrates him that he can't do the things he loves to do. I'm the only girl in the house beside some female animals.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Awe, it's Jasper's. And I'm all caught up;~D(

I kinda felt like she should of told them in private, i know how supportive each guy is but still it's a little bit of a loss.

Looking forward to next update.



Author's Response:

The are going to get plenty of priviate time hehe....

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

;-))

Im enjoying this story and am glad to read your finding your reward in writing it versus our, your appreciative readers, words.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you.

 

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Out Take

Movin on, I'm excited for their ménage trios. A play party, perhaps?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Pregger???...

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Can Bella spell BRAT? Lord she's just not getting the big picture of what it would be like if the baby came too soon and was hospitalized or god forbid died. Then she'd really hate Alice. She's a smart girl I'm sure she'll at some point she'll get some sense from somewhere.



Author's Response:

yes we can say for sure Bella was a brat I did the same when the same thing happened to me in real life.

 

 

HUGS

Summary: Past Featured Story

bcd

 

To their families, Edward Masen, and Bella Volturi hate each other. Their secret relationship isn't the only thing they are hiding.

 

*Will be part of a Multi-Shot Series*

 

Rated for explicit Lemons and Violence

 

Banner by the lovely ViiolentDelight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10234 Read Count: 27921
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Behind Closed Doors

Yes, I love it so far, looking forward to reading the rest. An already written story, yippee!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Behind Closed Doors

Great chapter, I never saw this coming. I mean I thought the mean repetoire was for show because of the story title but wow, this gets better and better. Hawt sex too;D)

Love all those stories you rec'd. I'm usually a big fan of the E/B stories but a couple others are: "Inveigled by beauty"by Robshandmonkey & I just discovered a new one last night, "Welcome to Las Vegas" by Firewings312, the cannons are switched around but good read. Both with Drama/Romantic/Erotica

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Behind Closed Doors

Great chapter, hopefully J is on the Bella & Edward team & will pass on info that takes the heat off of Edward or more hopefully they are able to have the information they've been seeking and they all get the Hades out of Dodge

Thanks for the rec's & looking forward to your next update!

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 Plans

Great chapter, wow, didn't see Vic back in the story, bitch, she just completely forgets that Edward was supportive to her after her breakup? Of course, he did kind of not have anything to do with her after that day she came on to him. bitter much?

Good luck moving hope nothing gets broke;-D)

Can't wait to read the rest!



Author's Response:

Nothing got broke!  (at least today)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Information

thanks for the update, Chief's getting closer..;-D)



Author's Response:

Yep!  Any progress is beter than none! 

Thanks for leaving a coment!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Private Eye

Oh bummer, it's been such a treat getting the daily & multiple daily updates, you've spoiled me rotten.

Will wait patiently though, good luck with RL, great chapter. Poor Edward & all his family who are kind of going through it with him.



Author's Response:

thanks for your support!  I will update as often as possible, especially when I know you are out there waiting for it! 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Waiting

Good for you.

Thanks for the update, great read.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Happenings

what a great wife

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Questions

i wouldn't be surprised if her boyfriend didn't tell her she needed to blame E & she's ___ enough to do  it.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Duty

Oh boy, not looking good for E. But the thing is if she's beaten to near death & she's gotten knocked up --why not try & do some investigative work & see where she lived before & who she was with? She'd just started work there.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Evidence

He better stand back and let the pro's take over, he'd be killing the baby if he tried to interfere & I'm positive he would not want to do that.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 Forced

Yes, he is but sadly he doesn't have the faith to trust him or his daughters word on it. Of course bein a cop I'm sure scepticism comes with the job. thanks for the updates, can't wait for this to unravel..;-)



Author's Response:

Faith, well . . . he's working on it!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Loosing

awe, how annoying.



Author's Response:

Edward just does not like to loose, especially to death!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71Ups & Downs

Yeah, i don't care f Bella is pregnant, she needs to show Lee first hand what assault & attempted murder is! he he



Author's Response:

Yes!  you go girl!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

Yeah, oh no though, Charlie's hurt somewhere, I hope he'll get to see the little ones.

Thanks for the update;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Tyler

Oh wow, poor Charlie, I hope he's okay & left a message somewhere of who he was trying to arrest.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

Thanks for the update/delivery of the twins, yeah.

Good luck at your new job, hope you have some fun, training can be very trying.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)

ha ha. Completely serves Edward right, he should talk about karma



Author's Response:

Yep, karma is a bitch.  Give Edward a chance, you may see his actions in a different light . . .

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi

Yeah, he can be a total self absorbed assh*le. I'm intrigued how this is going to work out that slut James could snatch Bella not as good a girl as E thinks maybe?



Author's Response:

Hello!  I love new readers!  The first two chapters were given to me by a friend, and I was to turn it around!  Just wait and see what you think when you find lut all the facts!

Love that you took the time to review!  Thank you soooo much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi

Can't imagine a 180 degree turn around that could save him, can't wait to read what happens



Author's Response:

Keep reading . . .

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Caring (V)

HA ha, what a great line, “She’s my wife, Jake.  What did you expect?”

God, how is it the Edward character's growing on me? I don't know but he really is.



Author's Response:

Ha!  just wait!  You will grow to absofuckinglutely LOVE the Edward Cullen!  Give him time, and give you the facts . . .

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)

Oh, crockadile tears here, and he was so unworthy just 19 chapters ago, ha ha



Author's Response:

You are so funny!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)

I'm nearly bawling my eyes out here. awe, so sweet



Author's Response:

Yep, I have to have sweet Edward's . . . even if they start out seeming to be assholes!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)

Boy, she is queen of the idiot moves it seems. She's just insecure, he needs to figure that out about her.



Author's Response:

Really dumb move - people should really investivate things before they act!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Run (L)

All right she takes the cake in idiots, she's right she doesn't deserve Edward and I'm convinced Jessica does because she would never be so cruel to him.



Author's Response:

I love it!  you're taking Edward's side!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Parents (V)

I'm giddy happy for them.  I hope Jess doesn't show up pregnant to test their love & commitment. 



Author's Response:

You were right on the money with this one!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)

Yes, now that's how to go exploring. Happy days



Author's Response:

I had fun with that!  See, you do like Edward, don't you?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Strange

I had a feeling she'd stoop to this. But with a paternity test in 9 months the gig will be up, unless she raped him when he was asleep or drunk or stole sperm from a used condom[is that even possible? immediately after?? people do sperm donations it seems almost feasible], can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response:

You know, I have always wondered if it would be possible to steal sperm from a condom!  Wonder how fresh it would have to be?  Maybe there is a story in that!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 Blackmail

I know I haven't mentioned it but their consistent terms of endearment, husband & wife, are really cute.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for saying so!  i had one reviewer tell me that it annoyed her, but the husband and wife nicknames are, to me, an important part of the story!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Obnoxious

I hope she starts going to see the therapist and that it helps her



Author's Response:

I kind of hope she gets mental help as well - though I doubt she and Edward could ever be friends!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 Rough

Tyler is less than worse than I don't even know, he just is.



Author's Response:

I was trying to make him pretty much scum . . . hope I succeded!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 July 4th

Well, I guess Bella didn't turn out to be so frigid after all*~D))

I wonder if Charlie knows what a looser Tyler is & if he's already moved to town to cause trouble & that's how he knows??



Author's Response:

Charlie knows nothing of Tyler, yet and Bella . . . well, Bella let loose once she was married, didn't she!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions

Awe, :D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 Explain

I know this comes off as all about me, cause it is, but boohoo I've been enjoying reading this for 57 chapters but am all caught up now;-{l  Although I'm appreciative of the update, it's so nice that Charlie has woke up & smelled the coffee. He's been looking at things through a very heavily tinted set of Daddy glasses. For being a cop he sure was missing how much they love & care for each other. I blame it on the glasses.

Thanks for writing, this has been fun to read, keep the updates coming;-D}



Author's Response:

It's good and bad to be caught up, isn't it!  Thanks for hanging in thee, I told you you would fall for Edward!  i think you fell HARD!  lol

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 No Contact

2 new chapys today! Yeah.  I almost feel sorry for Jessica {probably because she's caring a poor defenseless child in her, although it is her & Tyler's offspring so that almost negates it all he he}, except that she's such a liar & she used to kind of hang out with Bella, so lousy friend too. And if she didn't want to fight with him she should stop her lies & stay the heck away. Stil, I gotta say I'm a little scared for her when Tyler finds her which i'm guiessing will be soon.



Author's Response:

Yep, Jessica has lots of issues, but she is just handling situations sooooo wrong!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Confrontation

Oh no, I've got a badd feeling about this. He's going to help her, Tyler's going to kill her & Edward is going to get blamed because the people at the hospital will say they saw E. tell her to stop before she gets hurt and the losers at the bar, Mike & Tim wont say anything and the boys will grow up with their father in jail. Yuck, that would not be fun to read.



Author's Response:

Woah!  Woah!  Woah! 

Do you take me for a fool or just an evil b***h?

Keep reading . . .

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 Advice

conclusions are being jumped to.. ha ha, that would describe me.. of course , imp, that's some of the fun in reading mysteries, trying to second guess the plot & then finding out how off base you were or on to something;D)

thanks for writing, great fun reading with all the updates!



Author's Response:

True, but I'm afraid you've gotten kinda good at it!  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 Intentions

You do a good job painting Tyler as a disgusting pig.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 Toy

Awe, hang in there, what's that saying tomorrows just another day. Hopefully better than the last?

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Nursery

Awe, thanks

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Babies

miss your story. good luck

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

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Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427900
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes, that was a hawt lemon. 

They should call the police, even though I want Edward to break his arm for handling/hurting Bella the way he did & the ridiculous interest he expects.

Cant wait to read your new story & update of ToH.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533069
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only

Thank you so much for the update great chapter. I'm thinking Esme did kill herself, or did it the way a person does when pointing a gun at a cop. I think if she threatened to go to the FBI that would have the same effect, I'm hoping to find out what really did happen.

What is with Emmett getting all judgemental/distrustful of Edward all the sudden. I don't think he has anything to worry about, I think Edward would die before he let something happen to Bella. I don't blame her for being angry at his attitude.

And last thank you for your charitable ways;-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

How did I miss this chapter? Don't know but I'm glad I found it. Edward & Aro up to their badass & lovin ways, I'm gonna miss that.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

Whhaaat? That makes more sense, but why would Rene have to be mean to her, why not just her Dad?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

How the hell is that pos Jonny still out & abut walking upright?

I hope Bella has good advice or that Aro could get his brain back super quick, otherwise he'll be a huge liability.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanks for such a great chapter. The AN was good too. I know it should be clear but ?? 

;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Wow, that was some hawt stuff Lexi, damn girl. 

That got pretty gruesome with the eye ripped out and all. I really wanted him to make them tell him, I guess you can't make someone. 

Lord if Esme is behind this sh*t, arghh. I hope to god Esme didn't go conning Nicole thereby conning Caius into trying to take out E.

Can't wait to find out what it's about.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

Aghh. God they have a point about Bella but I think Bella would pick her family & Edward over Aro everyday.

Poor Edward. This is a horrible time, did they kill Ronnie yet?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

I'm excited for more. I loved the intro, your writing is so realistic & I really feel like I'm right there.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

That was awesome! So funny, I never saw that coming:-D))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

haha That "inkling" stuff was funny, and how 'pissed' Bella was about C. peeing in the pool. But really, how foul, why not the bushes or a tree?

"I got a clip with her fucking name on it son." haha maybe Bella needs to pluck someones eye out, she's getting kinda kookie. jk Okay, that's too much, huh.?

Great chapter, I don't feel good about them telling Jasper if he doesn't know about Alice's past. But I guess I'm becoming quite blood thirsty cause I hope her dad doesn't live much longer. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

Oh my lord, that was intense. I was so scarred he was going to follow thru with that send the kids & Aro off to some island-- his whole family would be coming after him Sonny probably the most or as much as Bella.

Great chapter:-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

Wow, Carlisle's right, he may be the more evil one, he weighs it all out & still chooses to cheat, fuck with Bella and kill others. I don't know whyyy I still feel for the guy. No, I do because you write your characters deeply and he's not superficial, he truly cares for others. So Esme wasn't behind it? I hope letting her go & get away [Az?haha loved how cliche`] for a few years while things cool down doesn't come back to bite them all in the butt.

Turns out Edward's thoughts of revenge crazed off spring coming out of the wood work to haunt him was on the mark. But why would they make the Bella/whore reference. So much mystery and intrigue. Love that about your writing. 

Who is this Gina chick? I don't remember her. I don't like how she's behaving either. If it bugs Edward, who gets looks day in and out, it's too much. I hope Aro noticed.

I couldn't help but laugh about all the craziness that went down and the thought of the Nun[twiBella] coming by to hang out with them. hehe

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie

:-(

But they got the house, yeah!:-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

Awe, sweet. Things are coming together again,  but wait I'm confused I thought Esme was pining Edward? Carlisle didn't mention that. I'm a little confused on how that went down with Marcus trying to give Esme her hearts desire.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

My thoughts on this...I can not get efucking nough. I Love this story. Dang it, is Carlisle being a player again? I so wanted more from & for him. Kinda like the Kylie situ. She wants what Edward & Bella has too and if Carlisle's relationship has not weathered the storm then maybe it's because he didn't really have what they have either he just wanted it & thought it looked like he could have it by picking what looked would be the same.  Just like Kylie was describing. Kids!

Panda I can't wait to read Sonny's POV, he's one of my fav's

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

It was a great brunch, Esme got clocked, haha. The daddies are so cute with their babies;~D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

What a great chapter, loved reading about Bella's Dad, and how sweet would that be for Aro & Lesa to become an item.

I thought what Carlisle did was hillarious & them getting all scrappy in the restaurant & again out in the parking lot. I was laughing out loud after he spilled the beans. His behavior is cute most the time but Edward was right how hypocritical is it of him when he planned to kill his wife if not actually did, so it's pretty twisted that I find it all great fun.? I blame your fabulous writing;-))