Reviews by Irish_charm
Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297472
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

That was sort of sweet in a messed up way.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

I love that you had them play 20 questions in the car. It was so cute to see them get into getting to know one another. I also love how they go back and forth all the time with the sly comments.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

OMG! A pink mini cooper. Now I'm curious what shade of pink is it because in my head I see hot pink with black interior and accents.

And I can't believe that Bella is falling for him just saying he won't sign the divorce paper. Yes it may take forever, but in the long run she doesn't need him to sign. My ex refused to sign and after 19 months my judge forced his hand.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

I like that Tanya is not the bad guy in this story.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

God Bella's mom is such a bitch... No wonder Bella has so many issues.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

OMG! To see Edward think that he was losing her, and to learn about Emily, I just can't believe all the pain that was here. You wrote it so well that it made my heart clench.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

The puppy seems so cute, but I have to agree with Edward and Elsa does sound like a 100 year old women's name. But then again with all the wrinkles a pug has I guess it could fit.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Anonymous Meeting by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

 

For the Under Her Thumb Challenge on FF.

Edward needs a Domme but has trouble truly submitting and has been labeled as trouble.  At the club's anonymous play night he thinks he finds what he needs in a new Domme.

With no information on her how can he find her again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7144 Read Count: 3149
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 19 May 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Meeting

That was great. Are you thinking about continueing it because I would soooooooooo love to read more.



Author's Response:

When I finish up one of my other stories I will probably continue it.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

 

Banner by lanilani26

Edward suprises his ex with a vist on Christmas Eve. What will Bella think when Edward gets off the plane and not Alice? AH/AU *One shot, well, minific. LOL.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 629 Read Count: 1740
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2010 Updated: 23 May 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't believe I never read that. It was amazing I loved how simple but complex it was. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420260
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love Game

This has my attention, can't wait to see where it goes...... Oh I guess I don't have to.... lol  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34246
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Moving on

Oh I am intrigued... There are so many questions that I have running through my mind. Like I wonder what their stories are? I mean they have both been in some kind of accident, I wonder if they were together when it happened.

I see that Jasper is going to be their common link. I wonder if it is Alice that throws them together again.

Great start I can't wait to see where it goes. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: She Works Hard for the Money

OMG! I LOVE this story. It is so well written and you have a defenite flare for describing things in a way that ou really feel like you are there.

Okay I really, really, really want to know what their stories are. It doesn't seem that he left her for his music. He doesn't seem the type that would leave his girlfriend because he wanted bigger things.

I am sort of glad that I only found the story now after you have completeled it. Because I would of gone crazy if I had to wait to find out the amswers to my questions.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Interview

Oh I can see the wheels turning in ALice's head. She will not be letting this one slide. I am so glad that Bella and Edward are going to be catching up and that they chemestry is so strong.

So I see that some of Edward's scars run from Victoria. I wonder what she did. Bella acted really funny when Edward mentioned that everything from his concert was going to a burn unit. I wonder what Bella's connection to that is?

Great chapter the interview was fun, and I love clumsy Bella and the fact that Edward was so concerned.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Another Place to Fall

Owwww You really are a tease arn't you. I loved it the scene on the beqach was so playfully cute. I wonder if the paps caught on?

So we got a little glimse into Bella's pain. I really hope that between Alice and Edward they can make Bella see that her scars are something that she can be proud of. Because from the sound of the burns it seems that she is lucky to be alive.

Great Chapter.....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breathless

That was so sweet......



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews.  I really appreciate them all.  I remember your name from the Twisted Twilight Tales contest I just hosted.  I forwarded all of your reviews to the authors.  It's really great that people like you take the time to review.  It means so much to hear feedback from people as they read your stories.   So thanks for that!!   Enjoy.  Hope you like the rest.  It gets a bit bumpy pretty soon, but since its finished, you don't have to wait for any of the chapters to be posted.  Lucky you! 

Thanks again

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Beautiful Disaster

OHHHH! Edward really blew it this time.

James is a ass as always, but really could I exspect anything else. I love your Jasper he is so much fun. I loved how him and Alice gave Bella the 411.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Be Gentle to Me

I hope this does't go bad for Bella. She has overcome so much and I don't want this to set her back. Hopefully Edward will understand why she didn't tell him.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: What an Honor

Wow that was soooo sweet what Edward did for Bree. I'm glad that Bella was able to tell Edward before the concert....

I wonder what happeed with Victoria? I also wonder what happened to Bella? Why does she feel guilty about her accident. I'm also wondering if maybe it is survivors guilt.

Great chapter as always.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Heal Over

That was really sad. I had a feeling that she blamed herself, but I never thought it would be that bad. Then there is Edward I wonder what else he didn't tell Bella I wonder is he has some kind of scar from Victoria's attack.

I am really enjoying this It is now 12:45 am and I should really be getting some sleep, but I think I will read just one more.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes

First off I want to say Congrats on the baby. I'm sure the little one is here and that you are most likely already well established in your schedule.

I loved this chapter they got over the hardest part and now they will only have to fill in the missing holes. I really liked that Edward put Bella and her needs above his own, he really is a gentleman...... Esme would be so proud....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Tit for Tat

Yeah they finally did it. They were both way to sexually frustrated, they needed to losen up a little bit....

I wonder what could be wrong. I wonder if a pap followed them or something.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: And so it goes...

I really can't blame Bella for feeling a little insecure. I mean what girl wouldn't have a little doubt about having her boyfriend want to keep their relationship a secret. Sure the important people know, but all the crazy/loose fangirls are easy there and his family is not so cheating would be simple.

Great chapter I could really feel their pain..

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Lonestar

I love how you traded the Volturi's threat with the treat of the paparazzi, it was a stroke of genius on your part.

I feel so sad for them having to not only deal with the seperation, but then to have a psycho to deal with as well.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Time after Time

I am sooooo glad that he is going there so that they could be together and get back on track. Even thought I think there cover is completely blown in the end I think it's for the best. I am so glad that Jane was able to talk Bella into stepping outside her comfort zone. It was just what she needed. Now that Bella is going to be on tv I think they need to get on with their lives and deal with the paps...

I love this story and am saddened that there were so little reviews.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Save Me

It was actually a little better then I was thinking. I really thought that Victoria had raped him.

I'm really glad that they are able to finally lean on each other. Great chapter. I love how all the crazy Cullen's were out to play in this chapter.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Many the Miles

Things are moving along nicely. I had to laugh when Edward opened the door in only his towel only too be meet by two fans. I sort of wish they did have cameras....

I can't believe that Victoria is in the background I'm sure this is not going to be pretty.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Stop This Train

Of shit first she had to deal with Jake now Victoria, Bella can't seem to catch a break. (But seriously there woldn't be much of a story if she did. ..)

I wonder what Jake is going to do..... I can almost see him having pictures of her after the accident and him releasing them to the press. I'm sure someone would pay a pretty penny for them.

Now Victoria is in her house, hopefully someone gets there soon to help her.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Burn it Down

I never realized that lint was so flamable. It make sense thought anyway. I know that this will sound weird but I really liked this chapter. Victoria is crazy but what we found out about her was interesting. I knew somethig was up with Garrett but I never would of guesses this. Man that is messed up.

Then their tear filled goodbye. Hopefully it won't be the end......

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hold On

I was so hoping that I was wrong about Jake, but sadly I wasn't. But maybe it's better that it is all out of the now. She has a brilliant future ahead of her and this way she doesn't have to be looking over her shoulder all the time waiting for someone to find out about it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: At Last

that was a perfect ending to a beautiful story.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews.  I'm glad you liked it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

sl

Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251232
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Yeah they are getting married.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

I sort of feel bad for her now. Charles is Satan himself. But at least she was smart and got it in the end.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I think he handled the whole Jennifer situation very well...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love Bella's attitude.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

God I hope they are okay...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bed rest is soooo much fun, NOT. I can just imagine how Edward will hover and how pissed off Bella will get..

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

God I hope he can fix this.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

AWWWWW! That was the sweetest thing ever.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The media is going to go mad. At least they have someone that can take care of all their PR....lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV

I liked hearing from Carlisle it was nice to know that he has options.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm glad that Edward took it so well. It could of caused so many problems for them.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It is sort of sweet how he is throwing himself into this 100%. I hope it lasts.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh thank God. Charles was a ass, but at least Esme and Charlisle are decent people. I'm glad that Esme smacked Edward he deserved it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow talk about hot and cold.....

I am really enjoying this story. I am so glad that I found it on this late snow day...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am really starting to like Edward and I' glad that Esme is her loving self...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh I wonder how Esme is.. Is she kind like the book Esme or is she cold like Carlisle seems to be...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Is it wrong that I am happy that Edward is in pain? I mean it breaks my heart to see him so torn, but I think he needs this to get his life straight.... I think it will make him a better father.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

God that was heartbreaking....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hope that Edward fights for her and the baby. Now that it is real for him I hope that he realizes how wonderful this is....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Damn those pregnancy hormones...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so proud of Bella.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

I am so glad that it wasn't Charles that put Teresa up to it....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That was a great story... I hope gets her happily ever after.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211373
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I should probley go buy another box of tissues. I have a feeling that I am going to be needing them while reading this story..

Can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

My heart bleeds for the Jack. And Bella to be so young and to find that little boy in such a heart breaking way. I'm glad I got the tissues.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Alright I want to personally find his mother and beat the shit out of her.

I am so glad that Charlie was able to pull the strings so that Jack didn't end up in the system. As much as I want to see him with his real family, I'm glad that he got a great second family.

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I feel so bad for Jack.... He really misses his daddy.

I liked the wedding, that was great having Charlie hand the garter to Jasper.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Jake is such a fucking creep. I am so glad that Leah was able to see what was really happening and not blame Bella. I'm glad Jake is in jail where he belongs.

It has been so long, I really can't believe that no one has come to clame Jack yet. I wonder what kind of fucked up family he has....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

That is awesome Bella has a career. The book seems great, I would buy iy for my daughter.....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Edward and Esme's story was increadibly touching. It makes perfect sense now why Esme was so understanding about Bella now.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Em and Jas are going to be the biggest problems I see. Man can they be protective.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Renee is such a bitch..... sorry but it's true.

I am so happy that things are going so well for everyone. But I can't help but wonder hoe Jack's family is doing. I mean i know he is a Cullen, but are they so involved in their own lives that they don't care. I am really curious to see how you are going to write them.

I wouldn't be able to rest if something happened to my daughter, I wonder is they are doing the same. I can't imagine how heart breaking this could be for them if they are not monsters.

This is a great story I am so glad I found it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Oh, Now it is going to get interesting.... I can't wait to see what Jack's family is really like there are so many questions that I can't wait to get the answers to.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I so agree with Tanya, please let her call her Jersey Shore associate.

Bella is such a good person and she really is a true mother. Only a true mother would put her own feelings aside for those of her child.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Jack is such a wonderful kid, it is so sad that he has to go thru all this. He loves both of his families and it is tearing him apart to think that he will have to give up one for the other.

I really hope this meeting goes well for them all.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Damn thank god for Esme. If Em had his way he would of ripped Jack out of Bella's arms and thrown her out into the streets. I wonder how Edward is going to react.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh man that was rough. My heart bleeds for Edward, and even though he is being a major Jerk, I can't really fault him. I don't even want to try to imagine what he went through, it is every parents worst nightmare.

I just hope that he sees how wonderful Bella is. I mean Jack was lucky to be with someone who loves him, hopefully Edward will realize that.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I am really greatful that I have that box of tissues....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Man I don't know who is worse Em or Jas. A little protective much.

Poor Edward, it is all so much for him. Finding out his ex-wife is the reason that he lost his son. Then to see his son so attached to someone else. (Not that he isn't getting attached as well.) Then to see this guy come in and him having a better relationship then you have with your own son. I would be upset too.

Hopefully everything works out. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Oh that was such a good day. They are all getting so much closer.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Wow! I'm glad Em and Bella had it out. Edward is crushing it's cute. And the girls were fuuny as they teased Bella. I hope that Marcus isn't up to no good. This family does not need any more heartache.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Okay Marcus wasn't as bad as I thought he would be, hopefully he was being truthful. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I hope Bella smacks him before saying yes.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

It is amazing to see them like this, they are so free, like they don't have a care in the world. I was a little suprised that Edward found it so easy to let Jack go. I would of thought he would have a panic attack having him out of his sight for so long. Even if he was only with his parents.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Jack is too cute.. I really like how easy everyone's relationships are.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Well that went better then I expected. I almost thought that Marcus was going to throw things, it was almost completely civilized.

I'm glad that Jack is taking everything so well.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Oh no, oh no, oh no. I really hope that Jack is just nervous and that nothing bad is going to happen. But I have a horrible feeling that Vicyoria is going to show up. I hope that no one takes Jack.

I have never been more glad that I started reading this late, because now I don't have to wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I just knew that bitch ws going to show up. Hopefully Bella and Tanya put the trash out.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I thought there was drama before, but now it is getting really thick. I so love this story it is so gut wrenchingly good.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Wow that's a relief, I was half exspecting Jack to be kidnapped while Edward was alone with him. I'm so glad I was wrong.

Great chapter! Renee makes a little more sense, but being bipolar does not excuse her just leaving.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Thank God! I am sure that Victoria is going to try something but I so was not ready for her to snatch him there.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Summary:

"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…”  I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."

 

 

 

~*~*~

 

"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"

 

~*~*~

 

This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11204
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Birth

I liked your birth scene. Sure I was a little surprised that Edward left her, but I'm so glad he spent the time with the baby.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: A Change of Heart

That was so sweet.



Author's Response:

thank you Irish_charm!

Summary:

AIEW

Thanks to Bonnie's Banners for the banner

Set after Breaking Dawn, Rosalie's jealousy over Bella and Edward's
happy ending drives her to choices that will effect both her and Emmett's
future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12097 Read Count: 1499
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2010 Updated: 23 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man Rosalie is a bitch....



Author's Response:

LOL, yes she is. I think she was in the books too, I guess I just brought it out a little more in this one.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Emmett. I wonder if they will be okay at the end of this...



Author's Response:

Yes, I feel bad for Emmett too. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WOW! I bet Rosalie didn't see that coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reviewing. And Roslalie has a plan, she always does.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

God this is messed up.... I wonder if Emmett will turn her and leave Rosalie.



Author's Response:

Yes, my brain works in very unusual ways. LOL

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I wonder if the venum will fix her broken neck and change her anyway....



Author's Response:

Well you finished so you already know the answer. But thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good Story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I appreciate all the reviews

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49638
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away

Wow this story is intense. Edward is a prick, sorry just had to say that.... Is it wrong to want to see more Edward and Bella. Not him raping or beating her. But when he is nice it is kind of hot.

Anyway great job, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: lost

The kids are a mess, I'm suprised one of them didn't pop their dad yet. They should gang up and take them all out at once. It would make daddy dearest proud.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1253988
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I can finally review using my iPhone and iPad, so I'm really sorry that I haven't reviewed lately. But I truly love this story. 

I'm glad we got Edward's point of view into her lesson. He seemed really cold and while I know he loves her I didn't completely understand his motive. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I really enjoyed this chapter. We got a lot of fun and important background information. Edward remembered something that could help them break open everything that is going on. I'm glad that Edward is taking training Quil seriously. If Aro is eventually going to leave his business to Edward and Emmett its important and makes the most sense for Edward to be equipped to do everything. And just from Bella's book, we know that she would make a incredible assert to training and mentoring. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

It was really nice to see them open up like that to each other.



Author's Response:

They are getting there...

Thanks for reading... I have this weeks teaser for you..

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

While looking thru a friends favorites I came across your story and I can honestly say that I am totally addicted. I started reading this story a few days ago, but I read it on my iphone and can't review on it. For that I am truly sorry. I am completely in love with this story, and I so wanted to let you know.

I suffer from insomnia so I read alot when my mind wont shut off, but I can't come up with enough brain power to write myself. Your story has brought me to tears more times then I would like to admit.

You outline Bella's struggles so well that I feel that they are my own. Then to see Edward so wrapped up in the love he feels for her it is truly beautiful. As always the other Cullen's are their beautiful self. But the way that you have Aro and Jane is so unique and beautiful that I have fallen in love with them as well.

As for the punishments I think that it is truly amazing that even thought Edward would of loved to tanned Bella's ass for her actions he resisted because he knew that Bella could not handle that. Truly I think that this punishment is much worse then a spanking ever could be.

This chapter is great, I am sort of hoping that Edward will spank Bella so that she has a nice pink bottom for when she has to bare it to Alex. I think that it enhance the experience.....

Amazing story and I am sort of glad that I don't have to wait to see what happens next.... 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your kinds words ...and thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Shit James is so going to do something.... There is no way that he didn't do something with the Seth's collar, maybe trying to see if that would get him in the doggie door? Then to have someone in the ally and now outside Edward's house.

I just hope that Edward will be able to save Bella before James can do anymore damage.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was great everything! I am so sad for Sally and Bella. But I am really gladthat you are writing it that way, because that is the reality of abuse. It takes a whole hell of a lot more then a few bruises and bettings before a women finally has enought and unfortionally a lot of time death comes first. Hopefully Sally's breaking point happens before that..



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

That was freaking great.......



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella was so calm while she explained the song, she really has come a long way. Yeah sure she has talked about abuse a milion times with her patients, but this is personal, this is her family. It's great how comfortable she is with them. I'm sure it is only a matter of time before can tell Edward and then the family everything that happened to her.