Reviews by dj071688
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Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 38413
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
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Date: 14 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: My Troubled Past

Wow.  It is easy to understand her lack of trust now.  Or her reluctunance to expect anything good.  So sad.  But as Edward said, he is there now.  Great update.  Your writing is just so riveting.

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Date: 01 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 9: My Great Loss

Communication is key Bella, let him explain.

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 31: (On) My Own

Planning on kicking Ed Sr.'s ass!!!!

 



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I'll join!

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Date: 01 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: My New Mate

Wow, girl, you did a hell of a job on this chapter.  Love the visuals, and if I could have a naked Edward making me a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, I would be thrilled.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really worked hard on this one.

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Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 2: My Turn

OMG, that was hot.  Loving this story.  The visuals were perfect.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 26 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 5: My Mate's Past and Future

There was so much detailed information on the inner workings of the pack.  It was wonderful.  So many stories leave out the details for the reader to either assume or speculate.  It is wonderful to have so much information at our fingertips.  Thank you.  Wishing you a wonnderful birthday today, and many more.

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Date: 27 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 8: My Reassurance

Aw shit, Edward is about to throw down.  Let's roll Edward.  

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Date: 08 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 10: My Spiderman

Good lord, the bitch and the skank.  This should be interesting and painful.  Great update.

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Date: 10 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 11: My Idea

Do it Bella. You have this girl.  Fantastic update.

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Date: 01 May 2020 Title: Chapter 16: My Grief

Get her Bella, get her.  Rip her head off!!!!!  Okay, sorry, I got carried away.

 

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Date: 20 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 13: My Magic

Great job with this story.  Your plots and the developement of the story and characters.....phenomenal.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: My Video

Great chappie.  Wish I could see Jeff getting hit in the head.  

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Date: 01 May 2020 Title: Chapter 15: My Sun

So glad you incorporated this into the story.  Excellent update.

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Date: 09 May 2020 Title: Chapter 17: My Wolf

Holy shit, and WTF Jessica!!!!  Get her Bella!!!!

Filia Noctis Ex by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

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FAGE 12. "Don't you know who I am?" "Yep, I just don't care." A millennia ago, a vampire's entire world was torn apart. Now, she's out for revenge on her family's murderers, but fate decides to throw a curveball in her path. His name is Edward Cullen. Written for Alyscia!    

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: Family, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27302 Read Count: 5068
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2020 Updated: 11 Feb 2020
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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmmmm, an expansion could be done.  js  It was a fantastic story.  I loved everything about it, with the exception that it had to end.  Great job.

 

CoppertopJ

Denise Wilson Johnson

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So glad she has her parents back.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

A feeder, father, mother, and mate went into a castle.....  Just kidding.  I am so loving this story girl!!!!

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow Anthony Theron Dragulia, love the choice.  And the fact he can understand and talk, as Mr. Spock would say.....fascinating.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

And now the shit hits the fan!!!!  Wish I could hypnotize people like she does.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, so he is the nauseous one.  Well done.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Baby!!!!!  Who did you picture for Vlad when you wrote this?

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holy shit, if Rosalie finds out, the shit is going to hit the fan.  Picturing what she looks like in her true nature.  

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So glad you wrote this Edward.  Actually, I love all of these characters the way you have written them.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank god he didn't brood, thinking she betrayed him.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh shit, that was gruesome. 

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think I really like your take on vampires.  OMG, he knows!!!

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So close to the codex, yet so far from the codex.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Distraction is good.  Say it with me Bella, distraction is good.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh her acting is good.  Real good.

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Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love the way this Bella (Marya) can lie so skillfully!!!!

Summary:

Madam President

 

Summary:  Bella Marie Swan, the previous first daughter of the United States is elected as the first female President. After her inauguration, she moves in the White House and begins the job that she was elected to do. It had been a hard-fought election, with her opponent attacking her personally for being a woman and not being married. However, in the end, the people of the country spoke with their votes. The first day on the job she was introduced to her security team and was shocked to see the leader was her high school sweetheart, Edward Cullen.

 

Edward Cullen had worked hard and up through the ranks to become the leader of USSS for the POTUS. Excited to start his new position for the upcoming President, until she won. The only woman he had ever loved.

 

Across the globe, an old foe of the United States has decided it is time to cripple their enemy before launching an all-out offensive. Sometimes the biggest killer is those that can not be seen by the naked eye.

 

Will Edward be able to keep his feelings hidden or will in the face of death, he will tell her? 

 

Action/Romance and of course a HEA!!! HeartforTwilight  #BabiesattheBorder #MadamPresident 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15900 Read Count: 7021
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2020 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
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Date: 15 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death

Good job.  Glad you continued to post.

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Date: 10 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart

I have no idea what was wrong with STARS, but the print was so damn small I was going blind reading it.  Great update.  



Author's Response:

I think I have it fixed, because I hope you can see this!!!Edward 5

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Date: 01 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief

Let the games begin.  So love that title....Madam President.  ;)  I'm in.

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Date: 05 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball

Wow, they really need to talk.  Saw the dress on FB, it was gorgeous.  As was the manip.  ;)

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Date: 10 May 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Football One?

Great update.  Happy Mother's Day my friend.

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Date: 10 May 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Football One?

Great update.  Happy Mother's Day my friend.

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Date: 10 May 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Football One?

Great update.  Happy Mother's Day my friend.

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Date: 13 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Confession

Someone better find out what the fuck the ruskies are up to!!!!!

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Date: 13 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Confession

Someone better find out what the fuck the ruskies are up to!!!!!

Summary:

LLPOF

I can feel it in my bones, he's lied to us and I'm sure he's lied to her too. Why? Jasper's POV

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2049 Read Count: 540
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2020 Updated: 28 Mar 2020
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Date: 28 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Lies

Love this story just as much here as I did in ff.net.  Girl...you and your imagination!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

They just pop in to my head and I write them down lol xx

Alexis

Summary:

MDWBMR

 

It all goes terribly wrong in Volterra. Alice and Edward lied to everyone and died for their sins. But worse Bella is mated to the heartless Demetri and he doesn't want her either.

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37280 Read Count: 4711
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Jun 2020
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Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Choice, What Choice?

Love this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you liked it so far xx

Alexis

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Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Choice, What Choice?

Love this story.

Summary:

iv bag

Bella and Edward don't speak to each other after the van incident, yet their paths still converge. When Bella is attacked by James' coven in her own home, she is rescued by the Cullen family in the nick of time. Now, Bella must come to terms with her new life as a vampire and her growing attraction to Edward. AU.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90206 Read Count: 6456
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2020 Updated: 01 Jun 2020
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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Gentle & Rigid

In your story do they not know Edward and Bella are mates?  Oh, and Kelly Trobaugh rec'd this story.  Glad she did.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Rebirth

God I feel so bad for her.  Excellent writing by the way.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Rebirth

God I feel so bad for her.  Excellent writing by the way.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Turbulence

So damn sad.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Here Lies

Wow, that was an emotionally tough chapter.  Thank god I had tissues.  Well done.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 7: First Step(s)

Okay, so is it her aversion to being alive/vampire that makes her hesitant, or her aversion to blood in general.  Seems she is having an extremely hard time adapting.  I think Carlisle needs to have a sit down with Bella and conduct a Vampire 101 class.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Shadows in the Snow

Can't help but feel this girl's frustation and pain.  So well written.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 9: The Night We Met

I'm with Bella on the shopping, at least she didn't actually have to go to the store and try them on.  I know this is a slow burn, and that the story is almost 3 years old, but is this a romantic Edward and Bella eventually?  Just wondering.



Author's Response:

Yes, there is an HEA. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Mindset

Glad she is getting some more information.  Excellent update.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Window to the Past

I am assuming that he finally mated.  However, I don't think she did.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 12: A Heart, Closing

OMG, that was a truly profound and touching chapter. WOW.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 13: A Warm Den in a Snow-Covered Forest

Wow, he said it to himself. Finally it has sunk in.  Great update.

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Date: 24 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Rain Sows a Promise

I'm sorry....all I got out of that chapter is....'wholly naked'.  Did you say anything else?

So Help Me God by Della Aarohi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

https://i.ibb.co/0Z2j2Jw/20200430-134658-0000.png

 

Injured in a war and hardened by betrayal, she knew the moment she saw him that they would never be a family again. There was no forgiveness for her to get especially since he had claimed another.

Main Pairing: Isabella "Bella" Swan/ Edward Anthony Cullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10170 Read Count: 1555
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2020 Updated: 04 May 2020
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Date: 06 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, that was.....there are no words.  Great writing.

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Date: 06 May 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Wow, Edward has really changed.  With just cause.  Can hardly wait for the next update.

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68145
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
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Date: 06 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

Suit up, lock and load.  Off to Forks we go.

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Date: 06 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

Wow, gruesome and sweet.  Hell of a combination, but you pulled it off.  Great story.

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Date: 21 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Is it wrong that I want to stab Irina in the eyes and cut off all her fingers and feed them to a rabid dog?!?!?!?

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Date: 21 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

WTF.  Irina is definitely in need of medical/mental health care.  She will have to be dealt with.  

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Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody

NO FUCKING MERCY.  Gut them all.  Flay the skin from their bones and submerge them in vats of acid!!!!!!!

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Date: 15 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire

Wow.  Not sure if a cold shower will work.

 

 

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Date: 30 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises

Things are looking up.

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Date: 07 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine ~ Normal Blood Pressure

Damn Edward, didn't you ever hear that you get more with honey?  I think I am going to sign him up for some Anger Management Seminars. ;) Great update.

 

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Date: 29 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure

Well, that could have went better.  Clusterfuck all the way around.

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Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Can we say hormones?!?!?!?  *snickers*

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Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Um....not he best way to make a first impression, hey Tony.  ;)  Welcome back.

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Date: 02 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River

Perfect justice.  Well done.

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Date: 09 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Loved that they got her chest.  Now if we could just get rid of Carmen and Irina!!!!  Stupid bitches.

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Date: 04 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Awwww.

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Date: 09 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Wow, Eleazar is an evil bastard.

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Date: 15 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

So Royce is the fucking rat!!!!!!!!  

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Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

Wow.  Great start.

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Date: 27 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Rock-a-bye baby, in the tree tops,

When the wind blows...........

Edward Cullen - The Sperminator

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Date: 04 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

OMG!!!!!!  I gasped, and was shocked!!!!!

 

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Date: 14 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

Wow, excellent update.  Loved your choice for Dr. O'Neill.  

My Sun by kridafanfic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Leah Swan, member of a powerful wolf-shifter family, is struggling with the loss of two family members. Who will she turn to for comfort when all she wants to do is run away as fast as she can? Separate story from My Stubborn Mate Alternative Universe.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Paul/Leah
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56556 Read Count: 2487
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2020 Updated: 07 Jan 2021
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Date: 07 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 12: That Time You Refused Your Instinct

This wasn't a lemon.  It was a bushel of lemon!!!!!  Damn, I need a shower.......



Author's Response:

Hahaha! Love it!

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Date: 17 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 9: That Time You Became a Protective Ass

Is it hard Leah?  Is it Friday yet?  Poor Bella, this is what comes from being kept in the dark, and living with secrets.

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Date: 18 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 7: That Time He Took Care of Me

Truly feel for Embry.  I have to say that your ability to blend these two stories is great.  Loving this.

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Date: 30 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: That Time I Had to Step In

Interesting that Jake beat Edward's ass.

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Date: 21 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: That Time Something Important was Revealed

Damn.....discretion must be Embry's middle name.  For your sibling to not know or notice is pretty unique.  Feel sorry for Embry that he couldn't announce his imprint like all others.  Damn.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 16 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 5: That Time I Moved In

Oh Leah, I have no doubt Paul is going to keep you.  He is yours in a couple of days!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving a review! :-) Paul... sigh!

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Date: 07 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 4: That Time We Went Out To Eat

The over protective brother Jacob.  Now to see some more fireworks between Paul and Leah.  Woohoo.

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Date: 07 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 4: That Time We Went Out To Eat

The over protective brother Jacob.  Now to see some more fireworks between Paul and Leah.  Woohoo.

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Date: 18 May 2020 Title: Chapter 2: The Time You Consoled Me

Love the way tis story intertwines with My Headstrong Beta.  Great lemon.

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Date: 18 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: That Time We Met

Poor Leah.  Excellent writing.  Can't wait to see this progress.

 

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Date: 08 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 11: That Time We Completed Our Bond

Wow, that was...I'm speechless.  You really know how to write some hot lemons.

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Date: 01 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 10: That Time I Recognized my Soulmate

Wow, just WOW!  Fucking finally. I didn't think her birthday would ever get here.  So happy for them.  Guess the next chapter will be one hell of a sex fest.



Author's Response:

Hehe! You will not be wrong about that!

Summary:

soav

I have one job. To save a soul, the soul of a vampire. But which one? 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5997 Read Count: 407
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2020 Updated: 13 Jun 2020
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Date: 13 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Eeeny, Meeny, Miney, Mo!

Interesting twist.  I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Happy you enjoyed this little story x

Alexis

Summary:

R&R

 

Bella arrives in Forks, 20 years after the Cullens leave, for Charlie's funeral. The mansion is up for sale at long last and she gets roped into being part of the cleaning crew by Charlie's estate agent widow, Amanda. How is it she finds what no one else ever saw or heard?

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40458 Read Count: 8268
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2020 Updated: 22 Aug 2020
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Date: 16 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 9: The Best Is Yet To Come

Judgement is at hand.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes it is and it will be slow and painful xx

Alexis

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Date: 08 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Bet You Didn't See That Coming

The hole is getting deeper and deeper.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

They just don't have a clue what they are doing xx

Alexis

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Date: 12 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Ah, South Of The Border At Last

I'm sorry, but Carlisle makes me want to vomit.  Edward just makes me want to commit murder.  You really do know how to evoke emotions from your readers. 😉



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Goodie then I'm doing it right lol, they are truly atrocious xx

Alexis

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Date: 26 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: What Goes Around, Comes Around

OMG< I do not know which character to be more disgusted with, Carlisle, Alice, or Edward.  *gags*  Great update.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Oh Eddie I think, little pervert lol xx

Alexis

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Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: On The Road Again

I say we just rip her freaking head off and be done with the slore.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

To easy, she needs to suffer a little and then die slowly, very slowly xx

Alexis

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Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Found At Last

Aw.  He likes her.  Something tells me it is or will be more.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

yes you're right it will be more xx

Alexis

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Date: 21 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Hiding In Plain Sight

Wow, loving your imagination.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

It came out of nowhere and I'm just running with it xx

Alexis

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Date: 01 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Kismet, Fate, Call It What You Want

OMG.  The level of stupidity in these three just leave me to wonder WTF?!?!?!?



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Narccisists never see their own gailings, just everyone elses xx

Alexis

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Surprise

OMG, Alice needs to be put down like a rabid dog.  And Edward is just disgusting.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

they are children playing at grown-ups badly and without moral guidance.

Niether should have been channged xx

Alexis

Summary:

Trust

A short Twilight Fanfic.  

Chief Warrant Officer Jasper Whitlock, takes a fateful patrol with his 75th Ranger unit, not everything goes as planned. Metal is tested, and the bonds of loyalty are proven...B/E mostly human.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2352 Read Count: 303
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2020 Updated: 02 Aug 2020
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Mans best friend

Wonderful story.  Loved the story you shared about your Dad, Golf and Tanner.  Humans have a tendency to underestimate the intuition, valor, and loyalty of our canine companions.  Thank you for sharing.