Penname: Robsblueeyes [Real name: Jane
Member Since: 10 Dec 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi,


My name is Jane and I'm a 44 year old single mum from Manchester in the UK. I'm a stay at home mum at the moment but I'm looking for a job, need to pay the bills. I discovered Twilight when the film came out and everyone was raving about the books. The books weren't well known in the UK at all, in fact, you may have found it difficult to find them at all, the film fuelled their popularity. Anyway, I bought the books for my daughter who wanted to know what all the fuss was about. That was 4 years ago and she's never read the books, not one word...I can hear you all gasping in disbelief...I however, devoured them. I couldn't get enough, completely absorbed was an understatement it was the best diet I've been on. I was so consumed by these characters the bare minimum of housework was done, my daughter reminded me every day that she was hungry and I needed to feed her, laundry was done at the last possible moment and the ironing got done on a need to wear basis...my obsession was born.


I'm Team Edward, always have been and always will be but Jasper owns a place in my heart too. After reading the books countless times I found both FanFiction and Twilighted through Twitter, some ladies on there were rec'ing some fics and my curiosity got the better of me. One of the first fics I read was Master of the Universe and I'm sure you've all read that one too, another one was Clipped Wings and Inked Armour, another amazing story and thus began my second obsession. I can't get enough, I'm on both sites every day unless the 'puter breaks then I go into withdrawal. Twilighted feeds my need for RP Fics mainly Rob and Jackson, some Kellan works it's way in there too but I read all types. I love slash and polyamorous stories and I've found that you find more of those on here. I've started to write a story myself, the characters popped into my head one day and now they won't leave me alone. I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer that I'd ever put it out there for others to read, at the moment I'm just enjoying writing it for me.


So that's me, feel free to ask my anything you want to know, you can follow me on Twitter @Janeybo send a request and I'll follow you back, I usually drop in there every day at some point, sometimes I just lurk other times I'll spout complete nonsense, I don't think my followers realise that Janeybo and Robsblueeyes are one and the same person. All the Robporn on there keeps me busy and of course there's 100 Monkeys, Kellan and Peter Facinelli. I'm beginning to think this all might be taking over my life slightly...what life I hear you all cry...ah well, you have to have some pleasures don't you? I may even say it's a guilty one, my daughter would die of shame if she knew all this. BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Jane x


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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Awww, they got a little girl.  She's going to so loved and treasured and thank goodness she won't have any memories of the Russian orphanage. Edward and Bella could become the new Brad and Angelina, lol.  

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I'm so glad that things are getting back to normal for these two and Bella's feeling both mentally and physically stronger.  I felt for sure that she'd go down the surrogacy route first of all, adoption in the UK is a long and difficult road to go down.  Despite all the children crying out for a good home the authorities make it really difficult making many couples give up from all the hoops they have to jump through or they suddenly find themselves too old, it's a complete joke. Thank God this is fiction and Edward and Bella probably won't face those hurdles.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I'm so glad Bella realised what she has and what she'd be running away from. Maybe Jake can hang around with Bella a bit more often, tell her when she's being ridiculous and to get over herself, you know, a bit of tough love.  You can't ever truly runaway from anything it's still in your head and your heart. Bella's grieving for what she's lost, what might have been and you can't rush it, she'll get there in her own time but I'm glad that Edward's there to remind her that everything isn't completely lost, just different.  They'll get there.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I'm so glad that Bella finally got the help she so desperately needed and that Edward did too.  Bella was finally healing both inside and out and then her hormones got the better of her.  I hope she hasn't done herself any serious damage, she's going to feel bad enough at setting her recovery back.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh that's so sad that Bella can't carry her own baby, I'm taking it though that they can still harvest her eggs so her and Edward can still have a biological baby by using a surrogate to carry it.  Even though Alice's story was awful and sad I really loved what she said about giving a child a chance at another better life, it was really lovely and touching.  I can understand Bella's frustration with herself and her recovery, maybe she would benefit from talking to a professional about what happened and how she's feeling.  It's a lot to deal with.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Thank God she's awake and joking, I don't think any of them could have stood much more. "Is that all?"  Isn't that the standard question we all ask when we've been in an accident?  It's so ridiculous that we ask it because you really wouldn't want more, lol.  Bella's got a long road of recovery ahead of her, I get the feeling she's going to get frustrated and Edward's going to be over protective.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh my God, it's going to be a long month.  How's Bella going to cope with Samson all on her own?  Lol, they might get to know each other a bit better, I still think Samson loves her he's just a bit over exuberant for her, hahaha!  Do they really show films in a cemetery?

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I hope that's the worst of it, that the press know they're married and nothing else has happened to Bella, but then Edward did say he didn't want to know about anything Alice saw unless it involved Bella being hurt or in danger.  I'm glad Bella was there with her mum when she had the baby, maybe they can start mending those fences now and building some bridges, lol, what do I sound like.

Jane x 

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh my God!  Poor Bella, trust her to get the worst of it.  I know Edward and Bella are no fans of James, but thank God he was there to call for help and comfort Bella, keeping her calm.  I hope Bella wakes up soon.  Is her pelvic injury going to stop her having children?

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

It's funny how you can go to a different country and feel completely at home as soon as you're there, you just know it's the place for you.  It sounds as though Bella got around the sights in London.  Lol, I can't believe she wouldn't try mushy peas with her fish and chips, they're yummy.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love that Edward loves being so whipped, lol.  I'm glad that James and Bella are not related, I don't think I said that last time, but maybe Charlie could give him an idea who his mum was seeing back in Forks.  I loved their little break, I could do with a bit of a paradise get away myself at the moment.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So James was thinking that Bella was his half sister.  He seemed genuine when he approached Bella at the awards, then he could have a list of possible 'suspects' for his dad.  Surely he would have expected to be asked to have a DNA test.  Let's hope he doesn't turn nasty after this and proper stalker on Bella.  Poor Charlie, he's been celibate for all those years, bless him, he needs a good woman to keep him warm in Forks, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

From the amount of school Bella's missing it seems to me she won't be graduating in May or she's going to have a shed load of work to catch up on to do so.  Jane is the biggest spoiled brat ever.  Surely the clue to who was going to actually be doing the work was the word 'tutor'.  How bloody thick could she be or lazy come to that, I hope Bella tells her to get lost.  I'm chomping at the bit to find out what Sam's found on James.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I don't think I could stand to be manhandled by stylists, make up artists and hair stylists all the time especially when they come at you with tweezers, I'm with Bella on that one, lol.  What on earth does James want?  Edward really won't be happy but meeting him has to be worth finding out what's been going on in his head.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Edward may not have liked going to talk to Tanya but he made a very good point, she should have a baby because she wants one and knows she can love and provide for it for the rest of her life, if she can't do that then she should have the baby adopted when it's born.  I hope she thinks about it properly and makes the right decision for once in her life.  Lol, they finally got to their double date with Jacob and Bree, sounds like they had a good time, Bree definitely had a good time and will probably be seeing her lovely indian meal again, hahaha!! Rather her than me.

Jane x

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I think it's going to be hard for them to keep the fact they're married a secret. I actually felt a little bit sorry for Zafrina when she found out and I think Bella got a little taste of how probably millions of women will react around the world when they find out too.  Renee.......I wish on one hand she'd stay away from Bella and then on the other hand I wish they could repair their relationship.  There could be friction if Bella finds out Edward gave her his number so she could stay in touch with them.  Tanya just gets more and more sly all the time.  Edward must have been in a really bad place to say that, before Bella came along, he would have said Tanya's baby was his, that's really just so sad that he was so low and desperate for a family.  Thank God Bella arrived on his doorstep after bumping into him.

Jane x

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is going to be a relationship that they work out as they go along.  I think them keeping things quiet at the moment is the best thing as they can get to know each other properly and build the solid foundations of their relationship. One of them is going to get fed up before the other at not being able to be seen as a couple in public.  With Edward doing promotional stuff and attending premieres without Bella I think she's going to find herself becoming quite jealous, I know I would, and that might force her hand to go public with Edward. A blind date of Angela and Ben, I can't wait.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You really couldn't get anything as a surprise for Alice, it must be annoying for her to always know what's going on.  Aww, Bella's getting a baby brother, let's hope that Renee isn't going to be asking Bella to babysit all the time.  Piano sex, noisy but, oh my.........there's no way that they'll be able to look at that piano again without imagining themselves on it, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lol, she's goint to blow his mind, amongst other things, hahaha!!  I think Bella's rant at he mum was long overdue.  I'd be devastated if my daughter thought that she'd brought herself up and I don't think that Bella should feel guilty for what she said, especially if it makes Renee a better mother the second time around.  I feel sorry for Phil, he wants to be a dad and involved with everything including Renee but she won't let him, she'll drive him away if she's not careful and let's face it even her cooking hasn't done that yet so he really is a keeper, lol.  I'm glad that all of this has led Bella to realise that she does want it all and she doesn't have to be like her parents.  This Black and White Ball sounds like it might be interesting, hehe.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ooooh, role play.......that was hot, lol.  Royce King is a total arsehole.  I'm glad that Rose didn't become his victim.  She may have been lied to, led on and then her and Bella had their apartment trashed but thank God she didn't become a victim of a different sort.  At least Edward got to do his night in shining armour routine, lol.  Now Emmett knows their secret, can he keep it from Rose until Bella can tell her?

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was not the best way for Rose to find out and look how she flew straight into protecting friend mode.  Will she ever be friends with Edward?  I'm glad she knows now.  Lol, Ben's in for a bit of shock isn't he, I can't wait.  I'm not sure that Edward's heart is really in retiring.  It seems like a good idea now because he's found Bella, wants to get married and have a family but he's still young and I think he'll get itchy feet to do something even if it's not acting.  Could Bella actually bear to be in school for all that time to get her doctorate?  It'll be a lot of juggling and hard work if they decide to start a family before she finishes.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Merry Christmas indeed and one to remember.  Bella seems to be making a bit more peace with herself about going public with Edward.  All relationships require give and take on both sides and this is just one of the many things that are going to come up for them.  As much as Bella wants to keep her anonymity she can't, it's sad but true and it wouldn't matter whether they went public in two months or two years it's still going to be big news and if people don't like that she's so young then tough.  She could be Edward's age and still some people wouldn't like it.  What matters is what her and Edward think, it's nobody else's business and Bella needs to stop worrying what the public will think about her, she'll drive herself insane, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awww, Edward's just learned that even though your parents may be gone you still want them to approve of your choices.  I'm not sure I could cope with Alice for long periods.  I don't mind the psychic thing it's the whirlwind of energy she has it's exhausting, lol.  I think Bella's going to be sad when Carlisle and Esme go home.  It's been so long since ahe's seen parents act the way they do, I think she's going to fall in love with that and them, of course.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward's in a better position than most.  He could cut back on his work without retiring, pick and choose a project when it suits him and his family, he doesn't have to constantly work and he doesn't have to completely stop.  Like I've said before I think he'll get bored eventually, he's too young to retire.  Picking and choosing what and when gives him balance.  I'm still not sure about Bella carrying on with school, she's missed out on so much by always being buried in her books and what is she going to do with her doctorate when she gets it?  It's definitely time for Tanya to be kicked into touch, I think she's a woman with a plan and it needs destroying before people get hurt.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Mmmm, black pudding, I love black pudding it originates from the area I live in.  Lol, I don't think Bella would appreciate the ingredients, my daughter gags at just the thought of it, hahaha!!  Bella certainly did fall in love with the way a family could and should be, maybe it is an ideal, but in some way, shape or form it's a connection and love that most of us are lucky enough to experience and enjoy.  She does have it with Charlie even if it's not obvious to her.  I love that she's going to be Edward's temporary agent, it's really pushing her out of her comfort zone but then it's really giving her a taste of life and showing her her potential.  Her unique personality could make her brilliant at this job, lol, she'll be able to hold her own with the big boys.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well I thought Tanya had another plan but I didn't think she'd done something like that.  If this was to turn into some sort of slanging match between Edward and Tanya, surely everything would come out on Edward's side as there are people that know his whole 'relationship' thing with the skank was a publicity set up.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Woohoo!!  They're engaged and Edward proposed in a very public place and yet made it very private, it was definitely so them, lol.  Samson does love Bella, he wouldn't let her in the house otherwise, he's just the Alice of the dog world a little over exuberant, hahahaha!!  Edward's so sweet to Bella and that ring sounds beautiful.  His mum would be so happy for them and no doubt she'd be dreaming of all the grandchildren she'd be getting.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

BlackandDeckerBella.com, bwahahahahaha!!  Emmett should start a comedy career never mind engineering.  Renee has to be the worst mother ever, who speaks to their child like that, it's completely disgusting and uncalled for. Unfortunately, it's a sad fact of life that no matter how bad the parent, kids are just programmed to always seek their approval in some shape or form.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

How's Bella going to get past this panic she feels when Edward's not there to help her with the paps?  Was it just Renee's stupid phone call that knocked all her confidence out of her?  I hope so, because running off and getting married isn't going to make dealing with all those photographers any easier.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

James is going to become a problem isn't he?  I loved Emmett's t-shirt and his little rant at Bella, she needed to know that he's not taking the piss and that he truly supports her and this is his way of showing it.  I think she needs reminding from time to time that she's not alone in all of this no matter how independent she feels and wants to be.  Will they elope or will Alice put a spanner in the works?  They need to do what they want to do.  As far as family is concerned, they can always have a blessing in the summer.  I'm not sure I'd want Renee at my wedding if she was my mum knowing how she feels about it all.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I knew James was going to be trouble,  I can't believe that he had the audacity to follow Bella into the changing rooms and do that.  Bella should have knee'd him in the balls, lol.  It scared them both though but surprisingly Bella's the one that's trying to put it more in perspective than Edward although I can totally understand his reaction.  Bella needs a bodyguard other than Emmett that can be there when he's not and she needs to learn self defence, that would give her more confidence.  We still use miles in the UK, lol, we like to pick and choose between old and new just to keep everyone on their toes, hehe!

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think Bella's just found her calling in life, lol, she's an effin natural.  I'm liking Jacob in this, he's not the complete knob head he usually is, it's quite refreshing not to have to dislike him, lol.  It was very thoughtful of Edward to ask Jacob to talk to Bella especially as they don't get on that well.  There could be some interesting banter on their double date, hahaha!!

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I have this picture in my head of Edward holding Bella's hand whilst they run from the press and he's giggling his head off, lol.  I love how Bella didn't hold back about Tanya and to some extent Edward.  I'm so glad Rose got her day in court and won, five million, wow!  She'd never have to work ever, I know that she will though.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well at least they got to the bottom of the Zafrina problem and who gave the story about Bella to the press.  People do things they wouldn't normally do when they are highly stressed and Bella recognised that this was totally out of character for Tyler, it doesn't really excuse what he did though.  Lol, trust Edward to give the game away to Alice when he decided where he and Bella were going to get married.  I'm wondering what Edward's surprise will be though. Could Bella be pregnant?

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Lol, I bet that was Alice.  Tanya is so deluded it's not even funny.  How can she think that everything that's happened to her is Edward's fault when she's clearly the one that made all the fuss and then go caught out in a lie, that girl has a slate missing off her roof.  I hope they find out what James is up to quickly, he's really creepy.  I'm looking forward to this wedding.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Awww, that was so lovely.  Edward must have spent a fortune on closing a road in Paris but then he is loaded and it's only money.  I knew their friends and family were going to be there, Bella's really bad at hiding things but she did well this time, I'm so glad that they got to be there to watch Edward and Bella get married.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I hate it when you get so much sleep that you're not tired and everyone else is zonked out, it's so frustrating.  I couldn't play the piano for toffee so if someone bought me one it would have to go in the garden shed so I wouldn't make peoples ears bleed, lol.  I loved Charlie's little speech, I should imagine it would be weird having a son-in-law that's so close to your own age.  I can't believe that Edward and Bella got down and dirty in the Louvre and then again I can, hahahaha!!

Jane x

Summary:

When Edward flees to Volterra after learning of Bella's death, he is coerced into staying as a member of the Volturi guard. When he becomes hopelessly lost, will he allow the person he least expected to find him? Sometimes redemption can be found even when it is not being sought after.  Contains slash and some dark themes.

 

Thanks to ms_ambrosia at twificpics.com for the banner!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Demetri/OC, Edward/OC
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106374 Read Count: 2609
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm liking the start and I'm wondering if there's a twist in there and Bella's still alive.  Edward didn't seem to stick around for the end of the vision.  I'm also wondering whether Edward was destined to have two mates, is that possible?  I know, read on and I'll find my answers.  Lol.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coercion by Blackmail

Lol, I get the feeling Demetri's going to test Edward's patience.  I love the banter between Felix and Demetri and Felix's disgust with Edward eating Bambi and Lassie, hahahaha!!

Edward was being a bit optimistic wasn't he with his I'll work for you for a bit and then you'll kill me statement.  No way is Aro ever going to let Edward stop working for him.  But then this is Edward and he'll believe that if he's not allowed to die then he must suffer for eternity. *sigh*

Jane x

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Obligatory Quagmire

Already Edward's trying to avoid Demetri, being stuck in a car with him should be interesting, lol.  I get the feeling that they'll be working together quite a lot.  Will Demetri ever persuade Edward to partake of human blood again?  Probably not, although I thought he made a decent point in the argument for killing humans, just not decent enough.  At least when Edward had his slip all those years ago he only (yeah well, you know what I mean) killed criminals and low lifes.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Impelled Catharsis

Lol, that's the second time Demetri's slipped up, at least Edward wasn't embarrassed this time and actually brushed it off.  I really like Demetri, he brings Edward out of himself, he's observant, funny and I would go as far as saying caring.  I'm really looking forward to see how this relationship develops between them.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Unveiling Antiquity

I'm glad that Edward seems to be allowing himself to enjoy life and more to the point enjoy his vampire life instead of mourning the loss of his human one.

Demetri's story was so sad but it did have many similarities to Edward's past.  Edward not only has to consider that he has more in common with Demetri than he thought but also his body's reaction to Demetri's touch.  It's so funny how Demetri's constantly keeping Edward out of his head, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Befuddlement Accepted

For someone so clever it's amazing that Edward never wondered why he was only attracted to Bella.  I know she was his singer and that brought them together along with the fact that he couldn't hear her mind but you would have thought, that at some point during the time before Bella, that he would have at least found someone he fancied.  Anyway at least now it's beginning to dawn on him that maybe he loved her as a friend and for her silent mind, lol, a bit of peace and quiet.

It was very brave of Edward to go and speak to Demetri and I'm so glad that Demetri was honest and that Edward didn't run away, now he gets to have that snog with Demetri, lol.

Jane x

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Unclaimed Clemency

Edward truly is that 17 year old Edwardian virgin personified.  I'm glad that Demetri was able to loosen him up, bwahahahaha!!  I'm so happy that finally he seems to have given in to his feelings and admitted that Demetri is who he wants.  Will Edward ever stop all this self flagellation?  He may have killed that family but what he did was better than letting Jane deal with them. *shudders*

Jane is one sick and twisted bitch, well we knew that already but Jesus to look forward and take pleasure in torturing and killing a little boy, she's worse than the newborn they destroyed.  What's that all about with Demetri, does she fancy him or something?

Jane x

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Absence of Fear

Why is Aro so against them having a relationship?  What Aro did to Demetri was disgusting.  He claimed to care for him and said that he gave him everything that he needed or wanted, but clearly he didn't.  He humiliates both Demetri and Edward at every given opportunity and plays mind games with them.  Aro acts like a jealous child.  Has his existance become of empty and boring that he feels the need to toy with members of his own guard?

However, I'm so happy that what Aro did to Demetri forced Edward's hand and he's admitted that he cares for Demetri.  Now I'm just wondering, especially after what they just got up to *cough, cough* when Edward will realise that he's falling in love with Demetri, 'cos I think he's nearly there.

Jane x

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Justified Absolution

Finally, they're together, that was some hot sexin', I'm surprised the piano survived, lol.  Awwww, they said 'I love you' to each other. *sigh*

Demetri getting the piano for Edward was amazing, he's worked so hard at keeping that a secret.  I loved that he finally opened his mind up to Edward and Edward got to see how Demetri sees him.

Aro is a complete control freak and one hell of a disturbed vampire.  He's so happy now that Edward has said he'll stay, such a controlling git.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Wolf at the Door

I knew she'd still be alive.  I thought that Demetri might have tracked her when Edward told him about her but then it occurred to me that he wouldn't need to find a dead person. 

Edward certainly has a knack for saying the wrong thing, speaking before he thinks, although in his defence he was annoyed that Demetri was hiding something from them all and then hurt that he seemed to be keeping him from his family.  We all say things that we don't mean in the heat of the moment, why should a vampire be any different.  Hopefully, Demetri will hold to the fact that he can't not love Edward and Edward will be able to prove that Demetri's the one for him.  His rejection of Bella would certainly prove that as painful as it will be for Bella and Edward.  Has Alice not told any of the family about Edward and Demetri?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: This Ruined Puzzle

Oh my God!  Edward's innate sense of putting things right has yet again hurt the person he loves most and in return himself.  Why must he always put others before himself?  Bella still would have been there even if he'd taken 3 days to explain and tell Demetri just how he felt.  I'm so frustrated with Edward I'm beyond words.......he'd better find Demetri and grovel at his feet for the way he's treated him.  Right and proper Edwardian Edward is a massive dick head!

Jane x

 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Salvation of Faith

Thank God for that, I thought I was going to be in for more angsty chapters and angsty, self flagellating Edward.  I'm so happy that Demetri listened.  Edward is lucky to have found someone who loves him so completely.

Now to meet the family.  Lol, are Emmett and Jasper going to take the mick out of him?  Is Rosalie going to try and embarrass or humiliate him?  We all know how bitter she can be.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: A Difficult Affirmation

I'm so glad Edward's revelation went well with the family.  Esme was so shocked though, I think that she was so certain that Edward and Bella were meant to be that she just couldn't see past that, it's like the ground dropped out from under her and she was left hanging in mid air with nowhere to go.  I'm glad that Rosalie wasn't nasty and I can understand her relief at the news, rejection is always hard.

It's going to be interesting how things work out with Bella, Jacob and Aro.  How will Edward and Demetri handle this?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Solidarity

Thank God for Chelsea that's all I can say.  Kelly's power sounds as though it will be amazing......eventually and of course, Aro is going to milk her training period for all it's worth, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

Awww, I love Demetri's idea about having a nap it's so funny and sweet.  These two are perfect and so lucky to have each other forever and they're finally free to go anywhere and do anything they want to do.  I hope after some time they go and spend time with the family.

I loved their wedding and Edward's eagerness to be with Demetri, even after nearly 30 years it's like they're still in the first flush of a romance. *sigh*

Loved it!

Jane x 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Cadence of Humanity

Wow!  Bella's death was so sad but it felt right to bring her to that point, to end her and Edward's story.  Now Edward and Demetri can carry on with their lives.  I hope, for Edward, that knowing Bella didn't regret not becoming a vampire released him from anymore lingering guilt he had.  She was happy with her choices and although he lost his first love and friend it should give him some comfort that Bella was happy and loved.  Edward asking Demetri 'Is this okay?' was heartbreaking.  Of course it's okay after losing someone you love you need that connection with someone to know you can still love and are loved in return, it's life affirming and life, in all its forms, goes on.

This is the first Edward and Demetri story I've read and I loved every bit of it.  Thank you for sharing.

Jane x

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189018
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Emmett & Rose Outtake

Always true to form, Rose didn't make things easy did she.  I loved how she took Emmett through the gears and then left him spinning his wheels, lol.  You have to work for what you want Emmett and boy did he!  Now we know why Rose wears the trousers in their relationship and Emmett's only allowed to wear the Hammer pants, lol.  Decided to finish the story off here as it didn't update on Twilighted where I was reading it.  I think everyone's abandoned Twilighted.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yeah Rose does make the boy work!  Twi was too much of a pain in the butt to wait for things to get posted!  Thanks for finishing here!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Little League

Lol, Ryan's such a chip off the old block.  He's starting early at six, mind you my daughter had four boyfriends in the same nursery class at the age of three, lol.  I love how Edward's always on at Bella to have another baby, he's such a family man and there's really nothing sexier than a man who loves and adores his wife and kids.  What about Megan?  That little girl's so much like her Mum it's scary, she's definitely protective of Ryan I can't believe she took down Kimmy, hahaha!!  I really loved this, all their lives are moving on but their love for each other and their families just gets deeper and deeper. I sometime wish I could be a character in a book and have the perfect life. *sigh*  I'm looking forward to the next outtake whenever it's ready.  Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha yeah Ryan is starting early but I totally had 3 boyfriends named Tony when I was 5. hehe He definitely wants another baby girl, doesn't he?  We'll have to see if Bella gives in on that front!

Megan is a fun combo of both parents, absolutely fearless and charming but scary as well.  hehe

Book life is definitely the best life!

Thanks for Xmas wishes!  I hope you had a wonderful one and a great New Year as well :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Tattootake

Lol, I bet that hurt like a bitch on Edward's finger.  I can think of a few things they can do that won't involve touching Bella's tattoo. *winks*  How funny was Quil telling them they could do it doggy style as long as Edward kept his hand away from Bella's right hip, there are other places he could put it, bwahahaha!! Alice will be dragging Jasper down to that shop.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hehe yes I think they'll find a way to have their fun!  I imagine Alice will drag her down to the shop :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 Blindsided

Awww, Edward was so sweet and excited, lol just wait until the sleepless nights start when little Baby C arrives, bet he won't be so excited then.  I love how they're so in love with each other, how they care and protect each other it's just so magical.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yeah it was fun to write their reactions to parenthood :)  They are a wonderful couple for sure!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 Pre Game Preparation

Emmett putting the crib together is too funny and Jasper hiding bits for it so it won't go together, oh my God I couldn't stop laughing.  It didn't stop Emmett though, no, if all else fails take a hammer and nails to it, I bet when it's done it's like a comedy crib.  Edward and Bella would have to have two nurseries, the real one and then the one that Emmett built, lol.  I have no doubt though that what he lacks in building skills he'll make up for in uncle skills.  I loved his description of what Wyatt might look like, lol, if I was Jasper I'd have hit him with that wrenchy thing, bwahahahaha!!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Haha wasn't the crib assembly awesome?  Of course Em was going to make it work, even if it was a death trap :)

He will be a great uncle!  Poor little Wyatt :)  Thanks!

The Affair by funkymunky2511 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

AH E/B J/B For two weeks out of the year Edward and Bella pretended that what they had was real.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1914 Read Count: 504
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Affair One Shot

I can't believe she's spent five years just spending two weeks with Edward when she's so unhappy with Jacob.  I know there's Sandra to consider but she can't stay in a dead relationship because of her.  If she does that they'll all be miserable.  It sounds as though she's going to have a battle on her hands now though.  How will Edward feel when he learns the extent of Bella's lies?

Jane x

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 227201
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Lol, Alice is a feisty one, she knows what she wants and goes all out to get it, but sometimes that feistiness is her undoing and this time it led her to her punishment.  Ah well, nobody's perfect.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

Oh God, I love Carlisle and Esme.  They've been together for so long and they still act like the horny teenagers they were when they got together.  I love that they play and have Doctor C and Mrs Cullen time, bwahahahaha!!  It's even better that Edward caught them.  They all have more in common than they realise, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

Emmett and Rosalie are perfect for each other and even though they're not into the whole lifestyle they have things in common, I'm not sure how ready they are to admit that though, lol. 

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I think Alice and the whipping bench will always be close friends, lol.  She had a point though, I don't know of any girlfriend that would be happy with her boyfriend working with their abusive ex.  It showed great courage on Jasper's side and he was right also, Alice has to trust his decisions and that he's making the right ones.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Tingle button, bwahahahaha!!  

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Lol, Jasper's such a pushover, but then I think he felt so guilty over what Ricky did that he caved sooner than he would normally.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lol, I'd forgotten about Mr Bristles, ouch!!  It seems that the whole family are extremely jealous and possessive.  I'm glad that Carlisle realised a lot of his reaction to what happened with Esme and Riley was due to the fear of losing her, of not being enough for her.  I think this weekend has more than proved otherwise.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooo, another appointment with Doctor C, yum!  It seems that Esme and Carlisle are finding their feet and thank God they are going for sessions and being taught properly.

Jane x

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Awww, it's so sad that they all lost a parent and I can really empathise with Bella missing her Dad and wanting to talk to him.  I liked how she questioned Edward about why he gets to screw around and she doesn't.  It's the age old double standards coming in to play but also I think, from what Bella's observed, that he already has more than brotherly feeliings for her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well fancy Billy Black turning up and being one of the tutors and now Jake's here as well, hmmm, Edward's not going to like that one little bit when he sees him perving over Bella, especially in that dress, talking of which it's party time. I love a good party.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my God!  They are way too protective.  Bella should have explained to Emmett who Jake is and made him go back and apologise.  It's up to her what she does and she has to be allowed to make her own mistakes.  I know they're only trying to point out that potentially she could put herself in bad situations or get herself a reputation but if they don't let her decide for herself how will she ever learn to know when things might start to go bad.  I know Edward has an ulterior motive whether he realises it or not yet but he still has to let her find her own way.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well I'm glad they've all made up and Emmett and Edward have seen the error of their ways.  What they were trying to do was very noble but Bella's right, this is her time to make her mistakes and learn but she has to go out there and be a proper adult.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank God for that!  I hope Edward has learned his lesson and will change his man whoring ways, lol.  There's nothing like a pregnancy scare with a bitch from hell to make dick run and hide and never want to play out again.  

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They were so close and then Emmett arrived.  Bella thinks it's wrong of them to feel like this, but it isn't they aren't actually blood related so there would be no problem, it would be weird for their family however.  Imagine though if Carlisle and Esme hadn't got together until much later and Edward and Bella were already an item, would they have made them split up, would Esme & Carlisle not have acted upon their feelings for one another or would they have accepted it and made the best of the situation.  It's a shame that Edward and Bella made progress with their relationship and both voiced a little of what they'd been thinking for them now to be awkward with each other, they need to talk and somehow get that moment back.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aren't mums scary when they do that.  It's almost as if they can read your mind or they've been watching you on CCTV or something and are giving you the opportunity to come clean because we all know it's better to admit something rather than be caught out, lol.  I can't believe Edward's told Bella about his Bella porn box already, lol, I'm so glad she wasn't offended or disgusted.  This has to be the worst torture for them being so close and not being able to touch as they want to, I see lots of sneaking around in their future and more than likely a couple of close shaves, hahahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well they've taken that first step and they've decided to keep it quiet for the time being.  I can't say I blame them, they'll need to be certain that this is what they want before telling their family.  I hope that they'll all understand and look at it with the knowledge that Bella and Edward aren't related but the reality is that most people won't look at it that way at all.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

God that party was hard work what with all the avoiding of other people they had to do, rescuing each other, the stolen glances and the excuses to get a little bit of alone time.  Was Edward's matching tie to Bella's dress just a coincidence, is Esme a little bit psychic or is it just wishful thinking on her behalf.  

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Things are moving fast now for these two which is only natural, as Bella said, they already knew each other, they've been doing the getting to know you part for the past nine years or so and now they're at the final frontier, lol.  Bella needs to try and not think about it, easier said than done, hahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Sneaking around can be so much fun and exciting but when you can't touch your man or kiss him in public then sneaking around really sucks balls.  Has Rose seen something or heard something?  If she has will she go straight to Emmett and tell him or will she confront Edward and Bella first?  This is the last thing they need at the moment right at the beginning of a semester.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So Rose did see.  I'm glad she didn't go straight to Emmett and gave Bella a chance to explain what's been going on.  Lol, Bella sounded about forty years old when she said she was too old for sneaking around.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh crap, how did Emmett find out?  Did Rose tell him?  She said she would wait. Awww, Bella's first time was lovely and now Emmett's going to stamp all over it with his great big feet.  Is it wrong that I loved it when she got sick from Edward's cum?  Lol, I just thought it was so funny, if she's going to try that again she needs to get him eating pineapple and whatever else makes it taste better, hahahaha!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So Emmett has been noticing more that anyone gave him credit for.  I'm not sure what he's most angry about, whether it's that he wasn't told from the start, the fact that its Edward or that they've always felt their relationship was different right from the start.  This is going to be an awkward journey home.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So things went better than they thought.  I had a feeling that Esme saw what was happening with them, it was the red New Year dress and Edward's red tie, lol.  I'm glad that Esme accepts their relationship and that it will only be a matter of time before Carlisle supports them fully in their choice.  As for Emmett, well it looks like he's going to take a lot longer and it may be something that they have to keep chipping away at with him or Rose might eventually make him see the error of his ways.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I think Bella's right and also her Mum knows how hard it will be for Edward and Bella to stick to the rules of the house especially in the face of all the freedom Emmett and Rose have.  I'm glad that Edward blew up at Emmett and told him what's what and also turned around so Emmett had to see it from his POV. Hopefully this has set Emmett thinking and started him on the road to accepting their relationship.  I can only imagine what this party's going to be like and I hope that Edward and Bella don't get to much hassle.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Jessica and Lauren are such skanky whores, I loved how Bella shot them down even though she got hurt in the process, she was so good at shutting them down and pointing out how stupid they are that the only thing they could do was resor to violence.  Thank God Emmett was there and it spurred him into action and into actually defending Edward and Bella.  I think Edward's words with him may have had an effect.  The town is ridiculous, they can't see past the end of their noses.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm glad Emmett is getting his head around things a bit more, he was funny with his be yourselves but not completely yourselves speech, lol.  Are they going to have to explain every move they make to Emmett to re-assure him that they aren't up to anything, this could get really frustrating for Edward and Bella.  To a certain extent they're still going to have to sneak around.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Mmmm, yummy lemon.  I can't believe Edward's saved up all that money.  Is it only Edward and Bella that know that he's been saving all these years?  What Bella wrote all those years ago about Romeo and Juliet was like looking into the future for her and Edward before anything was ever going on.  Now it's back to reality with a bump for them after their wonderful night at the hotel.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hope that Tanya and Gianna find out about Bella's threat of legal action, that should scare the shit out of them.  Edward and Bella really should have expected something like this, most people just see things in black and white and don't question any further.  Transferring to another school is not the answer, they have to show a united front and face up to those idiots that believe anything they're told, things will get better.  I have no doubt that transferring to another school would be easier but the 'scandal' for want of a better word, of what happened would follow them eventually starting the whole cycle up again.  Better to stay put and front it out.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Julliard, woohoo!!  This would be an amazing opportunity for Edward and hopefully Bella will still get a full scholarship either at Columbia or a different school.  How will Carlisle and Esme take this news?  What about Emmett as well, is he going to be over protective about Bella going so far away to school?

Jane x 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Carlisle and Esme are thinking about practicalities but love doesn't fall into that at all.  I think they would survive without each other if they really had to but I also think that going to New York with Edward will be the making of Bella.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awww, finally the get to start living their dream, I love it when everything comes together.  It's going to be hard work for them both but if they get through all of what's to come then they'll be stronger than ever, together they'll be a force to be reckoned with, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awwww, I love a happy ending. *sigh*  Edward and Bella have always done things their own way, they knew what was best for them and resisted outside interference, well apart from having to live by the house rules when they were at home, lol.  When you know you are meant to be together you have to go with it, I'm glad they didn't wait any longer to get married there would have always been another reason to delay it.  Thank you for sharing your story.  I've really enjoyed it from start to finish.

Jane x

Summary:

Edward and Bella have been stepsiblings since they were ten, but how long has Edward felt something different for his Sort-of Sister? EPOV of fanfiction MY Other Brother


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6658 Read Count: 3855
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I knew he felt more than brotherly feelings for her by the time they got to college but I never would have thought that he felt that way from the beginning. I love that the box Bella thinks is full of porn is full of Bella, it's Bella porn in a way, lol.  I think Edward's right about Emmett wanting to string him up if he knew the thoughts he had about Bella.  Would it be the same now they're older or will he be able to rationalise it better?  Maybe that's something Rose would help him with.  Lol, his self control has really been tested.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward may think he's pushed Bella too far by revealing his feeling but in reality she's been having feelings for him for quite a while and he's just confirmed for her what she's been wondering about for a long time.  I think he was right when he said she wasn't ready, I never looked at that way but I think she does need more time to come to terms with the way she feels for Edward, more importantly for her step brother as that is what everyone else will see.  There could be a lot of people who are unhappy when they get together.  I should imagine there'll be lots of whispering and gossiping going on, they'll need to be strong for each other and secure in their love for one another.  I really love Edward's POV, he's sarcastic and funny. *grins*

Jane x

Summary:

Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer.  At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album.  What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip?  Anything can happen…if you let it.

 

 

 

 

This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift.  She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.

 

My banner and blinkie are thanks to my banner goddess Misskingatyourservice.  check out all her creations at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1831
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters

Wow!  I loved this.  I think Bella found herself in a situation a lot of women have found themselves in and took advantage.  I don't condone cheating but we all know it goes on.  Sometimes people get away with it and sometimes they don't, Bella's in a bit of a pickle now, what's she going to do?  I would love it if you carried this on into a full story, I'd love to know what you have planned for this, which direction you would take with it.

Jane x



Author's Response:

For some reason I do not get emails when new reviews come in, so I apologize for not responding sooner. 

Thank you so much for your rating and review. I really think that this will become a full story. This E&B keep creeping into my mind and I can't seem to get them to shut up. LOL.

All my best,

Nickey

Summary:

 

After getting lost in a foreign city, and with a very peculiar guide, Edward's life is completely altered after an unexpected encounter surrounded with blossoming cherry trees, staring at a pair of stunning blue eyes and a mysterious handsome man. After a passionate stolen kiss, Edward realizes something has changed in him and wants his mystery man back.

Will Edward be able to cast aside social conventions and family expectations, to be with the one he loves? There is more than meets the eye about Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Will Edward be able to make him open up and given them a chance?

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Slash, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31842 Read Count: 3214
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 24 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh wow, the confusion, pleading, love and sorrow, it's an amazing start.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh my two men in one day, we should all be as lucky as Edward, lol.  He's certainly fallen hard and fast hasn't he.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

And now a waiter, my, Edward is popular, lol.  Carlisle isn't dealing with Edward's popularity very well is he?  He obviously has feelings for him from the way he reacted to the waiter and I suspect they run as deep as Edwards.  Has he not 'come out' because of his profession?

Edwards mum and dad are very laid back aren't they?  Not sure how many parents I know would allow their 16 nearly 17 year old to be tattooed.

I'm loving this story.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Edward is 17 years old. But it is March and I am doing an outtake of the day the Masen Boys got their tattoes. You'll see that Edward WAS getting that tattoo no matter what so his dad thought: Better support him in this or leave him alone and risk him into getting hurt or worst a disease.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I do like a fierce and loyal friend, go Bella!!!  I can't wait to find out what the revenge is on Emmett.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh poor Edward.  I hope they can get past this soon.  Please post again soon.

Jane x

Writer's Block by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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Edward is the gardener at Swan Manor. When old man Swan dies his Daughter, Bella Swan comes home to live at the manor. What happens between The Gardener and The Lady of the house.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3734 Read Count: 1088
[Report This] Published: 13 Oct 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a little shocked, lol.  I can't believe Bella just left like that and was just happy her problem was solved.  She's a man in a woman's body, lol.  I'd really like to find out if Edward managed to get a repeat performance.

I really enjoyed this.  It's not often I'm shocked.

Jane x