Reviews by Cared
Summary:

 

Carlisle perverts a Christmas classic. See what's going on in and around the Cullen house on Christmas Eve. This is just for shiggles. M for really dirty humor, smut, and mistreatment of forest creatures. Vampire/human. AU. CPOV


Categories: Crackfic, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 547 Read Count: 700
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hilarious! Thanks!

Summary:

All alone for the holidays, Bella receives the perfect gift this Christmas. My oneshot written for Breath-of-twilight's Countdown to 2011.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3588 Read Count: 1070
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice, sweet story.

Summary:

E&B piano-NY

This is The Parachutist’ sequel.

It is the summer of 1945 and the war in Europe has ended. Despite his transformation in a vampire, Edward has found his love again, has prevailed over his bloodlust and they have married. Now he is going back to America with his human bride, where they’ll join Carlisle’s family. How will be their life with the Cullens, when will it be the right moment for Bella’s transformation? Will the Volturi discover them, will they face new dangers?

ONW has a blinkie too

ONW Blinkie


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50387 Read Count: 5177
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2012 Updated: 11 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Michigan

It's lovely to read how accepted they are into the family.



Author's Response:

Yes, I see them like that. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 No secrets

How funny that Edward is embarrased by knowing Alice saw him. LOL



Author's Response:

Well, the no secrets family needs some adjustment to live with. My Edward is not a prude - at least not as the Canon one - but still....

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Blushing red

You wrote Jasper very in keeping with canon and very 'human'.



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you liked him. Of course I have not finished dealing with Jasper. There is more to come. Thank you again for r&r

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Philadelphia

I hope Edward's break down in the house will be a turning point for how he views himself.



Author's Response:

Ooops, I had missed this. And you are perfectly right, Edward had this step in  front of him. But with Bella he can cope.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Rosalie

For many reason the Rosalie and Bella relationship is often the hardest to estbalish - I like how you did it.

 

Love the idea of giddy vampires. LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you! Rosalie will have an important role to play in the follow up.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Only in America

Their connection really shines through in this chapter.



Author's Response:

This was my intent. I am so glad that I was successful. Thank you for telling me.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Syracuse

How human of Edward to worry about Bella learning to drive - I love to see that side of the vampires.



Author's Response:

Yeah. Overprotecting, much? Very similar to Canon Edward in this.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Suspended Life

This Edward is quick to learn once he realises his mistake.  



Author's Response:

Vampire and human ... everyday life can't be over simple. But they have more maturity than their Canon counterparts - So they will cope.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Bloodlust

Wow! Bella being able to calm Jasper was amazing.



Author's Response:

I am letting Bella's hidden talent slowly emerge. It is more complex that in the saga and already functioning, aqt least a little.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Long time no see

How adventerous they have become!



Author's Response:

Yess! Thank you.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Visitors

I hope Eleazar will recognise Bella's talent and he and Carmen will become family.



Author's Response:

I have assigned to Carmen a specific role in the last part of the story. In the Saga she is quite indistinct, her I hope I gave her - and her mate- compelling personalities.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 End of the Road

I'm sure if the original Twilight had been aimed at an older audience, blood play would have been included.  Bella would have pushed for it so I like to see it here.



Author's Response:

Yes, I too am sure of it. Probably it is part of falling for a vampire, at least in many mythologies. Oh well, now you are in for the grand final. I hope you like it.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Yves

Oooh, this is an interesting twist.



Author's Response:

Enters the bad guy ....

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Alaska

Fiesty and jealous Bella is going to be a good match for Tanya.



Author's Response:

In this story Tanya is really a bitch - youll' see

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Tea for one

I can see Jasper's POV about Scarlett. LOL



Author's Response:

EhEh, Scarlett deserved to meet a vampire. And would have made a deadly vamp herself.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Frenzied

What a powerful chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Fear

Another very intense and exciting chapter.



Author's Response:

To complete the story took time, but I am glad that the emotions are there. Thank you.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fight

I think Bella will be all the more determined to be changed now.



Author's Response:

She has been ready for a long time. It is Edward who had cold feet (metaphorically and in reality, ha ha)

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Aftermath

I loved Bella's reaction. She understands it is what one mate would do for another.



Author's Response:

My experience with older relatives who survived WWII is that they a strongest fibre than people of today. It is also true that there is nothing a mate wouldn't do for his/her mate.

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Song of Songs

Perfectly written!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Epilogue

Thanks so much for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it very much.



Author's Response:

No, I am thanking you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Cared Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Liked it? Loved it!  How great that Edward is now using 'ripped him a new one' and it poking a stick at his subsonscious.

 

Thanks for telling me you were here too.

 



Author's Response:

I liked that bit, too.  Everytime Edward thinks of something with some kind of tie to Bella, like when he thinks the word "grandfather," the feeling he's forgotten something intensifies.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cared Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

What a wonderful chapter. It has suspense, drama, confusion, joy and Edward and Bella are nearer to finding the truth.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing!