I see Emmett does have the magical touch. Surprise, Rosalie!  *smirk*  Emmett is already enamoured with Rose; I wonder how long it will be before he falls madly, and completely in love with her?

I have no doubt in my mind that he, Edward, and Carlisle will totally be into helping Bella, Alice, Rose, and Esme to escape the hell hole they are in. I also think they will free all the other sex slaves, as well as the slave laborers. I really don't know what to think about Jasper at this point though. 

I'm really looking forward to seeing Rose get all fiesty with Jasper. Rose sure is a force to be reckoned with.

Thanks for writing. I really love your story.  =)  Kelly   *I need sleep, so I'll be back later*  

Holy crap! I'm glad you have several of these chapters done or I'd be left with the biggest cliffy ever!

I am totally freaking out right now, even though I'm pretty sure somehow Bella will be saved in the nick of time. Jeez, I can't believe Marcus and Caius just showed up like that. What's going to stop them from going back to Aro and telling him that Edward has a soft spot for Bella? Oh cripes, this is getting so exciting!

It looks like things are coming together as far as Edward et al, getting the hell out of that brutal, disgusting, and depraved pit of despair.

Oh I'm such a romantic sap, so I loved it when Edward and Bella confessed their love for each other. I may even have swooned. I couldn't help it.

You already know how I feel about this, but my fondest wish is for E/B, R/E, C/E(?),J/A(?), to get out of there in one piece. It would also be my wish that all of the slaves to be released.

A thought just occured to me about Jacob's feelings for Bella, how hard will it be on him to find out that Bella is in love with Edward? I hope he will be able to find piece with it. Oooo, and I wonder if that bitch Jane will try to alert the perv brothers to the plans of their demise, that is if she finds out.

Last but not least, I can't wait to see where Newton comes into the picture, and what will happen when that time comes.

Loving your story so much. You're awesome!  =)   xo  Kelly 

All I can do is swoon a bit and smirk a lot. I hope they get all blissed out, and thoroughly enjoy each other, because I have a feeling things are going to get ugly pretty soon. 

Of course I look forward to the demise of the slimy perverts, but then I want Edward and Bella to be able to be together away from that pit of doom.

Oh, then I have to see how Bella gets out of marrying the whoring bastard, Mike Newton. Maybe he won't be a problem? I'll just have to wait and see. That is after all part of the fun, to unravel the mysteries of your story. I love it!

Hugs.  =)   Kelly 

This chapter was so cool! I loved that you had 3 different pov's all in one chapter. I loved getting to see what happened to Jasper after the dogs attacked he and Alice, and to see Alice's gift(and it was so crazy that it was Jasper's dad, it was fitting)I was a little worried that Jacob had more feelings for Bella than he did, so that was a relief that he didn't. Also I'm glad, and not too surprised that he's going to help in the plan to revolt.

See you next chapter.  =)   Kelly

Wow, that was a crazy ass dream. You have a great imagination; I'm just glad the things that happened in that dream never happened. It was pretty clear that her dream came from things that had happened recently, and about people she knew more or less. *I hope that made sense, I'm not sure I worded it right*  :P

Holy crap! Tanya tried to kill herself? I'll bet she heard about Edward and Bella somehow. She'll just have to deal with it. *Jeez, I'm a cruel person aren't I?*

I'm getting so anxious about the uprising that's coming. Of course I worry that something will go wrong. Such as the wrong people being told what's going on and they alert the brothers. It could be a number of people, for instance, Jane or Tanya.

Oh cripes; I just had a horrible thought, what if Newton shows up? Any number of things could happen. What if he kidnaps Bella or something? That could happen at any point in your story. I would lose my mind!  :O  See, I told you I had a vivid imagination.  =)

I just want Edward and Bella to be safe, as well as Emmett and Rosalie and Carlise and Esme, and Alice and the new and improved Jasper. Oh and Jacob, I forgot about him.

Needless to say I'm on pins and needles regarding the revolt they are planning. I can't wait to see what happens; I know whatever it is will be really exciting, and not in a good way if you know what I mean. Of course you do! You are writing the story. *giggles* I'm so silly sometimes.

Thanks for writing and translating, I appreciate the time you must have to put into that. Love your story. See you next chapter.  xo  =)   Kelly

Oh good lord; I just want to smack Tanya, she's so desperate and pathetic!

I'm so anxious to see how Rosalie plans to mess up the Volturi pigs. I really hope that the other three slaves go along with it. I think they probably will; I'm just so suspicious of everyone now. I'm waiting to see who will end up being the traitors.

I've missed you Milk! I hope you are doing well. =)  I'm going to start Collisions soon; I can't help myself, I have to start another story. I don't know how in the world I keep track of all the stories I have going at the same time. I must be a bit looney! Well, I look forward to your next chapter. Take care.   =)    Kelly

I'm on the edge of my chair, this is so exciting!  I love that all their plans are coming together, so far. I'm freaking out a little about Lord Newton seeing Bella. I'm sure that pig will still want Bella even though she's not a virgin anymore. Or maybe not, I can't decide. I'm pretty sure Edward won't let anything happen to her, but still I'll worry. I can't wait to see what happens next! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. xoxo  Kelly 

*Grins* That was awesome!  =)

That was great; I loved it!  =)

Oh, that was great; I really loved it. Thanks so much for writing it.  =)

Love this so far, it's cute. What is it that makes people want who is soooo wrong for them, when there is almost always someone who is just right for them, and has been there all along? I guess it's just one of life's biggest mysteries.  =)

I get the feeling that Edward is going to be getting his ass spanked, a lot. ;)

I really like your story, it's a lot of fun to read!  :)

Oh I just bet that Bella will soon be thinking the same thing about Edward, if she isn't already. :)

Loving your story so far! I can't wait to see why Esme and Rosalie said that Edward can't have Bella as his sub.   =)   Kelly

I wonder what the hell Esme meant when she said "Bella doesn't need anymore exposure to us." I'm getting a bad feeling here. There has to be a clue, the answer, or part of the answer in Bella's dream. Edward said that he was being pulled into her dream and something seemed familiar. Ugh, my mind is going places it doesn't want to go. I could just be overreacting. This is killing me! I can't wait to find out what happened and how the Cullens fit into it.    =)      Kelly

Hmmm, more clues. In one of Bella's dreams, Edward saw a black blur, and said it was a vampire. Who was it? Oh, I keep forgetting to tell you how much I love how you include Bella's inner thoughts as Edward hears them. I can't wait until Edward finds out that Bella's friends are wolves. It doesn't seem that he knows, but maybe I've read it wrong. Ooops, I almost forgot to say that Bella will undoubtedly get into tons of trouble with Edward gone for three days. I really can't wait to see what happens.   =)     Kelly 

I really love Bella as the Domme, it's hot. But I also like Edward as a Domme too, it's so hard to decide sometimes! I really like your one-shot though.  ;)

Ooooh, I love the beginning of your story. I can't wait to read more.  :)

I'm really enjoying reading your story. :)

I just love your Edward, he's so sweet.  :)

These two are driving me bat shit crazy! But in a good way.  :)

I can't wait to see how this goes, and I hope Edward understands why she had to get the closure she needs before taking that leap of faith with him. I just hope he isn't angry with her for not telling him why she really went to Forks. I'm still dying to know what's in Edward's past.  :)

:)

Awww, this just gets better and better, and I love getting inside Edward's head...

Are you kidding me? I couldn't help it, I had to laugh a little bit.  :)

Well Esme is a kick in the ass, isn't she?  :)  But I think she made Bella question her sex life with Edward, like Bella needs to be questioning something else about her relationship with E. 'Not'  :)

:)

You have no idea how much I loved your awesome story! It really took me back to some of the best years of my life, along with the early 90's. I graduated in 1981 so I was very in tune with your story.

I can't possibly list all the things that really stood out for me; so many things brought back great memories. I laughed so hard at the mention of PeeChees,(I loved those!)and Walkmans,(imagine no i-pods or mp3 players)and the music; I was a rocker, but I also liked a few of Madonna's songs,(Crazy for you was a favorite)the mention of Bella in typing class blew me away,(I'd forgotten that we used electric IBM machines or the old style where you had to hit the return yourself, at my school anyway)and of course there's tons more but this review would be a novel so I'll say one more thing; I loved Molly Ringwald! I have PIP, TBC, and SC. As far as I'm concerned, those were her best 3, and I still watch them sometimes.

I'm so glad you wrote this, and I'm glad I stumbled across it; I don't know how I missed it because I had a lot of your stories fav'd and I'm pretty sure I have you as one of favorite authors. Thanks again for writing. It was so fun to remember all those things. *Spodie in a metal tub!* =)  Hugs, Kelly 

I'm excited, this is starting out great. I look forward to reading your story. ;)

This was wonderfully sweet, romantic, and perfect. Thanks for writing. xo

I know I sound like a broken record, but I just love your story! I just had a lightbulb moment; I wonder if Bella keeps the puppy if she'll name it 'Jake'.  :D  Sorry, that never gets old for me. :) I love how E/B are thinking pretty much all the same things about each other, it's so cute. I wondered for a minute about who Kate was, but I figured there was an explanation, after all Edward had told Emmett he wasn't into one night stands(or something like that). Bella sure doesn't know, of course she thinks the worst; isn't it funny that it bothered her so much. In denial much, Bella? I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh ya, I keep forgetting to mention how much I love your Emmett!  :)

Ya, I have to tell you again how much I love your story. I have a couple of thoughts on who could have left the roses, and what about that hang up call Bella got on her machine with no name on the caller ID. My guess would have to be maybe James, or what about Mike Newton from her class(she did wonder if he grazed her ass on purpose)and I have to throw Tanya in there(I don't know why, just because). I don't know why but I don't think it was Banner. I guess I'll see soon enough. :) Oh, and damn, what if they don't find out before Edward has to leave and something bad happens while he's gone? At least she's in a secure building, there's Emmett too, ect. But I'll worry just the same, maybe it's nothing too bad.

I think I'm really going to like your story. :)

*giggles* I love your story already! It's so good to read a 'feel good' story, know what I mean? I can't wait to see how things develop between Edward and Bella, and your Alice blows me away. She's so cute; I love her!  :)

Loved this chapter! It was all good, but my favorite thing had to be Bella telling Tanya off, that was priceless. I wonder if Bella will end up keeping the puppy.  :)

I can't even tell you how much I'm loving your story! I'm laughing my butt off! I think I even thought 'awww' a few times at the cute or sweet parts. Your story is just what I needed today. You know how life can suck sometimes? So, ya.....thanks for writing.  :)

Your Edward is the sweetest man. *swoon* Bella is one lucky woman. I'm going to be sad when Edward leaves. This was a great chapter.  :)

This is hard, I know how much long distance relationships suck. I'm really looking forward to seeing what you've done with the rest of your story. I still love it so much.  :)

Arghhhhhh! Holy shit!

I want to take a shower with Edward. *sigh*  :)

Oh, I just love a happy ending. :)

Awww, that was such a great story. I have to thank you again. :)

Loving your story so far. :)

:) I really love your story; I think you've written it really well. I'm so excited to read the next chapter!  xo

I love, love, love your story!  xo

Damn, they're hot. I love how sweet they are together when Edward isn't collared. I also love how Bella takes care of Edward, she's a good Domme as is he a good sub. I can't wait until Bella lets Edward know how she's feeling about him and vise versa.  xo

Holy crap. This was a great chapter. I kind of felt that Edward might be the one to let his feelings known, as Bella is sort of still struggling with hers. I'm now waiting for the other shoe to drop, especially after what you said in your last review response. By the way, I thank you for your responses to my reviews; it is really nice to hear back from authors; I know you don't always have the time to, so thanks! Again, great chapter. Now off I go,(only slightly cringing)to see what Bella's reaction to Edwards declaration will be. I'm thinking she might get spooked, even though she has,(I think)the same feelings, or close to as Edward's. I just hope that if she does say the 'walk away' safeword,(I forgot what it is, sorry) that maybe Charlotte and Peter will help her see the light. Oh my, sorry for the novel of a review!  :)  xo

I'm almost vibrating with excitement to read the next chapter, and this one was great! I cringed when Edward slipped, and Bella yelled "Red!". I can't wait to see how their talk at breakfast goes. You really rock with this story!  :)  xo

Loved this chapter, love your story! I don't mind a bit of drama, or a little angst, but of course I'm a sucker for the happy times. :D Isn't it funny how you just connect with some stories and characters, I mean some more than others? I mean no disrespect to any authors of any story I've read, because I like 99.9% of the stories I read, but sometimes stories just grab you more, ya know? I really feel like that about your story, your E/B, and your writing; I really love it all. By the way, I had to tell you that I am reading Sugar Daddy Needed and have ButterflyBetty fav'd to read also. We all come together in some way in this fandom, don't we?  :)  xoxo  Kelly