Reviews by janm
Summary:

Here are some outtakes that I promised for my story Lonesome Hearts.  Please refer to that story first!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3033 Read Count: 1203
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Drunken Cowboys

A drunk Endward is so funny.

Summary:

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Banner by: edwards_girl_1918... Author & Co-Author of some great Fics... check ´em out!!!

4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

Time to change.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Hard decision. Not fair to give him a chance.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Wookies & Good Friday

Trying to go back and remember that day, but I'm drawing a blank.



Author's Response:

it's in Edward's pov...Love Rescue Me.  THanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

I was never good with April Fool's jokes, happy Emmett is, but then, was there ever a doubt?



Author's Response:

he's a professional pain in the ass.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Boxer Shorts & Serenades

Is everyone 5years old here?



Author's Response:

we are all six and a half....just like Matilda

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Love the humor you're putting in here. It's great when I smirk and no one knows what I'm smiling about.



Author's Response:

lol.  glad you like it. Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

Guessing Bella had a close call with some guys



Author's Response:

you'll get the whole story in a few more chaps.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Gotta love Emmett. I should really think about the chapter before I review but I'm just so anxious for the next chapter. Jake hasn't been mentioned, wonder if he is somehow involved in all this. And wonder what the deal with Edward is. Flowers were really sweat.



Author's Response:

no jacob in this story.  I've actually got another story in my head for later later later...in which the jacob character will figure prominently.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

I agree, he would probably enjoy it. Hope Edward won't hurt Bella.



Author's Response:

we'll know soon enough.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

Really wondering what's going on with these two.



Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying it.  THanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

Way to go Rose.



Author's Response:

rose is awesome.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Mercer Island & Minibars

Wow, didn't expect that.



Author's Response:

a little shocking...but in a weird way it was fun to write. lol

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Charlie, Charlie Charlie.



Author's Response:

Team Charlie!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

That proposal was perfect Emmett.

My husband and I were discussing Clint earlier tonight. Found it funny. Glad Charlie's happy.



Author's Response:

Clint is a national treasure. lol.  thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

Our son got married at the Olympic National Park last summer. It was beautiful. His wife was a park ranger there. Spent 7 days at Lake Crescent Lodge, went to Forks, La Push, Port Angeles the whole bit. Spent another two weeks in Seattle. Took AmTrack there from Illinois. Unfortunately spent the first 6 days with food poisoning from Union Station. Would love to go back again, they just bought a house by Lake Washington, so it's a good excuse.



Author's Response:

sounds like a great trip.  Sorry that the park ranger in my story is a bad guy.  He's actually based on a jerk i know here on the East Coast...they are federal officers..I'm fairly certain that if it's a national park it's the same there too..but if not I'll just claim artistic license. lol.  I'll give you a heads up that the gang is actually going to be taking a trip on Amtrak in the near future...hmmmmm...i think you'll enjoy that, but I'll make sure no one eats at Union Station.  My sister-in-law and nieces live in Seattle...good excuse for a trip.  Thanks for reading and revieiwing!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

What a sad story. Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

that was one of the hardest chapters to write. ugh.  While trying not to be too graphic...it was a hard line to walk.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

Never had expeiences like that in church. Old lady was funny, but don't blame her.



Author's Response:

awww so you'd grope our poor Edward in church huh?  LOL  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

He had to know this would be over the net. How stupid could he get?



Author's Response:

he's isolated himself for too long...he's pretty dense.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Pedophiles & Daddy's Little Girl

Must have been impressive to move Rose.



Author's Response:

yep.  You get all the gory detail in Edward's POV.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bourbon & Epitaphs

Yep, figured that s out. He never made a move on her, that should habe been another clue.



Author's Response:

you are one of the few that guessed it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Tasers & Interrogations

 

Emmett really takes his role seriously. He should really go into acting.



Author's Response:

he is a total nut, and is totally based on one of my cousins...well he's actually a compilation of 3 people...but one cousin more than anyone else.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: First Dates & Riff Raff

Really wondering how this will end well. Gives you a new appreciation for what they all go through.



Author's Response:

it must be a weird existence.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

Hate to think of how he's corrupted the NFL locker room. Those poor rookies.



Author's Response:

LOL  never thought of those poor guys.  too funny.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Aspen & Cold Showers

No one bets against Alice. Not looking forward to that. But then, again, when doesn't Edward do something stupid.



Author's Response:

true.  he's got to learn the hard way.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Handcuffs & Power Suits

Met many rangers this summer. Didn't know they carried such weight.



Author's Response:

99.9 percent of them are probably really good people.  Unfortunately, a park ranger was the perfect villain for my story. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

Yeah, that is distracting. Read that Rob has a line but isn't modeling it. What a shame.



Author's Response:

how did i miss that?  oh well, you can always view the photos of him modeling underwear as a teen....ewww now i feel like a pedophile.  lol   Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake: The He-Man Incident

Emmett would have been so much fun as a little kid, reminds me of my boys, never knew what they would do either. And boy, could they come up with things together.



Author's Response:

i have all brothers and lots of nephews (who always got into stuff when younger...now not so much..thank God!).  The Lord had pity on me and sent me all daughters....yeah right...I don't understand them.  Boys would have been easier I think! nah, probably not.  but at least I would understand them.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chipmunks & Oscars

Let me guess, Tanya's pregnant and of course, Edward is the "father".



Author's Response:

by now i'm sure you know the answer....gah..I'm so far behind with my review responses...shame on me!  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

How did Emmett ever get through negotiations, must have a good agent.



Author's Response:

he is ....charming?  hahaha  in his own way, I guess that's true.  THanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Vandalism & The Apocalypse

Thank you for that piece of comfort. Couldn't handle a NM separation. Did he attach someone?



Author's Response:

glad you're liking the story...sorry i fail with responding to reviews sooner...i had no computer for a while...now everything is good again.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

Very brave of Tanya.



Author's Response:

she's not a bad person.  refreshing for a change huh? lol   tHanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Waxward & Sexward

With Emmett's influence, I'm surprised she has any self-control. Really appreciate the quick chapter's. Just started yesterday, but catching up quick.



Author's Response:

you will be caught up to me before long!  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

Jack Sparrow, ok, but no way Johnny Depp. Not my favorite, but then who can compare to Rob? Why do I get a "feeling" their problems are far from over? Sob?



Author's Response:

mmm...i like all Johnny..except maybe 21jumpstreet...not my fave.  more drama, and unfortunately more angst, will happen sometime.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Wow, a drunk Bella is a strange Bella, that won't help the tabloids.



Author's Response:

as long as she doesn't turn into Lindsey Lohan or Charlie freaking Sheen...i think we're good. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Unsolicited Advice & Airline Wings

Alright Emmett and Rose.



Author's Response:

i'm too much of a germaphobe to ever attempt what they did.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

I agree, time isn't the factor. Just thought of a good song for Bella, Billy Joel's , Only The Good Die Young. Catholic girls wait much to late, sooner or later it comes down to fate. Hard to believe, I was the Catholic girl (thankfully not any more). Married going on 40 yrs. Never felt it was wrong to start early, but only the one. At one time, gasp, even wanted to be a nun. Heaven forbid, probably would have been one running after the parish priest.



Author's Response:

yeah...hubs loves that damned song...taunts me with it often.  I was a nice girl before i met him.  He and Billy Joel can both suck my dick! lol.  I went to Catholic school...i would have made a terrible nun though.  My potty mouth would have gotten me tossed out obviously. lol.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward

Bella better watch that drinking. She's starting to get out of hand. Wish I knew these songs, maybe I'd understand what's going on better.



Author's Response:

check out the songs on youtube.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Wild Turkey & Jedi Training

That's an adveture I would love to see. My guess, maybe a job offer for Emmett?



Author's Response:

haha...he'd be great with the kiddies!  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Swing Dancing & The Dearly Departed

Is church never normal thing for these guys? Whose there? Drawing a blank.



Author's Response:

maybe i'm weird because i've had so many strange things happen during Mass. lol.  i knew i was weird.  geesh.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

Yea, that would be Father Pat's ultimatim.



Author's Response:

he would be a terrible priest if it wasn't.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

Yeah, even after 45 years still miss my mom.



Author's Response:

Mine's still here...although not well.  Dad's gone...miss him very much.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

Ok, that was weird. By the way, Emmett didn't last long. Why doesn't he just wait and confess the morning of the wedding?



Author's Response:

once he actually abstains, he sticks with it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

What would they do if he was in the service and shipped overseas?



Author's Response:

poor bella...she definitely couldn't handle that...not yet anyway.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

Rose is getting to be a Jerry Springer. Heaven help us. Does Emmett plan on telling Father Pat? Don't know how Edward sat through a Easter Sunday mass, those can be long. Haven't heard a single priest who can give a good message and is able to quote scripture well. Most Catholics I know have never opened the Bible.



Author's Response:

i've read the bible...more than once.  I really like the old testament...it a big soap opera.  lol.  full of all kinds of murder and mayhem. 

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Emmett would look great in a kilt, so would Edward.



Author's Response:

mmmm.  i can't really say anthing else.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

When will Bella realize she shouldn't drink? I really have a problem with people drinking so much. It messes with too many lives.



Author's Response:

i wish i was young enough to drink that much and not feel like hammered crap for 2 days after....ugh.  now, one drink and i'm embarrasing....sometimes with no drink i'm embarrassing..but that's another story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class

Have a terrible feeling she's going to walk in to him with another woman.



Author's Response:

psyche!  lol

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises

Oh, I'm bad, really misjudged him. Just used to Bella getting hurt.



Author's Response:

in this story...edward will always be the good guy.  i couldn't stand it otherwise.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Geeee have no idea.



Author's Response:

i know right? lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Nice, he's really got strong will power.



Author's Response:

ah well....neither of them knows what they've been missing yet. 

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

What, she's not going to even see him until the wedding night? Hope she's safe from who ever.



Author's Response:

see the peen?  lol  that remains a mystery.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

Glad she's getting help. Boy, these two weeks seem long.



Author's Response:

i am just too wordy. lol

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Yep, did figure it out. Sorry. I remember my gyno telling me after my third baby that it was time to separate the woman from the girl. My grandmother died at 31 with three kids, my mom at 32 with 3 I was convinced I was going at 3. I've had a few close calls but still kicking, my dad's father was 28. I'm an old lady. You can't dwell on what you lost but remember what you had.



Author's Response:

very true.  the life expectancy in our family has ping ponged all over the place....  i try not to worry about it...as long as i go before my children, i'm good.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

Wow, a lot happened in this chapter. Don't even know what to review on. Emmett can be really sweat and Carlisle and Esme are the best. Love, love,love Alice. What a precious note from Edward to his mom.



Author's Response:

it was a pretty full chap..lol.. not so busy from Edward's pov though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Don't know about the accident but Emmett's ad on the side is perfect.



Author's Response:

i thought it humorous.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Had a feeling that's what he was planning.



Author's Response:

He's a sweetheart.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

Better to have Father Pat (although what an unmarried person can counsel on sex and marriage is absolutely ridiculous). I have a big problem with that, probably one of the reasons I left the Catolic Church. Another thing bugging me is this Mr. Movie Star B.S. It feels like that is what she's really excited about.



Author's Response:

the classes are for the most part taught by married couples, with input from the priest here and there...that's how i'm going to write it.  I'm not going into a lot of detail because, frankly, that would be boring.  and the 'mr movie star'...just a pet name, she likes to tease him..that's all.  She'd rather not have the attention.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

I'm going to whine, I never went to prom either!!!



Author's Response:

i went to prom...it was unexciting.  i liked writing about it more than attending actually. lol

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

It's making him look guilty by not talking about it.



Author's Response:

he is flipping out as usual.  He hasn't been tested since the Tanya debacle...i have faith he'll pull it together.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

A lot of things went in his favor.



Author's Response:

some of them he caused, but not all.   Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Thank goodness she's alive but I bet Edward will be upset with her.



Author's Response:

his reaction is typically Edward, I think.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Can't they catch a break? So glad she didn't freak out about the car.



Author's Response:

don't think of this as something bad....will be more like closure.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

Wow, those two have been through a lot. Hope this trip goes well.



Author's Response:

lol...it's like a soap opera on speed.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

Some great(maybe) memories of Amtrak. The Amtrak shuffle as you walk through. Horrible bathrooms. Nothing like throwing up on a moving train. Observation cart was great. They would have had an Indian guide from Washington. Was interesting. Didn't see any wildlife like I wanted though.



Author's Response:

i am thankful Emmett didn't visit your room. ; )  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

Personally, I really don't like Oprah. But if I remember correctly she was a victom of abuse at one time.



Author's Response:

yes she was...i don't all the details, but for the purpose of the story, it made sense for her to get involved with that aspect of Bella's life.  i've probably watched her show twice? lol.  Talk shows are not my thing....i get bored easily.  I'd rather watch bits and pieces on youtube.  Oprah was excellent in The Color Purple.  ; )

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Steak 'N Shake is great but I didn't think there was one in that area. It is a regional chain, so I thought. I love Daniel too, last chap was hillarious. Poor thing. Need to check out  Glamour Shots.



Author's Response:

i believe steak and shake started on route 66... they have some on the east coast now i think.  Glamour Shots is great!  and Daniel...oh my.  He has a great Facebook page as well.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Teepees & Tribal Law

Was really proud of Bella for standing up to the reporter. Connie reminded me of Rita Skeetar.



Author's Response:

hahaha...I forgot about that woman.  There are a lot of crazy characters in Harry Potter.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Anxious to learn more.



Author's Response:

here's the link to the ENTIRE phone conversation between Charlie and Rose:  http://www.facebook.com/pages/Virgins-Villains-fanfic/153713394654002#!/note.php?note_id=177344502329689

Enjoy! and thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135060
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Not sure exactly how everything happened, but sure we'll find out. Know it's sick but story is interesting.



Author's Response:

I promise that everything gets explained. It was a difficult stoy and I'm not sure why I felt this need to write it but I did.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh that poor child.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not getting help isn't wise.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This girl really needs help.



Author's Response:

It's a process and it takes time for her to admit that she needs help:) Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Emmett really isn't equipped to handle this. He's what 18?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very brave of him wanting to help but is it really the best thing?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She's got a good support system but that's really not enough.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't understand how after missing 6 years of school she could just pass a test that easily

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Seems like the Hales aren't going to want their kids around Bella. At least the Cullens are all in her corner.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

How did she read if she was in the dark?

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It's a good start but after what she went through this really needs professional help

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

The Hale parents are noticably silent.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

someone is always there to make it worse.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Real tough love in action.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Tear jerking.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Far cry from Isle Esme.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but it's what she needs right now. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I've enjoyed them all.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I don't think anything can really pepare her for it. But it needs to be done.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

It was right with Edward, I was surprised with her orgasm though.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Know there is a long road to go but this far seemed a little too easy.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

He should have told her before now.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

It's not as easy when it happens to you.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I don't know if you can ever have complete closure in this. When she and Edward eventually have sex it will always be a memory for them. In some ways it's harder for Kate and Edward. Just like when something physical happens to a love one it's not only the victim who suffers.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Not surprised at all. Some people can't see the truth.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I find it hard to believe that Bella could find anything enjoyable after what she went through. Early hysterectomies often trigger early menopause. She probably needs hormonal therapy too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Was Bella ever checked for STD's?

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Angela surprised me. Didn't expect that from her.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I thought he was going to take her to a baseball game. Another step she needs to take.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Glad the kids are all still together. Unfortunately situations like this actually happen. Hard to believe such sick people are in the world.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review:)

Summary:

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It has been an utter loss to Twilight fans that Stephanie Meyers did not finish Midnight Sun. I know I was devestated and could not let it end where she did. That is where my obsession began and it ended with the next three stories from EPOV. Sorry, but I couldn't help myself, I needed to know how it ended. But what came as the biggest surprise to me was how it did end... I never would have guessed after writing for the next three books it would have ended this way.

So join me on this most intriguing journey of Edward's. I promise some surprises, some good, some not so good. I do promise to give you an end, one hopefully you will enjoy.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74360 Read Count: 3200
[Report This] Published: 24 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Confession

You'ver really kept with Stephenie. This is always one of my favorite chapters.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Mind over Matter

"I may not be human but I am a man" one of my favorite lines.



Author's Response:

I'm with you on that. The way he talks is what I loved about his character most. Thanks for reading and reviewing it's appreciated.

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Could have been worse.