Reviews by aelita48
Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

Merci.



Author's Response:

Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story.  Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward a bien fait de venir !

Bella est en colère contre Jim et sa mère, c'est normal.

Bon chapitre, merci.



Author's Response:

Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree.  Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella.  Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella.  Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy?  There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry.  Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters.  Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow.  We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”

“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.

“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.

“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.

“Am I hurting you?”

“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”

“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.

“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.

“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.

“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank you for this great chapter.

I am glad that Bella is réconcillié with his mom!

Arrival of Edward, it's party time.



Author's Response:

A lot of you are worried that we will let Edward become a cheater and that he will step out on Bella, but let us assure you of one thing that this story will not have and that is Edward screwing someone else on the side.  With that said, not everything will be peaches and cream all the time, they are still working out the learning curve of living together.  They are also working on being together all the time at home, not out on the road traveling for games, and all that stuff.  As for the marriage issue, between Bella and Edward – we are not saying that marriage will never happen ­– Bella is only 18, marriage just isn’t her priority.  The next chapter is one of my favorite chapters so far, so many things happen and it really was fun to write.  Hope you enjoy it too.  Kasi & (Jess)~

TEASER:  “Hey Esme, thanks for picking me up.  How are you today?” I ask getting into the car.

“I’m good Bella, you look really cute today.  You all set for the trip to Florida tomorrow morning?”

“Yeah I packed last night, because I was bored.  Edward didn’t want to go out and do anything, and I was a little mad about it.  I start school soon, and he will still be playing ball, so I just felt put out when he wanted to be a couch potato last night.  We didn’t even eat dinner together. I told him I wasn’t hungry and went to our room.  I was kinda bitchy, but he was being an old man.”

“Well honey he is older than you are,” she says with a chuckle.

“Yeah, but he is in great shape, besides he isn’t that old.  I wish sometimes he didn’t act so laid back and actually acted like he wants to have fun and be happy.”

“I am sure he was just worried about the game today.  They need to win today to have a one and half game cushion going into the series with the Marlins.  Not to mention a lot of publicity has circulated about the Marlin series, because it is the first time they will play against Whitlock.”

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love this chapter!
Bella is very jealous.
What I loved is what Carlisle said:
I think she did what any woman should have at least thought of it!
Thank you.



Author's Response:

Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums.  Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt.  Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time.  As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction.  Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense.  Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them.  I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight.  I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that.  I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!”  LOVE IT—just sayin’.  As promised we would share our favorite line with you...  Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle.  Mine is:  “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.”  We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love.  Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”

“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”

“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.

“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”

“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.

“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.

“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.

“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.

“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.

“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.

“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.

“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.

“Why?”

“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

A good spanking thinning thoughts!

Bella is really horrible when she is angry.

Merry Christmas can be!




Author's Response:

Well so far so good, on the earth not ending...  If this finds you melting in some remote part, I’m sorry, but thanks for having read and reviewed.  If like me, and you’re still hanging in there, the next installment will post on Wednesday, without any delay.  Well you all seem to be divided on things, but I do promise that Jess and I have worked through a lot here and have a pretty clear amount of chapters written ahead.  Some of you are torn over the spanking as a punishment.  Some of you are torn over her lack of ability to act grown up.  Our Edward knows she can be very mature and grown up, and that is the part of her he loves, but when she does stupid stuff and acts like a child, he feels the need to treat her like one.  As for Bella being weak, she will grow and change.  She will still have fast reactions to certain things, she will still make mistakes, but so will Edward—neither of them is perfect.  Thanks all for reading and reviewing, we love the reactions to this story, even the few bad ones, are helping us to see things and ways others are thinking.  Constructive criticism and of course great reviews are always welcome.  Hope you enjoy your holiday!  Kasi (&Jess)~

Teaser: 

“So,” Jake says as we sit in the little sandwich shop down town.

“I thought we were going shopping,” I say laughing.

“You made me wait too long,” he says as we laugh more. “How’s Alice?”

“Good, I guess, she will be here for Thanksgiving.  She’s really busy and what not with school. Why?” I ask. He seems weird, like he knows something that I don’t.

“Do you find it peculiar that she never talks about Landon on Facebook?” he asks. I wasn’t sure why he was so worried.

“I don’t know. Why are you asking such a thing?” I ask as he shrugs.

“I just think it’s weird. Your mom posts a new pic of Char like every day, and Alice doesn’t even say one word about Landon,” he says as I take my turn to shrug.

“Everyone is different.”

“Fine, I guess.  Maybe I’m so lonely that I’m over thinking things.  But still, I think you should really talk with her when she’s here,” he says pointing his manicured nail at me. “So, tell me what’s been going on with you.”

I have the best time with Jake. We never end up going shopping, but we do have the best conversation. We talk about everything and it was very overdue talk. Jake has a new boyfriend and I can’t wait to meet him. He told me he was going to try to bring him to Thanksgiving dinner. I knew if his boyfriend could handle a family dinner at my house than he was worth keeping around.

We have pizza for dinner and Alice never shows up. She is acting so weird and no one seems to know what is going on with her. I don’t even know who she is anymore. She’s not the fun loving girl I first met.  Esme got a call from Alice asking her where we were. She must have had a lot on her mind since she flew all the way to St. Louis instead of here. 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think Alice is sick! Postpartum depression can be.

I do not think she ended her days!

It's sad.

The baby in the family will be better anyway.

I look forward Edward becomes dad, he loves babies.

Strongly thereafter. See you next year.




Author's Response:

Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit.  Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper.  A few of you think post-partum depression.  There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters.  Things will really roll along here story line wise.  Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon.  I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon.  Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward.  They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well.  The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & Jess~

Teaser:  “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.

“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.

“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”

“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.

“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.

Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues.  My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little.  Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward Bella neglects a bit but he is older so he can not act in a manner that also puerile.

Fortunately Bella seems to have understood and it behaves more like an adult.

In any case it is difficult to live together, we need everyone involved to make it work.

I look forward to reading more.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here.  Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread.   Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals.  A lot of you  think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters.  The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward.  These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices.  Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs. 

He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands. 

Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.

“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.

“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”

“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.

“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.

“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.

“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I do not like Alice and Ben!

Thank you for this great chapter.



Author's Response:

Well not many are feeling the love for Alice, not that we thought many would.  As I said only about 5 of you reviewers had previously questioned if it was Ben, Alice was messing with—so that was a shock to most of you.  As for Ben hanging in and on for the money, only time will tell.  Some of you are still mad at Edward because he is being so controlling, and again I just ask that you have faith in us.  Edward has a lot of issues that he is going to start realizing in the next couple chapters and when chapter 23 posts most all of you will see a different Edward.  Edward will be going through his own demons—let’s see how he fairs.  Edward may be a jerk right now, but this is making Bella stronger.  Thanks to everyone for reading and reviewing this story so much.  You all mean a lot to us, and Jess and I are so proud of the turn out this story has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Jess’s favorite line: “She needs to blame someone other than herself for being a selfish bitch, so I can take it.”

My favorite line: And you," I say pointing to Alice, "I would have never taken you for someone who would want sloppy seconds."

TEASER: 

I turn my head and see Jake looking out the side window; I turn and can’t believe what I see.  There is Alice in Port Angeles and she honestly looks like shit.

“Should I stop and talk to her?”

“No, she looked right at you and turned her head away.  I know she saw you, because she waved at me.  Just go home, Honey,” Jake says.

“She is staying in Forks anyway, I’m sure you’ll see her again,” Sam says snidely.

“What,” my Mom all but shouts.

“What do you mean she is staying in Forks?” I ask at the same time, raising my voice as well. 

I know that I am mad, but what surprises me the most is my mother, she looks livid.

“I never said anything, because she asked me not to.  Don’t be mad, I just didn’t want what little time I get to see you be shadowed by her shadiness,” Jake admits. 

“And trust me that girl, she’s shady!”  Sam says while snapping his fingers and giving a head roll.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella asks too many questions.

I hope that Edward will be able to reassure her.

thank you



Author's Response:

Well I was not shocked at all by the fact that many of you still hate Alice, and all I can say is the next chapter will not be any better, she is really not going to be liked much after it posts.  A lot of you seem to be hating Edward more and more, as the reviews start to roll in.  I am worried after next chapter you will really hate him, but stick around, I promise it is worth it.  Chapter 23 will be posting 2 weeks from today and it will be in Edward’s POV.  Chapter 26 will bring the story to the end, and chapter 27 will be the Epilogue posted one year later from the end of 26.  There is a lot to wrap up in that short amount of time, but have faith in us, because we will do it.  Thank you to all of you who are reviewing each and every chapter, and not only that but for pimping us out so much—just AMAZING of you all, thanks.  Jess’s favorite line:  I bet the little fucking bitch is getting off on it.  My Favorite line:  I mean, you guys are my token gay friends, anyway. 

Well we hope you like the next chapter, I know I did but I like writing fucking, fighting and crazy.  (Jess) & Kasi~

 

Teaser:

“Having fun playing mommy to my son, and your sister?  Maybe you should stop trying to be my Uncles little girl and find someone your own age.”

“What, what do you mean?” I ask in shock from the sound of hatred dripping off her tone.

“Oh Bella are you that stupid?  That is a cute shirt for a twelve year old, and your ‘Daddy’ isn’t here—oh wait, never mind—I forgot I heard you and Uncle Edward playing around one night.  I didn't realize your daddy—play issues were celebrated in public too,” she says loud enough that friends of my mother’s gasp.

I pull her to the side and stare at her.  “What the fuck is your deal Alice?  We were friends, more like sisters.  Now all of a sudden you have all this rage for me.”

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella is very smart and she loves her Edward so she will always forgive him and she will not leave but it certainly will not let it go.

Thank you for this good chapter and highly more ...




Author's Response:

Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all.  Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story.  Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole.  So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters.  There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through.  I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We do love hearing your thoughts.  Jess & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”

“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.

“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.

“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.

“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”

“Wherever we go, we go together.  Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thank you for this good fiction!

I really had a good time reading it.

kisses

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

It’s a good start. Poor Bella it’s sad to get dumped on the wedding day. Well, she’s a little silly because there were signs her Tyler was gay.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

It’s a good start. Poor Bella it’s sad to get dumped on the wedding day. Well, she’s a little silly because there were signs her Tyler was gay.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Tales of a Manwhore

Good chapter

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Tales of a Manwhore

Good chapter

Bastille Day by sunandsurf Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

What happens when Christian Grey meets kick-boxing champ and ex-Olympian one Claude Bastille?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3788 Read Count: 327
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2012 Updated: 07 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

J'aime beaucoup ce Claude Bastille, il est très sympathique.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Je suis hereux!

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bon chapitre !

Merci



Author's Response:

Merci !

E.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Merci, c'est un super chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Merci pour ce bon chapitre !

 



Author's Response:

Merci.

E.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Good chapter!

Our two friends are able to work comfortably.

Thank you.

Shame by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

It was a union that was never supposed to happen, an affair that took over her life and altered it. Unable to keep him from advancing, can Bella keep her brother-in-law away and save her marriage? Or should she give in on what could possibly be what was always meant to be? Perhaps fate will make the decision for her.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8627 Read Count: 2814
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Shame

J'adore cet OS, il se termine d'une manière idéale.

C'est agéable à lire.

Summary:

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Bella has been lusting after Edward Cullen, VP at Providence Medical Center in Portland, for years. Too bad he's married, and her boss. Rated for language and lemons. Entry for the Taste of the Forbidden Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10656 Read Count: 3364
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Break Room

Je crois qu'Edward a une fille et qu'elle n'est pas contente.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Merci! Vous êtes correctElle n'est pas heureuse

-Discordia

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella met in High School. After graduation they lost contact and went on with their life. Years later they meet again. Both have a lot of secrets.

They’re both unhappy and when they bump in to each other, they start to realize that there is more than just friendship. A/H OC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75604 Read Count: 30198
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Desperation

This is a good chapter!

I'm sure they will find the culprits.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Graduation Day

J'aime bien ce chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: First Meeting

j'aime ce chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Different Worlds

Merci !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Taking Small Steps

Rendez-vous avec toutr la famille.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

J'aime bien.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Hard Lives

Tanya est très sympathique.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Truths

Qu'est ce qu'elle voit ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: A New Start

Bon chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Making Decisions

Bon chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: A Kidnapping

This is a very good chapter.

It's horrible what happens.

Thank you.

Sparks fly by may of rose 2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: Isabella Swan is a witch; in fact she comes from a long line of witch’s. Her dad Charlie is also witch. They are a different species from humans. Her mom Renee is a human and does not know anything about the magical world, or the magical powers, this makes Bella half witch, which is also known as a Halfling.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19758 Read Count: 8857
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2012 Updated: 17 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- The wedding .

This is an original marriage!
The main thing is to marry according to his desires!
kiss

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Memories

I liked this chapter!

Is that you have completed the fiction?

In any case I wish you a happy holiday season and a lot of good for you and your family.

Kisses.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is a famous actor. Bella is his cousin's roommate. They meet, again. He doesn't trust her. She doesn't like him.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15855 Read Count: 7503
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Red Carpet

C'était très bien ! J'ai adoré le lemon, il était parfait...

Merci.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I'm very glad you liked it.

 

Be safe!

~Lot

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Next Morning

Que va-t-il se passer ?

Merci.



Author's Response:

Hey.

I will post this full outtake by the end of January. :)

You can donate to SU4K if you want to receive the compilation.

 

Be safe!

~Lot

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94841
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre, Bella a bien joué en rendant Edward jaloux, il n'a pas pu résisté !!!

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.



Author's Response:

Oui, Bella a eu beaucoup de plaisir à faire Edward jaloux. Je suis tellement content que vous avez aimé le chapitre! Nous vous remercions de l'examen.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The Dining Room

The reconciliation between Bella and Maggie is nice.

Edward was very happy.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the reconciliation between Bella and Maggie.  It was a really good beginning for them.  Edward was very happy to see them get along.  :) 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

It was on that she would be in love with Edward.

Good chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, I'm not sure quite what you mean in the first sentence.  Glad you liked the chapter though! Thank you!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Front Porch

Edward and Bella love Maggie but I'm afraid it will hurt Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review and let me know what you think of the story!  I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

J'aime ce chapitre !

Je trouve Bella très courrageuse et je comprends ce qu'elle peut ressentire comme frustation quand elle pense qu'Edward la rejette.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Merci!  Je suis heureux que vous ayez aimé.

J'ai essayé d'écrire un fort, courageux BellaC'était très décevant pour elle d'être rejetée par Edward.

Je suis désolé si mon français n'est pas très bon.  Je l'ai étudiée ans et je suis en utilisant Google Translate pour vous aider.

Nous vous remercions de l'examen. Je l'apprécie!

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

J'aime Edward et Bella ensemble, ils ont passés un super week end en amoureux, ça fait du bien d'être heureux !

Ils ont de la visite !!!

Merci ! 



Author's Response:

Je suis si heureux que vous avez apprécié Edward et Bella week-end ensemble. Oui, ils ont un visiteur. Elle est la fille d'Edward. Merci beaucoup pour l'examen. Je l'apprécie.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

C'est un bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup cette fiction !

Maggie a été choqué mais elle va s'y habituer et sera contente de voir son père heureux.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie! Je suis heureux que vous êtes en profiter. Maggie va prendre un certain temps avant qu'elle accepte l'idée de Bella. Mais elle va y arriver un jour.

J'apprécie votre avis.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office

C'est un très bon chapitre !

Bella a peur mais elle va être heureuse d'être aimée par Edward.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie! Oui, elle va avoir de la chance. Cette Edward est assez merveilleux. Merci pour la belle revue!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Shower

j'aime ce chapitre !

merci



Author's Response:

Merci. Je l'apprécie.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Past

Good chapter!
Fortunately Edward and Bella is now divorced with him.
Thank you.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  And yes, it's a huuuuge improvement, isn't it?  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Terrace

I love this chapter!
Edward is charming and he knows how to make Bella happy.
Thank you.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Yes, he is rather charming, isn't he.  He certainly is trying to make Bella happy and I think he's doing quite well!  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library

This is a good chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom

I liked this chapter!

I hope that Bella will not have any problems.

I look forward to reading more.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  The next chapter will post today.  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The Swan's House

Wow! Charlie is really angry!

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Yes he is.  I promise that he will come around though.   Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Pioneer Place Mall

This is a very good chapter!

I found Maggie very nice.

Thank you.



Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter so much! Yes, Maggie was very nice. She's a good kid, she was just struggling for a while. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - University of Portland

This is a very good chapter!

I love this fiction.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much.  Glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate that you took the time to review. :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - The Market

This is a very good chapter.

It is this meeting between Heidi and Bella.

They are happy.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.  The meeting between Heidi and Bella was a big improvement.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it so much!

Summary:

Read the new version on my profile.

After moving to Forks, Bella has an "accident" resulting in two twin daughters. A couple years later, and another "accident", Bella leaves and finds what she and her girls have been missing. Their Cure can't be too hard to find, (right?) but the journey there wont be too easy.  

WARNING: Swearing, mention of Rape, Violence and other topics included. Do not read if this offends you or you are underage. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4160 Read Count: 1755
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2012 Updated: 01 Feb 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Je pense que ça va être bien !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-- Moving In

Moi j'aime bien continues !

Ne t'inquiètes pas les lecteurs ne donnent pas d'avis mais ce n'est pas pour ça qu'ils n'aiment pas.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

J'aime bien !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Je me pose des questions !

Est ce que Mike à violé Bella ?



Author's Response:

oui, c'était Mike. Je vais l'éclaircir dans le chapitre suivant. J'espère que le français est bon, im en utilisant Google translate!


Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

C'est un beau chapitre, j'aime bien la naissance de jumelles !

Merci.

Into The Deep by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After an accident took Bella's parents, she is forced to live with her new guardian, family friend Edward Cullen. She's been drifting through life for the last year in a daze. Will Edward be able to get through to her and wake her from her living nightmare? Will her looming eighteenth birthday separate them, or bring them closer together?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11496 Read Count: 13092
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bon chapitre !

Est ce que Bella va aller mieux ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good chapter!
I like their explanation.
Thank you.

Summary:

After a drunken night, Isabella fell pregnant by an unknown man. With her brother's help, she raises her child, but what happen when two little boys with green-eyes show up at her day-care? Will all her questions finally be answered? All-human


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85507 Read Count: 27006
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2012 Updated: 18 Dec 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

C'est un début très prometteur !



Author's Response:

I had to use google translator to understand this but thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

J'ai bien aimé ce chapitre.

J'attends des nouvelles !!!

Merci.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :) Althought I had to use google translator :P The next chapter will be posted soon!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

C'est un beau chapitre !

Tanya a faillit gâcher la fête mais en fin de compte tout c'est bien passé.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Ah je suis contente ! Je crois que Mac a trouvé son papa.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

Je suis un peu triste que Bella et Edward soient si froid l'un envers l'autre.

Ah oui se serait bien une belle bannière !!!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

J'ai aimé la discussion d'Edward et de Mac, elle est adorable.

La discussion entre Edward et Bella était aussi parfaite et Bella a donné sa chance à Edward. J'aime ce chapitre.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Bravo les jumeaux ! 

Comme ils sont intéligents ces enfants ! Ils ont fait partir Tanya.

Le récit de la mort d'Elisabeth est très triste.

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

J'ai bien ce chapitre mais Edward est décevant, il n'a pas l'air heureux d'avoir Mac, ça donne vraiment l'impression qu'il ne sait pas quoi faire avec elle !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Et bien l'histoire est triste mais j'aime ce qu'a fait Alice !

Par contre Carlisle n'a pas été à la hauteur, il va avoir du mal à se faire pardonner.

Edward a enfin pris sa décision, j'ai hâte de lire la suite.

Merci.:) !

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

C'est un beau chapitre !

Edward et Mackynzie ont l'air heureux ensemble.

Je pense qu'Edward souhaite aussi renouer avec Bella, ça fera une belle famille avec les jumeaux.

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Wahou ! J'adore ! Nous sommes au pays des Bisounours et j'aime ça !!!!

Les jumeaux sont heureux, ils ont une grande soeur et une maman !

Bella est contente du sourire de sa fille et d'un Edward qui lui donne rendez-vous !

Edward a retrouvé Bella, une belle petite fille et peut-être une compagne s'il sait y faire avec elle...

Merci 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Mon Dieu leur rendez vous a été horrible !

Edward a eu des paroles malheureuses et Bella a été en colère.

Tu nous promets quelque chose qui me fait peur !!!

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Alors amis ou ennemis ?

J'espère que c'est Edward car si c'est un autre, c'est un ennemi ! Non ?

La suite s'il vous plaît.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Bon chapitre sauf la fin évidemment.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

C'était un beau chapitre ! Il s'y passe beaucoup de bonnes et de mauvaises choses.

J'espère que Mackynzie ne va pas être blessée ou enlevée.

Vite la suite ! Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Mon Dieu, heureusement qu'Edward est là !

Enfin ils sont malade mais ils sont ensemble.

Merci, j'adore ce chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

C'est un très bon chapitre ! J'aime beaucoup cet Edward maintenant.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Good chapter!
Children are unbearable
Sometimes hard for parents to be firm with punishment.
thank you

Summary:

 

Bella giggled looking up at me through her lashes. “Your such a dork, Edward.”

I grinned wrapping my arms around waist, trapping her between the tree and me. “But I'm your dork, Bella.”

She smiled lifting her arms around my neck. “Always...” She whispered before her eyes filled with tears as she stared at me. “...But you have to let me go, Edward. You have to really let me go. It's time for you to move on, really move on. Tanya loves you, Edward. Your hers now.”

I'm scared.” I admitted looking down at her. “I don't want to forget you.”

She smiled placing her hand over my heart. “There's no reason to be scared, Edward. I'll always be with you. In here. But I'm gone now, and Tanya is waiting for you. She will make you very happy, and she will give you all the things you want in life. A wife, a family, the white picket fence and the Labrador named It.”

But-” I began but she covered my lips with her finger.

Why must you be so stubborn.” She giggled as she stroked my cheek. “Your heart is pure, it's filled with love and kindness. It's the best thing about you. Don't wast any more of your love on me, I got my share of it when I was alive. It's Tanya's turn now. She's good for you.”

I love you.” I whispered swallowing the lump in my throat. “But I love her too.”

And that's okay.” Bella smiled ducking under my arm and walking off towards our meadow. “Be happy, Edward. That's all I want for you. I want you to have everything you want; just be happy.”

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1880 Read Count: 243
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2012 Updated: 15 Oct 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Just Be Happy.

C'est très beau et très triste !



Author's Response:

Thanks, I really oppriciate the feedback.

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SP

 

When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Turnabout

Si je comprends bien, Bella est en colère, elle abandonne Edward !!! Peut-être ?

Vivement la suite.



Author's Response:

Oui! Elle était en colère avec lui de ne pas respecter ses décisions, elle a mis fin à leur relation.

(J'ai utilisé un traducteur en ligne pour écrire ce message, j'espère qu'elle a un sens. Merci d'avoir lu mon histoire!)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The End?

J'ai toujours détesté cet épisode de rupture entre Edward et Bella !

Bella dans ce chapitre et en colère, je préfère la voire comme ça.

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Vampires Don't Cry

Edward commence à comprendre ce qu'il a fait !

Idiot ! Vas la chercher !

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95367
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Edward est le papa d Liam, c'est parfait !

Alors mariage ou pas mariage entre ces deux là ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

C'est loin demain...

Bon j'aime ce chapitre, Edward est un gagnant mais Bella va peut-être gagner Edward ! Non ?

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Merci pour ce chapitre !

Je pense que Jacob va renoncer à ses droits sur Liam.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wahou ! Edward est très autoritaire et il a fait virer Bella de son travail, ce n'est pas gentil...

Il aurait dû lui parler un peu plus de ce qui le dérangeait, elle va être en colère contre lui maintenant.

Evidemment je voudrais vite lire la suite.

Merci.

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Je pense que cette histoire va me plaire !

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bon chapitre !

J'ai hâte de lire la suite.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

J'aime beaucoup et tes citrons sont très bien, j'aime quand ils ne sont pas trop "descriptifs".

Edward est charmant et je crois que Bella va être gâtée avec lui.

Il aime bien Liam.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

J'aime ce chapitre ! Edward lui a proposé un travail.

C'est très agréable à lire et j'ai encore hâte de lire la suite.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

En tout cas bon chapitre !

Bella est un peu intimidée comme Liam !

Alors Edward est heureux ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mon Dieu ! Pauvre Bella !

Rencontre avec Jacob, j'espère qu'Edward veut rester avec Bella.

Liam est tout mignon.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

J'aime bien ce chapitre !

Esmé, Jess, Emilie et Bella font connaissance !

Edward est un peu énervé !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Merci d'avoir mis un chapitre si rapidement, j'aime cette histoire !

Edward trouve un  travail pour Bella, c'est vraiment une bonne chose.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Merci, j'ai bien aimé ce chapitre avec l'explication d'Edward.

J'aime que tout soit bien entre eux.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

J'adore cet Edward !!!

Merci pour ce bon chapitre

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

J'adore, j'adore, c'est très très mignon.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Je crois que Bella a besoin d'une voiture !!!

Bon chapitre, merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bon ça ne va pas trop bien entre eux mais j'ai confiance ça va s'arranger !!!