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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
WHAT in the world!!!! A wolf imprinted on Renee. If a wolf imprinted on Renee then why do the woves blame the vampries? WHO's imprint is she?????? Jacob's!!!!!!!! Really or does he just want her to be and is just saying that. Because I am thinking that if she was one of the wolves' imprint that they would have never let her sit with Edward, much less be kissed by Edward. I am soooooo off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Jacob did not imprint on Bella. Renee and Billy both believe that Bella will be an imprint since Renee was also. This part is explained a little more in Legends and Carlisle's outtake.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
OMGosh!!!! Let me guess, when the wind blow Jacob smelled Bella's scent on Edward.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
A lot of action in this chapter. Ok, I am a little confused. In this chapter it was said that Bella could hear Charlie, her dad, and then her uncle. Who is her uncle????? Are you talking about Billy?????? I am assuming in your story that Charlie knows about wolves and vampires.
Author's Response:
Billy is Charlie's best friend. Uncle is an honorary title. Yes, Charlie knows. I hate how in the books he doesn't know anything.. he's the chief of police, not the village idiot. His best friend is Queleute - it makes sense that at some point over the years he would have figured out something.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
OMGosh!!!!! Why are the wolves growling and approaching quickly?????? What is going on??? I love how Edward gets her to claim down. I forgot to say in my other review that I loved that Bella stood up to Emmett. That was funny.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I knew Edward was ready to kill Mike. lol. LOVED IT!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I had to laugh at Charlie. lol. I liked how all the Cullen kids kept Mike from asking Bella out.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
LOVED this chapter. I do not know why it has taken me so long to read this story. I am sooooo loving it. Bella came out of her shy little shell. lol. So, they are together....what is going to happen with Mike. I did get some of my Christmas decorations down just not much. lol. There is always tomorrow.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! It's a lot of fun to write especially now that I've FINALLY figured out where I'm going with this. lol!
Hubby took down our tree since I'm sick. I hate cedar fever!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OMG!!!!! I bet Edward is going crazzy. He is the one in the forest, watching Bella. It had to be killing him to watch Mike kiss Bella. I hope he does not do anything stupid and hurt Mike.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Loved this chapter. I like how Edward sometimes screws up with Bella and pisses her off. He is not always perfect. lol.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires
Is this Chapter 2 of the outtakes. I have not been to check it out. I have read chapter 1 but not chapter 2. If not will we get it now that it is after Jan. 1, 2012??? I am off to see the outtake.
Author's Response:
Yes, chapter two of the outtake is Carlisle's pov.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
What is the deal about Eskimos?
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have read many of your stories and LOVED them all. I have decided to start reading this one. I am excited about it. I was wondering.....Will Edward be a DARK Edward in this story??????
I hope you update For the Love of My Obession soon. Off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving this a shot. I started the story intending it to be a fluffy story only to realize the reason I couldn't get into it and stick with writing it is that I CAN'T do fluffy. It bored the heck out of me. I need a little angst mixed in unless it's a very short story or o/s. So I used the title idea and twisted it around so it fit with what I do best...ANGST!
Edward (as will all the Cullen men) will be dominant, possessive, protective, and willing to fight for his mate. He won't be dark in the sense of evil or ever hurtful to Bella. He sees her as his salvation so will cherish her...in a very alpha-male way.
Don't forget to read the outtakes and Legends which is a companion story to CAM and tells more of the past. I'm working on the next chapter for CAM now and then hopefully will have an update for LOMO by the end of the month.
Thanks again for reading!
Mic
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I liked having Alice's POV. Can't wait to read more. I am off to read the next chapter. Thank you for getting back with me on my first review in asking is this was a Darkward story or not. I like a dark story but I also like a possessive Edward too. lol.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Edward definitely sounds like he is getting very possessive about Bella.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ok, What was the deal with Alice and Rose in the car????? What was going on with Edward, Alice and Jasper at the food court? Edward is so funny being possessive about Bella. I laughed at his reaction to Josh in the bookstore. When they were leaving to go back to Forks, why was Edward frowning?
Author's Response:
Rose and Alice could smell Bella and knew her scent was very strong and potent. Rose is worried how Edward will handle it. She's not in favor of Edward choosing a human so looks for every potential problem to justify her feelings.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Ok, this answered some of my questions from my last review. But not all of them. I know Edward can hear everyone else's thoughts, but can they hear his or are they just talking so fast and so quite that Bella can not hear them because she does not have vampire hearing????
Author's Response:
Read the first outtake for CAM. It will explain their gifts. Edward's works both directions.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Love some Carlisle and Esme time, how sweet. LOVED what Edward did when Bella walked into the livingroom. When Bella was going to sleep, Edward was lefting her up but where was he going with her. Was he just putting her in his lap or was he taking her somewhere???
Ok, I can tell that I am NOT going to get my Christmas decorations down today. I am already to wrapped up in this story. I do not want to stop reading but I really NEED to get my decorations down. We will see. lol.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
OMGosh!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!! I can't wait to find out more about what is going on with Bella. What will the family say when they see Bella's neck? What is Aro and the others going to do? Will they try to take Bella away from Edward? I wished Edward and his family would go ahead and talk to Bella and tell her all about mating so Edward could really mark her and mate with her so Aro could not take her away from Edward. Well, since he has marked her and his venom it in her system, can Aro take her away or not?? At the end of this chapter you state a conttent and mated female...vampire.....but Bella is not changed yet.....What is going on???????????????
Author's Response:
Glad you liked! Next chapter will have the family back together to see the results of their mating. Expect drama.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I am so glad that Bella took what Edward told her so well. I can not wait to find out what the family thinks of what Edward has done.
Author's Response:
It will be interesting...We'll see next chapter.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Poor Charlie I wished he could find someone to "imprint" on. lol. He is really understanding about all this supernaturel stuff.
Author's Response:
He's known about it for a long enough time to be understanding and accepting...except when it comes to his daughter, but he's trying.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33
I see a war in the near future. How in the world do you defeat someone like Felix????????????????
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Poor Bella. I hate that she is feeling like she is. I hope she has realized that the feelings that she and Edward have for each other are real. I am so glad that you are back. I have missed you and your story.
Author's Response:
She's had a lot thrown at her to make her unsure, but Edward will help her overcome the insecurity.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I am sorry about everything going on in your RL. Hope everything gets better. Love this story. Bella is slowly changing. Wow!!!!! Can't wait for more. Good luck with everything.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I was so excited to get this update. Thank you. Poor Edward. I cannot believe that he destroyed the
hospital. What is the Volturi doing in Forks.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Mic
In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Wow!!! So, is Jasper starting to fall in love with Alice or is he just drawn to her because her blood taste so good? What is going on with Sean? Is there going to be something between Alice and him.
I was reading your story over on FF. But now that you are here I will read and review here. Glad you are on this site. Welcome!!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am glad that Alice got away from the werewolves.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Enjoyed this chapter. One thing I don't understand...you said Emmett took them into town with him to a meeting because he did not trust to leave them alone but then he went out of town and left them alone. Why????
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Poor Alice. She is always getting into trouble. Can't wait to see how Jasper reacts when he finds out.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Bery good chapter. I think I am caught up with the story and reveiws now. I am really enjoying reading your story.
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I am so glad that they finally got together. That this time it was because they both wanted it. GREAT GREAT job with this chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
That was some hot hot hot sex. GREAT JOB!!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Lots going in in this chapter. Please update soon.
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Ok, this chapter helped me understand some things. Thanks! I am glad that Bella did agree to go away with Edward. SO PROUD of her for standing up to him, though.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Ok, is James' part the same night that we just read with Bella and Edward??? If so, where was Edward going? What did Evan interupt them for? You always leave me wanting more and more. Great job.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Why would you be nervous about this chapter. GREAT JOB!!!!! I am so glad that Edward and his men had a plan and got James.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
OMGosh!!!! How funny. Love me some Emmett!!!!!! Glad that they found Aro. Now maybe Bella and Edward can move on with their life. I like they new kinky side.
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
WOW!!!! This is a wonderful 1st chapter. I can't wait to go read the others that you have posted so far. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0)
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
OMG!!!! What has happened to Bella? What has Renee done to this girl? If Renee has not wanted her all these years why did she not send her to Charlie earlier.....I guess because she would not have had a "slave". That is what Bella is acting like. It seems like all she does is cook and clean and eats very little. That is not good. Glad that Emmett stood up to Rose. She really needs to watch her mouth around Bella.
I just wanted you to know that this is a great story. Love the story line. You are doing a great job.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I am so glad that Esme came to the rescue. Every girl needs a mother figure. It dosen't sound like Bella has had one in her life so far. I am glad that all the Cullens are there for her.
Will we hear Bella's POV anytime during this story?
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Thanks for letting us hear from Bella. What did Bella mean that Renee had already told her what she was here for? Renee has really done a number on Bella. Can't wait to find out what has happened to Bella.
Glad that Emmett took a stand with Rose. She really needs to learn to watch her mouth.
Love Esme. We now see where Alice gets it. Alice always seems to get her way...well...she learned that from her mother. Love it!!!!!!
I am REALLY getting into this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon and often. Love this story. Oh my, I just got a notice that you have updated. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am off to read it. WOW!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I am glad that Bella is starting to at least feel a little more exlaxed around the kids.
What information does Renee have on Charlie that he is worried about? What does she have one him? Can't wait to find that out.
I am so happy that Charlie finally got to hug Bella and tell her that he loves her. Why did Bella ask Charlie if he was really her dad? What did Renee tell Bella? Will there be a chance that we might get to "hear" from Renee? Find out what was/is going on in her head and the reasons she has done what she did?????
I can not believe that Bella has a scare from where her own mother cut her for punishment. That is awful!!!!!!!!!!!
Bella is lucky that she has Charlie and Emmett and the Cullens in her life now. She will always be protected now!!!!!
Can't wait to find out what the test results are. What is in Bella's medical file that has Carlisle sooooooo angry?????
I know you just update today...and for that I am grateful. But I really really want you to update again. There is something about your writing and your story that just has me taken in. I am so caught up in this story. To let you know....I would be really really happy with a new chapter everyday!!!!! HAHAHA!!!!!!! Love this story. You are doing a GREAT job with it. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well, you have to love Alice. I am gald that Alice is getting Bella to open up just a little.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I am proud of Rose. She does have a good heart. What has happened to Rose? Why has she changed?
Can't wait for you to update again. I am so loving this story.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I love that Edward got Bella a puppy. That was soooooo sweet.
I am scared by the last of the chapter. What is going to happen??? That did not sound good. Please update soon.!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
LOVE TI!!!!!! Great job wi;th this chatper. love Bella with Noel. I was wondering why the guys were letting Renee do all of that stuff to Bella, but it was all a plan. I am glad that they got Renee arrested. What information does Renee have Charlie????????
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
So Phil is just as bad as Renee. Please let Emmett get there before Phil hurts Bella. Or better yet let the police get there and witness him abusing her. Emmett is going to feel so bad for leaving Bella by herself. He will never forgive himself. I hope he doesn't feel to quilty. PLEASE update SOON!!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Love this story. I am so glad that Phil did not hurt Bella. I am really really glad that Edward got his hits in. Did Renee torment Bella with needles, is that why she reacted so bad to them????? Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I laughed so hard when Edward and Jasper were TRYING to ask Charlie and Carlisle if they could take the girls out. LOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!! That was wonderful!!!! GREAT AMAZING and EXCELLENT job.
Just got your notice from the blog about your new story. It sounds interesting. Can't wait to start reading it but I am glad that you are going to finish this one first. Some people who have more than one story seem to forget about some of them and not finish. That has happen to me on several stories I was reading. Thank you for not doing that.
Love this story.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
YES I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is the deal with Tanya???? Why is Emmett drinking, fighting with Rose??? What has happened to change Rose??? And whatever it is, why can't she talk to Emmet about it if they were boyfriend and girlfriend???
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! Check the blog around Wednesday for a teaser ;0) ANd umm I can't answer your question because it would ruin the rest of the story lol ;0)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am so loving your story. I love how protective Bella is over Emmett. I can just see Edward trying to hide his smile when Bella is trying to get them out of the room....kitten trying to be a lion. lol. Glad her first day was good. Can't wait to find out more about what has happened to Rose.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
OH MY GOSH!!!!! Please let Edward kiss her. You have left us hanging again. GREAT job with this chapter and with the WHOLE story. I am loving it!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
OMG!!! I loved the party and I am soooo happy that Edward kissed Bella. Want to hear more about that. I am worried for Bella on the stand. But as along as she looks into Edward's eyes, she will be ok. As always, you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Loved Emmett and Jasper ganging up on Edward about dating. Glad that Renee is going to jail.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
What Emmett did was priceless!!!!!!!!! Loved it. I am so glad that things seems to be going so good for all of them. All the teens have really been through a lot. They all deserve to have a GREAT prom. Can't wait for your next update. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
LOVE IT!!!!!!! I am glad that Rose and Alice talked. It is good to see Rose kind of vunerable (sp). Like that Bella did not realize that she and Edward were going on a date. It was probably a good thing, she would have worried the whole day. lol. Alice is always good for laugh. Congratulations on the baby. I am glad that everything went well. Good luck with taking care of the baby and trying to write. We will definately understand about slower updates. Just do the best you can. GET SOME REST AND SLEEP AND LOVE ON THAT BABY!!!!!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Loved Edward and Bella's date. GREAT JOB!!!!
I busted out laughing when Bella bite Edward's tongue. That was priceless. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!! I am soooooo loving this story.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Laughed when Bella Goggled Kissing!!!! I feel so sorry for Bella. I hope her flashbacks don't happen very often. Poor thing.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I so love your story. That is one reason I am coming back and reveiwing. I am trying to get caught up on my reviews. I am WAY behind. I read this chapter right when you posted it but am just now reviewing. Sorry, RL just gets in the way sometimes.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
So glad that Edward and Bella talked and she is going to get some outside help.
Wow!!!!! Emmett received a blow did he not. That explains a lot with Rose.
I just want to let you know that I really enjoy reading this story. I am a little behind on my reviews but I am up to date on reading the chapters. Now I am just back tracking to write reviews. I want your review number to go up so people will know what a wonderful story this is.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I am glad that Emmett told Charlie the truth and he feel comfortable talking to his dad like that. I am starting to not like Vicky. I love the Charlie took Bella to play miniature golf. They are starting to get close.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Glad that Bella did not freak out when Jacob was asking her out and then talked bad about way she liked Edward. Glad she has started theraphy. I understand why Vicki would be hurt but boy she was MAD. Emmett never promised her anything more than friendship, did he.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
When I read this chapter I was thinking VICKI!!!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
OOOOOKKKKKKK!!!!! Did not see that one coming. WOW!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I am glad that Charlie has told the kids and that everything is out in the open. I hope that Bella is going to be ok. That was alot to hear from Charlie. I like the little story about Em putting toys in Edward's crib. Sweet. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I am so sorry that I am just now reviewing. I love this story and I am soooo happy that you updated this story. I know it has been awhile since this chapter but the holidays have been here. I know everyone here will be happy to hear from you when you update. Please just take your time updating. PLEASE PLEASE do not stop with this story.
We all will patiencely wait for you. LOVE LOVE this story.
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
What does this mean for Bella? I laughed as Bella caught a big ugly fish. Now she has something on Emmett. lol. I can't wait to hear her tease him about it.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I am so glad that Liam and Conner are not a threat to Bella. But I think Emmett, Edward and Jasper with his tire tool had it covered. lol. You know Charlie didn't have it covered with his gun. lol. Thanks for updating. SOOOO loving this story. Renee and her mother were definately a piece of work. WOW!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I was so excited to get your update. I have missed this story. I feel so sorry for Bella. She was finally moving on with her life and starting to really make progess and now this. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I was so excited to get this update!!!!!! I love love love this chapter. I love seeing Bella so relaxed around everyone. She is really becoming a part of the whole gang. I love how Rose started her conversation with Emmett. I am glad that Emmet called Edward for some help. Also glad that Emmet was there for Jasper. You are doing an amazing job with this story. I am so glad to have this update. Can not wait for your next one. Thank you for sharing this amazinjgn story with us.
When Edward takes his two kids to the Christmas tree lot he comes away with more than just a tree. Fluffy o/s about a slightly older Dr. Dilfward and college student Bella finding love during the most wonderful time of the year.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7533 Read Count: 1550
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMG!!!! I so LOVE this story. I love a Daddy Edward.
I really enjoyed reading this story. I am also enjoying reading your story the "Homecoming". I am completely taken away by it.
You have written both of these stories very well. I have enjoyed both of them. I know you just updated "Homecoming" but I can't wait for you to update it again. You have really done a GREAT job with both of these stories. Keep up the GREAT writing. I am enjoying reading your work.
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties
Can't wait to see what Edwas is going to do to Alice.
I first sound this story over on FF, but I am glad to know that you are here.
Author's Response:
Ohhhh, all I can say is that Alice won't forget it anytime soon.
I am really disapointed by what is happening at FF. Everyone here is great and I'm happy to be able to be a part of this.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems
WOW!!!!!! That was amazing. The way you wrote that was wonderful!!! GREAT JOB!!!! So much feeling in it. I felt sorry for Alice, Edward and Bella. That was very moving. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hurry and update again. I can't wait to know what else is going on.
I am so loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much it really really really means a lot to me to hear this.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain
You have made my day by updating. I just love this story.
OMFG!!!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER.
YOU WROTE IT SO BEAUTIFULLY. I COULD FEEL HOW BAD EDWARD FELT FOR HAVING TO PUNISH ALICE. THE WAUY YOU DESCRIBED HOW ALICE WAS FEELING WHILE EDWARD SPANKED HER WITH THE BELT WAS UNBELIEVEABLE.
Author's Response:
Wow! your support and kind words mean a lot to me Thank You.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
When I got up this morning, I had notices that several of the stories that I am reading had updated. YOUR was the first one I read. I don't know what is is about this story but I am really really enjoying reading it. Thanks so much for writing a wonderful story and sharing it with us. As always can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response:
Now I feel like Bella I'm blushing..... lol
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal
I am sooo loving your story. Rose really has been through alot. Poor thing. Will we get t osee her session?? Will Bella see her session?? Can't wait to see more. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
You will get to see Rose's session, I promise.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved
I am so lin love with this story. You are doing a GREAT job writing it. I am so drawn into it. I love that you had Edward holding Bella at the end of this chapter.
I want everything in the next chapter. lol. I would love to see Edward have a session with someone, anyone. BUT I do not want it to be a BAD session. I don't want Bella scared away. I want a GOOD session. A session showing how much fun it could be. Then after a few days, after Bella gets more comfortable with the Cullens, then maybe she could handle a hard session. BUT you are the writer and you are doing an amazing job with this story and it is yours so you do what you do BEST and write it the way you think it should go. I would like to know if Aro is still alive and Rose's brothers too. Are they still a threat???
You are amazing writing this story.
Author's Response:
Okay I don't think I'm going to be able to do everything next, but I'll put in as much as I can promise.
Bella is going to have a lot of thinking to do..... I'll tell you that Aro is alive but that's it.......
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open
WOW!!! Rose has really been throught ALOT!!!! I am not surprised that Rose may have a problem with Edward and Bella being together. Can't wait to see whatelse you have planned. This is a wonderful story and you are doing an EXCELLENT job writing it.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table
Glad that Bella did not back down from Rose. Boy Edward just thought he had his hands full before. LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Seriously, I don't know how he will do it....lol
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression
I got so excited when I opened my email and saw where you had update. I read it just as soon as I could. I just want you to know that I am so in love with your story. I love it. You do such a GRREAT job writing it. I love how Edward cares for Alice and Rose, but so differently. I am glad that Edward did not let Rose get away with her smart mouth. Can't wait for things to become more developed between Bella and Edward.
Author's Response:
I get that feeling when I get updates and it really warms my heart to hear that my story does that for others. So Thank You.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing
I am sooo loving this stoy. For some reason this story has pulled at my heart strings. You are doing one GREAT job writing it. Thanks!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge
I love Alice's POV. I am glad that she stood up to Rose. I hope Alice can make Edward and Rose realize how important Bella is to all of their happiness. GREAT JOB!!!!! As usual, I can't not wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked Alice, this was a little harder because she wasn't her normal self.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback
Thanks you for the background information on Bella. WOW!!!!!
I am sooo enjoying this story. I am sooo glad that Edward is opening up to Bella.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like getting to know Bella a little better so far everything has been about the Cullens I just figured it was her turn.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire
I really loved this chapter and this story. I am sorry that I am just now reviewing this chapter. I read each chapter just as soon as you post them because I am soooo excited to get an update from you. But RL has been so hecked that I have not had time for reviews (plus I am on dial up:()But I will find time to revies each chapter.
I just have to tell you that I saw on the Today show this morning about a new show coming out called "Sister Wives". It is about one husband and 4 wives. I immediately thought about this story. lol.
Author's Response:
Please don't say sorry it will just make me feel bad. I am having a horrible time finding time to write and then answering everyone back. It takes me forever. I do read every review when they come in on my phone but it takes forever to get to a actually computer, takes forever.
I heard about the show, I haven't seen it yet though. And I have no idea why it would make you think of my story...lol
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business
Glad that Edward and Rose had this time together. Sorry it has taken so long for me to review. I read this just as soon as you posted it but I think I am getting close to catching up on all my reviews for all of my stoies. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
OMG! There is no reason to say sorry. I have been so busy that I just finished the next chapter. It is with the Beta and should be posted in the next couple of days. I'm the one that should be sorry and I am. Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk
I am so glad that Bella is not scared of Rose. I really enjoy reading your story. You have done a great job writing it. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm a little proud of Bella for that one.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day
Thanks for letting us read Alice's POV. I am really enjoying reading this story. It is very well written. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone
You did a very good job writing this chapter. As always, I have enjoyed reading this chapter. Can't wait to read more. I love how you had Edward handle Alice's little outburst. I hope Edward and Bella get som more one on one time. Lemons!!!! lol
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions
Oh, my gosh. I got sooooo excited with I got your update notice. I stopped everything and read. GREAT GREAT job. Loved the inter action that Bella is having with Edward's family. Can not wait to see how she is at Carlisle's house.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home
I loved this chapter. Loved seeing Rose like this. She is going to make a great mother. Loved little Ben. That was sweet. You are doing an awesome job with this story. Love little Renesmee. Loved the end where Rose and Bella agreed that Carmen deserves her punishment. I just know that Rose is going to let Bella in. LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. You are doing a GREAT GREAT GREAT job with this story. I hope things gets easier for you. Don't worry, we will be here waiting for you. Don't worry about answering the reviews. You just write the story and not worry about replying to the reviews.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing
I was so excited to get this update. RL has gotten in the way of me reading it as soon as it came out. But I have enjoyed reading this chapter. I have not always been a big Rose fan in any story but I like seeing Rose this human, someone with lots of feelings. You have done a great job with all the characters in this story. I am sooooo lvoing it. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 19 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth
I soooo wish you would finish this story. I was so intrigued by the storyline. PLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Mom
Love loveove this chapter. I am so happy you posted this!!!!!! Honestly, I was just thinking about this story the other. I was wondering about the characters and how theirs story ended. I hope you will will update again soon. I have truly missed this story.
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315790
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God
Boy these kids are really fucked up.
Author's Response:
Lol- yes, yes they are! And things get progressively more fucked up..enjoy and thanks for reviewing and reading!
X KB
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Love reading Edward's POV. Glad he turned down Rose's ass. Lol
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Glad that Bella andJacob did not do anything. Proud of Edward for admitting his feelings for Bella.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God
This is definitely a different set of Cullens then are in most stories that I read.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
Bella really does not like Edward. Can't wait till they get together.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
I don't think they are ever going to fuck!!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
I am kind of glad that she got one over on him since he left her high and dry and horny the night before.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I don't think Bella is ever going to get her rocks off. Lol