Reviews by twilightmecrazii
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995727
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Loved it

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved it

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Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loved it

Author's Response:

thank you so much for reading and reviewing each and every chapter. You ROCK!!!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OME fucking epic stuff I can't believe he is back OME can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loved it like I love the story so far it's amazing

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OME loved it lyk I love the rest of the story amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OME epic fan-fucking-tactic..this is one of the only stories that I keep waiting anxiously for an update for to know what happens...oh oh is Jim also James..I had a hunch lol....can't wait to know wat happens to excited can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Loved it like always amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thanks hon xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

OME epic loved it amazing & hot lol Edwards feeling of unease has something to do with Jacob & Jim I think OME I can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

OME epic loved it I think rose might be pregnant lol & I also think all he'll is gonna break loose in the nxt chapter OME I love this story it keeps me in suspense I can't help thinking of what's going to happen next it's a really amazing & well written story can't wait for the nxt chapter so excited

Author's Response:

thank you so much for the great review!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

epic OME I'm bout to read chapter 40 epic

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OME that was freaking epic teared up poor girls James & Jacob are truly scum...it's ended amazing glad that they survived it all can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Love it & I jst knew rose was pregnant amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it awesome chapter I swear I get so excited when this story is updated it's jst that amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Loved it awesome

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

That was amazing fan-freaking-tastic I'm glad Bella & charlie arE starting to work things out the chapter as well as the story are really well written keep doing what ur doing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Loved it just amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Loved it amazing & I'm deffinately gonna check out the story recommendations coz they sound interesting thx but all in all loved the chapter lyk always can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much!!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Loved it amazing but I wanted to slap Edward hard I'm serious I no Alice & Bella were in the wrong but still he can be an asshole sometime no serious he can be such a prick I I could have I would have slapped him but still loved the chapter yes they needed to go through that I guess but I'm angry at Edward & that's really hard for me to do as I am a team Edward person but seriously I loved the chapter I am so excited for this story to updated every week coz it's just so amazing & interesting can't wait for the nxt chapter & keep doing what ur doing coz it's great

Author's Response:

oh my - thank you for your awesome review - your comments are all valid and insightful.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Loved it amazing as always can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

OME epic stuff but I hate cliffies lyk there's no tomorrow lol but the keep a story interesting but OME Billy is pressing charges that's epic hey but Jacob did rape her & broke into roses house & almost killed her he deserved to die in my opinion no one deserves what him & James did so yeah...love Edward & Bella are awesome together so r the rest of the couple Alice & Jasper so stubborn it's amazing they can rival edward & bella lol but still amazing story can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

I have sent you a thank you gift 

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Loved it awesome man but did he dig a grave for himself when he implied she was fat...men wat r u gonna do lol but he did make up for it he is such a sweet heart can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much - i loved writing that part - just imagining edward and the responses from his family (great help that they were)

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you sweetie

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Loved it can't wait for the nxt chaptet

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Loved it amazing they are so cute together cant wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you. the outtake will be up in the coming week

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Loved it loved the sue charlie & Seth part that chapter is amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much darlin!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Loved it amazing I squealed when he asked he so sweet & the ring is beautiful ant wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Loved it awesome

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Loved it like always can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

thank you so much - the outtake is up - hope you enjoy that too

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Back to School

loved it amazing cant wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

Awesome loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Late for Class

Loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Leave me alone

Awesome loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

Loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Difficult Conversations

Loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Broken

OME poor Bella can't believe Charlie is goneso sad but loved the chapter

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

Loved it but so sad

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

OME epic loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Allegations & Transgressions

Loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner with the Cullens

Loved it awesome

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

OME day sick fuck..who beats a person up like that but loved the chapter

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conciousness

Loved it

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cain

Loved it

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

OME epic loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Investigations

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Matrimony isn't a dirty word

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Every move you make

Loved it awesome & epic

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Back to Reality

Loved it amazing

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Timeslides

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Experimentation

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Summary:

Edward convinces Bella, his Honors Bio lab partner to help him with an extra credit project that will help him with his med-school aspirations.  Agreeing, she soon finds her time taken over by her gorgeous and ambitious classmate. AH/AU/CANNON/OOC Winner of Honorable Mention for tying 4th Place in Twi-High Anonymous One-Shot Contest!

 

 

ECW


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8049 Read Count: 804
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Weekends at First Beach

Loved it & I hope there is more to the story

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking

OME loved it sounds interesting

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s

Loved it the whole Jake & big dick thing was hilarious

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion

Loved it absolutely amazing

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces

OME epic loved it as soon as Tom said he is taking her to the hospital I knew she was gonna meet Carlisle I squeaked despite my best attempt not to coz everyone is sleeping lol I kept think Carlisle is bak yeah or just plain Carlisle hahaha but yeah it was amazing

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

Loved it...loved it when she is messing with Carlisle & vice versa

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down

Loved it amazing

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Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations

Loved it but Edward can be a bit of a douche I know it's how things were back then but still

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

Loved it samantha reminds me weirdly of Alice with all her match making things

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

Loved it bit he knows how to push her button & she knows how to push right bak loved it amazing

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

Loved it Edward was so sweet & it was a funny chapter but the end all I thought was monumental fuck up hahah mr. Cullen she is screwed

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry

OME epic chapter & I think Carlisle might have a little crush

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents

Loved it Edward can be such a sweetheart

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration

Loved it amazing

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Of Suffrage and Seduction

Loved it

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews - glad you're liking it so far. :-)

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

OME epic Alice is here but drunk Edward is pretty funni loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

OME loved it like there's no tomorrow lol but seriously I squeal in excitement when edwaard came back & when he gave her the locket so fucking epic it's amazing can't waitfor the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Of Big Bows and Birthing Babies

Awesome man I love Alice she's always up 2 something loved it

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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper

Loved it amazing

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions

OME epic loved it

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

OME epic lol the hickey was funni & I guessed it was James but still OME freaking epic loved it

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Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Of Dancing and Dark Alleys

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

Loved it awesome

Author's Response: Thank you - so glad you liked it! :-)

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

loved it i teared up during the chapter really well written cant wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

Loved it awesome love Edward he is so much lyk twilight Edward it's awesome

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

OME epic loved it they are such sweethearts

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

OME that was amazing & so sweet loved it

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

OME epic ending epic chapter

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

Loved it loved Carlisle he is so sweet

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Of Tombs and Tea Parties

Loved it amazing & funny

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

Loved it awesome the wedding was amazing

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Loved it amazing the story is really well written it's just really awesome & sweet & funni I can't way for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Loved it amazing they had there first fight & made up so cute can't wait for the nxt chapter.....I read the story u recommended couple chapters back At the Deep End by naelany & it was amazing thx for suggesting it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

OME that was epic it was so sweet & sad poor Edward can't wait for the nxt chapter loved it amazing

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

loved it amazing story 

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Loved it amazing I did tear up though but still amazing chapter can't wait for the nxt one

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

Loved it amazing as always can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

Loved it so sweet loved Edward he is such a sweetheart can't wait for the nxt chapter

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loved it awesome

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

awesome loved it

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it

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Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved it awesome

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Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it