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Bio:
Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman. A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH
First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138748
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
Just started this story. I have to ask: Why is there no punishment, none whatsoever, for Edward for not divulging the existence of his daughter to Bella? He demands the relationship be honest. He's been saying how it won't work unless they are honest and open. And then he pulls this crap. He definitely is NOT the best Dom. He gets away with this and he would punish her ass for it. See, if they have kids, how can he not see the hypocrisy. Oh, Susie, you have to be punished for breaking the rules, but...I can get away with it 'cause I need to control things even though I'm not logical or fair to any of you. Bleh.
I guess that's why I have a hard time here. There is no logic for his behavior versus hers. Just hypocrisy. And Esme glaring at him is not punishing him. Bella's a pushover. Bleh again. Your writing style is great. It's the lifestyle here and the subliminal message it sends to young gals out there. Sorry to ramble.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. Edward does have some major issues that he wil be working out, as will Bella. He isn't the best Dom or I should say the most perfect Dom. He's never been in this situation before; all of his past relationships have only been subs and there was no real reason to divulge the existence of his daughter. He messed up not telling Bella once he knew that their relationship would be more than Dom/sub. He's human, not that it's a great excuse, but he will do a lot of maturing throughout the story. My Bella and the book Bella are similar in some area's, being a push over is one. She had no self esteem for a long time, but she will over come that.
I hope that you'll continue reading and seeing them through. There will be some craziness that goes on, but in the end everyone will get their HEA.