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Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I feel really sorry for Alice and Bella. I just hope Edward and Jasper claim down before they do anything. I loved seeing the girls drunk. They were funny. It would be fun to see them like that again later on but having fun with just their guys not out somewhere like a club. They could get into all kinds of interesting fun. lol.
Thank you for 2 chapters. I love this story. Can't wait for the next update. You are doing a GREAT job with this story.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
You are right, Rose is a Bitch. I hope Bella puts Rose in her place. You are doing a great job writing this story. Can't wait for your next update. Please don't keep us hanging for to long.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I some how missed revewing this chapter. I loved the matching braclets. I think you are doing a wonderful job with this story. Glad Edward did not punish in the heat of the moment. Loved the aftercare. GREAT JOB with this story.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
This chapter may have been difficult for you to write BUT you did a wonderful job with it. It was amazing. I can just picture everything in my mind. I can't wait to read MORE!!!!! You are doing an amazing job writing this.
Ok, I have noticed that you have not fully told us what Jacob that to Bella. You stop telling us right before the whole truth comes out. When are we going to find out. Can't wait. Excellent job with this story.
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Loved the hot air balloon ride. GREAT chapter
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
GREAT playroom scene. Loved it. They really do have intense feelings for each other. I really hope that Bella has learned her lesson. She really needs to open her mouth and talk to Edward. Can't wait to see what else you have planned for these two. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
When Bella is going over everything in her head about Jessica, she said that Jessica had moved in with Lauren. Then when she and Edward were talking you have that it was Tanya.
I am glad that Edward did let somethings slide. Bella really does need time to adjust to having people who are concerned with her. She has been on her own for so long, even when she was a teenager and living at home.
Who did Edward call???? Can't wait to see.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Loved this chapter as always. Loved the scene between Garrett and Kate. OMG!!!! The punishement was so intense to me. Not a hard,cruel one but a hard one as far was Edward and Bella's emotions go. LOVED IT ALL!!!!!! I am glad that you had Edward tell Bella to go to the sub's room. They need a normal Dom/sub boundaries. GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!
Can not wait to see what all goes on when Edward sees Bella's apartment. I just know that he is going to blow his lid. It was just make sense really if she just stayed at Edward's. He is always off filming and when he is at home, she will be there too.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your wonderful review. I AM AMAZED that so many people read this story!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
OMFG!!!!!I love you and your story. THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Edward has fucked up. Someone needs to punish him!!!!! He needs to be whipped. I can not believe that he acted like that. WHY????? Where is Bella??? How did she leave...she has no truck??? Did she go back to her apartment??? What did Edward's note say??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, I am begging, MISTRESS, PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!
I would love the next outtake to be Carlsile and Esme...King and Queen of Kink!!!!!! Then Emmett and Rose. We all know that Emmett and Rose can be kinky. Carlisle and Esme would be the BOMB!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I am really glad that Kate was there to help Bella. Love Kate and Garrett. I am glad to see things getting worked out. Glad that Bella got to see that they could still have fun even if they were not Dom/sub. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen. What wiil happen when Edward has to leave and Bella goes to her apartment? I think it will be more of a problem for Edward then for Bella. Edward does not like the idea of her being in that apartment alone. Good times ahead.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
VERY GOOD CHAPTER!!!! I hope nothing happens to Bella when she goes out exploring her neighbourhood. Can't wait, AS USUAL, for your next update.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I sent the wrong review earlier. Sorry. I deleted it and am posting the right one for this story.
I really get into this story. I can see Emmett when he gets to Bella on the street. I can just see him wanting to make sure she is alright and then wanting to just tear into her for being sooooo stupid.
Jim scares me. I am so afarid that he will try and kidnap Bella. Especially if he learns that Edward is her boyfriend.
Boy, I can't wait to read more and more and more. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I don't think Edward prepared Bella for their night out as Dom/sub. At least not on how the other women would act toward her.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
OMG!!!!!! Esme crying and Bella running off. Boy...what a Thanksgiving. lol
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Bella had got to learn to say NO to Alice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The girls are in DEEP SH*T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't not wait to see what happens. I am just glad that Edward and Jasper have a few days to blow off some steam before they get their hands on the girls. FUN FUN FUN!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Bella had got to learn to say NO to Alice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The girls are in DEEP SH*T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't not wait to see what happens. I am just glad that Edward and Jasper have a few days to blow off some steam before they get their hands on the girls. FUN FUN FUN!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and for the review - I have already started next chapter!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Great chapter. You are really doing a great GREAT job with this story. LOVING IT!!!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I just want you to know that I get all involved with this story when I am reading. I feel like I am right there with Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I love EVERY chapter you write. Can't wait for the next one. I am a little slow reviewing but I read your chapters just as soon as I get my notice that this story is update. Great job Keep it up.
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I just want you to know that I get all involved with this story when I am reading. I feel like I am right there with Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I love EVERY chapter you write. Can't wait for the next one. I am a little slow reviewing but I read your chapters just as soon as I get my notice that this story is update. Great job Keep it up.
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I loved everything about this chapter. I was sitting on the edge of my sit reading the whole thing. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!! Just to let you know how GREAT your lemons are...I had to go change my panties after reading this chapter. lol!!!!!!!!!!! You NEED to write more and more and more.
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Some how the notice for this update got lost in my email over the holidays. I am sooooo glad I found it. Thank you for sharing your WONDERFUL story with me. You have done a GREAT GREAT job. I am very sad to see it end. You will definitely be put on author alert. I am looking forward to the continuation of the Cullens and thier many many children!!!!!!! Plus their D/s playtime. Again Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I read this chapter when you posted. trying to catch up on my reviews. GREAT JOB!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I am so sorry that I have not reviewed this chapter yet. I am so far behind on my reviews. I read this chapter when you updated with it and just now reviewing it. I am sorry.
OMG!!!! Edward is so mad. He needs to stop and think at least she told him.
I am really enjoying reading this story.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Loved this WHOLE chapter. Everything about it!!!! GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Edward and Jasper need to get real. They screwed up too. I can not believe that Billy wants to charge Bella, really.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I am soooo loving everything about this story.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
You write the BEST lemons.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
OMG!!!!! I so love this story. It just amazes me that you can make EVERY chpater GREAT, AMAZING, and AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVERY CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! I am glad that Esme got her head out of her ass. lol. I felt so sorry for Edward when he and Carlisle was in the ambulance. Your writing made me feel how upset Edward was. I could just feel how Edward felt. GREAT JOB!!!!! I am glad that they are all together for Christmas.
Yes, we need an outake with Carlisle and Esme, now. Emmet and his homing swimmers, later.
Author's Response:
You dirty girl you! Wanting outtakes of Daddy C and his pet! Thanks for the review and I will work on one! I do love the mental picture of Domward Daddy C....
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Loved this chapter. I am trying to catch up on my reviews. I am WAY behind. I read this chapter and all your other ones when they were posted. I a just now review. LOVE this story.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
When I read your updates I get soooo caught up in the story.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Glad Garrett talked to Edward. Glad Edward was big enough to say he was sorry.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
This chapter was WONDERFUL!!!!!! I am so glad that the girls all surived.
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
SO happy for Rose and Emmett. I kind of firgured that she might be pregnant. Loved Emmett's reaction. Great job with this chapter. Heck, great job with this whole story. LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Love what Bella has planned for Edward for Christmas. Laughed at her breakfast. She is so crazy. Loving this WHOLE story.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
I am already reading Diamond in the Rough. It is a good story. Loved Edward and Charlie. Will Bella pay for getting in the back and leaving Edward to Charlie in the front. I thought that was funny. So LOVING this story.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
I got tickled at Bella for getting int the back sit and letting Charlie sit in the front with Edward. Will she be paying for that later????? LOL
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45
EXCELLENT chapter. You did a wonderful job with Bella and Charlie. I am glad that they are working things out. Poor Edward. I know it was hard for him to stay inside and not go out there where Bella was. I laughed when Carlisle told Garrett to watch "Hothead". lol. Had to laugh also when Alice was at the tree lot and sitting at the dinner table when Charlie got her.
Author's Response:
thank you for your kind words. Aah, Alice, she is such fun to write! And I have a real soft spot for Charlie.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Loved the gift that Bella gave Charlie. I am so glad that they are trying hard to work on their relationship. What is Esme story? Hope we get to hear more about that. Thanks for sharing this GREAT story with us.
Author's Response:
I have written a bit of her story in a couple of past chapters, and I also wrote about it in my out take of her and Carlisle. Go to my profile and you will find the out takes.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
OMG!!!!! Soooooo much stuff went on in this chapter. I that is one thing that I LOVE about your writing. You give us LOTS to take in and satisfy us. THANKS!!!!!! I can not believe that Edward acted that way on his honeymoon. He worked so hard to make it the perfect wedding and everything for Bella and then he ruined the last few days. AND he did not even kiss her good-bye. That was just wrong. I am so glad that Jasper set him straight. I am glad that Edward and Bella worked things out before Edward got shot. You really surprised me with Edward getting shot. Bella is sure handling things different in this chapter. She has definately made alot of progess in her therapy.
Thank you for giving us lots and lots of stuff in every chapter that you write. But this story is soooo good that I always still want more and more and more. GREAT JOB WRITING!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
In the shower scene...Did Bella not TOP from the bottom????? I understand Edward and Jasper not letting Bella and Alice not see each and I loved that Jasper took Alice's clothes away, lol. BUT I do not agree with Edward not letting Bella know where she was. I know that she kept something from Edward but she did not ever Disappear from him. She is worried sick, for more reason then one. Edward knows that she had that dream....nightmare about him leaving her....well guess what???? He left her. And left what Bella had already been through that week earlier in the story where Edward did not talk to her all week and she lost all that weight and was having trouble talking. Edward not talking to her or at least letting her know that he was ok, was just wrong. I am with Carlisle. I am glad that Carlisle went and talked to Bella. You really surprised me with Esme's little speech. Mama Bear came out to play.
Author's Response:
Yeah Mama Bear did - glad you saw that. In the shower, Bella did to a degree, but Edward allowed her the latitude to do that so no harm, no foul.
And yeah, Edward screwed up big time!!! Major - and believe me there are repercussions to his actions.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
An awesome chapter. LOVE LOVED LOVED IT!!!!! I can not believe that Carlisle and Esme are acting like children. I think they need to have an intervenvention like when Garrett had one for Edward and Bella. HAHA!!!!!! Can not wait for more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
I can not believe that "Across the Universe" was taken down. That stucks.
I am sooooooo loving this story. My mouth fell open when Bella slapped Edward. But I am glad that she did not step down from him. He, Jasper and Esme deserved what Bella told them. GREAT JOB!!!! Love Garret and his whip. That would have been funny to see Garrett whip Edward lol.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for your comments and review xoxo
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
This was awesome!!!!!!!!!! I loved EVERYTHING about it!!!!!!!!!!!!! The party was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Edward and Bella together was fucking hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you Mistress for an awesome story.
Author's Response:
and no more coffee for you this week! Thanks for the wonderful comments and review :)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
OMG!!!!!! I am sooooo excited that the twins are coming!!!!!!!!!
I loved this whole chapter. I was a little concerned at the beginning of the chapter. I was worried what Bella had been up to and what she was hiding from Edward. I was also concerned how Edward would react to it, but he did good. I had to laugh at Bella, loved how embrassed she was. It was funny that she thought she "broke her kitty". I justed busted out laughing at that. Very proud of how Edward, ALice, and Emmett handled their parents lifestyle. Loved the wedding. Loved everything about this chapter.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Edward and Bella are growing as a Dom/sub couple and also as just a couple in general. I liked that Alice talked to Bella and has decided to be better. Can't wait for the next chapter. It sounds like it is going to be LOTS of fun.
Author's Response:
oh it will - drama and sexing - my two favs - thank you for the review babe
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Please take all the time you need. We will be here when you return. Just make sure you return to us. lol. I definately can understand about RL. I am just getting to leave my review for this chapter. I read it the day your posted it. lol. I am really enjoying seeing your characters develop. You are doing an awesome job. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and even better New Years.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
OMG!!!!! Loved this chapter. Can not wait to read (which I already have, because I am late leaving my review here, lol) about Carlisle and Esme. SO SO SO GOOD!!!!! I think I fall more in love with this story with every chapter. The way you write it feels like I really know these characters. LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
I am sooo glad that Bella let Renee have it. I think it is funny that Edward has to let Bella have control of their weekend. Love the whole "fat" conversation. Edward has lots to learn. lol. Love how Bella haad a fit about the whole weekend thing. lol.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I am glad that Kate was straight forward with Bella. She need to hear all of that. I am trying to catch up on my reviews. Sorry as late.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
I know that Bella needed to be punished, but I got to thinking back to the last chapter where Edward told Bella that he told Emmett about Carlisle and Esme and how Bella reacted and I think Edward needs to take some lessons from Bella. We all are not perfect. We could turn this around on him and say that he knew how Bella was and how she gets when he leaves. He should have had things set up with Maggie to have meals ready for Bella. Plus, he talked to her everyday why did he not ask Bella if she was eating and sleeping and taking care of herself????? I don't think Bella is the only one in the wrong. There has been other times in this story that Edward (and Jasper) have screwed up and they did not get any punishment. I just don't think it is really fair. I understand that they are Doms but it seems to be a double standard on some things.
You are doing a GREAT job writing this story. Please do not take my comments above that I am not enjoying reading.....That would be soooo far from the truth. I am sooooooooo loving this story. You are doing a GREAT GREAT GREAT job.
Author's Response:
hey there Honey,
Thanks so much for taking the time to send me such a great review and some interesting comments. He did talk to her every day and she told him that she was fine and that there were no problems or issues. At some point he has to begin trusting Bella to take control of her life and Bella herself wanted to be responsible for her health and well being, remember how she fought with Edward over this? It was time for her to put her big-girl panties on (that being said, I would have locked myself in the bathroom!!!)
Thanks again and we will talk soon.
xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Thanks for the update. I am loving the pictures. Great job. I do agree that Bella over reacted a little to Edward and the reporter. Glad that they worked that out. I am sooooo glad that Carlisle, Esme, Rose and Alice were there for Bella at her first opening. Happy that Edward, Jasper and Emmett got to be there. That would have been awful if they had not.
I am sooo proud of Bella and all the progresss she has made. Loved both of the sessions with Paul.
As far as outtakes....I think Carlisle needs to "punish" Esme for not staying by his side during the opening. lol. Really ANY outtake would be GREAT!!!!! I love reading your writing. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!1
Author's Response:
thank you so much - even if you are a blood thirsty little thing, you! Well you will be pleased to know that Doc C is all over that like a wet rash... outtake will be out this week. Just coz I love you all so much
xoxo
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!! I am soooooo in love with your story. You do an amazing job writing it!!!!!! I usually pick out my favorite parts to comment on but the WHOLE chapter is my favorite. I love that the twins knew Edward was not there, Love what Bella did for Edward's birthday, Love the Domward is sitting waiting for her in the chair at the end. Can't wait for more Domward. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
AWESOME!!!!!!!! This is the BEST chapter!!!!! I am sooooooo glad tht you did not cut it off. SOOOO happy that you gave all of it to us at one time. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!! What did the comment about Edward and Bella being Bambi and Thumper mean and why would Maggie care what they were called? You are an amazing writier. I SOOOOO LOVE THOS STORY!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I am sorry for you awful week. But you did one hell of a job writing this chapter. You are really doing a GREAT job writing this story. The wedding sounded wonderful. Loved the pictures. I am glad that Bella went to talk to Jasper. LOVED the ending. Poor Alice getting sick while trying on her wedding dress. Poor thing.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review and your encouraging comments. update early this week xoxo
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I am loving this story so much. I love seeing Edward and Bella growing in their relationships, both DOM/sub and boyfriend and girlfriend. You are dong a terrific job with this story.
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
I sooooooo loved this chapter. I loved all the kids telling Esme and Carlisle to "get a room" or to cool it. That was GREAT.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!!! I AM SOOOOOO LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!!
GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
I can not believe that Edward screamed at Bella like he did and treated her like that. He has lost his mind. Glad that Paul and Garrett came to the rescue. I am glad that they are working things out. It was not mentioned one time that Bella ever thought of running away. She would have earlier in the story but she is learning. They both are learning. Thank goodness.
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
GREAT chapter, as always!!!! How is Renee not her mother??? Can not wait to read the next chapter. I love your recs. I am also reading Sssssh. It is a good story. I am going to check out your recs.
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I am really enjoying this story. I am a little sad that the end is coming. I am not ready for that. Your writing makes me feel like I am right there with them, feeling everything that they feel. I am so excited that they are finally getting back to "normal". I am thinking that Bella was talking to Alice about her (Bella) wanting to get pregnant and starting a family. Am I right????? Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
There is no complalining from me. I am loving the long chapters. OMG!!! I can not believe that Carlisle went out to the waiting room and hit Jasper. How funny!!!!!!! I was glad to see that Alice did let Jasper be there when she gave birth. I am so glad to see Bella pregnant. I think she and Edward will make great parents. Can't wait to see how they react to the news. Also can't wait to see them as parents. What is this about ending this in 5 chapters.....there is no limits on how many chapters you can write. Girl, you just keep on writing and we will keep on reading. Do not end this story any time soon. There of lots of things that you need to cover. I would like to see Edward and Bella, Edward especially, interacting with their child. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!! I am loving it!!!!!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter. You did a great job with Jasper and his feelings for this land. I could just feel how excited Jasper was. LOVE that Carlisle and Esme are working through everything. I was surprised that Carlisle ask her to renew their vows. Love how they were making their kids uncomfortable. lol!!!!!! I laughed at Edward and all the "stuff" he thought was unnesscary for the babies. I can not wait to see how he is with his kids. lol. I am soooooo loving this story. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
What is the deal with Jasper wanting to know when Alice is gong back to work and wanting to hire a Nannie? I knew that when they went to Peas in A Pod that the news was going to get out. What were they thinking??? Edward and Bella are handling being away from each better than I thought they would. I just hope it last. Love the spa resort that Edward picked out. I was afraid that Bella's whole trip would be ruined by the nasty girls. I was so proud of her for standing up for herself. Love Dana, glad that she went to get Edward during the bathroom incident. Love how Edward cowarded out on the car!!!! That was soooooo funny. GREAT job!!!!! Also love the interaction that he is having with Brian and Anderson. I am soooooo loving this story.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
As always, I loved it. I am glad that Edward is looking out for Bella and called Riley. I am excited to see how Edward and Bella are going to do their 2 days week deal. Love the idea. Glad that Jasper put Alice in her place. LOVE the pictures of the houses. I just can not believe that Bella did not know what ANYTHING in her house was going to look like. I couldl not have done that. I am excited about the upcoming chapters. LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
WOW!!!! Lots of stuff!!!!! I am glad that Bella and Edward's time with him controling her has gone so well. I was shocked with Alice and Bella having it out. But I am glad that Bella stood up to ALice. I am sooooo loving this story.
Author's Response: thank you so much for your review xoxo
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Another GREAT chapter. I am sooooo loving this story. You are doing an amazing job writing it. I can not believe that there are 77 chapters, WOW!!!! I am glad to see that Edward and Bella will have some real life issues to handle and that everything is not always roses. I do not think that Edward needs to keep things from Bella. He would furious if Bella did him that way. Can't wait to see where you are taking this!!!!!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
My mouth dropped open when Edward yell at the twins. I thought.."Oh no he didn't". Loved that Mama Bear came out in Bella then. Glad that they finally opened up to each other. They both need lessons on talking to each other. Glad they are having a D/S open talk session with Jasper and Alice. I loved that Bella took care of herself on the dance floor. I sooooo hoped that she went and washed her hands after cupping that guys balls. LOL!!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing with us. Always get excited whe you update and you ALWAYS leave me wanting more and more.
Author's Response:
When I wrote about him shouting at the kids, I could feel that I was red in the face, and my fingers were positively pounding the keys!!! Thanks so much for your review and your comments xoxo
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
OMG!!!! I love that that uncles put Irene in her place. LOVED IT!!!!!!! I still think she deserved more. I am excited that you are going to continue with their lives. I would love to see how Edward, Jasper and Emmett deal with the kids being teenagers. LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
LOVED this whole chapter. You are one amazing writer. GREAT GREAT GREAT job!!!! Love the baby's name.
Edward and Bella are married, but Bella is still human. Edward is pushing her to try everything she can before she is changed, but what will he say when what she wants involves the two of them and...Jacob?
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10869 Read Count: 2876
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Questions
WOW!!!!! I can't believe this. This all sounds soooooo good. Can't wait for it to happen.
Author's Response:
Hehehe Thanks for the reviews. :)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: THE Day
OMG!!!!!! That was so amazing. You wrote that beautifully. It was written very tastfully. GREAT JOB!!!!! I loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: THE Day, Jacob & Edward POVs
Thanks for giving us Edward and Jacob's POV. that was really good. I did notice one thing from their POV that I did not pick up on when I read Bella's POV. You did NOT have Edward clean himself after taking Bella from behind and then she took him in her mouth. GROSS!!!!!!!!!!! I did not think about that when I read the other chapter.
BREAT JOB with this chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews. :) Sorry, I totally missed that. lol Guess it was kind of an automatic thing in my head that I didn't actually write it down. ;)
2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST
COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.
AH/B&E/Download available
REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Change
Very interesting. I hope James does not hurt Bella when she tells him she is leaving. I am a little scared.
Why are Edward's family having an intervention for him????
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
OMG!!!! Bella's father is dead. THat is awful. Why? What does that have to do with the plot of the story? Let me get this striaght...Alice lives in Settle and is moving back to Forks, where she and Jasper will live. Where does Emmett and Rose live....Settle? Where does Edward live? Forks, is that right.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
What is the deal with Edward and Rose? Why does Edward not like Rose? WHat happened? Why could Emmett not bring Rose to the family dinners if they were seriously dating? Are Jake and Leah not getting along? Is that why Bella had to prod him to comfort Leah?
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Interesting chapter. Like how you had Edward react to Bella's presence.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Very interesting. I had to laugh at Mike. You did a great job with this chapter. Can't wait to see how this develops.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
A drunk Bella and a semi-drunk Edward is funny. Can't wait to see what these two are up to at Edward's house ALL A LONE!!!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Where did BOLD Bella come from? HaHa!!! She just took charge. I can't believe they have already slept together. Things are about to get REALLY interesting.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
So loving Emmett. Emmett has got to let something slip to Edward so Edward can figure out who he slept with. Can't wait to see what happens.
Oh, I am reading The Naked Guy Upstairs. It really is a good story.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Edward is so confused about his feelings. I feel sorry for him. I can't believe that Alice made that comment. Poor Edward. Bless Emmett's heart. He knows what his brother wants to talk about and it would be hard for Emmett to keep his mouth closed about Bella. HaHa!!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Edward is sooooo the spoiled rotten child. HaHa. I just laughed as Esme took him down a notch or two. HaHA!!!! Can't wait to see how the interview goes.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Ok, yeah I felt a little cheated not "seeing" more of the interview. Maybe you could do an outtake of it one day.
I can not believe that Carlisle and Esme had a bet going. That was too funny.
Can't wait to see the rest of the story.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I am so glad that Edward and Bella both are getting past their one night stand. It looks like they will be able to get along.
You say this story is about much more than lemons. Yes it is BUT there is always room for lemons among the story line. Hint Hint!!!!!!!!
Would love to see Edward and Bella spending time with the girls and the girls interacting with Bella. Hint Hint!!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
You have to love a jealous Edward. I think it is funny. Does Edward not realize that Jacob is married????
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I like how you wrote Edward and Jake. That was funny.
I am also reading TIDES. It is a very good story. WE have great taste in stories. HaHa!!!!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I 'm not upset with Edward for stopping the kiss. I understand that. I am upset with him for what he said to Bella in the kitchen. She was trying to make him feel better and he was rude to her.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I liked Alice's POV. I just hope that Alice's little plan doesn't backfire for Bella. I hope YOUR Royce is not as cruel as in other stories.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Alice and Edward BOTH are being BAD in this chapter. Love it!!!!!!!
LOVE that you had Edward having a wet dream. So funny!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
LOVE THE ENDING!!!! I loved the whole story. But I really loved the ending of this chapter.
I have been lucky to have been able to read from chapter to chapter with this story......until NOW!!!!! Please update SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
You surprised me with who Bella called and went to see. I was not expecting Carlisle. I don't know why but I just was not. I was thinking Alice.
Bella did not call Edward to dinner because she just fixed for the girls, right. Then she fixed the "adult" meal for her and Edward for after the girls went to bed, right.
I am glad that they have made progress. I am soooooo loving this story. You are doing a GREAT job writing it.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
You surprised me with who Bella called and went to see. I was not expecting Carlisle. I don't know why but I just was not. I was thinking Alice.
Bella did not call Edward to dinner because she just fixed for the girls, right. Then she fixed the "adult" meal for her and Edward for after the girls went to bed, right.
I am glad that they have made progress. I am soooooo loving this story. You are doing a GREAT job writing it.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
They got caught!!!!!!!! That was funny. Great chapter. Love the HOT HOT HOT lemon. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
NO YOU DID NOT!!!!!!!!!! That was cruel to leave us right there. You need to run and hide. We are coming after you. LOL!!!!!!! That was excellent. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
OMFG!!!!! You have left us hanging!!!!!! Just blowing in the breeze. WHAT HAPPENED?????????? Edward has changed his mind about marriage but what about having more children????????? Can't WAIT for your next update.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
I love this chapter. I was scared at first. I just kept thinking Poor Edward could not go through this again. I know he had to have been scared sh*tless. I didn't really "see" her gregnancy coming but I had thought about it. I can't wait to see Edward's reaction. I can't believe that it is near the end. I want to know about everything....Edward, Bella, the twins and the baby; Emmett and Rose; Alice and Jasper; Where their lives go??? How everything turns out. You wrote..."he seems fine." Is the baby a boy?????
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Is Bella leaving Edward's???? What is she going to do????
NEXT MONDAY!!!!!!!!! That is WAY to long. WE NEED MORE!!! WE NEED MORE!!!! lol. Can't wait, can you tell. lol.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
They really need to learn to talk to one another. Can't wait to read more and more. Emmett is in a really bad spot.
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love
Love Alice!!! I just laughed at Alice. She is one hellcat. lol. You know Alice is going to give anyone a piece of her mind. She always speaks her mind. Love her.
Bella really needs to talk to Edward. She does not have to tell him about the baby. All she has to do is talk to him about mariage and how it is something that she wants and since he can't give it to her, she needs to move on. And from there Edward can tell her how he really feels. Communication!!!!!
I am loving this story. You are doing a great job writing it.