Reviews by adoxography
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story, and I thought that I should post. I would love to see this story get 400 reviews.



Author's Response:

I would too. Problem is I started the story on ff long before I put it on twcs. There are over 1600 reviews on ffn. I doubt this will catch up, but I'll keep trying. Maybe next story.  :)

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Please update!!

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Please update.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is with my beta now.

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I just checked this story. I was very pleased to find that there was a chapter.

Thank you

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

A person over on ff.net wrote a review about how he/she had mixed feelings about Edward. I must say that I agree with that.

The issue that I'm struggling with in this story is i'm not sure that the relationship bewteen Edward and Bella is a consensual one. Bella's character is so docile she might as well not be there. The relationship is so one sided that Edward can be in the relationship for the both of them. I really wish that a decient talk would happen between Bella and Edward so they can really learn where the each other stands in the relationship.

I will keep reading. I constantly look for updates in this story, but it feels like some things really need to be clarified. 



Author's Response:

Don't give up on Bella just yet. Yes, she's been swept up in the emotion and being claimed by Edward, but she's not a total pushover.Right now she is responding to Edward on an instinctual level. There's still so much she doesn't know yet. She needs to learn about the power she holds in a mating relationship.

 

 

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Alright It's mid August. Please update, I can't waite anymore, I have to know what happens. 



Author's Response:

I'm moving my daughter to college this week so real life is almost back to normal. I've been working on the next chapter but it's not quite ready. Should be about a week or so. Thank you for your patience with me.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Food for thought, this is from your own author's page; "Things I hate: Awesome Fanfiction that goes unfinished" ........hmmmmm I think that is rather interesting, since this story has not been update in such a long time. I'm looking forward to a new update some time, hopefully. 


Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: TPOV

Is this story over?

Midnight Carnival by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really hope that this story becomes somthing more than just three posts. There is so much that could be done with the story line. Please think about expanding the story to something a bit longer.

Great chapters though; please keep up the good work. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review! This is all I'm planning on writing for now, but I'm in talks with someone else who has asked if she could write a sequel.  If it pans out I'll let everyone know.  Thanks again!

Summary:

Stephan has lived the lifestyle of a Dominant for five years. After several rebellious teenage years, it gave him the stability and control he had been seeking after his parent’s death.

As president of a not-for-profit foundation, he knows what his future holds and what he wants out of life. All that changes when a simple lunch with his college friend and Mentor, Daren, leads him to buying a slave.

Thrust into a situation he never thought he’d be in, Stephan can’t walk away. He is compelled to help this girl in the only way he knows how.

Brianna knows only one thing, she is a slave. She has nothing. She is nothing.

Can Stephan help Brianna realize that she is much more than just a Slave?

 Slave Book Cover


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1571 Read Count: 689
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 21 Jul 2011
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Are you planning on posting the entire book in this story section? I would love to finish this story. I've read half of it on ff.net before the story got pulled. I won't read the intro just to find out I can't read any more of it. My computer does not open e-books well at all. It would be disheartening to start the story again just to find out I will never know what the ending is.


 



Author's Response:

No. As the story is going to be publsihed, I will not be posting it on-line. Also, this is a series, so the whole story will not be in one book. There will be at least 4.

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44070
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

I like the contrast of all the dirty things he will do to her in a white room. :) That was genius. 

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story so well becasue it remineds me of what I never was able to finish with Finding Bella. I just really hope that I will be able to read this story untill its complete. I hope that this story does not become an abbondand fic, or gets pulled from this website before its completed. Please keep up the good work.

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

There hasn't been an update in a while. This story is to good to become abandoned. Please update soon. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324374
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Does Edward have some S/M experience in his past? I'm not sure I'm liking this kind of Edward with a super naive and sexually inexperienced girl. If this story keeps heading this direciton they need a serious talk about sexual expectations or a contract. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110634
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I like the start to this story, please post another chapter soon :)

Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 146227
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I enjoyed this story and I'm exicted for the sequel. However, I just have one question, why did you stop double spacing in the last paragraph? All the diolouge in one big paragraph was slightly hard to follow.

 

With that said, I can't waite for the sequel. I hope you post it soon. Great Job!

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait for the next chapters. Please post them soon.

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm still completely in love with this story. I'm looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What Happneded to Uncle Jimmy? I get the releationship with Edward is heating up but. she hasn't called Jimmy once. Wouldn't Bella's remaining family be worried about her?

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Please post the sequel soon. I've been re-reading this. I've been looking for more Mobward stories, but I can't find any that are like this one.

Summary:

MOTMFFF

Edward "The Boss" Cullen and his wife, Bella, survived hell and back. They are looking toward the future, which included a new path for the Cullen Consortium and impending parenthood. Edward and Bella are very excited for their new roles in their lives as Mommy and Daddy. 

 

In the wings, there's a new enemy waiting. A man determined to bring down the Consortium and specifically, Edward Cullen. He was going to stop at nothing to put "The Boss" behind bars for the rest of his life. He partners with an unlikely ally, a woman who wants what she deserved. What she is owed, by her only family. 

 

Will Edward, Bella and the family be able to move past this latest threat? One thing is for certain, they are Married to the Mob: Fighting for Freedom. 

 

Banner by Clo Rodeffer


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194528 Read Count: 41082
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2018 Updated: 07 Jul 2020
Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Thank you for this chapter. I love Mobward and Dolce. I do think Mike and Tyler might have been in on the kidnaping. 

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 14 May 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Will this story ever get written?

Reviewer: adoxography Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Thank you for posting this story. I've been waiting on this all summer.