Reviews by Irish_charm
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310071
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

OMG! This is wicked and I am loving it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

I love crazy Edward... Maybe he will go manic and kill the 'Father' and all the evil people. That would be fun to read..

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I think it's Phil........

 And didn't anyone tell you that suspense was good for the heart. So really you are keeping everyone's heart healthy.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

Alright Charlisle should put sleeping pills in everyone's coffee so they can find Bella and disappear.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Oh I wonder who it is Edward, Charlie, Charlisle, Felix, or another evil asshole to torture her or maybe even Esme. The choices are endless. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I happy to love the way you put my stomach in knots with no release Mistresses.....lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Tjank God! As much as I love watching Aro torture eve3ryone he comes in contact with I can't wait to see the shit storm that is going to happen when Charlie sneeks in there. I wonder what is going to happen to Edward. I'm sure the whip and chains will be a major part in this.

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My entry for the "For My Valentine" contest. Bella is the invisible girl at Forks High. What happens when she learns that she has a secret admirer? Fluffy one-shot.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3189 Read Count: 1208
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Secret Admirer One Shot

That was cute......

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 170406
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love how confident Bella is. She is secure for the first time and it's great to see her flourish. 

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 181]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 63800
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am really enjoying this story. There are so many emotions involved. I love the way you put the elements of the book into the story in a unique and different way.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89496
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets

Alright I love this story. I read it from the beginning because I didn't want to miss anything. There are so many amazing aspects that all mesh together beautifully. The drama that kept them apart is intense.

The anguish that Edward and Bella feel at being apart again is heart breaking, but so necessary. I'm glad that Edward was strong enough to let her go so that she could get better. I'm really glad that in the end Bella realized that Edward was not leaving Bella.

Great job I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that your hands are feeling better.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 746165
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In the Darkness

I just wanted to say that I read you on FF and loved it. I'm glad that you brought it here where it will be safe.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm sad that I'll probably be forced to remove it soon, but I'm happy to have this safe and easy place to bring it.  Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

Summary:

Hockey is an emotional sport for the players and the fans. For TT25.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34783 Read Count: 15733
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OHHH! That was just mean... LOL found the story and am loving it.



Author's Response:

Hah! I'm a pretty mean person. :)

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3987]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 992264
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was awesome. Jazz and Bella were so sweet, I love how there friendship is growing. The I loved how playful they were when Bella tied Edward up. Alice and Bella together cracked me up. But I know they will be hurting tomorrow....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was brilliant. I loved all the drama. Sure Rose can be a bitch but at least she's doing it for a good reason. I LOVED the money on the table drama.... Can't wait to see what happens next.

Denise



Author's Response:

you are my champion! thanks for the review - so,yeah drama all the way. How are you getting on with chapter 9?

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I didn't realize it was your birthday today. My birthsay was the 29th. See I knew there was a reason we got along so well.

I loved this chapter Jim is such an ass, but we all knew that.

I hope Edward goes all Dom on her ass and makes her move in with him.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OMG Michele. You are the world's biggest tease, you know that right.  But I love you anyway.

Denise



Author's Response:

says you - the QUEEN OF THE SLOW BURN!!! At least I give you SOME satisfaction - you just keep the sweet, slow torture going!!

thanks for the review, D!

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Woo Hoo! I get to be the 1000 review. Michele this chapter was awesome. Keep up the great job.



Author's Response: Yes you do!!!! Thanks D, for your friendship and your guidance. Your friendship means so much to me. And of course your write that awesome story about my FAVORITE doctor :) Michele xoxo

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Michele I love the cliffy. It has my body vibrating to find out what happens next.

So Jim is James.... Interesting..... I can't wait to see where this is going.

 



Author's Response:

You and me are the only ones that do!! thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Michele,

I Loved it. I read the old chapter followed by the new every Sunday Morning while Paige watches a movie over breakfast. It has become our ritual.

I love the playfulness of the characters. But I can see that drama that you are setting up and I can't wait. My heart is racing at all the things that can happen at Rose's house while the boys are away.

Hugs

Denise



Author's Response:

thanks Darling!!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Michele,

I loved it.... The party was amazing. I loved the penis bathroom fixtures.....

And I don't blame Bella for being upset, why the hell was Miss Mandy kissing him. Edward should of told her about the single women and that they could sometimes be touchy feely. I'm glad that Bella is all bring it with the punishment, I love that she feels it was worth it. I don't see it as a weakness I see it as Bella's powerful love for Edward. I wouldn't want anyone else touching my man. (Even though my story says other wise.) 

Can't wait to see what happens next....

Hugs      Denise



Author's Response:

thank you my friend :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Loved it as always. I really liked how you showed Edward not wanting to punish Bella as much as he had to. The love these two have is amazing and you show it so well.

Can't wait to see what Gar, Kate, Jass, and Ali will have to say when they all meet up...

Hugssssssss



Author's Response:

You are my best critic - and I humbly thank you - tomorrow is update day xoxo

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

OMG! That was awesome Michele. First Edward gets clued in to how other women see him, then the ropes... Followed by the fun games. Why can't we ever play games like that....

I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter. (That's a little sick isn't it.) I want the drama. I can't wait to see how things play out with James and Jacob. Rosalie is a tuff cookie and hopefully she gets the chance to kick his ass for what he did to her when she was younger. 

I'm hoping that Bella will not be too shcoked with fear to stick up for herself. She is so much stronger now that she has Edward's love, I just hope she finally gets it.

Alright I said enough. Have a good week I will be counting down the days until you update.

Hugs   Denise 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

You are mean and should be flogged by Master Edward, Jasper and Garret for doing this to us....... lol

Another great chapter it was a awesome set-up for all the nasty things that I am sure will be hapening next chapter.

Have a great week.......HUGS

Denise



Author's Response:

Aagh  my friend, I should be so lucky... *sigh*

Thank you for your comments - now if I'm not mistaken, you have some writing of your own to do or i might have to send Master to see you.

Love,

Michele

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OMG! Michele that was amazing! It was scary as hell. But Bella was so strong, she really saved everyone.

I knew that Rosalie was going to be able to get her revenge.... I'm so glad that her (and the baby) were able to stay far away from harm....

I am so behind in reading, but I guess the plus side is I don't have to wait to see what happens next...

Hugs

Denise

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I knew it, I knew it.... A cute little Emmett/Rosalie mix. God I wish I had those genes....lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Alright that was awesome.



Author's Response:

thanks Darling!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I think it' great that Kate recommended therapy. I can't wait to see Charlie with the Cullens.

I'm really sorry to hear about your sister. I hope that they can come to terms with this loss and be blessed in the furture with a healthy baby.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed how Edward handle the Aro Heidi and Felix, I'm glad they were told that Edward and Bella are a package deal so they should kiss Bella's ass a little bit...lol

I am so far behind on my reading.. alright and my writing. I hope to be all caught up on your story by next week. It's one of my favorites and I can't wait to see where you have taken it in my abstence. I feel this story deserves my full attention so I can only ready when Paige is asleep or not home and she hasn't went away over night since the first week in August, so I have had to put it out of my mind. I'm sorry.

Hope that everything is going good.  Hugs,   Denise  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Edward's not so cocky now that he's not bullet proof, the car ride cracked me up. My heart just bleeds for Bella, and there maybe even a trickel for Charlie. I am so glad that Bella stayed strong and spoke her mind.

Her recovery will go sooooo much better now that everything is out in the open.

Another amazing chapter...



Author's Response:

thank you darling - i loved your chapter too, but I already told you that :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Can I come to Cullen Crest for Christmas? It sounds really really fun. OI have never been to anything like that....

Another great Chapter I'm glad that Edward pulled his head out of his ass so quickly after Bella told him that she told Charlie about their lifestyle.

I can't wait for New Years. Oh yeah I don't have to..lol  I gues there is a plus side to being behind on my reading,

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Sorry no time for a long review. I need to take a long cold shower......

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

While maybe a little harsh, I find it pretty much deserved. That being said Edward should of never withheld his love. Sure the silent treatment is a effective punishment, but not letting her know that he loves her was wrong.

So that's my opinion. While the chapter had me in knots it was excellent, I felt every emotion.

Can't wait to see what Garrett has to say about the whole thing.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I'm glad Bella confronted everyone. I knew Garrett was going to be pissed, it was great. I'm even more glad that they are going to therapy, they both really need it.....lol

On a side note DAMN Jasper is hard core...



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your comments D. Jasper - what can I say....oh.my....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Just when Bella starts to get help for her problems this has to happen. I mean I knew that something else was going to have to happen, but never in my wildest dreams (and I have some wild ones) did I think that Billy would be the one to pull the rug out from under Bella.

This chapter was great, like all the rest.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

They really are growing. I am so glad that they are both going after their dreams together. I'm sure that it is not going to be easy, but I am sure that you will make it fun to read.

 

Hope you both have a Merry Christmas.



Author's Response:

Hey darling,  thanks for the review. Well I just read your one shot lady, and I need a shower!!!  I will have the outtake up in the week.

Happy Holidays to you and your beautiful daughter, D.

xoxo

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Michele that was amazing. Everything was so perfect. I was hoping that it would happen this chapter. I almost saw you having him do it in front of everyone at the Academy awards. But that was perfect.

Firoella I am so sorry to hear about your toubles and am praying that you and your family stay save.



Author's Response:

Aah my friend, praise indeed from you. thank you so much for reviewing

xoxo

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Oh Poor Baby! I wish we were on the same continent so I could give you a big hug. I hope that everything levels out for you.

This chapter was amazing as always.. I was a little suprised that Alice was the one pregnant. Bella has been all over the place that I sort of thought okay more liked hoped that Bella was pregnant.

If you need anything you have my email... use it.

Love and hugs,

Denise



Author's Response:

Hey there my lovely talented Twister (aka twi-sister)  And Bella will fall pregnant sometime.  And I will be emailing you soon.

xoxo

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Michele,

First I am sooo Sorry that I am only reading this now. It was amazing. You have such a way with word that leaves me feeling very inadequate.

Bella deserves this and I am so glad that Edward made it. But even if he didn't it is really nice to know that Bella would of been okay.

I vote for a sequel. I don't think I will ever be able to say goodbye to these two. I would love to see Dom Edward and sub Bella as parents while trying to play....

Denise

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Hi Michele! That was truely a beautiful chapter. Everything that you had happen was so them. I am actually glad that you saved the wedding for next time. I love the build up and it will make it soooo much better when we finally get a chance to read it. I can't wait to see her dress, you have been really tight lipped about it.

I loved Edward and Bella's scene, it was so playfully and down right sinful.....

The Uncles are a piece of work and I had to laugh at the 50 year old strippers. I hope that someone slips to the girls because they will get a kick out of it....

The kissing in the lake and Charlie was great......

Sorry I coun't review the last few chapters. My netbook wouldn't hold a internet signel for more then a few minutes. It look me over an hour and 5 tires to get my last chapter up. Huggggs

Denise



Author's Response:

Hey there my friend, I wondered what happened to you!  Thank you so much for your constant encouragment.   we'll talk soon, okay?

Love,

Michele

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward are happily engaged with their whole lives ahead of them. What happens when a tragedy strikes that will change them forever? AU, all human.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86164 Read Count: 6775
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Do You Realize?

Oh no! Those symptoms sound really familiar. My mom has a acoustic neuroma (a rare non cancerous brain tumor.) I hope that Edward is okay and does play tuff guy and not get himself checked out right away. My mom's a nurse and she waited forever before going to a doctor. They say people in the medical field make the worst patients.

Love the story..... I'm actually a little glad that I found it after it was completed. This way I don't have to wait to find out what happened.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please

Thank god Edward was around Family when he blacked out and not by himself.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day

God that is horrible. But he was lucky it didn't kill him right away. I hope that Bella can stay strong throught this.

Amazing story, I was crying like a baby..

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever

Oh god that was hard. I think I went through a whole box of tissues. I know I'm a gultten for punishment becaue I know what is going to come next is going to be just as hard if not worse then what's already happened.

You are a brilliant writer and I love this story. I also love the fact that you are not skimming over the medical facts. You are either in the medical field, know someone who is or you do amazing research.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Grace

God you hit the emotions head on. My man chanted over and over to just let her die after her surgery.

It is 2:30 in the morning here and I can't stop reading it is that good. I am going to be kicking myself when my daughter gets up but it is so worth it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time

Wow! God for Edward's sake and Bella's I hope they don't have a lot of steps in the house....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive

There are so many set backs, but he will gt through them....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength

Poor Bella.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Somewhere Only We Know

This chapter was great I'm glad that they have stopped putting their lives on hold.

THe end ort of sucked though.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Green Eyes

I'm so glad his sperits are so high.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11--Falling Into Place

I really love this story. I can't say itenough.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 When It Rains

The kid's were so cute and I am so glad that he gotover caring what other people think.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Ordinary World

I liked naughty nurse Bella.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Dare You to Move

They have come so far and I think that they arepast all the hard stuff.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 In Her Eyes

That was so sweet.

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a man of routine. When a homeless girl knocks that routine off track, Edward discovers there is more to life.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14418 Read Count: 1980
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Peanut Butter Sandwich Man

I loved it. It is so different from anything else I have ever read.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That is what I like to hear!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it Carlisle and Esme cracked me up.... I have never read about Jasper being blind it was a sad but really different. I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I love Carlisle so I had to get him his Esme. : )

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 187598
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was a really great meeting for both couples.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I like how into one another they are from the start!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress

These too are too much. I loved the tattoo that is every guys fantasy.....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)  One day it'll be real!  It is definitely sexy and QB loved it!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

That was awesome. I am so happy that they are taking the next step..



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It felt right to me so I went with it ;)  Glad you liked it!  See you next week with more :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

That was the best thing ever. I can't believe how funny these characters are. You have found a way to take the characters and put a spin on them that is sooooo believeable that it is perfect.... I think that this chapter has outdone all the others..



Author's Response:

Thank you!  This was definitely one of my favorite chapters.  I'm so happy you're enjoying them along with me :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

Lauren and Jess were actually great. I almost cringed when they started but in the end it was really great.



Author's Response:

Glad they could surprise you!  I wanted to write a Lauren and Jess that were likable!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

I love Esme...



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!  She's so much fun to write ;)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

All caught up. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Good!  I'll have more for you tonight :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

OMG! Dan is an ass and thngs are going to be interesting...



Author's Response:

Haha he is and they definitely are :)  Hope you like!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill

I'm glad Buddy is okay. He is a piece of work, I a so glad that he loves bella the way he does. It was classic that he threatened Edward.....



Author's Response:

Haha yeah I would never kill off Buddy.  He's a great mentor, friend and father figure.  He had fun threatening Edward too!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass

Poor Buddy.... It was so great how Bella told Dan off. I love seeing her as the strong woman she is.



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella can definitely handle that kind of male attention at any time.  She's been there before.  I like that about her too!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play

These last few chapters have been great. I read them on my phone and a unable to review. So I just had to let you know how great they are. Emmett is a hoot I love all the crazy nicknames...

I can't wait to see Alice and Bella in the same room as Tanya it should be good....



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I adore writing Emmett.  He's so much fun!

Alice and Bella definitely handle things quite well :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down

I can't wait to see everyone together....



Author's Response:

Oh I love writing them all as a gang together :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact

That was soooo good. Alice is the fucking bomb......



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  Alice kicked some major butt, didn't she?

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting

I think that was the funniest thing i have ever read......



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!  Love making you laugh :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown

I really liked that we heard that from Edward..



Author's Response:

He's good :)  Isn't he?

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

Yeah they confessed.



Author's Response:

didn't take too long!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 Blindsided

I love how Bella told him. 



Author's Response:

Yeah it was fun!  Thanks :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I was so happy to see this outtake. It gave me sone thing to do while I wait for the kids to go to sleep so I can be the Easter bunny. 

 

The kids are a riot. Megan is so much like her dad it's not even funny. God imagine the trouble she will get in at college. Lol



Author's Response:

Hah hopefully Em will send her to an all girl's college :)  But that still won't rein her in!  Glad you had fun with it!  Thanks!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 105913
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I feel so bad for not just Bella but Edward too. They are both dealing with things that no one should have too. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story. I feel so bad for Edward hopefully they will find Kate fast and kill her. Sorry I know that's harsh, but that's what I would do if someone took my daughter (Who's middle name just so happens to be Emma.) I hope that they have Emma home safe soon.

I love all that the stroy revolves around Philadelphia. I'm a Philly girl (I went to Ryan) But I live in the Pocono's now and this story is making me home sick.

Keep up the great work I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I am a philly girl too! You should Read Counterpoint that is Philly too!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Please Please Please let Riley man up and turn in Kate. I don 't think I can take much more. My heart is breaking for Edward, Bella and Emma.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Poor Bella! Poor Edward! I hope that Edward can convince Bella to get some help. At least Bella is starting to realize that Mason needs her. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

How cute. I;m glad that everything is working out.

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 20956
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

They are just too cute Settig a date to have sex for the first time. If it was anyone but them I would think that it would only cause major nerves, but for them it might just work....

I think it's great Emmett is going to Stanford, maybe there friendship will grow. Hey they could be roommates..

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73145
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

Oh shit that sucked...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

I'm glad Edward took pity on her.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

Even in this sad world they are till really cute together.... I am really loving this story.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

Edward is  so very sweet. I'm really glad that Bella found such a kind heart

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

Poor Bella and Edward. Loving this story, just wishing I had found it earlier.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

Just when things are getting better something has to happen to set them back.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

Are we finally going to find out. I bet her mother left her with some husband she had no choice but to marry and he was the one that hurt her.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

Poor poor Bella.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

Edward is right her mother would be proud.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

The Cullen's are so great. I am so glad that they are not being too pushy. I don't blame them for not wanting Bella out of their sight.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

I am so glad that Bella is okay. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

Emmett is great, the big protective older brother. And Seth is amazing, it was so funny, I love his 'bad' word, and how he was tryingto be like Edward.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

Seeing Edward and Alice togeher was really nice.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

Bella and Edward are doing so well. I is nice to see them both growing.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

Of course it was the god damn mall. I knew nothing good could come out of hose places.....lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

OMG! Charlie sucks. I know i is just the stress ans seriously I would be worried at first too if my daughter came home with someone that had a record like Edwards. I really hope he is sincere about wanting to try.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 295451
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life

Cute wedding.

I can't wait to see these two in the delivery room.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

Edward was an ass!   I can only imzgine the trouble these girls can get in.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

Oh no Alcohol and Vegas are never a good combination. Trust me I know from experience, just ask my divorce lawyer....