Reviews by arfess96
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

I get flashes of that scene in A clockwork Orange where the kid is strapped to the chair with his mouth and eyes pried open and having to watch debauched pictures constantly.  Make me very nervousnto see where this insane story goes next. Oh well call me crazy and bring it on.



Author's Response:

OMG.. you crack me up.. I saw that same movie in physc class, and I thought about that many times while writing this crazy ass story...

 

Just so you know... there will be no large stone penises.  HE HE HE...(Well.. maybe..)

 

 

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

What a creepy creepy old demented man. He sure his high on himself.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

crazy indeed.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514759
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

When Aro sounds apologetic, it probably is as bad as it can get. I hope Aro doesn't turn on Carlisle, that is the last thing anyone needs.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Oh poor distraut Edward. Go get him girl!!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

I am so glad someone knocked that fucker out!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625069
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I feel like a dirge should be palying in the background with the announcement of guest. Gosh I hope Edward doesn't cave to the pressures his dad is about to put on him.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Gosh he really has changed. Bravo for him. Hopefully now he can keep those dickheads away from her.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

Esme's story is so tragic, but then again, all of their stories are. It is such a testament to how strong these women are to be able to keep themselves in the face of such evil.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Sounds like maybe Carlisle showed up instead of her knight. Evil cliffy!!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Will he or won't he? It is going to break his heart to let her go. I notice you say Bella gets her HEA but you don't mention much about Edward do you? Great chapter!!

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor harassed Edward, cry me a river you womanizing drug dealer. But I guess the fact that he kinda likes her makes it all better. I guess I find it hard to believe he likes anyone but himself. I wonder if he will redeem himself later on.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

I am so glad he was able to get the info to her. Now she can step up and kick some Aro butt!!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

I have never met a James that didn't make my skin crawl either.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

The girl has her own army to protect her sounds like. Great chapter, I love how her dreams shadow Edward's experiences, the good and the bad.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

Baby G is coming!! I can't wait!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

I am aware of how most medical professionals looked at patients during this time but seeing it presented in this story by you really brought it home. I am so grateful that now during schooling for future nurses they focus on looking at patients as people and not just disease processes. We are taught to support patients spiritually and mentally as well as physically. I would have to say I would probably be charged with assualt if a nurse spoke to me the way Bella had to endure by that nurse Ratchet. Bella is so strong and did her baby as well as Edward proud.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies

I decided to read your story while cruising the titles on this site and it just popped out at me. Bella's life could rival the Soprano's series, only it would be called the Volturi's. Great chapter, who doesn't like a good cliffy?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I LOVE LOVE LOVE tudor stories and am completely addicted the The Tudors on Showtime. I am looking forward to Bella being a strong presence in Edward's life and hopefully no matter the path he chooses, she will remain faithful to what sounds like a purpose for her, helping those she has been choosen to rule over.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

So Tony is her future hubby to be. I wonder how they will both accept the big reveal? I predict anger and guilt from him, and happiness and acceptance from her, with some pissed offnes thrown in. I cannot wait for the showdown.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

So sad she is. Why doesn't Angela just tell her who he is? I know she knows. Poor Bella is made to suffer an unkown fate when she really shouldn't have to. A little informatation and she would be so much more at ease.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Ah sweet memories. is it wrong of me to want you to speed up to the weeding so I can witness their reunion? Probably, I will be patient and enjoy this amazing story you got working.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Just what I have been looking forward too. Thank you for making my night!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

So amazing. I can only imagine what will be the continuation. Great chapter.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

Oh I love Isabella more and more. She has such a great head on her shoulders. She is going to make a magnificent queen.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

I love the language you are using to tell this story. You have done an amazing job using the lingo of the day. I am also releived about King Charles's soften stance on Isabella. Their goodbye made me weepy.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

I am glad they get a bit of a honeymoon. It sounds like they will need it with the parade and formal announcement pending, as well as her having to acclimate to a new court which I am sure will be full of former conquests of the future king. She has a lot on her plate.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

So beautifully worded. I love the language you use to tell this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I try hard to give it that timely feel to help get us all int he right mindset.  I'm glad the effort is appreciated!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

I have faith that Bella will stand up to those who are opposed to her pairing with the prince. I think we are about to see how firey the new princess can be. Of course in private it will probably be a different matter but she will find strength in her connection with Edward.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

She is handleing herself with such grace. I am afraid though that the constant berrage of animosity will get to her eventually. Poor Alice, I hope she doesn't go into labor with her Jasper abroad. Great chapter.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

I find it down right silly that people read the warnings you lay down and still feel the need to mouth off about stuff they find uncomfortable. I am totally diging this story by the way.. I am intriigued and I really want to know why the hatred for Esme is so prevelent.
While I am not a big fan of all the violent thingys, I am a fan of good story-telling so I say do your worst. I will take it like a good girl and I won't bitch and moan if it gives me the willies.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

I think I need to find my blanket and hole up somewhere right now. That shit was scary!!

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

Awe....what a sweetheart!! I think he may be putting the cart before the horse though if he thinks Bella is going to just submit to his every whim. Didn't she just get ride of one controlling asshole?

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fathers and Sons

Wow, Carlilse is really an ass or he is just super protective of his family. He is kinda like rose in the books wanting to off bella because of some supposed threat. I am looking forward to how this plays out.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

Don't they say you should always go with your gut? He is obviously thinking with his big ego instead, isn't he? I will be the first to say that I am extremely nervous about the impending doom you are going to roll out, but for someone to say they think you should change it, that's just B.S. To the ninth degree. I do hope that it doesn't give me too many nightmares though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love to see where you take this badass Emmett. I might be a bit skittish if you plan on doing bad things to Bella though. But I say what the hay, bring it on.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268908
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this tragic little story. I cannot wait to find out if Bella decides to connect with the Swans and if she does what will that mean to her family now?

Thanks for sharing this beautiful tale with us.

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Forbidden by Jennmc75, TheSpoiltOne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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Hate can be passionate and cloud your judgement. Hermione and Draco share a secret passion fueled by their mutual hatred of each other.

 

Can they keep their meetings a secret? Do their friends notice changes in their behaviour? Will the guilt eat at Hermione and cause her destruction?  Can she change their hatred into something more without losing their passion?


Categories: Harry Potter, Hogwarts, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6743 Read Count: 4391
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2010
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Holy crap that was hot! If my kid was old enough to read you rickety he would love this pairing. He loothes Ron with Hermione and loves all things Slytherin. I must say this hits the spot burning for HP action cause I haven't been able to see the flick yet. I look forward to the crazy you can cook up.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: arfess96 Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I feel dedded after reading that rollercoaster chapter. I just cannot fathom why he would need to find her. Does he have some deep seeded feelings for her? I don't think so. I think maybe in his 5 year blackout from us, someone has kicked his ass for his idiotic behavior. Why would he need to make amends to her though? She was never a victim.

She definantly put aside her self to make ends meet but I don't see her as a wronged party. Maybe I am being obtuse about it though. A young struggling student and a wealthy powerful man. The addition of money changing hands and I can see where she might have been taken advantage of. There is a lot of grey area here.

I am simply fascinated to see how she will pull her head out of her ass and start actually facing her problems and stop avoiding them all the time.

Great chapter!