Reviews by shortieecakee
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Wow this totally threw me for a loop. I was not expecting Bella to get out that soon. A little more explanation on how that happened would be nice. Any idea of when this is going to be updated again?

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

C POV means carlisle right?



Author's Response:

Yes, you're finally getting to hear what's going on in Carlisle's head

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I thought she was supose to stay with family friend JJ or something if her parents were ever to die??



Author's Response:

Someone messed with her mother's will.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

This is as far as I got to reading this story before it was taken off of fanfiction. So from here on out it is a new story for me. I am so excited. I hope everything turns out good! You're an awesome writer by the way!



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story..

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story. Why does this have to be the end?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woah did not think this was a Jasper/Bella fic.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Interesting so far. A bit confused with introductions!

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Never Say Never

So far so good. I noticed this story had a lot of reviews, so I figured it had to be a good one.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Never Say Never

ooh mystery man. I wonder who it is?

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Never Say Never

It keeps on getting more mysterious.I love it!

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Never Say Never

Ah how cute. I wish I had my own wolf to cuddle up to!

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Never Say Never

These chapters seem to be getting more familiar as I go. I think I may have already read this story, just stopped following it since it hasn't been updated in forever.

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Longshot

I've decided this story deserves way more reviews than it has received so far. The story I was reading before this had over a 1,000 reviews yet I only made it through 1 1/2 chapters before giving up on it. Nothing compared this this intriging and talented writing! This one has me reading til 2 30am



Author's Response:

Hi, sorry it has taken me so long to get this reply out to you. Real life got real crazy there for a bit. I am so happy you enjoyed the story so much and thank you for the kind words. It really does mean a lot to me.  I have a new story that will begin posting in a few weeks and I would love to hear from you when it does. 

You can check out the summary below.

Until then take care and happy reading,

EA

Title: Somewhere I Belong


Summary: Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Haunted

Sounds intriguig so far!

Summary:

Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 96107
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Nov 2010
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

Cute ending for a great story, and I like the name 'Jalayla' I have never heard it before, it's pretty.

Oh and and FYI note: babies don't start showing facial expressions (ex. Smiling) until they are at least a month old. That's just the minimum. It can take up to two months before a baby starts smiling.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Aw that last sentence made me almost cry. This story has me on the edge wanting to know what happened between the Cullens, and for the rest of the story to make sense!

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

It's been a while since I read a story like this I can tell it's going to be differe then others. Exciting!

Summary:

Bella is asked out on a date by fellow student, at Seattle University, Jacob Black. She's somewhat eager to go out with him, having felt some kind of physical attractiont to him.

But what happens when she takes down his number incorrectly?

Bella and Edward had an unusual meeting just over a year ago. When Bella took down a friend's phone number, incorrectly, she proceeded to text Edward instead, forming a fast friendship with him and eventually falling in love. A year later and once again their relationship is via text and email as Edward is gaining some valid work experience while helping those less fortunate, in third world countries. Edward has big plans for his return and Bella has a secret which may throw a spanner in the works.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20337 Read Count: 6726
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2012
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting.Not sure if this was meant to be a one shot but I seemed like everything happened to fast. I love how Jacob just magically disappears and is never heard of again. It's true he always ends up getting his heart broken. You are a good writer and I enjoyed they story, but I think this story has potential to be something bigger like a full story. More time for things to developovertime. Every good story has a good conflict, and I never saw that in here. So just an idea of making it into a full story having both guys fighting over her possibly. Not trying to offend just giving my thoughts and suggestions!



Author's Response:

This was always intended to be a one shot. Something light and fluffy for charity. I will however be adding a second chapter (again for charity) but it won't be made public until 14th March. So if you want to read the second chapter before its posted, you need to donate to Fandom for Heroes.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

I am totally into stories right now that involve kings and queens. Excited to read this story.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

Ow physical abuse. It's funny how in the olden days how they thought getting an heir to the throne was determined by the woman, when really it's the male's sperm that dictates the gnder of the baby.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding

You sound so smart when you explain things in your A/N

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Crying

Aw cute. Although I don't know how I feel about Edward at the moment. At the begining of the story I wasn't a fan of him because he was rude and mean. But then I was thinking this is my first time reading a story where Edward is a totaly different character. So it is kinda cool to see Edward in a different perspective, in which he isn't the lovey dovey guy everyone writes him to be. So I like this story for it's uniqueness! I really like him making mistakes, although the apologies could use a little touch up possibly.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing

Disturbing much!! I can definitely say that I will no longer think of what it would be like to live in medieval times. Those are cruel and disgusting punishments. I can't definitely appreciate that we don't have those types of executions now a days. Although it was an important chapter, I never wish to read something like this again. It literally made me feel sick.

Sex Machine by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

In the year 2029, bio-mechanical engineer, Bella Swan, has created the perfect machine for Whitlock Robotics. Masen can be anyone or anything you desire... but who does Bella want her Masen to be?

 

This is a O/S

 

B/E M for Lemons/Language

 

Banner made by the fabulous Time_Lights

 

Special Thanks to Carsen Choi!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9105 Read Count: 4482
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Machine

Genius Idea! I've been looking for a story that is defferent from all the other popular themes and I believe I just found it. How crazy would it be if this became real? Loved it!

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

Banner done by Christine: 

@Christag_banner
christag_banners@yahoo.com
www.christagbanners.blogspot.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Personally I just think the word velvet has just become overrated since the Twilight Saga was created.

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So true about online classes. They suck!

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I didn't stalk anyone, was just obsessed and knew everything about him