Reviews by torisurfergirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

OMG Fabulous story! I truly loved it though i may have wanted to throttle you at several points along the way. But one major question is what happened with JJ's (and was that his full name or like nickname like Carlie was short for Carlina nd Jack for John Anthony?) heart surgery, i mean from the story i gather he's okay but any other time something was mention everything was divulged or atleast mentioned in passing, but all that happened was you mentioned it would happen then nothing for years about him at all. I mean i get that this is Bella and Edwards story but even Rose, Emmett, Carlisle, and Esme's problems were cleared. But thats mainly my curiousity. I really loved that Carlie and Will were childhood sweethearts and waited for eachother- it was fabulous that it wasnt edward and Bella bc main character cliche and all but subtely thrown in there. Just thank you for your commitment to the story and being so through. I also loved your writing style. Just a great freaking job!! Hope to see many more stories from you :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427888
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Declarations**

I love this story!!!!! .....Your writing in general.... I don't know if you have a beta, or even want one or another, but if you ever need or want an extra air of eyes to look over chapters (this story or anything else) in transient, just give me a message or email (torisurfergirl@gmail.com). 

 

Edward makes me smile, blush, and gush soooooo much. LOOOOVEEE HIM!

 

Love ya,

 

Tori S. (torisurfergirl)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dinner

AHHH I'm dying to know what was said! I'm sure ther were the usual slut whore, he's just using you, or golddigging bitch, but I also know you and you would never go with just the usual banalities, you would add in a twist or two and something major that would cause Bella to seriously freak, where as she can discount everything else, this one thing she questions... But I would love to hear about that convo!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127496
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ahhhhhhhh!!!! and all the cigarette burns... jeesus. That was an intense chater, but in some ways i think her recovery and seeing her struggling with her life with Edward will be more intense and harder to stomach. 

A BABY!! how will Emma react to the news? How will she cope with Bella's abduction? 

Can you say clusterfuck?

Waiting loyally,

Tori (torisurfergirl)

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923138
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ahhhhh! We're finally getting there!! *squeels* Can we kill off James yet? Pretty please with a cherry on top?

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Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

you don't have to appologize. what makes you such an amazing writer is even though the chapters are so short, esch time the story moves forward a little more- and you still leave us with cliffies or quasi-cliffies! LOL I'm still trying to wrap my mind around Carlisle being a dominant himself...so different, but in a good way!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

Awwww Poor Butterfly. So green. And Sir...just hot damn I love Sir/Edward/Sir is there a distinction anymore?? 

 

Props to Soapy!! Love her work ;)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Butterfly Spoke out of turn!!! ooooooooo!!!!!! Sir seems to overlook mistakes like that when he's really turned on like this...pattern on purpose...? Hmmm

 

What's she going to do?!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

OH GOD!! I've been gone for 2days with no internet and I come back to 7updates!! Thank you, it's so different rushing through each chapter to get to the next part, but dear lord, IDK if I could've survived the in-between time.

And sorry i was so busy rushing through that I didn't review each chapter. To answer a question a couple chapters back, Yes I have and I do. ;)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Probably get to the part where they meet. Only have a phone call or summarize one if it was really important, like something BIG happened between them. 

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Gah! TEASE TEASE TEASE lol

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

i'm definitely still here. may self-combust, but im here like a good little girl

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Serious this drabble fic is the sweetesst kind of torture! and you're the puppet master telling us all when to dance...

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

you can't stop! I may not always review but thats usually because you leave me too wound up. all i would ever review with is MORE! I NEED MORE! lol but holy shit you know how to work over your readers and your characters apparently. You truly deserve the title, Master



Author's Response:

oh no... my Master calls me butterfly. I submit to his every desire.

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

ahhh i dont know how i feel about that... i mean alice and emmett and rose and jasper they always had a clowe relationship, but good old doctor daddy c? *confused*  yet very much still on the edge of my seat lol

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

you probably told us this but why can't he have sex with human submissives? The venom?



Author's Response:

I didn't tell you. It's just because he thinks that he will lose control and hurt her. And up until now, he had no desire to. 

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Ah, for a smart cookie, Edward can be really thick. How long will it take him to figure out she's his mate? I thought for a moment there he had figured/almost figured it out when he compared her to Esme.



Author's Response:

He just doesn't believe his mate is out there... think of Edward in Twilight, it took him how many books to just be with her?

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

True, very true. I would just think with everything he 'hears' that he'd be more apt to pick up on that type of thing despite his beliefs. But i guess that's what you'd call a self-fullfilling prophecy...yeah?

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Ohhh call...call...call...!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Would it be too obvious thatd he'd go to her for advice on how to maintain control around a human? Or have Tanya prep Bell....but why couldn't Alice dothat. Hmmmmm I know I'll never guess it, so i'll stop now before i further embarass myself

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

"Oh you wicked wicked fiend!"  *said in best imitation voice*

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Wait. Didn't she break a rule though, adressing herself, and not as Butterfly?

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

'Can I keep you', Sir? 

Seriously. Your scenes are intense in themselves. but separating them out like this....holy fuck. And I say that in the best possibly way. 

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Soo excited. gah!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

AHHHHH!! Well Thanks for the inspiration Sir :))

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I'd say she's excited at the thought of him fucking her

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Gawd I can't even think about what'll happen when they actually meet...! O.o

 

And I get your updates. I have your story on my favorites, and then you also have to have your preferences set that you get updates for your favorites! Hope that helps

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I sent in my request for the wreck room! :) Oh and the two guys couldn't possibly be Emmett and either Jasper or Edward...hmm?



Author's Response:

are you in? I've accepted them all.

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

omg congrats!!! i know i definitely read it!! helps that its ah-ma-zing

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Ahhhh they're gonna meet soon, they're gonna meet, they're gonna meet! 

I wonder how both Edward and Bella will respond to her training... he's never really had to train one from scratch before, has he?

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

well now you're just asking for pictures. ;P  I have these cute ones with penguins, reminds me of a discussion about Antartica... Penguins, lovely.

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

oh its totally true! Especially in the Wreck room :)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

I dont know which I'm looking forward to more Edwards reaction to her smell, or Emmett smelling her and probably teasing Edward in some way...just to rile him up

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Well You can't, NOT review after an A/N like that!! Thats just like WTF?! haha I keep thinking Edward does something, exerts his dominanace over Bella using his 'Sir' voice with her and she starts to piece it out or something. THEY NEED TO MEET!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Sir needs a new lightbulb, its getting a bit dim... he keeps calling her 'his' and stuff but hasnt had his "aha!" moment where he realizes that she's his mate yet huh? If we all start clapping our hands like for Tinkerbell, will the light bulb come on? lol

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

10 and counting! Oh and when Edward pins Emmett to the floor and says "Mine" I so had a slash moment where it almost semed like Edward was claiming Emmett. Especially for having thoughts about being with someone else... I laughed- I couldn't help it!!!



Author's Response:

wrong fic, but I could write a slash if u guys would like.... but it wouldn't be for some time. I do write femme slash :)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

i knew it was Em and Rose!!! HAHA! *insert cheeky smile*

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Meet face-to-face! Sir-Butterfly not Bella-Edward. Whats the chapter countdown now till that actually happens? LOL

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Don't mind me. Please ignore the girl dying in the corner. 

I don't know whose POV i like more Sir or Butterfly and believe me: I always have a favorite



Author's Response:

"Come here little one," Sir says, pointing at Tori... 

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

I think if it were RL and for ME, I'd say eww or just not doing it. But in here, for EDWARD/SIR to be doing it. Holy Hell!! (IDK why)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

hahah I love you! and sorry. hacent had internwt to review been using my phone! :) but know im always here and dear god woman you killed me last chapter and now the anticipation for this one

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

awww well nothing like a little Sir time to make you feel better...maybe you should update again. Ive had a day from hell too. Ive been not well and had a full day of classes. had to leave my writing class to have a small breakdown outside the room so i totally understand!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

oh god! i love you and your shameles authors notes! lol bring on more MC and IR!!!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

jesus fuck. no pics and then you  slam me with this?! Reader cruelty!

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

About fucking time!! And oh god that scene...Squirting and just unf

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Gahh!! The wait. is. killing. me. 

But that good type of pain. That if you hold off, then good things will come--you'll be rewarded. :))

 

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two

Idk if its Mae or You but I'M an intellible puddle of goo!!! GAHHHHHHHHH

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap

Thank the lord you updated! Are you a mind reader or part volcan?? I was seriously just thinking about how this story hadnt updated in a while yesterday :)) Gahhh love Mase

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

SO SO EXCITED!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The job market is bad, and recent college grad Bella's dreams of being a teacher are crumbling away. Edward is a single father and doctor, struggling to raise his seven year old daughter by himself. Fate intervenes, changing them both forever. Drabble fic. Alternating POV's.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22851 Read Count: 161044
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Good god. Youre killing me with all your different stories and updates and theyre fucking amazing and i feel like ive waited a lifetime for this to happen even though its only been days. I bow down to you and your mastery of writing. Hot Damn I Love You



Author's Response:

awww! *blushes* thanks!!! :D

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126022
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm really sad that this story is ending! I so want more Edward and Mina. Though I don't think I could've handled them apart any longer lol

 

 

Tori S.

 

P.S. every time I read DrScott I heard Rocky horror picture show. DR. Scott! Janet. Rocky! Dr Scott

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229380
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hate you. Who leaves a story tbc here?! Aghhhh

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In case you didn't know I actually love you and this story