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One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315793
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer
Glad Bella finally got her release. Lol. Now Edward has blue balls. Lol
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
They both love playing with each other.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
Wow, Bella lost. Lol. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations
FINALLY! !!!!!!!!!!
I know this I fiction but they sure do a lot of drugs and drink a lot for high school students. And still be able to function the next day. Lol
Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
We get a Edward POV! !!!!!!! YAY!!!!! So Jacob get in trouble with Nessie. What is Edward going to say about her going out with Jacob? ??????
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
I am thinking that Edward is getting a little attached to Ms. Swan!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Poor Bella. I really feel sorry for her. Glad Edward came to her rescue.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits
They do care for each other. So Edward has been keeping her secret for a whole now. Wow, he really is one of the good guy. Lol
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I have been wondering what was going on with Alice and Jasper. Can not wait to find out what is going on.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Love Alice and Jasper's story. But I can not believe that Jasper went straight back to his old ways on the 1st day of school. That was just wrong.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Glad that Jasper and Alice are hiding their relationship. Bella and Edward bless their hearts are so screwed up. Maybe one of these days they will get it right.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Are they finally together????? Can't wait to read about them going to school.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Does this mean that they are finally together together? ???? Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Dude your reviews are giving me life! So glad your enjoying BDR! X KB
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Bella is scared that something is going to go wrong and she does not want to be hurt. She is afraid to be happy. Poor girl.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram
OMGosh! !!!!! What is James doing there?
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think
What the hell just happened? ???
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo
So glad that they have both grown up some. Glad Edward had Esme to talk to. So happy that Bella talked to a therapist. Sooooo glad I do not have to wait for an update. I am sooo off to read the next chapter!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
1st off I can not believe that Bella got a job. That really surprised me. Lol. I am sooo proud of Edward not letting his pride keep him away from Bella. Love the ending.
You have done an amazing job with this story. I have truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it with everyone here.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing- I've been looking forward to reading every chapter review you've done! Chuffed you loved the ending x KB
A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I am loving this story. It is very well interesting with all the ways their mating works.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
They are so connected to one another.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
How in the world did Carlisle escape? Lots going on in this chapter.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I hate that Carlisle got to her. I hope the Major makes him pay dearly for what he did. How did Tanya get to her and drug her?
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
So Esme is Charlie's mate. How interesting.
Where is Bella? Did someone take her or did she go on her own? Glaf I do not have to wait n a update. I am so off to read the next chapter.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I was wondering what Jasper thought of Bella and Charlotte being together. Is Carlisle on his way???
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Glad she got to meet Charlie. I am thinking that Carlisle is watching them.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
So Bella does not remember Jacob. I wonder if she will ever get all her memories back.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Thanks for explaining the "rules". Bella gets to meet her father!!!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
What did Jasper mean that Peter would not touch Bella until it was time, and even then it would be a nder Jasper's watch? What is the deal with James? I am really enjoying this story.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
OK this explains what he meant about Peter. Bella is not going to be happy about having to be with Peter. I am wondering if while Bella is with Peter if Carlisle will try to take her.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Carlisle is obessed with Bella. I am really surprised that JASPER has let him live this long.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I am glad that Bella has the girls to talk to. I am thinks ng that for some reason Carlisle has been having inappropriate thoughts about Bella over the last 16years and Edward knows about them and that is why Edward does not feel comfortable around Carlisle. Can't wait to find out what is going on with Carlisle.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Thanks for explaining what was going on with the Cullen's. Boy Michael sure was stupid. He must not have been working for Jasper very long.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OK, what is the deal with Carlisle? Does Jasper not feel what Carlisle is feeling? I would think Jasper would not tolerate Carlisle having those kind of feelings for Bella.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Glad he said he was sorry. I don't blame Bella for being upset. I would be to. I could not help laughing at what Jasper did to Carlisle. Lol
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Very interesting that they both drink from each other
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
So that is the accident that Bella was referring to. I am surprised that Jasper did not kill Carlisle. What did Bella do for Carlisle to do that to her?
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I just knew that it as going to be James that hit er. Lol.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
What accident is Bella talking about? Does Carlisle have feelings for Bella???
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sounds very interesting.
Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.
What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella
Ok. something I don't understand. If the Cullens have an annual ball, has Bella not gone for the other 3 years that she and Edward have been seperated? Has Edward not tried to contact her? Four years is a long time to be married and not have any communcaition.
Author's Response:
thank for the review! keep reading... everything will be answered.... well almost answered by the time you catch up!
xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reunion
I like how you have Jacob trying to keep Bella from drinking. That is funny.
What happened to Bella's baby? Where is it?
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: How To Make An Entrance
I thought Alice and Jasper were already married. I like how you did the bidding for the dance. Does Felix have a thing for Bella or is he just trying to keep Edward away from her because of the situation. Great job with how you wrote Edward entering the ball.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Turbulent Affair
What is the deal with Edward denying he slept with someone. Great job with writing the hot steamy feelings that they are having for each other. I could just feel it myself. The way you wrote Edward at the end of this chapter, I feel kind of sorry for him. He really seems to be hurting.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions and Consequences
What is the deal? Did Edward selpt with Tanya or not. When Bella walked in on the nake girl in their bed where was Edward? Still in the shower or in the bedroom. Edward really does seem like he still truly loves Bella BUT if he does WHY did he wait four years? Why did he not come and get her and try to work things out earlier. Waiting four years just does not make sense to me.
I feel so sorry for Bella for losing her baby. That had to be so painfull. Especial after just hearing what she did about Edward. Poor thing.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries
So Edward did come looking foe Bella. I would rip Jacob's and Aro's head off if I were her. They would be so dead. I can understand if they did not want Edward to see Bella right after the baby had died and she was not mentally stable but they could have told her sometime in the 3 freaking years they were apart. That was just wrong.
What is the deal with Felix? He is up to something.
Jasper or Rose needs to talk to Tanya and ask her some questions.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! Who would do that?????? Does Tanya have something to do with the other mob families that are not wanting to quit the feud??????? I thought when Esme was crying that everyone had thought something happened to Bella because of the way she left her room with all the dishes thrown around. WHO DID THIS????? I am so glad that I don't have to wait for an update. I can go on and read the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Nostalgic Nightmares
Ok, here is my theory......Tanya and Felix are working together. Felix put the grave stone in the room. It has to be someone on the inside to get through security.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deception Unveiled
For some reason I think Felix is BAD news. If he finds Tanya will we find out the REAL truth or will we find out the"truth" that Felix wants us to know. I am glad that Bella has admitted that she still loves Edward. Jacob is in love with Bella, isn't he? OK, I understand that Aro and Jacob kept Edward from finding Bella......BUT four years.......that is still a long time to be away from each other. Did Edward cheat on Bella during those four years? Who were the women in the tabloids with him????
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Reservation for Explanations
WOW this is getting really intense. So many things going on. I am really loving this story. You are doing a GREAT job writing. I can feel all the characters feelings.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
Great chapter. I am glad that Jacob did not let his pride get in the way of helping Bella and took her to Edward. I loved the way you described the photo shoot. I am so glad that Edward came up and kissed Bella with Vic standing there. That was priceless.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
Oh please don't let them mess things up. Please let her tell him about the baby before things go to far. Again, I am so glad that I don't have to wait for and update. On to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Desperate Devotion
PLease let her tell him. Don't let Bella wimp out. Let her be the Brave Bella. The Strong Bella.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! I am soooooo loving this story.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: You’ve Made Your Bed..
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!! This is awful!!!!!!! I am off to read the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
What was the deal wlith Felix out in the hallway when he tripped her to the wall and would not let her go in?? I do not trust Felix. He is up to something.
What did Bella mean when she was in the hospital and saying ‘the man with the coal eyes, tell Edward, the man with the coal eyes.’ What is she talking about?
I feel really sorry for Emmett in this chapter. Poor thing. But I do feel sorry for Edward, too. He has really missed out on a lot of things with Bella.
I am glad that Edward took Bella back to their suite. I love the way you wrote Edward feeding Bella and bathing Bella. I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: When a Man Loves a Woman
WOW! A lot in this chapter. You scared me a little with Edward's dreams. I can't wait to see what else is going on.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Are You Still Mine?
Who was the guy at the resturant? I am assuming that the guy knock Bella down the stairs when she lost her baby. That is why he asked her about Emmett and Rose's baby. WHY is he trying to kill her? Did Paul kill him? I am so glad that Edward is there for Bella.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Taking Care of Business
WOW! That must have been really hard for Bella. I hate that she had to do that with Jacob. Maybe one day they can be close again. After Jacob finds someone to love.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Playing the Part
Oh My GOSH!!!!!! I can not believe this. Aro is not Bella's Uncle. What or who is he??????? I am really sad.....I have been able to go from chapter to chapter and not have to wait for updates, now I have to wait. THis is going to kill me. Bless you heart with so much stuff to do in real life. I have been through building a new house. Good luck. I do hope that you will have some down time to work on this wonderful story. You have done an excellent job writing it. The plot, the feelings of the characters, the supense and the lemons are all wonderful. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Author's Response:
you are soo sweet and amazing for reviewing every chapter.. i love to see what ppl think as each chapter goes by... really i can't say thank you enough. I have posted a teaser on the forum over on twilighted.
the link is on my profile... i should be posting this week. xoxo--FunkyD
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies
Well tell your fingers to get to typing and update soon. Your fingers have left us hanging. I am assuming that Edward did not sleep with Vic, the way that Edward is acting. What really did happen in Vegas????
So Uncle Aro is really Bella's grandfather. I don't understand how he could keep her away from her one true love when he was kept away from his one true love. He knows how much that hurt him. He is one selfish dude.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tale of the Broken Hearted
OMG!!!!! This chapter was the BOMB!!!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!! Loved the whole thing. You are doing a great great job writing. Can't wait for more and more and more.
Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
I am glad that Bella finally talked to Edward. But she still needs to quit running when times get tuff. About the holidays, if she does not want everyone there she needs to speak up and say so. I agree with her, she needs to confront Jacob.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
So glad that Bella is turning to Esme. She needs a GOOD motherly shoulder to cry on. I hope Aro gets what is coming to him. I hope he does not get to hind behind all his money.
Sorry it has taken me so long to review. Read this chapter when you posted it but just now getting to review. RL sucks sometimes. lol.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets
OH MY GOSH!!!!! That had to be soooo hard for Edward to do. Afte all that they have been through. I really hope she is ok with all the drugs that Aro was giving her. WHY WHY would he endanger her life. Who is trying to kill her? Please update soon.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Finding Comfort in the Truth
I am so glad that they have finally gotten everything out in the open. Now maybe they can start healing. Thanks for updating.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Rising From the Ashes
I love how you have her withdrawals from the drugs sound like she is burning from how Edward's vemon was burning her inthe movie. Can't wait for more and more.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Love that Bella and Charlie are getting along better.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
Billy has som nerve coming over there and talking to Bella like he did. I do not blame Charlie for throwing him out. I would have too. I would not have worried about hurting his feelings like Bella was.
What is Edward doing there? I am glad that he is. Did Charlie arrange for him to be there??????
Good luck with the fundraiser and Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
Loved this chapter!!!!!
A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?
This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.
AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons
Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Over Indulging
Ok, thanks for explaing the eyes. Which one of Edward's club memebers did Carlisle have to put in the hospital????? Can't wait to see what Carlisle has to say about this breeding thing.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
This sounds VERY interesting. What is Carlisle up to???? Can't wait to find out.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated
OOOOKKKKKK!!!! That was different. Is Bella at the school yet???
I have a question....if Edward is drinking blood how are his eyes a amber color and not red???????
This sounds like it is really going to be good. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! The answer to your questions are coming up in the next couple of chapters. If you still have questions let me know. I'd be more than happy to explain. Don't want to spoil it for ya now do I? Thaniks again for the inquiry.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting
How often was Edward "snacking" on Jessica???
What happens to the girls after they have the babies? Carlisle said they were released but does gabrielle erase their memories of them having a vampire baby????
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!
I was a little surprised with how rough Edward was with Tanya, but this is a different Edward then I usually read about. He does have a dark side to him.
Will Edward be able to read Bella's mind in this story?
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6. Almost Losing It
That was interesting. So, Jasper and Edward can communicate through their thoughts. Can Emmett do that? I noticed in one of the other chapters that Carlisle had told Edward that he was on his way home. I am assuming that they all can "talk" to one another through their thoughts. Cool!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7. The Waterfall
WOW!!!! I kind of laughed that Bella made Edward wait for her after school, even if she didn't know he was waiting. Edward doesn't let anything stand in his way does he. Can't wait to see Bella's POV of that. WOW!!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8. The Breeding Begins
What was Bella's nightmare about? Did it have something to do with Edward? Will the guys be breeding Bella, Alice and Rose??????
I am assuming the the breeding is all clinically. The guys will not be "daddy" to these offsprings. Who will take care of them?????
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught
I don't know what they should have done but I hope they follow them. The boys are really in trouble!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Avoiding and Consequences
So did Aro notice the boys with the girls? When they send the guard in will they go after the girls? Are the girls going to follow the boys back to their house?
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11. New Competiton
OMG!!!! The girls are in so much trouble with the new competition. The boys are going to freak when they find out.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins
I am glad that you gave us Demetri's POV. That explained why the guys did not try any thing with the girls.
I loved the scene the in caf. I hope the boys learned their lesson but I doubt it.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)
I am so loving this story. I missed reveiwing this chapter som how. So here I am to tell you this story if really really good and to keeping writing. Love it.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. It's All About The Girls (Part 2)
I can't believe that Emmett did not rip Carlisle's head off.
Edward surprised me at the ned of his POV. He is mad at Bella and not Demtri. That is crazy.
Glad to see Alice coming around. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18. The Day of Reckoning
I am glad that the boys talked to Carlisle and Carlisle hopefully told them the truth. Hope that Emmett gets to see Rose. Good to see Bella and Alice getting back to some normal everyday stuff. Maybe they can move on. If only the girls and the guys would work together they would get this worked out alot quicker.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step
I am kind of surprised that the girls gave int othe boys that easy. I thought they were really mad at them. I am a little behind on my reading, so I am off to read the next chapter. At least I don't have to wait on an update to see what happens. YEAH!!!!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. It All Begins
What did Bella remember? I am so glad that I can go on to the next chapter right now. Off I go.....
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21. The Twilight Zone
Can't wait to go read the next chapter. I think Emmett will spill the beans if Jasper and Edward do not get to him first. Edward has Bella's journal.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )
Still trying to catch up reading this wonderful story. I hate when real life gets in the way of me reading my stories. I know that it is not that "maybe" I am reading to many. No....it could not be that!!!! HaHa!!!! BUT one good thing now is I can go on to the next chapter. I am off to read....Thanks for a GREAT story.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )
WHAT????? You left us hanging again. OH MY GOSH!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon. I think this is the last chapter for me to catch up on and now I have to wait. UUUGGGHHH....this is going to kill me.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
This chapter was kind of sad. I feel sorry for Bella and Alice. I hope to goodness that Bella and Alice don't get into trouble looking for Rose. But something tells me that their are going to get into BIG trouble. Hope the boys are there to get them out of it. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Edward is such an ass!!!!!!
I am glad that the girls have Emmett. What is going on with Rose?? Does she remember everything? Will the women who give birth live?
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
If the Volturi is back does that mean and Demtri and Felix and Garrett are back??? If so, I think that is who crash through the door. Edward is still a jerk. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Edward is soooooo screwed up in the head. He just keeps burying himself deep and deep. GREAT job with this chapter and this story. I am loving it.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28. The Compound
I am glad that Rose seems to be doing ok. What do you mean by Bella and ALice are going to find out what male vampires are really like????? That sounds exciting...can't wait.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
Is Demetri the "Master" that the werewolves are talking about????
Where is Alice??? Please let her be ok. I can't wait to find out more. Was Rose one of the 3 girls that gave birth???
What is going on with Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle? Man alot is going on with this story. Exciting!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
WOW!!! I am surprised that Jasper did not attack Carlisle for what ahppened to Alice. I hope she is all right. Poor thing. I am scared for Edward. I hope someone finds him soon. What is going on with Bella and with Rose?? Has Rose had the baby yet??? Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Escape
OH MY FUCKING GOSH!!!!!!
THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY VERY HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!! We need to call the fire department on Edward and Bella. That was AWESOME!!!!!
Can't wait for your update.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32. Bella's New World
This is getting really exciting.