Reviews by Celebrityhound
Anonymous Meeting by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

 

For the Under Her Thumb Challenge on FF.

Edward needs a Domme but has trouble truly submitting and has been labeled as trouble.  At the club's anonymous play night he thinks he finds what he needs in a new Domme.

With no information on her how can he find her again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7144 Read Count: 3153
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 19 May 2010
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Meeting

that was hot

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The Cullens thought Edward would never grow up, but marriage to a determined human girl, and a trip to Brazil, alter him forever.  On his honeymoon, Edward finds more than love, friendship, self-acceptance, and an ability to lead.  He embraces a future.  Summer 2011 Shimmer Awards Best Storyteller nominee.

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I Hunger Rainforest Banner, Kitchen Banner and Corkboard Banner by mimozka.  I Hunger Dolphin Banner by lilianas.

Kitchen

 

dolphin

No slash.  Increasingly AU settings and storyline.

This is the 6th book in my 'Unforeseen Events' series.  You can easily begin reading here, with the understanding that my Edward and Bella are not quite as shy as the originals.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 571771 Read Count: 30833
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 May 2011
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

mean place to stop

great story



Author's Response:

Sorry, family circumstances have interfered with posting here. You can read more on ffnet under my same pen name. I posted ch44 yesterday.

 

Thanks for reviewing:)

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64022
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

is Bella married?

 

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am really liking this

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

it was a great song just like your story

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

awwwww

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

I don't understand Rose or Jacob they are both being asshats

but I am loving this story

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

that sucks

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

had tears in my eyes

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

emmett and rose deserve each other ad not in a good way

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27

well I have finally caught up and I just am in love with this story.

you are really a great writer, you compose great dialogue and develop great characters, keep up the great work

Cheryle

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

james is in trouble noe...I hope

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

what happened to Edward, he better be fine

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

A+

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Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31

great chapter, glad you have more,hate stories I love to have crappy endings just because the writer is wanting to start somthing new or just getting bored with it, cause we all know that it's not how you start but how you finish that is important, a least that's what I tell my husband or he tells me lol

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

wow exciting chapter

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Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1

awwww

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2

great story I have really enjoyed it

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Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

this is turning out to be a great story

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Fall

got to spice it up when you have eternity or even if after 30 years it only seems like it ;p lol

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

Oh this one goy me laughing so hard I had teas in my eyes

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

all aboard!!!!!

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections

have I mentioned I love this story

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Second Chances

you are a cockblocker in this one

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-At Last

and an excellent smut peddler you are!

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35-Time

but wasn't it Julian who wanted the 24/7 sub contract and Bella didn't so how was it Bella's forcing him?

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

great

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

I love mincemeat but Esme's will be disgusting

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-The Proposal

great story and I am glad you are continuing it

Summary:

These are various outtakes, written in various points of view..all related to my story How To Win Back the Love of Your Existence, which is a NM alternative ending story. Edward never came back but runs into Bella four years later....


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11944 Read Count: 1807
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
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Date: 11 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-BPOV

it sucks you never finished the original as you promised at least you could have wrapped up up in an epilogue instead we get these silly snippets

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420721
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
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Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moody's mood for love

hot romantic sex

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ode to Joy

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The empty bottle saloon

rough Edward yummmmy

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Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The blue box blues

this is so going wonderfullt well

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Lake George Escape

they sounded like me and mine canoeing

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Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Thanksgiving

live together yes baby no

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Post traumatic stress

yes this chapter probably going have been deleted did not serve much purpose, since she was in good enough spirits to be screwing in the hospital not sure PTS was likely

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: I'm too sexy

I believe she is pregnant

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Wedding

A+

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Big Day

awww

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: The proclaimers

she shouldn't knock it til she tries it ;)

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: A Hard Day's Night

Edward is so cute

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Mom Jeans

I would like to make him my bitch, or even my dom

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Don't mess with the Jedi

gosh how many prenancies will we have to endure, one wasn't enough?

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: SinSation

Al is a good guy

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Quagmire and the hag

she better get a morning after pill

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Out of Character.

don't know anything about X but if you can't orgasm what's the fun

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Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

absolutely awesome

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34247
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
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Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Another Place to Fall

STORY IS MOVING ALONG NICELY



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I tried to make sure the pacing was kept at a steady clip.  I didn't want to drag the whole thing out.  Thanks again & hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breathless

IT WAS GREAT, I AM DYING TO FIND OUT ABOUT THE SCARS, WAS IT A WOLF ATTACK?



Author's Response:

No wolves in this story.  Glad you are enjoying the story though. :-)

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Be Gentle to Me

EMMETT SEEMS  BIT OF A JERK



Author's Response:

My Emmett is just sort of a big oaf of a kid.  He doesn't really mean any harm, he's just kind of a pain in the ass.  :)

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: What an Honor

so she is a burn victim and you made reference that she did it to herself hmmm?



Author's Response:

No no.  She was in a car crash. The car exploded and the back of her shirt caught fire & burned her.  Sorry for any confusion.

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Heal Over

wow



Author's Response:

Um, Wow good or Wow bad?  LOL   THanks for the review!

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes

great story hope your delivery went well



Author's Response:

LOL  - yes the delivery went well. She came in a big ol' hurry.  Thanks for the review!  Glad you are enjoying it so far.

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: And so it goes...

ut oh



Author's Response:

The good news is you don't have to wait for me to update.  LOL  Thanks for the review

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Lonestar

yep bonehead works as an adjective



Author's Response:

Edward isn't the best at relationships.  LOL Thanks for the review

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: At Last

great story I really enjoyed it

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144831
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Can't decide who's proposal I liked best, so will there be a triple ceremony?

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

tame lemons but a sweet story



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews. I'm sorry I didn't reply to all of them. There were alot of repetions in this story, and I would go back and change that if I could, but I'm not. Anyway, there is a second story already complete if you are interrested in continueing on. If not, don't worry about it.

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

sweet

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

too many emotional chapters here at the end :)

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

ok thats two chapters in a row that you have made me cry

all 6 getting time off together must be nice having a chief of staff as a father

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

off to a great start

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

can't wait, I am surprised this does not hae more reviews

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

you really write well, there is something about your first love that always is specal even after years go by

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

yay!!!

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

not much different from her POV

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

scary jacob

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well I guess his father is not around to protect him soI guess he will go to jail unless her boys take care of him

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

good friends are hard to find and sometimes they are better than real family

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Different POV's can be cool when they offer something different but to have basically the same thing without new info is just repetitive, Alice's was basically the same as Rose, and we already got most of it from Jacob and now I see the next one is Carlisle. I like the story but all of this repeativeness is boring.

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

again reruns

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ok so loving it without the rerun POVS

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

cant imagine 6 in a house

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

they both need PTSD counseling

Going Home by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

After a long shift in the ER, Edward goes home to Bella and Jasper. AH and NC-17 for language and lemons:) One-shot, for now at least.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6140 Read Count: 4452
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2010
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Date: 08 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hot

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

well that's a committment...good start

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?

wtf is a goat?



Author's Response:

If you've never seen the movie Waiting with Ryan Reynolds DO IT, The Goat was introduced to me by that movie. Basically, The Goat is when a guy tucks his dick and balls between his legs and bedns over, showing you the goods from behind.  This can only be done if the guy is above average in the size department.  I have seen The Goat in real life, it's not pretty.  Thanks so much for reading <3

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero

great just doesn't say enough,....



Author's Response:

Thanks so so much!!!!

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

great chapter

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Date: 27 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: The Epilogue

wonderful

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Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

I think I may have read this elsewhere, I think her father lives in a nudist colong and might have been a porn star, I guess I will wiat and see

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I did not quite get the epiphany,

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I really enjoyed this chapter, and any critics from the last chapter would have to realize how Edward wasn't enjoying this lesson either but knew it was important for them both in order to continue the lifestyle they have chosen

Alice is just a brat who could use a good spanking

 

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Thought it was a good chapter and explained a few things? Leah is just afraid for Bella, but why is her vagina eggplant colored. I was surprised to realized Edward and Bella have only been together a month, they have come a long way.

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Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving it so far, wish my husband wasn't so jealous of my reading



Author's Response:

I know that feeling...it's a lot worse now that I'm writing ... in any case, welcome to my little story of love and lust ...lml

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Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

that was hot



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it ...lml

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

lemons are always good but plot is important too and you combine both well



Author's Response:

Thanks .. I try ...everyone always wants more lemons ( who wouldn't ) but i think if I wrote anymore I might as well write porn ...lol ...thanks for the commments ...lml

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

hot hot hot



Author's Response:

Thank you...lml

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I don't know enough about all the details to question you. I read for enjoyment not to pick on writers. I think you are a wonderful one.



Author's Response:

I just glad you like the  story ...thanks for all the comments ..lml

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am a slave to the needle as well. There is something very addictive about them. I would like to see Bella and Edward get pierced.



Author's Response:

happen to be one also .. did you read the 1st interview with Edward .. I don't see any piercings or tats in his future ...lml

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I hope edward ends up ripping James' balls and dick off

but it sweet that they love each other and can admit it?

Was curius if there was a pic of the tattoo that Bella is getting? Is it one of yours?



Author's Response:

The picture of the tat is on the extra's page...it is pretty and feminine ,,,check it out (((there are a bunch of pictures on there )))...lml

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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OK, now I am not usually picky but I do not think Edward would say ain't

He did go to Dartmouth



Author's Response:

You don't think he would.?..I've been in OR's where the surgeon has said ain't ... I think in the heat of the moment anything can come out ....but I must say someone else made the same comment, in a very rude way I might add, and we can agree to disagree at least you didn't insinuate that I was of low inteligence or a southern hick ...lol....thanks for reading...lml

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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

interesting device



Author's Response:

yes .. it is...lol

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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Well now I am sad because I have caught up and will have to wait. That said I am still enjoying this and you are right emotional scars never really go away you just learn to live with them and not let them eat you up. I was a victim of rape at 17 and them an abused wife for 5 years. I have a domination fantasy but have never really acted upon it. Although my husband does appreciate the fact I like if rough sometimes. Hoperfully not TMI. It takes a lot to admit these feelings after abuse for fear you will put yourself into that sintuation voluntarily. There is a huge difference between abuse and consenual domination but not everyone gets thats especially men I believe.



Author's Response:

it's the experience of the Dom that makes the differance...I think most woman have that same fantasy, and there are many that have dealt with past sexual abuse of one kind or another. It's a matter of moving on with your life ... however I must say I watch my daughters very closely so that they remain safe ...thanks for reading ,,,lml

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Any way they used those 10 minutes eith Edward with his pants off was bound to be good!



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Yes...anyway at all, Hell I could just stand there and look at him for ten minutes ...lol ....usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving, yes you are crazy and since it it 11:30 I hope you are drinking lots of coffee to give you strength in your shopping frenzy,

I am loving this story

 



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Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

good job



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Thank you...

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

CAN YOU TELL ME THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE WALMART AND THE TARGET?

I LOVE THIS STORY BTW



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I didn't get back to you in time... did you figure it out? Do you subscribe to TA (TwilightersAnonymous) They have the best info....Thanks for reading and here is your teaser....

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

 

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

yeah but as you said paybacks are hell and I bet Edward does more than a little teasing.

I would have to say Edward would have to be a Great Dane if he was a dog.



Author's Response:

lol ... Great Dane - Bah ahahahahahha