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A Family Affair by nickeyd26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married.  He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi.  Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her.  Now, they want her to join in on the fun.

 

This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell.  It is a damned sexual buffet.  If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones.  This story is NOT for you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13861
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 Nov 2010
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair

Um wow, yeah that was pretty fucking amazing!!  



Author's Response:

Well thank you very much! I am glad you liked it!!!

All my best,

Nickey



Author's Response:

Well thank you very much! I am glad you liked it!!!

All my best,

Nickey

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672369
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

I can really say that is nothing like what I expected for this story to begin. I don't really know what I was expecting but this was fucking awesom....lol

I love her and him, and it sounds like I am gonna like Rose also, which is good because I rarely do in fics.  

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Im like already in love with Edward, and I love that Alice and Jasper are GHET-TO!!!lol

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

Carlisle = low class douche bag

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

Imwas starting to thnk they weren't gonna fuck....that would have been a shame!! Love how his family loved her and the advice from his dad and grandma to  oth of them was great. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

Yeah, he's still a douche, and a hypocritical one at that....lol

Edward is adorable thugh!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Sure, let's go get married for Nanny's sake......lol.

Great chapter, loving these two more and more. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

I'm trying really hard. OT to think of the Jersely Shore guys.....lol. Seriously thugh, loving this even the tampon thing...I thought it was endearing in a gross India way...hahaha

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Round Three

Once again, Carlisle = Douchebag

I hope he comes clean with her before they get married, he probably won't though.  If I was him I would have at least junk punched Carlisle for scaring Bella and causing her to sleep with a fucking knife.  

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: TKO

And that's how you consummate a marriage people!! lmao.

Love Nanny and her conniving ways! 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Light my Fire

I love a feisty Bella and hot angry sex is sooooo fuckijg good. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: A Bitch Named Karma

Oh man, I had a fee,ing that was going to happen. Poor Edward and Bella, and I can't wait to see what happens to Charlie and Renee.  I had the same thought as Edward did about the reason for Bella's frist miscarriage. :(

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill

Hmmm.....kind of a big coincidence...no??? 

With each chapter he story gets better and better. :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Stages

I have a bad feeling that this is gonna come back and bite him in the ass. She seemed too accepting of her suspicions. She knows he had something to do with it but is still in denial. About everything it seems.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

You had me thinking Carlisle was becoming a good guy, but he just proved, once a douche always a douche. I wish Bella would have told her or she would have figured it out. He needs to be taken down a notch or two, and I hate to see Esme so miserable and getting played dirty like that. Asshole.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

All this stuff is gonna come back and bite Edward in the ass, I just know it. Something has to give.....

Great job Lexi, love it so much.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

WYCYE banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward and Bella had dreams, and a plan to chase them hand in hand.

Side by side they thought they could do anything, but what would happen when Edward had to leave Bella behind and chase them alone? **Drabblish little love story.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48417 Read Count: 33237
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2012 Updated: 18 Jan 2013
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So FFn is a major fail so I am reading this over here.....and all I can say if FINALLY HE IS COMING HOME!!!

I still don't know what dream it is he was supposed to be chasing....was it a music career??  Doesn't matter because he needs his girl and Carlisle is right, when Charlie goes she is going to need Edward more than she realizes and it's his right to choose to be there for her.  

So glad he is fnally mannig up!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a fledgling lawyer, has better luck in a courtroom than with men. Enter the hottie in the pricey suit who offers to pay double her going rate, and he’s not talking legal fees. The pair find themselves deep in a compensation-based misunderstanding until a few months later when she realizes she may be in love with her one and only regular. *Entry for the 2012 Taste of the Forbidden Contest**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10814 Read Count: 3787
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was awesome! Loved it and it totally deserved to win!! Thanks for sharing ladies!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the awesome words!  We had a blast writing it!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94836
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom

Oh crap!!!!!!!  It's Heidi isnt it?? Why the fuck would she care? She doesn't love Edward!!! Grrrr......



Author's Response:

lol, I love hearing your responses.  And yes, grr to Heidi no matter what!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library

Seems like they are settling into a nice routine. Now to just get Maggie on board.....easier said than done. 

Edward is too good for that....Heidi.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they're finding a good routine. Maggie is going to take a while before she's on board. 

Edward is definitely too good for Heidi.  Ugh. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Terrace

Catch me m falling!!!  That was thee most romantic evening.....I know it's fiction but damn.....lucky bitch....lol. 

I think Tanya is too nosey and the Anthony story is gonna bite them back later. She's gonna have to come up with a picture of this "guy" eventually. 

Love it Dissy!!!!!



Author's Response:

Wasn't it?  I had such fun writing their romantic evening.  Bella is a lucky bitch.  Bella and Tanya will have to work out the lies/half truths that Bella told. It's not an easy situation, that's for sure. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Past

I feel so sad for Edward and want to hug him and make him feel better, surprisingly not in a secxual way....lol. Poor guy is just getting shit on by that witch every chance she gets. What a whore. 

Loved hearing from Edward even though he is down on himself it's not pathetic. He's just a good guy who tried to do the right thing and now he deserves some goodness and fun in his life. 



Author's Response:

It is sad for Edward, isn't it?  He really does make you want to hug and comfort him.  It's been a shitty, shitty life for him so far.  So glad it doesn't come across as pathetic, I knew it was kind of a fine line there.  And not to worry, Bella will bring the goodness and fun into his life.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Shower

Ahhhh poor Edward.....he needs to build up that confidence!!!!! With lots and lots of sex preferably!!! LOL



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's struggling.  The good news is, Bella is definitely up to the tasking of helping him with that.  By having lots of sex, and verbally reassuring him.  ;)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Living Room

I think they were very wise to approach it the way they did, and Edward is business mode is sexy for sure. ;) One step at a time......and I love that they are being so honest with each other. They have enough to overcome without putting lack of communication on the list also. I just hope it stays that way. 



Author's Response:

Isn't Edward in business mode sexy?  Rowr.  The honesty is what will get them through this, because you're right, they have more than enough to deal with otherwise.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office

If it weren;t for Maggie I would say go for it now, but she is right. They both have a lot to lose. At least he gave her a little something to help ease her mind about how he felt. Some time to think is a good thing. But that notoriznig excure isn't gonna work for long so they better get creative!!  LOL



Author's Response:

They do have a lot to lose.  And it's important that they consider it all before they jump into things.  He did do what he could to reassure her. And yeah, the notarizing thing can only work so many times, huh?  Thanks for the review, hun!  I love hearing your thoughts.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Thirst Wine Bar

Whew, I needed a moment to myself after the ending. ;) 

Loved hearing how Bella was dealing with all of this and I am glad she was able to spend some time with Tanya. She seems to be a good friend and I am glad that she is giving her the some leeway and not pushing too hard. Hopefully she sees how genuine Bella is when she says she WANTS to share details but she just can't right now. More importantly I am hoping that when it all does come to light she undertsands what they were dealing with and why it was so important to keep it a secret, not matter how great the friendship. 

Thumbs up for Bella taking the initiative and talking to Jasper herself rather than letting Edward be the one to bring it up. I think a deatil like that iwll make a difference later on when everything comes to light. At least Jasper will know that Bella apporached him and it wasn't Edward trying to get some typy of favoritism on the sly. No matter what the circumstances I think it would always look fishy if the initial request came from Edward. 

Looking forward to some sexy times and I hope dinner with Maggies goes well or else these two will probably spontaneously combust!!  

Great chapter Dissy, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! 

I think all things considered, Bella is doing remarkably well, and the time with Tanya helped.  Tanya is trying to be a concerned friend and not push.  But she is concerned of course, so it's difficult. 

Glad you liked Bella taking the initiative in talking to Jasper.  It will be a huge thing in her favor.  Jasper will appreciate it, and it makes Bella feel good about herself. 

I promise, dinner with Maggie will be some definite progress for all of them. 

Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

The way she feels so guilty about lying to Tanya makes me think that is going to be a big deal in the future. On one hand I understand and agree with her reasons for not telling her but I can't help but think it would be nice for her to have an ally or a confidant to help her get through this. I see hard times ahead with uber bitch ex wife and Bella is gonna need friends I think.



Author's Response:

It is a big deal in the sense that Bella and Tanya will have to deal with that as far as their friendship goes and that Bella is frustrated by having to do it.  Bella does have other friends and you're going to see more of them in the near future.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Bella's Living Room

As for Alice, I think whatever valid points she might have had were lost in her bitchiness. She is in man hater mode and while she is obviously looking out for her friend she completely went about it the wrong way.

Surprise kitches sex is ALWAYS good!!

Love Rose and Emmett!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, unfortunately Alice's delivery totally buried the messages. 

Glad you liked the surprise kitchen sex.  And Rose and Em.  :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Cafe

 So glad she and Alice patched things up and the Brownies were a nice gesture but teenage girls are nothing if not bitchy hormonal brats. LOL 

 



Author's Response:

Yep, she and Alice will work it out.  The brownies were a good gesture, but what can you do?  Maggie doesn't want to see the gesture for what it is.  She'll come around eventually.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Front Porch

So I am probably way off base but in the Cafe chapter Angela and Bella were walking behind those guys and they said something about a party and some girl named Lauren. 

Maggie has a friend named Lauren and they were at a party recently also....they aren't the same girls the college guys were talking about are they??? Just curious. :)

So glad they finally said I love you to eachother. 

Nice to see the Heidi is training Maggie in her bitchiness. What a fucking brat. Unfortunately I am thinking that this behaviour is going to be excused for awhile because Edward feels guilty and sorry for his "liitle girl" aka heathen demon spawn. 

What a great chapter!! :)



Author's Response:

I replied to this on FB, but yeah, sorry about the fake-out there.  That was me not paying enough attention.  Two totally different Laurens.  :)

Glad you liked the ILYs.  I had that chapter written for a while and I was so anxious to post it! 

 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Entryway

Well you already know how I feel about Heidi and karma is a wonderful thing. It is too bad Maggie got caught in the crossfire. Although, she did deserve a bit of her own karma. The bratty teenager excuse only goes so far. She was downright malicious with her lies about Bella and her threats on Halloween when her father was not around to hear. So while I do agree it sucks for her to find out about her mothers whorish ways in the manner she did, I just have to say this. Payback is a bitch. And in this case it was her mother. 

Bella is a saint for how understanding she is about the whole situation and I hope Maggie comes around soon because it doesn't seem fair that she gets to call the shots, Edward does need to spend time with her so it is super awesome that Bella agrees with not being able to come over for however long it takes, I just hope it;s not too long. I don't think either one of them will survie. 

 



Author's Response:

Karma IS a wonderful thing.  And it couldn't have happened to a more deserving person.  It is a shame that Maggie got caught in the crossfire.  She might have deserved it a bit, but it is a possible learning experience for her.

I think you're really going to like the chapter I am about to post.  It's EPOV and might give you a slightly different view of Maggie and Edward, and how he's dealing with the situation. 

Thanks for the great reviews! I appreciate them so much!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The Swan's House

Yikes!!!!  That was some reaction from Charlie for sure.  I do love how she compared him to Maggie, though....that was funny comparing him to a 16 year old girl...lol.

Thank you for not adding a unplanned pregnancy to this. If anything would solidify to her father that she doesn't know what she is doing, it would be that. Besides like you said, they have enough to deal with. 

Edward dropping by for a booty call was excellant, and probably just what they needed to take the edge off. Stolen moments and limited time to indulge isn't necessarily a bad thing. They were so hot and heavy from the get go, I think this downtime is good for them. They can get to know eachother better so that they have an even stronger foundation when they do go public.

Great Job Dissy!! 



Author's Response:

Hey, hun! Yes, Charlie reaction was awful, wasn't it?  And I think after that tantrum, comparing him to a sixteen year old girl was pretty fitting.  An unplanned pregnancy would be disasterous, and yes, it would solidify that she isn't really responsible enough to be with Edward.  Not to mention the fact that it would send this story straight into ridiculous levels of drama.  I already feel like I'm skirting the edge.  LOL

Glad you liked Edward's booty call. It is exactly what they needed.  And you're right, the time apart may be frustration, but it's deepening and strengthening their relationship in the meantime.

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Pioneer Place Mall

Loved it, so glad Maggie is making an effort and I think it was very mature of her to apologize and own up to her mistakes. 

I find some fo this funny because when I was a junior in high school, my dad was dating a woman who was only 10 years older than me. After they broke up they stayed friends and she would take me to lunch sometimes with her best friend. She would give me advice and my senior year she came over and helped me get ready for prom. So I can relate.....lol.  I love how by end of the day she was felt comfortable enough with her to ask advice about her mom. When they were talking about Bella and Charlie arguing and Maggie said....Well it is weird....I literally LOL, because, she was just bluntly honest with her. 

Great job! 



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter! 

Maggie is definitely making an effort, and you're right that apologizing and owning up to her mistakes (unprompted by Edward) says a lot about her maturity. 

That is funny about your dad's ex-gf.   It's good to know that Maggie and Bella's relationship is plausible!  They're just too close in age for Bella to ever be her "mom", but there's no reason they can't have a great relationship, especially since Bella and Edward are in this for the long haul. 

Glad you liked that Maggie asked about talking to Heidi.  She's really struggling and she saw that Bella might have some insight into the situation.  And yeah, Maggie is pretty blunt.  I kind of love that about her.  It doesn't hurt that I picture Emma Stone as Maggie, and I don't see her as being afraid to speak her mind. 

Thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the nice review~

Summary:

A Domme picks up her submissive at the airport. Driven crazy with lust, the Domme has the driver pull over so she can enjoy her little girl.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2240 Read Count: 113285
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2012
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was HOT!! Gonna save this one in my faves because the gif's make it!!!!

Glass by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three women develop a close bond despite having never met face to face. When tragedy strikes one of them, they band together to help her heal. A story about friendship, loss, and love.

 

glass


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29708 Read Count: 33974
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2012 Updated: 23 Apr 2013
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So glad it all seems to be working out for them now. Bella deserves to be happy. Such a sweet story. :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So glad that happened. It's about time she pulled her head out of her butt and stopped punishing edward and herself for Garrett's mistakes.  <3



Author's Response:

Yeah...now they have the hard stuff to figure out. Where to live??

Liz

Teaser chapter 16:

We left the airport after collecting Alice’s five bags and headed for home. When we finally pulled up, I noticed that it was dark save for a lone light that was shining from the living room window.

“Rosie, are you sure that my sister is here?” Emmett asked.

I looked at Alice and smiled at her. “Yes, Emmett, she’s here. She’s probably sleeping.”

“Yeah, Em, so don’t go roaring in the house. Got it?” Alice asked as she flicked his ear.

Emmett ducked his head. “Dammit, Alice! Leave my fucking ear alone!”

“Aww, poor Emmy,” Jasper chuckled.

“Let’s just get the bags and go inside. I’m tired,” I ordered.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I look forward to these chapters all weekmand then I read right through them and all I want is more!!

Very cute with the Walton's reference....I wonder how many people in the fandom will get it?   LOL

So glad they finally worked things out. 

 

 

Summary:

This is a video story about when Mummy comes home and claims kitten. It is for adults only.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2583 Read Count: 265009
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Well damn, that was pretty fucking hot!!!! Thanks for sharing!!

Summary:

After a night of training with Mummy, kitten pleases Daddy by willingly accepting him in her tight rosebud. This is another picture drabble. Very short chapters with pictures. Please read Yes Mummy first. :)  This is a poly fic.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1383 Read Count: 199292
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Mmmmm.......nice! I love these stories with the pics!! Awesome idea Noc!!!

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717327
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Well that was short and sweet....lol.  Thanks for the updates and I hope RL is getting better for you!  :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I understand that it is hard for Bella to change her way of thinking but I really wish she would stop lying to her brother. She has nothing to be ashamed of, but I know she doesn't understand that right now. I hope she learns that soon. 

Emmett is an asshole, period, nothing else to say about that neanderthal.

Alice, yeah she's stage five clinger for sure....lol. 

I hope things turn around for Edward and Bella soon. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Shit or get off the pot Edward!!! If you want her say something.....lol. These two are doing a dance around each other.  I wonder if Bella's change in composure is her way of making herself worth of Edward. Does she think that if she acts like everything is ok he won't have to worry about her and take her more seriously? Like she doesn't want to come off as damaged goods that he has to fret over? Old habits die hard I guess, but I hope they work it out soon or else Edwards ball might turn permanently blue. I do think its sweet that he's not doing any other broads while he's waiting on Bella to be ready. I love that they are becoming friends, best friends. She didn't have that with Jake. It has to be nice for her to be able to spend time with Edward and not have anything expected of her than to just be her. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

It's awkward cuz now it's real....lol. Time to figure out their groove. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Poor Jazz he's done for now......hahaha. 

Something still doesn't sit right with me about CJ......

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Good riddance to bad trash. Edward needs to remember a little self preservation!!!!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I really feel bad for Jasper in these last few chapters. He is doing his best and she just won't open up to him. She's trying to protect him and he is trying to protect and care for her. In the process they are just pushing each other away.

At least he seems open to a relationship between her and Edward. It must be so hard for him though. He sees her still as his little sister, and to have something so horrible happen to her, right under his nose. The guilt he must feel. I loved how he asked her to camp out with sleeping bags and ice cream. That was very sweet and big brother-ish....but she's had to grow up so much faster than other girls and all she wants is the comfort of Edward's arms. That must be hard for Jasper to accept. Probably wondering what his role is gonna be in her life now that she has Edward and Edward has money and soon will have notoriety.  

Excellant job again Lexi.  Love it. :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Ha! That's awesome....lol, can totally see the hill billy...heheheh

Nice way to lighten it up a bit. :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Please  I know she is hurting but please, stop wallowing already! Like Alice said put on your big girl panties and get the fuck over yourself. You want him to be your man? You want to stop feeling like you are a burden to people? Then take the hand that is reaching out for you. ACCEPT the help being offered. She is frustrating....lol

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Annnnnd the convoluted fuckery continues.....lol.these two...I swear.....lol

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Two steps forward one step back......it's like they do a dance with each other and they talk a lot but nothing ever really gets resolved. ASSumptions are there worst enemy.

Looking forward to more Lexi!!

thanks for posting!! :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Smdh with these two......

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Damn, don't fuck with Bella!!! Bout time she stepped it up....lol

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I would crack Jasper's fucking skull for a cheap shot like that......pussy.....lol

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

I love that even with all of what is going on...he get a fucking hard on....LOL

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I'd have bopped the bitch good for laying hands on Bella too.....ugh, Alice is sooo annoying!!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yay, I'm finally into the new chapters I've missed. I hope things start to go a little better for them. I'm not naive enough to think the angst and drama is over....but they need to regroup. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

That was sweet of him to say.......somehow I don't think it's gonna be that easy.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Edward has a point but I get what Bella is saying also. Jasper and Alice need to get their noses out of it.....

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I still get a weird vibe from CJ......and these plans that Sr. Has for Edward make me nervous. Same with the runs with Riley.....I'm just a nervous wreck.....hahaha

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Yeah, CJ seems pretty slimeballish....doesn't sound good, being involved with him :(

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Hahaha, a necklace of hickey's.....that is something i can see her doing......LOL

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Seems like they keep projectile launching shit out of their mouth.....lol.  I'm glad they are finally settling things. :)

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

 <3 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Wow, that doesn't sound good at all. :/

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Chapters like this make so happy I let them accumulate before reading again....hahaha

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I love Edward's flair for the dramatic.....lol

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Ahhhh shit, he's in for it now....hahaha. Milk that excuse all you can Edward cause it ain't gonna last long!!!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Mmmmm, Edward with a baseball,bat, fucking someone's shit up.....sexy as hell!!!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

HAHAHAHA, poor Edward.......

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Is it weird that I just keep thinking about how every time they start to get frisky she's making food and then it all goes to waste???  Hahaha

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Awwww, that was sweet and hot and sexy as hell.....

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Yes, SEX and Breakfast.....now that's a WN........LMAO

 

Seriously thugh, that was great. Looking forward to seeing what the hell is going on with CJ and how these two adjust to living with each other. :)

 

great job girl!!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Naked for 2 days....no sacrifice at all....lol. I still gotta bad feeling about CJ.....

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I can see where Jasper has a point and even though Edward wants to be there for her it is good her recognizes that he can't be everything for her. I hope he persists with the idea of her getting professional help. She really does need it.

Glad they made some progress though. They NEEDED that talk.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

We needed these chapters so that Bella and Edward could get on stable ground....or as stable as is possible for these two. I like that she was honest with him about her feelings. She needs to keep that up and it will be up to Edward to make sure he keeps himself in check so she feels comfortable enough to contnue being so open.

Looking forward to the other side of the story now. What the heck is up with CJ??  The million dollar question.....

 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

It sounds to me like he has plans for Edward and doesn't want him "tainted" by what is about to go down. 

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Ah now we are getting to the good stuff!!

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Go Bella, she's got some knowledge.  Poor Alice with her head in the sand......she is gonn have a rude awakening. 

Burned (Two-shot) by sa-ma Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

There is no such thing as getting burned in love, for those who get burned are either blessed or cursed.

Jasper/Edward - Non-slash

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8975 Read Count: 1271
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Feb 2013
Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Jasper

Wow, I love it when Bella isn't the little angel....lol, and I find a cocky Edward so sexy. Oddly, I don't feel that bad for Jasper....*shrugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked the characterization of the characters.

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Love the way it turned out. Good for Edward. I love that he made her come to him. There was a point that I wanted Bella to stay alone, but I'm glad it worked out in the end. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for you review, I appreciate that you liked the way it all ended.