Reviews by 1918
Summary:

 

Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub.  After several profiles are searched she interviews two.  Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out.  Is he the right one?  BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons.  AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story.  The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com.  The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest.  Thank you to all my loyal readers. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48038
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules

I just love this hot, sexy couple so much! They are both the whole package, and just so cute and sweet too. I'm feeling a bit sappy now.  :P  xoxo



Author's Response:

I had my moments whiel writing it believe me!  Thanks again Kelly, I am grateful for the story love!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong

Ooooh, a sex swing, how fun! What a great chapter, I loved it!  I am kind of freaking out here, this is the second time Bella has hit her head, and hard too. I suddenly have a bad feeling, I don't even want to type out my guesses, I'm hoping my ideas are wrong. I'm such a wimp; I'm a little scared to read the next chapter, but here I go....xoxo 



Author's Response:

Yeah, you are all caught up, and I am currently at 6838 word count on the final chapter.  In the middle of a really BIG event.  I am guessing it will be close to 10,000 word count by the finish, give or take a few.  I am glad that you loved the return to the playroom, they really needed that time.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, xoxoxo Kasi~

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath

I made it, I finally caught up! Well everything seems to be good, so I guess I was wrong in my semi-bad thoughts. I have such a suspicious mind. Even at the last chapters of a story, I sometimes think someone or something is going to jump out, and all hell would break loose. This was a great chapter. Am I wrong to be happy that Mike got a little more than he deserved? I can't say I would have been sorry if you had killed him off though. I can't shake this nagging feeling I have regarding Mike, maybe I've read too many stalker type stories where you think they are gone, dead, or just out of the picture and as soon as you feel safe they jump out at you. I have such a crazy imagination. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :)  xoxo   Oh I almost forgot, I think Bella's parent's wedding rings are in that velvet jewelry box. *shrugs* Just a guess. Again, awesome chapter and I'm so glad you wrote this story. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  The reviews truly do mean a lot to me.  I am glad you are all caught up.  I think that you will be happy to know that 100% for sure Mike is no longer anything, but a bad memory.  He served his purpose, of causing them to get closer.  The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process.  My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed.  Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.

 

XOXO, Kasi~

 

Chapter 18 preview…teaser BPOV

 

“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.

“I was just coming in to get Bella.  Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”

“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.

“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess.  Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.

“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek.  “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.

“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed.  See you both in the morning,” I say.

I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door.  We walk hand and hand to the living room.  Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure.  He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest.  Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.

 

 

 

Misery Business by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

misery

When snarky lead singer Bella falls for a sexy bartender, is it a match made in heaven? Or will his girlfriend throw a wrench into the works?  A One Shot Soundtrack Contest entry based on Paramore's song, Misery Business.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5088 Read Count: 1514
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Dec 2010
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Misery Business

Really good, I loved it!  :)

Toy by Irish_charm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

After a long absence a submissive gets a summons from his Mistress.

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My entry for the Dommella's Dungeon.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7956 Read Count: 1087
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Dec 2010
Reviewer: 1918 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Toy

Hot and cute, loved it!     =)

Summary:

From the time they met through Jake in college, Bella and Edward were best friends.  When her world falls apart and he’s the one to pick up the pieces, could their friendship grow into something more?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8084 Read Count: 839
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 24 Dec 2010
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank-you so much for writing this; I absolutely loved it!  =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This just keeps getting better and better!  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay, so it's not just Edward it's the whole damn family!  =)  I can't wait to find out why Jasper nor Emmett spoke to Bella; I suppose that's some kind of rule or something. I hope Bella has a chance to pick Alice's brain about things; I can't wait for that. I found the conversation around the dinner table very odd and what's with Carlisle telling Edward "you've done well"? It's just funny that their family seems to think this is the norm. But hell, what is normal; normal is different for everybody, right? I'm totally in love with your story by the way!  =) xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm not exactly sure why, but I'm having a hard time processing the I love you's, especially from Edward. I can't wait for dinner with the family.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy crap Bella! You haven't even known him for two days and you tell him you love him, what are you thinking!? I can't wait for Edward's reaction.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good lord, Edward is so demanding and strict. I keep giggling, I think maybe I'm enjoying this a bit too much! I'm not at all offended by Edward, but I'm dying to know why he prefers this lifestyle, he could have any woman he wanted. Does he just get off by having a much younger girl in his bed and in his life or is he just a perv. I'm cracking up because I think I could live with that! I guess if Bella or any other girl knows what she's getting into, it wouldn't bother them to be treated in a certain way and call their benefactor 'daddy'.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, this is going to be fun!  ;)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm just giggling away; I can't wait to see what Edward's rules are and just what Bella is getting herself into. =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story sounds so cute, and hot. I can't wait to see what's in store for Bella and Edward. xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I don't think I like jealous Edward, he needs help with his issues! But I guess that will be difficult since he knows no other way.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor Bella...  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I want Edward to be my sugar daddy!  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward really loves to spank Bella, doesn't he? ;)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love it; It seems that Bella has him wrapped around her little pinky. I think Carlisle would not be happy with Edward if he knew how lenient he is with Bella sometimes. I can't wait to see how Thanksgiving dinner goes. I keep forgetting to say how much I hate Renee, what a fucking bitch!  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Just when I thought things might be a little bit more equal between Edward and Bella, Carlisle had to go and be a dick. Who the hell tells a grown man what to do? That's one of the things that bothers me about their lifestyle, and not much bothers me about how they live their lives. I want to slap that smug look off of Carlisle's face.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Okay, Edward has redeemed himself in my eyes. I hope Carlisle never finds out how lenient he is with Bella. I seriously don't like Carlisle, this may be the only thing he knows as far as how to treat and what he expects out of women, but I think he goes way too far. It really blows my mind that he hits the guys for not punishing their girls fast enough to suit him. I also pray that Bella never slips up around him. I'm so glad Edward told Bella everything about his past and that he told her about Carlisle. Forewarned is forearmed. I haven't said it in a while, but I love your story so much!   xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

All I can say is, wow. I can't help but be a bit suspicious about Renee though. I hope she is being honest for Bellas' sake. I guess time will tell. I wonder if Edward smelled the wine on Bella. She's such a little shit, always pushing the envelope with Edward, but I love that about her.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Is Bella fucking nuts? This can't be good, at all. What's with one of his exs' showing up at his doorstep? I know Bella was pissed, but she went too far this time. I know she's just eighteen, but come on, when you've always been around older men you would think that some of their maturity would have rubbed off on her.  I'm just waiting for one of them to break their contract. And if that happens it will break them both. I'm dying for Edward to tell Bella what the deal is with Carlisle. I know that is going to be big.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow, I can't believe Edward let her outburst slide without punishment. I'm glad though because it was a double standard. Hot lemon, as are all your lemons. I'm dying to know about Carlisle though. xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Argh! Damn asshole Carlisle. But Bella is right about Edward; I think I already said in an earlier review that he is a grown man and shouldn't be ruled by his father. My heart is going to break if Bella leaves Edward, but I get it. Maybe if she leaves Edward he will get his shit together as far as his father goes. He'll have to if he wants Bella in his life.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank god Edward did the right thing! Now I'll be waiting for the show down between Edward and Carlisle, it's bound to happen, right? xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.

Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it so much! I can hardly stop laughing just to type you a review! My tummy hurts from laughing so hard. I have always loved your writing and story telling skills, but this is a whole new level of awesome! I bow to you, you are the master. This is THE best concept, EVER! Thanks for writing. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Hi Ho, It's off to Work I Go

I have no words, just laughter and love! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Bound Rose

Thanks for writing such a fun damn story to read; I love it! xoxo Kelly

Summary:

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This is the OS written for Souther Fan Fiction Review, Tantalizing Tuesdays. Rated M for language and Lemon content if you are not old enough to vote you are not old enough to read. Enjoy E/B

 

Banner made by Alice S. Sweetcheeks

 

Just so you all know I suck at summaries 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3076 Read Count: 380
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it! I almost spit my water at the computer screen when Edward said the name of the 'painter', then I laughed my ass off! I just loved your sexy little story. =)

SexEd by mcgt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

What happens when the host of the popular nightly talk show SexEd finds his relationship in a rut?  Will they be able to spice things up before all is lost?  

Second place winner in the Eat Your Heart Out Contest!

2nd place


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4341 Read Count: 604
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2011 Updated: 21 Feb 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: SexEd

I loved it!  =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing.  I appreciate it.  :)

Closet by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

What happens when Edward and his date are caught at Make Out Point by Chief Swan? How will Chief Swan feel when it's his child in the car with Edward? Read and find out.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Emmett (slash)
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2926 Read Count: 1629
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*Giggles* You sneaky little devil!  =)  I did not see that one coming, but it was great! I can't stop laughing. :D

A Higher Power by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Sister Swan is disappointed when she is forced to confiscate marijuana from her favorite student. What happens when she goes to Father Cullen to ask for his mercy? Priestward/Nunella Lemon/Drug Use. Entry for the High Times Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8946 Read Count: 3758
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 13 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Higher Power

*giggles* That was so great, I loved it. I loved your creativity, it was wrong, but oh so right. ;)

Summary:

 

 

An eccentric painter, a set of magic paints, and a whole lot of mystery.

 

FicAwesomeGift Exchange Gift for Psyche001


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7465 Read Count: 1835
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2011 Updated: 15 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooo, I can't wait to read the rest. My curiousity is in overdrive.  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is so cool; I love it! I'm excited to read the rest!  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I had a very mysterious feel as I was writing this, it was very unique for me and I'm glad it came across.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:O  What, she comes out of the painting, they make love, and then she's melted, or what? I immediately assumed that the white blob of paint on the floor next to his bed was her dress. I'm frowning now, because what if he keeps painting her and she keeps disappearing? Those magic paints that he bought aren't going to last forever, are they? Oh, I had to mention that the new cab driver sure sounded like Emmett, and the tiny woman at the paint store sure sounded like Alice. I can't wait to finish your story, only two chapters left.  =)



Author's Response:

I love all your thoughts, you know all your answers now, but I appreciate you taking the time to review every chapter

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well now I'm feeling scared, sad, and frustrated. But I just love your story, it's such a puzzle.  =)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*Giggling* I loved your story so, so much. Thank-you for your wonderful imagination and great writing!  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you again.

Magically Delicious by mcgt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for making this amazing banner

After breaking up with his girlfriend, the last thing Edward expects to find at his brother's St. Patrick's Day party is someone new.  What happens when you meet the right person at supposedly the wrong time?

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Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6568 Read Count: 1173
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2011 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Magically Delicious

Loved it!  =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I had fun writing this one.  I appreciate your review.  :)

Control Freak by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

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Banner made by Ima Twi Hard

My enrty for Fans Vs DV.

 

Edward has been looking for the perfect partner. A story of relinquishing control.

 

BDSM Themes ahead.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6706 Read Count: 3725
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 18 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You said in your a/n that this was your first attempt at BDSM; I thought it was great!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you  :)

Sacrificial Lamb by mcgt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

Summary:  Isabella’s name had been spoken by the great shaman Alissandra.  What happens when she’s been chosen as the virginal sacrifice to save her hamlet from utter destruction?   


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9513 Read Count: 1437
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 21 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sacrificial Lamb

I loved this so much, it was so good! :)  xo



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for leaving me the review. I appreciate it.  :)

Summary:

 

 

 

Summary:  Dr. Masen sits and has coffee in the commons of the university every day the weather is nice.  What happens when he meets the woman of his dreams in a most embarrassing way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4135 Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 21 Mar 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Same Time Tomorrow

That was sooo cute; I loved it!  :)



Author's Response:

THanks so much for the review.  I loved writing this one.  THanks for taking the time.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Post Coital

I can't wait to see what Emmett comes up with. Should be entertaining. =) xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid

Sure Bella, just keep telling yourself that he was asleep if that makes you feel better. =o) Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Prick

Those two absolutely kill me! =o) Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Paragon

Heeheehee! This is great! I can't wait to see what punishment Bella will have in store for Edward. I'm having so much fun reading your story. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Player

I can't wait to know what Edward's plan is. =o)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Preposterous

Bella is quite a piece of work isn't she? It's obvious that she is attracted to Edward, but it seems that she really goes out of her way to hide that. Maybe that is part of the reason she is such a bitch, that way it keeps Edward and any other men from approaching her. I guess she could have been deeply hurt by someone in her past, and has now closed her heart and become extremely guarded. It could be so many different things. I'm more curious than ever to find out what makes her tick. I'm looking forward to Edward going over to her place on Sunday; I can't wait to see what his terms and conditions are. =) Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposition

This is great! I'm laughing my butt off! I love a hardass Bella. I can't wait to see why she is so icy. =) Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two

What a train wreck. Poor Bella. I know Renee didn't mean any harm, but what poor timing. You know, for a split second last chapter, I wondered if Lauren would tell Edward about what Bella did concerning his novel, but I dismissed the idea. No wonder he is pissed off. I can't wait to see what happens next. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One

Well this is going just great. *says sarcastically* And what is Edward upset at Bella for? I can't wait to find out. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Prepared

I can't wait for Charlie and Renee to get here! I'm so curious as to what fun activities Edward will come up with to do while Bella's parents are in town. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Practice

I think I smirked through this whole chapter, they just kill me! The sexual tension will no doubt be at an all time high by the end of the three weeks. heehee =) Can't wait to meet the parents. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Ploy

Ah yes, the plot thickens. I guess I was right about a few things now that I've heard it from BPOV. I'm laughing at this situation, it's priceless! I can't wait to see how the 'practicing' goes, and if Bella's parents are fooled or not. I really am loving your story so much! xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Playbook

Well I loved the 'playbook' , it seemed to be working and then the ice queen reared her icey head again. Speaking of the ice queen, I don't get how she can go from one mood to the next so quickly. I wonder if she's had any prior practice on anyone else, or if she only bestows that on poor Edward. I think I already said that she's obviously attracted to Edward, maybe she got burned by an old boyfriend in the past and is just taking it out on Edward because she is afraid of her feelings for him. *shrugs* Well no matter what her deal is; I love your story. =) xo Kelly

Summary:

Loving Partnerships Banner

 

Bella returns home from a book tour to take on a very personal project with her sexy and supportive husband - going half on a baby!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3457 Read Count: 1732
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: L.P. O/S

JFC, that was beyond hot! Loved it!  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Glad you liked these two :)

-shpwhitney

Clinical Love by shpwhitney Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Bella finds the perfect man in Edward; what's not to love in a sexy, cultured, successful, rich doctor? Well, the fact that he is somewhat clinical in every aspect of relating!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1491 Read Count: 1568
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: C.L. O/S

*giggle-snorts x100*  =)



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks for the review :)

-shpwhitney

Breakfast in Bed by shpwhitney Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella decides to serve Edward his favorite dish on their first morning in their new home - in bed :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3688 Read Count: 988
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: B&B O/S

This was awesome! Sweet, sexy, and hot. More please.  =)



Author's Response:

Sorry it took me a while to reply, but I'm bad with checking the different sites my stories are on! Thank you so much for the review, though. I have a prequel in mind for this story, so be on the lookout :)

-shpwhitney

[S]aint by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

"I couldn't take my eyes off of her, or the way her fingers stroked her Fender strings, coaxing melodies from it. It was almost as if it was an intimate moment, shared between lovers." Rated M for things of the citrus variety.

Banner made by the awesome Annamorphos!

saint


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1008 Read Count: 1103
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! :)

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

Holy crap, that was so hot! What a cute, sweet one-shot, I loved it.  xo



Author's Response:

I am so, so sorry. I can't believe I didn't respond to your review, I try to be so prompt about it. 

Thank you for the nice review.  I am really glad you enjoyed it. I had a blast writing it.

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mr cullen

 

Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67309
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I loved your story, so much! I apologize for the lack of reviews. When I first started reading, I think I only reviewed the first six or seven chapter. When I got back to reading it again, I just breezed through it. It really was so great, thanks for writing. :o) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this first chapter so very much! I could just kick myself for not reading your story sooner, I've had it fav'd since the end of July! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest.

I do love my canon characters, but the subtle changes that you made to fit your story are great. I like to read a story that's a little different in that way, I think it makes a story 'pop', if that makes sense.

I had to laugh at myself when Edward just attached himself to Bella's lips because as I was reading, I threw my hand over my eyes and said "Edward, no!" I'm not exactly sure why I had that reaction, maybe I thought it was too soon, or the fact that Bella is seventeen, or it just came out of no where.(sorry for rambling on) Oh, that was something I wanted to mention; I loved that you had Bella say that she had a 'faucet mouth', it was so cute and I've never heard that expression. In most stories when a character keeps rambling on they call it 'word vomit', so I loved that you came up with a new expression.

I think you could call me a 'faucet mouth', it seems to fit right about now. I can almost sense you yawning as you read this novel of a review.  Well I love the start of your story and I can tell I'm going to love the whole thing. Thanks so much for writing.   =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nope, no novel this time.(lucky for you) *giggles* I really love your story, I'm having such a great time reading. I'm laughing out loud a lot and now with this chapter, I've started in on the 'Awwww's'. I can't help it, Edward and Bella are so cute.   =)  See ya next chapter!    Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin

Those two are so cute and sweet, oh and horny too; I just love Edward and Bella in your story. Once again I thank you for writing. I really like your writing style, and your sense of humor.   =)    Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf

Love your story! So...here comes the werewolf. I can't wait to see how you've written Jake. I really love the way you've written your characters, they're priceless and the dialog between Edward and Bella is so good. I of course, love the rest of the family too. I just love to laugh out loud when I'm reading a great fic, and I thank you for that.   =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm sorry that I keep repeating myself, but I love your story so damn much! It's too much fun to read; I really like the way you changed up the story, and the characters' personalities are killing me! I can't wait for the BBQ, that should be all kinds of fun. I'm really, really looking forward to Bella and Alice's 'sleepover', I know that's going to be more than just fun.   ;)     Kelly  

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Heh, I think Newton got just what he deserved.  Edward better get it in gear and talk to Bella soon, before they both go insane, I really don't think either one of them can hold out much longer. Can't wait for dinner with the Cullens and Charlie, I'll be curious to see what he thinks of them.  =)   Kelly

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story is so good already! I can't wait to read more!  =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*giggles* You are too funny! Your story is so cute, I love it.   =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it! I laughed my butt off throughout this whole chapter!   =)    Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just adore your story! I love all of your characters too! I know I already said this, but you are so funny!  =)   Kelly



Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried I was losing my touch. It took so long for me to get my computer back. Glad you still like it and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

There aren't enough words to tell you how much fun I'm having reading your story. I don't care how fast things might be going, sometimes in life, it really can be that fast; I've seen it happen.  =)   Kelly 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love your characters, they are so much fun!  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww, what a cute damn chapter. All of them are so cute!   =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter! *giggles* Too funny! I was thinking last chapter that all we need now is for Bella, Rose, and Alice to be pregnant too. I love it!  =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

BannerBanner

 

This is the very first Fan Fic I wrote. It was written during the summer of 09. I know that it is riddled with errors and I have no intentions of fixing these errors as this story is being posted to show my growth as a writer.

 

 

This is the story of how the night Janitor falls in love with the CEO.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 111 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116539 Read Count: 82638
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2011 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww, they are so cute!  =) 



Author's Response:

I'm having fun with them.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward better be careful, or he's going to scare Bella away. Edward may want what's best for her, but she may see it differently if he's not careful of how he goes about things.  xo



Author's Response:

I think he will be changing a lot over the corse of this story.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is so fun!  xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I had a blast writing it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, I'm glad Edward apologized to Bella. I thought she might have been stubborn about things, guess I was wrong. =)



Author's Response:

He would be an ass if he didn't

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so excited! I'm finally going to sit down and read your story; I've been dying to for a few weeks now.  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you and remember it does have errors. I know this and understand this, but I felt I needed to post this here so people will see and understand just how much I've grown as a writer.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*Giggles* I love the note she just left him!  =)



Author's Response:

Notes can be fun.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is great; I'm loving it already.  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you. The chapters my be short but it was a fun way to use my mind.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I died laughing at Edward's note, what a dork. But at least he's a hot dork.  =)



Author's Response:

Yup, I just wanted to have some fun.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this game of cat and mouse with the notes. I'm having so much fun reading your story!  =)



Author's Response:

Thank you,

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is too much fun!  :D



Author's Response:

I enjoyed writing this story and have always called it my silly story.  Just so you know when I post chapters it's four at a time.... this is a completed story since it was written the summer of 09. There is a sequel that I never finished, but will finish.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh Edward, just send Tanya packing already!  =)



Author's Response:

LOL 

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The more I read, the more I giggle. I can't wait to see what Edward's plan is to meet his 'dream' girl. Silly Bella, she should have looked up to see who helped her up when she tripped.  =)



Author's Response:

The fun is just begining.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh, how can things go wrong with Alice helping him? Hmmmm  =)



Author's Response:

Alice will be Alice and she will be a ball of energy.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well, here we go!  =)



Author's Response:

hope you goes the way you think it should.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I wonder what Edward will say when he finds out how Bella got screwed over in that lawsuit, maybe he will help her. I also can't wait until Alice is in the picture more, she just kills me!  =)



Author's Response:

We will find out very soon....

 

Hugs

Playtime. by Roon1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Mistress and her slave enjoy some playtime.  

Winner of the Edward and Bella one shot award The Emerging Swan Awards

 

Thank you to the lovely AiculAiram for my wonderful banner. Check out her other banners on  http : // aiculairam . blogspot . com/ 2011/ 05 /lost – in-ocean . html

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2356 Read Count: 2775
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 21 Jul 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot; I loved it!  =)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed that little slice of kink. ;-)

Wonderful Tonight by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Happiness, Love, Joy. What more do you need in life? 

This was my entry in The Lemonade Stand's Lyrics & Lemons contest.    

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2008 Read Count: 745
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this, it was so sweet. :)

Summary:

 

Edward is pissed off with the direction his life has taken. He's now determined more than ever to put right what once went wrong. Will he be able to before it's too late? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8090 Read Count: 1105
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2011 Updated: 06 Aug 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my, I really loved your story. It truly was one of the best one-shots I've read. Thanks for writing!  =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427898
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 **Encounters**

Fuck yeah! You know you're good when your readers get hot just reading your words. Not all authors can make the story come alive like that, and I'm not just referring to the lemons.

Personally, I think that Bella will be more curious and willing to learn a lot about Edward's lifestyle. Hell, she's lusted after him since she was 15; I'd say she's more than ready and willing to please Edward. I think her want for him will overshadow any concerns she may feel. Maybe I'm giving her too much credit right away. Or not; look at how eager she was to let Edward take her clothes off, she hasn't known him that long, but it seems to me that she'll bend to his will pretty easily. She already has in some small ways. Bella may be a little stunned at first, but I think she'll get over it pretty quickly. JMO

Thanks again for writing. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.  xoxo  Kelly  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings

I really love your story, so much. I always look forward to the next chapter. I'm so excited for BPOV!

Thanks for writing this great story!  xoxo  Kelly  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Discipline

Edward is going to want to crawl under their table at dinner and feast on Bella instead. Well I hope Charlie can get dried out, and get his shit together. What a sweet and caring boyfriend he is to take care of those ever looming medical bills, and to take the time to get Charlie into rehab. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Desire

Yeah, I can imagine you getting hot and bothered while writing these hot assed scenes, but please know that it's equally titillating for your readers. I'm sure you know that, but I had to remind you of how erotic these scenes are to read. You rock the lemons! xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Declarations**

God, I really love these two insatiable lovers. They love each other already! I guess you know when you've found your soulmate. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Coitus

Hi there! I had to re-read chapters one thru fifteen again before I catch up to where you are. I loved it as much if not more than the first time I read it! I can't wait to read more! You write some of best damn lemons that I've ever read, and I love this story so much! I love how sweet Edward is, and at the same time he is so fucking sexy, hot, and just gah! I love the two of them together, they are so good together. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping

I couldn't help but giggle-snort at Bella as she enjoyed the aftermath of her first Brazilian. I'm pretty confident that Edward will be completely okay with the newly hairless Bella. (I don't know why but that just made me giggle)  =P  Probably because it's about 5:30 a.m. and I've had no sleep, but I had to catch up; I was 5 chapters behind.

Yeah, Alice is onto them. I think maybe she has been for awhile now. And lord do I want to go on a shopping trip like that!

I think it's perfect that Edward and Bella have so much in common; I think it almost always makes a relationship better. Speaking of better, I can't wait for the 'lingerie fashion show'. I'm sure it will be smokin hot.

Have I told you enough how much I love your story? Well, I love your story so much. Thanks for writing.  =)     xoxo