Reviews by janm
Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Such a fantastic story. Very well writtan.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

Really, really beautiful.

Minibusted by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

After Alice puts a risque engagement photo of Bella & Edward in all the local papers, they attempt to lie low and avoid the gossips. 23 days before the wedding, BD, canon-based.

A Sequel to “Unforeseen Events”. Please read UE first or this will not make any sense:)

Rated NC-17 for sexuality and some language. Lemons in some chapters.

To learn what kind of 1910's slang Edward might use, go to www.alphadictionary.com/slang

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14139 Read Count: 4945
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2011 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Clifton Hill

Great songs for Edward, some of my favorites.



Author's Response:

Glad you like them. The music is important to me. xo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Practise, Edward!

Poor Edward, having to listen to teenage thoughts.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Gambling

Eww. Lauren.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: Saying 'Goodbye' to the Group

Really really go story. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks hon', and you're welcome. xo

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Date: 16 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Thwarted

Just finished  on Forrest and followed over hear. Now that the gang is crashing the party poor Edward and Bella better behave. Can just see the thoughts going through Jessica's head! Shopping trip! Just what Alice wanted to hear

Summary:

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Bella and I were now being babysat at every moment. Alice had peeked, five days earlier, and had Seen... distressing things. I couldn't even kiss Bella these days without having Alice and company show up to remind us that we couldn't get carried away.

 

The fallout was threefold. One, we were dangerously horny. Two, we were nervous wrecks. Three, we were Bridezilla and Groomzilla We were no longer behaving in our accustomed fashion. We were nuts.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11110 Read Count: 5575
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2009 Updated: 18 Sep 2009
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Worse Than Charlie

Way to go

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Getting Out of Limbo

This get wierder and wierder. Whatever helps I guess.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Entertaining Alaskans

Oh poor Edward. TMI Bella.



Author's Response:

She does tend to make him blush, doesn't she?  And he can.  Trust her.

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

Nice crisp ending. Like HEA. Good that everyone got what they desirved.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, janm!!!

Ah, I've got to have that HEA...lol...only way I work!

Kathie

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As a knight wouldn't he have insisted they wait?



Author's Response:

He was in love...and planned to marry her...ASAP...and as a Knight, his promise was GOOD...he considered them married that night...

Thanks for reading, janm...and I hope you like the epilogue...

Kathie

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well Edward doesn't have a choice now, does he.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So is Alice not seeing her because she's pregnant?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Don't give in Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

No one could break her bond to Edward.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think Victoria will somehow betray him. She wouldn't like him having Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward may be able to exist with it, but will Bella?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 wHAT I anticipted JAmes doing.  He would never be satisfied wwith jus killing her. Oh Bella, death wouls vw much easier

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

So did she just not date?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

Anziety must be killing them both. Don't think he'll follow through.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Edward always overthinks things and Bella is alway impulsive.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

Finally honesty.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Very sensual accounting. Wheww

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

What a flowing of sensory gratification. Too bad most first times aren't that wonderful.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

Always hate it when they don't say what they mean. Separation anxiety already here!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Oh Emmett is so great!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Sappy goodness



Author's Response:

Janet, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I hope you were entertained by our fairytale turned romantic comedy!

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Not sure how I feel about this.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hmm, we haven't met too many other characters, someone we know?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Don't think much of their police work. They're making some really stupid mistakes but getting the job done at the end I guess. My fatherr-in-law was a detective. If these three were good, I'd hate to see the inept.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hope they stop him before any more damage done. I'm really worried about Bella Friday night.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Still not satisfied with their saftey.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

They're being such rookies on this case. Thought they were good at what they do. Even Charlie's Angels(which was a horrible show) was better than this.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She better not do this one without backup (wires at the very least).

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter12

Maybe a little blackmail?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Kind of suspected this might happen. Glad it was Emmett and not Jake. Must have been really hard on Edward.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Jake or Emmett. What dumb police work not to have back-up. Stupid plan Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

And Rose doesn't know about Jasper and Alice yet!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh, this isn't good.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good for Alice. Poor Jasper and Edward. Can Bella really handle James. I really hate him.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Let's see what kind of actors they are.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How is she going to stay undercover? Of course, under the covers would be good too!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Knew her inteligence would draw her out.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a predicament they're both in.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't fight fate.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really cute, not the ordinary Bella meets Edward. Love highly energetic Alice.

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quick relationship.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So he didn't get Bella's message yet?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Tragic past.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She buying drugs again?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So afraid she would have an abortion. I think Riley will turn them in.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh yeah, Ambien the lifesaver.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yeah, she's being stupid.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123469
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The First Six Months

It's hard imagining them with the age difference. Edward's kids would be better with Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months

Is Edward sure the kids are his? With Tanya's past it's a good possibility they aren't.



Author's Response:

They are - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

What on earth is Esme's problem.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

What a tear jerking ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Prenuptual Posturing by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

There are 3 days remaining until the wedding, and houseguests are driving Edward and Bella mad. Fourth book in the Unforeseen Events Series.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and lemons.  All our favourite canon characters, taken in a slightly AU direction.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62357 Read Count: 12033
[Report This] Published: 05 Oct 2019 Updated: 10 Nov 2009
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Calm Before the Storm

So funny.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Alaskan Houseguests

That had to be awkward, even for a vampire.



Author's Response:

It certainly was.  Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sleepover At Charlie's

Oh, if Charlie only knew.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Madhouse

How utterly funny.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Rehearsing

Laughing so hard I'm crying.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bella Bimbo

Best rehersal ever. Some of my favorite music, by the way.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Countdown

Wow this is going to be some wedding.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Why  can't all guys be so romantic?



Author's Response:

Well... they don't read minds, and they haven't been taught. lol  I'm getting to have a lot of Twiguys reading.  I think they're trying to get hints on how to treat girls.  :)

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: The chips are down

A lot of changing lifestyles.

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Alice Brandon, comtesse de Marillac

The best coma anyone could ever have. Let's hope he doesn't get all his memory back.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock

Wish they would all just run away.



Author's Response:

Yes, me too, but then the story would be over...

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell

Shit what awful timing. Hopefully the head injury will change Jasper's persoality. That's the only hope for him. How convient Alice is in the infirmary.



Author's Response:

I was willing to have Edward and Bella go farther in this chapter, but my beta didn't agree. So it will have to wait a little while...

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cross Aro

Aro is one of the lowest I know.



Author's Response:

This is exactly how I want the readers feel about him :-)

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra

So Edward is good with women, still doesn't excuse what he does.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

Carlisle is so good, how did his sons get so bad?



Author's Response:

Edward and Emmett are not that bad compared with their employers. They are mostly opportunistic.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges

Hoping Carlisle meets Esme and convinces his sons to leave and take the women with them.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Emmett Cullen, comte de Morvalle

So mutual attraction for them. Will this be cannon for the rest?



Author's Response:

It's canon all the way. I don't mess with the pairings. I leave it to other authors who have weirder fantasies :-)

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Another kind of punishment

Edward is still horrid, haven't seen any real change in him.



Author's Response:

Yes, he's certainly not the gentleman in this chapter, but he could have been worse.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Second day in Volterra

Rose and Alice seem to be handling the news well.



Author's Response:

Rose isn't on the same page than Bella regarding their whole ordeal. Alice doesn't know what's in store for her soon, so she takes it cool.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The trap

Oh, no Bella's really going to be punished now.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Jacob Black's escape

Don't know if he was really brave or really stupid.



Author's Response:

Probably a little of both.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The harem

Quite the meeting. Poor Bella, she's always been sex crazed.



Author's Response:

This is a response to your other review. As I didn't know what chapter your review was refering to, I didn't answer quite well :-)    Jacob was just trying to comfort Bella because he feared for her mental state.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The journey to Volterra

What on earth did Jacob hope to accomplish. Now they don't think she's an innocent. I have a feeling he just made things a lot worse for her.



Author's Response:

The poor guy just wanted to get help for the girls.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The lords of Volterra

The Volturi are monsters as usual. But is Edward really much better?



Author's Response:

I do hope he is...

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

Like this period of history. Apparently Bella doesn't realized she would need to prove virginity to her husband? It was certainly acceptable for a man but definately not a woman. Rose is above all that.



Author's Response:

It's interesting that you ask the question because it's going to become an issue (Bella not staying a virgin) as I'm wrapping up this story in French. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Deflowering Isabella

Finally, wondering what they plan on doing.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

Really confused here. Not saying losing someone is easy but this seems extreme.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

Edward should run not walk away before she screws him up as well as any family they might have. I've got a sister-in-law like her, don't think anyone in the family is untouched by her insanity.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Together

Probably more realistic than the sex crazed Bella most people write but about as exciting as mud. Jane, Sam's new girlfriend?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

I've been accused of not understanding psycological problems. Know it's a problem to face fears but sometimes to me it seems it's self imposed. Anyone could have a problem if you let yourself. I feel sorry for Edward not her.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

Bella has some serious problems. She needs help and if he doesn't see it he needs help too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

You may think I'm cold hearted but I guess I've gone through so much worse than this and think Bella is really overreacting. Sorry. Been dealing with too many crisises since I was 10(probably younger), This really feels like a cake walk to me. Grow up Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

No disrespect but these two have the personality of wet fish. Both seem a little dead. Really don't get Bella's problem. People pick themselves and move on every day.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

The only think I recognized was Dirty Dancing.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

Really a little stilted.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Team Edward yeah

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

Anxious to find out why he was a jerk and why she still hated him for 7 yrs.

Toasty Warm by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by EternallyCullen

B and E wed.  There's some romancing going on behind the scenes, some teasing at the reception, and some trouble from Jacob.

Sequel to Prenuptual Posturing, in the Unforeseen Events Series. Rated M for later chapters. All belongs to Stephenie Meyer. Romance, humour, hurt and comfort. The Cullens and Hales, The Denalis, Charlie, The Dwyers, The Clearwaters, Jacob, Sam, Ang and Ben, the Forks High acquaintances.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65913 Read Count: 12645
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2009 Updated: 23 Dec 2009
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

Beautiful and meaniful ceremony. Better than the book.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :) High praise indeed.  I thought a lot of people who haven't been to a Christian wedding might enjoy it. xo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Husband and Wife

Waited too long as it is.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Dinner, with Roast, Is Served

Would have loved to see them with the computerized baby. Those things can be really annoying.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Blushing Bride

Great John Denver song. I made up a great playlist that I thought would be great for the reception. Great love songs and 50's music. Could really invision them singing to eachother.